Reviews by sophdrea
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028970
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Oh, she had better be able to stop, right? My bet is on "NO". But I'm sure Edward will be happy either way. No such thing as fair in this realtionship... HE WINS!

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

It sounds like Isabella has more control than Edward does. You have created such a wonderful dynamic between these characters! I'm so looking forward to all the ways you are going to let them drive each other crazy!!   Devious little Noc.....

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

The man likes to PLAY, doesn't he? The poor girl may die if he finally gives her permission. I've never read a "death by orgasm" in a fic. Please don't let this be the first, Noc.

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Yeah, drag it out just a little bit longer, big boy! 

 

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Finally!!!!!  I need a drink and a nap now! With over 180 chapters left to read, I'd better make a run to the liquor store. I love it, Noc!!!!

 

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Whoa, Edward has a Master? You threw me a curve there, Noc. I'd love to chat more, but got to run and read the next chapter!

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Oh, gosh, Daddy C is his Master. Now I'm really swooning. *whispers* I have a thing for Daddy C too. But I'm really glad to know he isn't still Carlisle's submissive. During training is fine, but I really didn't want to think of Edward as being one now.

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Sounds like a really good relationship between Carlisle and Edward. And if Edward has been perfecting his techniques for half a century, he must be REALLY good at them! I hope we're going to see more of Daddy C.

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Oh, Noc, I loved this chapter. To hear Edward rambling about Isabella to Carlisle was so adorable. It made me love this character even more. This boy is so screwed!!!

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Oh, poor Edward. He is really worried that he is going to hurt her. I guess this is the first human that he's wanted to have actual sex with. Poor baby, you are going to help him out with this situation, right, Noc? Or maybe Daddy C has some good advice. I'm off to find out.

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

I'm curious as to why Edward has chosed so many humans as submissives, when he can't have sex with them. I guess most vampires aren't very submissive, huh? It's nice to know he takes very good care of them though, and even helps them find new Doms. He's such a nice vampire.... I think I love him. ;)

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

So Tanya wanted to be is mate. Well, I'm glad that didn't work out for her. Isn't it terrible how we all hate her? She might be a really nice vampire. Oh well, she's had her time with Edward. That's more that the rest of us get!!! I'm anxious to see what Carlisle has to say. Loving your story, Noc!!

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

So Alice has had a premonition of Edward's mate. That is a good thing... means there is hope for this situation. Good old Daddy C came through with some good advice. 

And btw, the image of Edward leaping from the rooftop into the dark night... that was HOT, Noc.

 

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Now I'm feeling a little sorry for Bella... climbing into her bed evey night waiting for the phone to ring... all alone.... no one to touch her... just a voice on the other end of the line.... no one to touch her (did I mention that already?) Can you tell I'm ready for him to make an appearance? I mean like REALLY ready.

I'm not giving up. But I may have to find someone else who has already read this part, and ask them how much longer I have to wait. Or I could bribe the author to tell me......

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

I can't imagine what favor Edward wants to ask Tanya for. But I'm not going to hang around here talking to you... I'm going to read the next chapter!!

But you know I love your story, so pleae don't take offense.

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

You ARE evil, Noc. Now I have to wait a few more chapters to find out what the favor from Tany is?  Not fair.... really not fair. I'm guessing you are a big fan of "delayed gratification". It's a good thing I really like you and this story!!!

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Can I control my orgasms?  Pfffttt... I can barely control myself reading these chapters! I'll make you a deal. I'll answer your question as soon as you tell me what the favor was or you let Edward show up in Bella's room.  *mutters" that Noc's got some nerve.

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Is there anything we wouldn't say for Edward? I'd change my name legally to that, if HE asked.

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

He liked hearing her call herself his little cum slut, didn't he? This boy is so DED. How much longer can he wait?  Well, Noc, how much longer?

Are you tired of me hounding you? 

 

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Wow, that was a hot, little chapter there. You know, Noc, I'm really going to have to stop reading this at work. I was doing payroll reports to send to the government.  Something tells me they won't be too impressed if they see the words "butterfly will suck all of her cum from my cock" on one of my reports. I'll just refer them to you if I get some kind of notice from them!

