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Toasty Warm by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by EternallyCullen

B and E wed.  There's some romancing going on behind the scenes, some teasing at the reception, and some trouble from Jacob.

Sequel to Prenuptual Posturing, in the Unforeseen Events Series. Rated M for later chapters. All belongs to Stephenie Meyer. Romance, humour, hurt and comfort. The Cullens and Hales, The Denalis, Charlie, The Dwyers, The Clearwaters, Jacob, Sam, Ang and Ben, the Forks High acquaintances.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65913 Read Count: 12645
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2009 Updated: 23 Dec 2009
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Make Someone Happy

Like to see him do some dirty dancing.

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: It Started with the Shoes

Go Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Witnesses

Love that song too.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Wolf in Sheep's Clothing

Much better version. Sorry Stephenie.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Mercy

Jacob got off easy. Still not my favorite person.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Reclaiming the House

Edward would definately need bleach.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Comfort Zone, Part 1

He certainly couldn't condemn Edward and Bella now.

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Comfort Zone, Part 2

I don't get the slang either. I'm much older than Charlie.

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14b: Speaking American

Don't think I got it that time either.

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Carpenter's Lady

Rose and Emmett are a lot of fun.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Eye to Eye

No he needs to drive Alice crazy.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: A Fine Mess

Two great minds.



Author's Response:

Awk! I didn't get notified about any of your reviews for this story, Jan. Notifications seem fine now, at least! Thanks for all your reviews here. xoox j

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Phone Call

Didn't know this was a six part story when I started. Went back to the beginning.



Author's Response:

It has more than that now, because there are companion fics. I wish I could keep up with posting here. On ff net, I have 19 stories, and approx 16 are this canon. Try me there if you finish these, won't you? :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullens thought Edward would never grow up, but marriage to a determined human girl, and a trip to Brazil, alter him forever.  On his honeymoon, Edward finds more than love, friendship, self-acceptance, and an ability to lead.  He embraces a future.  Summer 2011 Shimmer Awards Best Storyteller nominee.

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I Hunger Rainforest Banner, Kitchen Banner and Corkboard Banner by mimozka.  I Hunger Dolphin Banner by lilianas.

Kitchen

 

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No slash.  Increasingly AU settings and storyline.

This is the 6th book in my 'Unforeseen Events' series.  You can easily begin reading here, with the understanding that my Edward and Bella are not quite as shy as the originals.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 571771 Read Count: 30833
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 May 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Departure

Like this side of them

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Arrival

Wow, hot. Tickelish and Sex crazed. Great!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Hunger Assuaged

Great. Oh, forgot to ask last chapter, this Edward needs to shave?



Author's Response:

Yes, my vamps aren't canon.  They shave & cut hair and nails, feel temperatures (although they tolerate them) and feel pain.  They do not crumble like marble either.  They aren't thoroughly 'dead'.  You might say they are more like mutants, with new cells that each function like separate circulations.  Ah, it's complicated. Ch44 on ffnet explains.

 

xo

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Cove

Vampires really get tired?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Perchance to Dream

Gives Bella a better idea of the demon within too.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Rising Up

So he smells she's pregnant?



Author's Response:

Sure. Her blood is different. lol

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Mendicant

Love this family. Things that could be normal but they make so funny. Kids have a tendancy to forget that their parents have a sex life too. Doesn't end just because you have kids.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Honesty Bites

Grrrr!

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Hot and Cold Suitcases

Nice surprises. Great hide and seek.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Bond, James Bond

Fabulous day. Bond, James Bond



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your lovely reviews. Due to family circumstances my posting here has been put on hold.  If you want to read ahead, please find me on ffnet under the same pen name.

 

Regards,

 

J

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Human Moments

Amazed at how much he remembers about his human years.

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Conversations

Happy to see the faith growing. Always knew it was there.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Sated Thirst

So, what is the next part?



Author's Response:

Hon', I am just so behind posting here thanks to RL.  IHFYT is not complete, but posts regularly on ff net. Please check me out there if you want more, because I just can't spend the time posting here atm.  Hoping to do a posting blitz one day, but I know it won't be soon.  Thanks for the interest.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211509
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

Sorry i'm late on this but finally read this truly amazing story on my reader Laughed cried and got angry. You name the emotion I had it. Wonderful story. Thanks. 

