Reviews by gumibear26
Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Truth?  Yes.  The whole truth?  Not yet.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

I can see from the teaser that Bella doesn't believe him, though.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Going to be hard to convince Bella since they are in her head.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I don't see any way he can convince her while he is in her mind.   Her mind means that anything can happen, even the supernatural.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Dream on, Bella.  Oh wait, she is dreaming.  lol

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Bella smoothie - cute idea.  Or drinking from a straw in the IV.  That's actually a good idea.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Now THAT was a cliffhanger!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Whoop!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Finally!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

I like the realism of Bella's condition.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Yeah boys are stupid sometimes, even 107 year old ones.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

At least he is there now, and maybe Bella will be brave enough to ask her questions.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Hey, I'm a Geometry teacher, and I resemble that remark!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

What will he do in the meadow?  Sparkle, if the sun is out!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Well, it's a start!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Oooh, kissies!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

*scuffs toe*  I wish Bella would stop being so stubborn.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Of course he knows they are different.  Has Charlie been talking to Billy?  I can't imagine that he would have anything nic to say about them.  He probably just thinks they are reall, really nice people.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Go Charlie!!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

As you wish...

I hope your bebe is okay!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Well, at least she noticed that he seemed unhappy that dshe doesn't believe right away.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

At least she didn't tell him to eff off!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Love this Charlie!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

*sniff*  So sweet.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

*smacks lips*  Yum!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

I like the new, confident, sexy Bella!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Now I can't stop wondering what is going on in their bodies in the "real" world.  *snickers*

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

*smirks*  Still wondering if any of this manifests in the outside world.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

Thanks for answering my question about the real world! 

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Go Rose!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Gotta love thosse "sick days."

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Cool!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Oh my.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Lime-is ionsis ions

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Woohoo!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Nnnngh

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

*gasp*   He didn't bite her, did he?