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

You might as well not ask me about what I have tasted or not tasted. I told you before... I'll give you my answers when you tell me about the favor and Edward's grand entrance. Turn about is fair play!!

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Sir does indeed have a dirty mouth... wouldn't want him any other way. I'm glad to see Bella is learning a little control. We wouldn't want her to make Sir angry, now would we?

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Half of me wanted to rush over there right then. She was so close. I could have a mouthful of her juice within five minutes.

DO IT, Edward.... DO IT!!!  Right now! I'm expecting him to be there in the next chapter!

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

*pouts* He didn't rush right over there like I had hoped. But he did let her have an orgasm. So I guess I will just have to wait..... again!

It was cool that she could cum without touching herself... cause it sure  doesn't look like he's going to do it anytime soon. *side eyes Noc*

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Would you prefer me to go into details about some of the phone calls, or get to the part where they meet?  (your A/N note)

Do I really need to answer this question? Get to it, girl!!

*blows kisses to Noc for me being such an impatient, obnoxious reader*

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

*whispers to Noc* I think it's Sir's voice that makes her wet. Butterfly isn't a slut, except for him. I like that he's calling her in the morning now, too. Maybe that means he's getting ready to make his move. *fingers crossed*

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Ooh, goody, he's going to start training her to his likes. Is he going to be a "hands on" trainer? Can you tell I really want him to go to her? I've been hinting at that for the last fifty chapters. Are you tired of me? Do you wish I would quit bugging you?

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

She's just falling right in line with his plans for her. Can't say that I blame her.

Is she going to make it in four and a half minutes... time is running out.

I love this.... you know that, right?

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Yay, she made it!! Not that I doubted her (or you). I've made it to 100. I'm catching up. Well, Im not close yet, but I always have something to look forward to this way. Thanks for all the fun!

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Ooh, just what does Edward have planned for Butterfly at the salon... a little waxing maybe? I'll bet Tanya is going to cause some kind of trouble. Her character always does. Am I getting closer to the time when Edward shows his face to Butterfly? Please say yes!!!!

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Ok, she's at the salon. Can't wait to see what she's here for. I'm assuming they are used to dealing with Edward's submissives. But he gave Kate special insructions, didn't he? 

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

I was right about the waxing. I just knew the man would like a smooth playing field..... 

Love your story, Noc.

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

That's really cool that your husband is responsible for the the name butterfly. And how sweet that he calls you that. Tell Sir hello for me.

Summary:

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Investment banker, Edward Cullen, wakes up covered in blood with a black lace thong on his floor and no memory of the night before except for an image of a pair of bright red eyes. Entry for the Pick a Pic Challenge. Horror/Mystery Rated for language, lemons and vamp violence.

Banner by VeeInWonderland

 


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Horror, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6940 Read Count: 726
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Blood Dream

Dissy, I don't even know where to start with this review. I am ENTHRALLED... it's the best word I could come up with. This story absolutely blew me away. I loved everything about it. Your brilliant words created the perfect atmosphere. You made me feel the dampness, the dreariness, (including that of Edward's life), and not so much the darknes, but more an absence of light. You made me feel Edward's panic, his lethargy, and in the end, his craving for this woman.

This line was so amazing: "Touching her meant certain death, but he'd die anyway if he didn't." Genius, Dissy! You summed the whole story up in that one sentence.

I could write aother ten paragraphs about all the things I loved in this story. However, I will leave you with this. I VOTE FOR THIS ONE!! You know I love Assumptions. This one, however, has the substance and the "grit" to truly showcase your amazing talent. This is the one you should continue.

I will say no more on the subject. I will read which ever one you choose. But I'm not above sending you cases of dark chocolate. ;)

Love ya, girl.



Author's Response:

I was just going through the mess of my inbox and realized that I still hadn't replied to your review! ACK!  It was such a wonderful review, too.  I think I must have replied in my head and it never actually made it out my fingers!

Thrilled that you liked this so much.  I really had fun playing around with this story.  It was such a different one for me ad I am SOOO eager to continue it.  Now that LWP is wrapped up, I'm going to be hard at work on this one.  And please, send me the dark chocolate.   It might just inspire me to write faster! 

