Reviews by Ditavonrat
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Young women can act silly, but men... Men make bold gestures." I opened the trunk for Bella. The man inside ended up on the pavement. Bella's eyes widened, and she covered her mouth.

 

* Period fic. Takes place in 1958/GangsterWard. 

 

*Not so canon couples, but a few are. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115343 Read Count: 76900
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2013 Updated: 20 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Ditavonrat Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I've been following your work for a while. You always had amazing writing talent. An utterly amazing ability to write comedy and struggle in accessable ways. Although I loved the Storm series I got a feeling you sold out a lot of your own plot choices to appease popular opinion. This story...wow...it's my 5th time reading it. You stayed true and wrote a slice of life so fantastically engaging. Seriously. I work in publishing for Edinburgh University Press and was an intern a bloomsbury. You have more talent than any of the stuff we saw in concept at Blooms. Stick to your own instincts. They serve you well. Bloody brilliant story.