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love westerns

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Guess I was wrong.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OK Alice then. Perfect for Jasper. Hope Edward is part Indian. That would be great.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay sparks are flying

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nice first meeting.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Spit fire

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So close

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hero/Fool

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Mike a reverand. How funny

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Not many women out west. Emmett would want someone good for his sister.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That's going to go well with Emmett.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well Alice seems determined to follow through on the marriage. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Really wondering about Edwards family.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Plans to get at Emmett through Bella?

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Poor Rose.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Caught.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Good Bella can be the catalyst. Emmett ever going to stop this big brother protection garbage and let his sister have a life?

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Bella a matchmaker?

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Better than crashing vans

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Brave Bella

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Finally first kiss

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Can easily get through any grammar mistakes. Not that many. Love the story. Just anxious to get the right couples really together.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

So good. This is really bad, can't get anything done, just keep reading this story. Oh well, who cares about a dirty house and sink full of dishes. There are more important things in life.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Ok moving ahead. Alice wanted or something?

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

So much for his blessings.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

What could she have possibly done except be a rabble rouser. Help with the underground railroad there perhaps. Which incidently we had many in our area. Yeah, that sounds about right.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Poor Jasper

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

James watching no doubt.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Gonna be too close uder foot if you ask me.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Wow, really wondering what happened.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Not too bad of a story. At least he wasn't a gunslinger or anything.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Definately distracting.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

That was worse than talking to  Charlie.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

A nun. Huh. Unfortunately the Catholic Church really didn't encourge reading the Bible. Still don't to tell you the truth. The things priests and nuns take as truth are pathetic.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Not moving too slow. I'm just not able to get anything done. That means Christmas decorations too and here it is a week before Christmas.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Can understand why she's scared but how can she clear herself if she doesn't let anyone in?

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

A schoolmarm to get caught in this condition at that time would be unforgiveable. Have you ever read the rules for schoolmarms? Slavery, is a better word. Being a nun was probably easier.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Now she really has to tell him.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Can't hide from the past either. Always comes back to bite you.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Please say yes.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Knew they were up to something. Watch out Bella.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Way to steal his thunder. Still romantic though.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

This is hanging country. Cattle are gold.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

So, James or Mr. Mallory himself. Hmm, not sure.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Eleazer can't die. So who will come to the rescue?

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Good eyes Edward.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Just hope someone gets to Bella before James does some damage.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Way to go Alice!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

You're doing a fantastic job. Well, well writtan .

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

One tough lady.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Bella obviously found the evidence. Gross James.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Yeah, and I'm wrong as always. Still think "Mr" Mallory is going to want Bella for himself.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

He died brave. Rose is doing a great job.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Help on the horizon? Love the cat fight.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Good!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Takes a womans brains. Jenks was unethical but he never really was a "bad" guy.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Edwards not going to take kindly to a beat up Bella.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

And no Dr. Cullen nearby .

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Knew she couldn't die. Story wouldn't have had a happy ending.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

How humiliating

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Glad he got some of his land back, but Emmett is going to lose a good hand.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Great timing.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Congratulations. Amazing you could do so much.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Most definately worth it. Not too graphic, just right.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Out of the mouth of babes. GREAT GREAT story.

Summary:

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This is Edward's side of Dreaming of Edward. Many have wondered what was Edward thinking when he would visit Bella at night, well here's your chance. Be warn like with Dreaming of Edward, this is not a light and fluffy story. It has bad langueage and sex as the main theme! So dont read it if you dont like that sort of thing! These chapters were originaly sent out as a reward for reviewing but now I have a stories worth. Cannon couples, no incest or slash or rape!  OOC

This story doesn't stand alone you must read Dreaming of Edward to follow it.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15544 Read Count: 5155
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2010 Updated: 08 Jan 2011
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So much for the Victorian. Love this.

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I can't believe he doesn't know she's sleeping.

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Super wow!

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Stupid Jake.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Like all the different POV's

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238937
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not sure yet, will keep reading.



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up

Still taking in the whole story. So at this point their whole relationship is just sex? Can't believe Esme in this one. Tanya I see.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins

Wow, what more need be said.

Reviewer: janm Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

He's overthinking as usual