Love ya, too!  *smooches*

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of "The Wedding Photographer".


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139889 Read Count: 63284
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Soon

MAJOR FLAILING GOING ON HERE!! NUDE..... EDWARD.....PHOTOS...... why, oh why, didn't you include pics with this story? Dis, this was one of my favorite chapters. It was so loving and sexy. The massage he gave her made me swoon. The photo session was drool-worthy!! I loved that he instigated that part of the night all by his naughty self! I don't know how you expect me to get any work done now, after reading this during lunch. I have "photos" running through my head. ;)  In fact, I'm going to ask our friend Bethy to do a manip just for us. 

Now those three little words are about to pop out of Bella's mouth too. I love these two so much. You have made them so real, and so magical at the same time.  Thank you so much for another wonderful chapter. I'm going to go try to work now.

PHOTOS..... NUDE..... EDWARD.......

Love ya, 

Soph



Author's Response:

LOL, I am still flailing over that chapter.  I didn't include photos because I would have died/spontaneously combusted making the manips. 

So glad you liked the chapter.  The massage was pretty swoon-worthy and ugh, she needed it.  Shooting a wedding is exhausting!

Thrilled that you liked the  photo session,  The moment that idea popped in my head I was SO excited.  And I don't expect you to get any work done!  I'm a trouble maker like that!

So glad you find them real and magical at the same time.  :)   I love that. 

And hehe.  Enjoy those visuals!

Love ya, too! -Dissy

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Finally

Oh my gosh, their first date was definitely worth the wait! That had to be the hottest lunch hour I've ever spent. ;) I love how Edward is trying to do everything the right way. He's just so sweet and cute. And I love horny Bella. I think she would have been happy to skip the dinner and go straight to the sex. She's my kind of girl!!!

This story makes me smile, Dissy. I truly LOVE it! Now I have to try and sneak in another chapter, before I go back to work.

P.S. I'm very curious about Bree. What's up with that girl? (just thinking to myself here)  xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Yay, glad you had a nice naughty lunch hour!  Edward is definitely trying to do things right, but horny Bella keeps being difficult.  Shee would TOTALLY have skipped dinner and went straight to bed.  Who can blame her?  If I had that man, I'd be doing the same thing.

So thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter, and that you're having so much with the story in general.  :)  It makes me very happy to hear.  Love getting your reviews.

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Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - So Much

Mr. Sexy Pants isn't going to last long. Those feeling are going to come bursting out of his mouth before too long. I love the routine they've fallen into. It's so great when you just can't stay away from each other. Dissy, the lemons in this chapter were awesome..... so sweet, slow, and meaningful.

I LOVED this line: “Either way, it’s my cock that wore you out,” I teased her and she giggled again.  “I’m just that good.”

This man couldn't get any better. I'm in love!!



Author's Response:

Nope, he isn't going to last long at all.  So glad you like the routine.  It's such a fun part of a relationship when you can't keep your hands off each other, but the feelings are deepening and you start to settle into that nice routine.  Glad you liked the lemons!  And cocky Edward.  It's fun to have him pop up occasionally!  ;) I really love this Edward a lot, too!

Thanks for the nice review, sweetie!

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Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk

Great chapter, Dissy. I love how open Bella and Alice are with each other about their relationships. In fact, I loved the whole dinner with the two couples. Alice and Jasper's side story was so adorable. It's really nice that they all seem to be getting along so well. Sometimes it is hard to find a couple that meshes well with both the guy and the girl.

As to Bree... that girl is up to something. I have a feeling she has a huge crush on Edward. Could be wrong. 

Edward and Bella keep getting better and better, as does this story!!

P.S. LOVED that Edward showed up with his overnight bag!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you likd the chapter.  I had a lot of fun with the dinner with the two couples and Alice and Jasper's relationship. I am going to do an outtake of when A&J met!  It can be hard to find couples to socialize with, and it'll be nice that the four of them can hang out.

