Reviews by rhapsody
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76150
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hmm, great first introduction to his home-scare the poor kid. Probably thinks thats what he has planned for her.

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

Bella needs to get over her insecurities, Edward has already proven he isn't like Jacob. I'm hoping she doesn't walk away from him just because she's insecure.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries

Their definitely becoming closer, looking forward to seeing how it plays out, especially with Bella's first race back.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

No bad start, has a lot of errors in it though, makes it hard to read.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

Edward had a funny way of showing Bella he liked her thats for sure.

Summary: Past Featured Story

dwa

Bella becomes Edward's personal assistant. He is the chief-editor of EMC, the best fashion magazine, run by a man. And what secret does Edward have? Will Bella's past come to bite her? The movie, The Devil Wears Prada inspired this one. AH. AU.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185532 Read Count: 42717
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Pranks and going home

Bella overreacts a lot, Edward's got nothing on her lol

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Meet the boss

Huh, curious as to what is going on with Edward and this mistery person.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Christmas time and This or That?

Not bad so far, if you want help editing your chapters, I could help if you'd like. It would make reading easier if it was beta'd, that way the correct tenses would be there.



Author's Response:

I'm working on editing it... but only when I'd had them all edited, I'll repost it

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Karma and insatiable Edward

Bella must be knocked up, she cries at the drop of a hat

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Charlotte and Edward's past

I don't know--I wouldn't be able to trust Edward. Look what he did to a women he claimed to have loved

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Rings and an old mistake

Bella is nuts, she flips over anything

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The presentation

What is up with the whole fidelty bond contract? he was being let off the hook with Reneta.



Author's Response:

the fidelity bond is to pay 'moral' insurance for Renata... I'll explain more later

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The proposal

Way to give the girl a moment, she was stunned.

Summary:

Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41155
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reason One

hmm, definitely curious as to what Edward did to make her hate him, probably cheating or something

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Reason Three

Thats kinda odd... she mention'd Jessica's baby having his eyes, yet he is going to marry Bella?

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Reason Six

Oh wow... no wonder she hates Edward-- he definitely doesn't deserve her & the whole speel about not having his life is pretty much garbage if he did that to her.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Reason Fourteen

It seems like you could use some help with a Beta-- theres times where you call Edward Ethan & your tenses are not correct. I could help you, if you'd like.



Author's Response:

That would be great! When can I send you the next chapter?

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Reason Fifteen

Oh my god... that is beyond fucked up-- Edward invited Bella's worst nightmare to live with them, talk about heartless. He clearly doesn't want a relationship with her.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Reason Sixteen

Ha, Edward has some balls, I would walk out and get my own place then to endure the hell he is putting Bella through

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Reason Nineteen

Wow that flew by, I didn't think I read 19 chapters already. Selene is adorable, I'm rooting for Tanya to be gone and if Edward actually wants a relationship then he needs to get her out of the house. How can Edward be so blind and not see that Tanya doesn't even like Selene? Bella's idea was a good one regarding Selene living with them & Tanya visiting on weekends,

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Reason Twenty

Edward is so freakin' nosey, talk about envasion of privacy--clearly it isn't his box.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Reason Twenty-one

Wow, Jacob is a real piece of work. Edward needs to confess and get it over with

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Reason Twenty-two

I'm assuming Bella is going to want to keep it, should be interesting. Edward will probably not want to like in BD, due to the risks.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Reason Twenty-three

Bella is a bit melodramatic, spotting happens--doesn't mean miscarriage lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420964
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Revelations

Wow Jake really is a nut case, Bella should get a grip and charge him. Clearly she shouldn't go by her instincts with him.

 

Edward is a sweetie though

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Picking up the pieces

So glad you didn't use the same lines from Twilight with the waiter, their overplayed with FF

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ode to Joy

Bella doesn't really seem to compromise much with Edward... it's always they have to do what is important to her, the whole New Years deal she was all 'I don't care I want this' even though Edward was upset.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: What really happened

Edward needs to get a grip and stop hiding shit from Bella, can't have a marriage built soley on omissions. Bella can't watch her own back when she doesn't know what point she's going to be attacked from. Edward's actually looking like a shitty fiancee... he was doing so well in the beginning--shame. I'm actually hoping she leaves and shocks him out of his habit.



Author's Response:

I hope you don't give up on the story just yet, it gets kinda funny. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Aftermath

And this is where Bella gets pregnant with no birth control and even if she was on the shot the antibiotics would cancel lol



Author's Response:

Of course!! lmao.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201984
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: rhapsody Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life

You know there are only 355 days in a year not 360, right? lol



Author's Response: Umm... if you have noticed the A/N's I put in the next chapter then you will see that I have never been to the US and since it's a fiction, I didn't care for statistics and went with what I felt the story needed. I'm sure the extra 5 days of rain wouldn't hurt anyone. P.S. I'm assuming you meant to say "That's only 355 days in a year and not 360" because in a year, there are 365 days.