So glad you're loving the story.  And Bella did tell him she wanted him to stay after.  :)

 

 

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Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Meddling

Oh, Dissy, do you know how it feels when you curl up on your couch on a snowy afternnon with a hot cup of coffee and a brand new book to read? Like you know you're in for a wonderful time, and it's only going to get better? That is how I already feel about this story after only one chapter. I know I'm in for something really special!

I already love Esme, and I can't wait to meet Edward and Bella! I can already tell I'm not going to have to wait long for the "hot stuff". LOL

Your writing makes me feel comfortable... like a converstion with an old friend. That may sound crazy, but that is how I feel. Now you know I'm going to hound you for updates, after I get caught up. ;) I'm off to read Chapter 2. 



Author's Response:

Hey, sweetie!  I know exactly what you're describing, and the thought that my writing feels like that to you is just one of the nicest compliments I could get.  You almost made me teary.  It doesn't sound crazy at all.  I <3 it. 

Esme is so fabulous, isn't she?  I had such a blast with her in this story.  You'll see plenty more of her as we go.  So glad you enjoyed her.  And nope, not a long wait for the hot stuff at all!  :)

Thanks for the really sweet review, hun.  I really treasure it.

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Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - The Wedding Photographer

Good gosh, Discordia!! You and Edward don't waste any time, do you? The man knows exactly what he wants, and just takes it! That first kiss was one of the hottest I've ever read. There were so many great lines in this chapter, but I won't quote them all back to you. I did LOVE this: "Where do you think you're going?  "I was going to get dressed."  "Overrated."     I FLOVE THIS MAN!!!

Oh, Dissy, I am so loving this already!!!!! You rock, girl!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, nope, we don't waste any time at all!  Yes, he does know what he wants!  Although you'll see later that he's not always quite so bold.  Glad you liked the kiss!

This Edward is pretty funny.  I 'heard' his voice very clearly as I wrote this story, and he has lots of lines like that.  :)  So glad you're enjoying them.

Thanks for the lovely review.  I am thrilled that you're having fun with the story.

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Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Brunch

This story is just so you, Dissy. I can picture you sitting there writing this and smirking. Loved their texts:  What time do you want me? <B     Now. <E    I was smiling and giggling like an idiot reading this.

That was really bad of you to make poor Lucy break her arm just so Edward wouldn't have to tell Bella about his past until the next chapter. ;) Guess I'm off to find out how bad your boy really was.

Seriously, Dis, I love this story. It makes me SMILE!!  And pant, and drool. Knowing you, it's only going to get better! 



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah.  I have kind of oddball humor.  And I am often amused by myself!  :)  You know me, too well! 

I know!  I'm so mean, aren't I?  Poor Lucy!  I promise, our boy isn't too naughty. 

I always aiming for smiling, panting, and drooling, so my mission has been accomplished!

Thanks for the nice revivew!

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Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer

Well, I was really releaved to find out that Edward didn't have anything too sordid in his past. BUT then I started thinking.... this is Dissy writing this! I'm not sure I trust you, girl. Are you going to spring something really bad on me later in the story? I don't do angst well, I don't like crying, and I don't like having to drink to get myself through a story. *wink* Well, maybe I do have a drink while I'm reading sometimes. I do hang out with those crazy girls, you know. 

I liked the "getting to know you" questions. We always need a little background. And I'm so glad they aren't waiting until Friday to see each other again. I mean background info is ok, but compared to the sexy stuff..... NAH!!

Love ya, Dissy.



Author's Response:

No, no, I promise.  Edward is exactly as he seems.  Sweet, and funny, and sexy and a little bit goofy sometimes.  Nothing sordid in his past.  There's some drama, but really nothing I'd consider angsty.  No crying or drinking required. 

I can understand why those crazy girls drive you to drink, though! ;)

Glad you enjoyed the background and getting to know you.  And yes, they are both pretty eager for more sexy stuff as well! 

Thanks for the review!

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Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Anticipation

I loved getting a glimpse into Edward's day. He could just sit there and breathe, and I would watch!! I also liked that Emmett called him to talk about Bella. Your Emmett seems like a wonderful man.

I enjoyed learning about Edward's ex-girlfiends. Doesn't sound like any of those relationships were very special. No wonder the man is ready for something meaningful!! And I'm sure you're going to give it to him, right?

LOVED the self-loving, Dissy!! That was HOT!! Edward may have had "a thousand fantasies" flickering through his mind; but I had a thousand more!

Thank you again for a very inspiring lunch (or would that be perspiring?) I love spending my lunch hour with you, girl.  xoxo

 



Author's Response:

Edward is pretty fascinating, isn't he?  Emmett is a wonderful man, and he may give him shit, but he really loves his little brother. 

No, none of Edward's ex-gf's were very special.  They weren't bad people, but not at all what he was looking for.  And oh yes, he deserves something meaningful, and he's about to get it!

Feel free to share your thousand fantasies, I might be convinced to encorporate a few!  ;)

Glad you enjoyed your perspiring lunch!  I love that you choose to spend your lunch hour with me!  Thanks for the review.

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

I have to tell you what a big girl crush I have on your Bella. I wanted to fist pump you for this little doozy of a line:  "What you'd look like when you came with my mouth on you."  I was so proud of her for saying exactly what she was thinking. She's so adorable!

Now to the cockblocking episode in the parking lot after they had drinks... *pouts* I wanted them to go home and do really wicked things to each other. But since you and I know what's it like to have to get up every morning and go to work, I guess it makes sense to postpone the wicked things. I'm really looking forward to the weekend with these two.

Loved this chapter, Dissy.



Author's Response:

Isn't she awesome?  I'm having a blast writing her.  Love how bold she is!  Glad you are enjoying it, too. Just about killed Edward though!

And I know, it was so disappointing that I cockblocked like that, but you know they wouldn't have been able to stop.  They would never have made it into work again!  Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review!

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Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - The Morning After

I was wrong about what chapter I was on. It was this one. Whew, Dissy. That was some weekend to read about on my lunch hour. I could barely eat, between the panting and the drooling! These two are just too hot together. I got the giggles at the condom shopping scene. Bella is so adorable. If they keep this up, they will need a case of those magnums. ;)

It is so wonderful to see them falling for each other so quickly. I'm really glad, too, that neither of them are letting normal conventions bother them. You have done such an brilliant job of letting us feel exactly what they are feeling. To me, they had the perfect weekend together. It was comfortable and easy, and very SEXY. I can't wait to see where they go from here.

Thanks for all the inspiration...... hubs says he will mail you the dark chocolate ASAP.



Author's Response:

Hey, baby cakes!  Glad I could spice up your lunch hour.  They are really hot together, aren't they?  I thought the condom shopping was funny.  :)  And yes, they are going to need a case.  Nothing like a new relationship and the crazed desire to go at it like bunnies!

Glad you're enjoying the quick fall.  It just makes sense for them.  No ex issues, nothing to hold them back.  They've found the person they want to be with and they're just going to enjoy it.  Glad you liked the relaxed, easy feel, along with the sexy.  I just wanted them to click and ENJOY their time together. 

You are welcome! And so is your hubs.  Still waiting on that dark chocolate ...

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

This Edward is so adorable that I want to squeeze him, and smooch him, and do all kinds of naughty things with him. Think you can arrange that?  Their relationship seems so perfect right now. They both feel the same way about each other, and are so comfortable together. It reminds me of those wonderful first months of love that we've all experienced. That's what I love about your writing, Dissy. It is so "relatable"!  It's so easy to feel what your characters are feeling. I also love that Edward isn't afraid to let his guy friends know how he feels about Bella. 

I can't wait to fall more in love with these two. *whispers to Dissy* You're not going to throw something really nasty at them, are you? I don't want to have to come hunt you down.

Great chapter, as always, Dis. 



Author's Response:

Isn't he?  And believe me, if I could clone this Edward, I sure would. 

It is a great start to their relationship, isn't it?  So glad you enjoy the relatability of it.  That's definitely something I was aiming for, especially in this story.  And yeah, Edward is pretty open to admitting his feelings. 

Thanks for the nice review, hun!

Playing Games by bagpuss Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Short Story.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3239 Read Count: 31011
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2012 Updated: 13 Sep 2014
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm using your own words for my review: "She'd been intrigued. She'd been seduced."  Your story had done that very thing to me. It is so different from anything I've read before. It is so clever; and has me wondering who these people are, and where you are going to take them. Thanks for a very entertaining read. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm never sure where they are going to go until they get there, they seem to do their own thing, but I'm very glad you're joining them on their journey.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good grief, you draw me into this story more with each chapter. I don't even know the names of the characters yet; but I want to know so much more about them. Their conversations are so thought-provoking that I find myself reading the chapter over again. I am so thoroughly intrigued by these twol 

I loved his last statement in this chapter:  "I knew. When I say you."  WOW, talk about thought-provoking! That was brilliant!

You have a true talent. Thanks for sharing it.

 



Author's Response:

Ah; they didn't have names at this point!

Thanks so much for your effusive comments; I'm stoked you've enjoyed it so far. Comments reeeeally make my day!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm going to learn not to read this story during my lunch hour! I don't even remember what I ate, but the chapter was HOT!!! I think I'm starting to fall in love with Daniel. Hope you don't mind, but you are the one who posted this. Therefore, I'm assuming you're willing to share him. ;)  I NEED to know what's going on in his mind... and in Louise's. I hope you are planning on continuing this story. It is quickly becoming one of my favorites. 



Author's Response:

Don't worry; Dan's your man! I'll whore him out to readers with no issues at all!

I'm so pleased you're enjoying 'games' and hope the remaining chapters tickled your pickle, too.

As for whats going on in his mind, I rarely know in advance. I'm hoping there's complex in there along with the right balance of sweetness and darkness. Do be sure to let me know what you think!

Thanks.

Hot Shot by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

“It’s just a job, she’s just a client.”  That’s what freelance photographer, Masen Cullen, has to convince himself of as she changes personas like she changes outfits and strikes her poses, each one more tempting than the last.

 

*written for the 2012 Fandom for Suicide Awareness Compilation

** Thank you to JA Mash for the amazing banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10092 Read Count: 5283
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Once again, you have come up with a delightful little story that reminds me of all the reasons you are one of my favorite authors. This Masen just made me smile. He was such a typical single man.... turning his underwear inside out... using a Lunchables as appetizers... so adorable! I loved his inner monologue, too! I just wanted to squeeze him to pieces! The twist at the end was great. (and we know you sent Alice off to Kinko's so she will hook up with Jasper!)

Great story, Bella. Thanks so much for sharing your awesomeness with us.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Such awesome words sophdrea... thanks so much!  I'm glad I had a little something to give you guys since I've been so busy working on the book that I haven't had time for fanfiction writing!

xoxo

tb

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow, I am so impressed with your story! It has me totally hooked!! I love the mysterious atmosphere you have created; and I can't wait to read more. You are very, very talented.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What a great first chapter! I am very intrigued. I love a good Vampward story; and this sounds like it's going to be very good. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Who am I? by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 364]
Summary:

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Banner made by  vamp_luvor

My life drastically changed after I saw an ad online; I still cannot believe that I answered it!  I never expected it to turn out like this, but anything was better than before. When the pain became too much to bear; I realized that love heals.

This is a BDSM story A/H E/B HEA

Beta'd by: RAH070890


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21554 Read Count: 112988
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow! She finally got to see Edward! You made me giggle with her thinking he was probably an older man. I would have too. I'm so excited to see what happens next. I love your story.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter! I love your choice for Aro. They didn't waste any time getting Bella set up for the auction, did they? I hope this turns out to be what she wants. I know two million dollars is a lot of money; but three years is a long time. Can she get out of the contract, if she gives the money back?

I love this story; and I can't wait for the auction. Since you are one of my favorite authors, I'm not surprised that this one drew me in too.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Well, I am certainly intrigued! This was a great first chapter. I can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Well I am glad you liked it ! I will try and post every two weeks

The first on Sunday !

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really like this Bella. Even after the terrible things that happened to her, she didn't let it stop her from starting over. I loved that she went up to Aro at the restaurant. Now I can't wait to see what happens at the ball with Kate.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Isabella. Hopefully he can help her deal with this trauma. Your Edward sound like a really good Dom. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter! I hope Aro can give Edward the information he needs.

I hope you surgery goes well. We will be looking forward to your return, and more wonderful chapters.

Deep Trouble by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

 

Bella & Edward are married and spend time as a D/s couple. One night at dinner, Bella disobeys the rules and must pay the consquences. BDSM, but nothing too heavy, plus LEMON warning. See Story Notes for more.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2107 Read Count: 3836
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2013 Updated: 12 Apr 2013
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good lord, girl, did you ever heat up my lunch hour!! I was checking to see what was new on TWCS, when I came across this little gem. WOW!! It was so amazing. You do realize that you were meant to write a full length BDSM fic, dont' you? Your Dom Edward had the perfect mix of sternness and tenderness. He had me swooning through the entire story. I know you are busy with another story right now;, but please consider expanding this one. It would be a huge hit. There aren't enough writers out there who can write good BDSM. You DEFINITELY can! Thanks so much for the great lunch!

too quiet by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

tq

 

 

Banners made by MinaRivera.

Summary: Edward left to give Bella a better life. A life full of beautiful noise. This is what she was really left with.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49311 Read Count: 49542
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2013 Updated: 16 Nov 2013
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good lord, you're killing me with this story, poem, whatever you want to call it. I call it AWESOME! It is so unique and utterly astounding. I go back and reread it,  so I can be sure I didn't miss any of the extraordinary feelings you have written. This is really, really good, Chloe. 



Author's Response:

Again... sooooo happy. Thank you. I hope I can keep you here. :)

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

She's breaking my heart too!! This chapter was really, really sad; and now my heart is sore. :(  But I have faith. I won't throw my laptop on the floor like I did New Moon when I read it. 

I loved the "glitch" part: and gltchlessly carried him away... brilliant, sweet girl!!

I'll keep reading and reviewing; but if my reviews get kind of slurred and irrational, you'll know you've driven me to the vodka!! Just teasing.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm so thankful that she hasn't lost her faith in Edward and Alice. She knows that they would come for her, if they knew. Therefore, I have faith in you!! But my heart is still breaking for her. I'm assuming Charlie is dead, and not turned. But don't tell me if I'm wrong. ;) 

Still on pins and needles here, and still loving it.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Now I'm getting nervous. Someone knows where she is, and they made sure she knew it!!! And she's not alone? You're killing me here, Chloe.

Absolutely love this part: he didn't want to change me but he did                                                         the second I saw him across the room the first time

Fur-covered heartbeats?  

Wow, just wow!!

By the way, I "get" it!! xoxo

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm pissed at all of them, except Bella. I still have no idea why they are acting like they are. But I really don't understand why Rosalie would change Bella, if she is the same as she was in the books. She was totally against Bella being changed. I have no idea where you are taking us, but I'm happy to go along!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

WHOA!! I almost fell off the couch reading this one. Rosalie changed Bella????

Chloe, your mind is a wondrous place! I did not see that coming at all.

I'm still not clear on what their reasoning was, but I'll figure it out.

Loved this chapter!!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh, wow!! You have thrown a curve into what I was thinking... I think. This just gets more intersting with each chapter. 

Da-da-dum-dum....  On to find out if Carlisle is the one who changed her.

I'm dancing over to the next chapter. Loving it so much.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

You cracked me up with the "Vampire Valium" comment. He could be my Valium any day. ;)

I'm trusting you to give us everything we need. I did love that Bella told Emmett she could take him!!!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh, Chloe, I want the link to your FB page, please. I don't think I realized you had one. 

Every time she refers to "him", my heart breaks a little. But that's ok. I'm sure you will mend it eventually.

I couldn't help but laugh at you being tempted to let Bella go after Rosalie. That would have been something to read.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I wasn't surprised that Jasper and Emmett came, but I was surprised that Rosalie did. I can't wait to find out why they are there; and what they meant by "get back here sooner". You have me totally puzzled, Chloe. That's what I love about this story. Great chapter.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm not guessing on who the three visitors are. I'm just going to read the next chapter. Lol. I love how her new friend wants to protect her and refuses to leave even when she trys to get him to. I have no idea what is going to happen next, but I'm still enchanted with this story.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I swear, Chloe, I am going to be a wreck soon. You are killing me with every line. Poor Bella. I just want to hug her and tell her everything will be all right. It will be, won't it? Won't it, Chloe? It breaks my heart that instead of being hopeful now that she is like him, she is worried that he won't want the new her.

This part made me weak: "but he could do that without touching me at all                                                leave a mark                                                                                          his

You are so talented. This one is blowing my mind.                                                                                          

 

 

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So sad, Chloe. But soooo good! So Jake was her friend, and he disappeared. 

So many wonderful lines in this chapter... "to not mean what he said"... "to not mean it anymore". Such beautiful writing, girl.

And the matching holes... you are slowly killing me.  Hugs to you.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yes, the imprinting gave it away. So the wolves have found her. But what do they want?

Chloe, this isn't going to be a Bella/Jake story, is it? Please tell me no. You would't do that, would you? I love this story, and I think you're an amazing writer. But I don't do Bella/Jake... like NEVER... EVER. ;)

xoxoxo

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I don't know what she means. I'm wondering about the red "imprinting" on her snow... interesting choice of words there, Chloe. Could it be?

I'm stumped by the "just inside of green... that isn't any more"

Maybe I'l find out in the next chapter?  :)

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was brilliant! It almost made me cry. Please tell me you are going to continue it. We NEED to know who, what, why, and what comes next. ;)



Author's Response:

This made me so happy. :)

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved this line... "and here was the last place I felt alive

because it was the last place Edward was with me in"

I am dying here, girl. This has totally captivated me; and I can't wait for the next chapter. "will never again begin"? Gah, get her to Edward... please...

I REALLY love this!!



Author's Response:

I promise you I want her to get to him. Or him to her. 

Thank you so so so so much for your thoughts and FEELINGS about this. They make me a giddy girl. xo

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This chapter really tugged at my heart. In just a few small words, you make her pain so visceral. This: " but I don't now how to stop them, the memories of him from leaving me, vanishing into this same air that he did" 

And her pain at thinking he has forgotten her... I'm dying.

But you also made me happy when I learned that New Moon Edward was your favorite. I thought I was the only one!! Most people choose NM as their least favorite movie. To me, in that movie their love was just undeniable. It was forever, no matter what happened to either of them. We should have a "watch-along" sometime, and chat online while we watch!!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

You keep giving me more reasons to cry for Bella. How her heart must break wondering if something as inconsequential as a shiver caused Edward to leave; or worse yet, something she said in her sleep. May I please go spend some time with her, and reassure her that you love Edward too... and you are going to fix this? ;)

Great chapter, Chloe.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm getting more intrigued with each chapter. You gave me so much more info in this one. Edward didn't leave her like he did in New Moon. He took her somewhere alone, and left her at some point after that. Now something "wrong" is coming for her. 

Wow! Can't wait to find out what the wrong is!

The Heart Wants by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

The Heart Wants

Stepsiblings Emmett & Bella have fought an attraction for years,
but one game of "I Never" compels them to act. Emmett's best friend
Edward gets involved, and life gets a little more interesting.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Emmett
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24067 Read Count: 21192
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2013 Updated: 01 Jul 2013
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, damn, Jenny, you just got right down to it, didn't you? No warm up for this story... just straight from the first sentence to "inferno"!!!  I know you don't know what compelled you to write this, but I'm very glad you did. If you do figure it out, and it's something I can send you in the mail, please let me know. I'll have a large supply of it on the way to you.

This is so hot, girl. I've never read a Bella/Emmett story before, but I have to say that I like it! Thanks for the fun. I'm off to read more!!

P.S.  Thanks also for throwing Edward into the mix. He always helps to heat things up!



Author's Response:

LOLOL Thanks! I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMG, Jen. This is so hot! I may need to go read something really boring and dull in between chapters, like the manual for my dishwasher, just so I can cool off. This one is great!! I love Bella and Emmett together, a lot!!! Don't pay any attention to anyone giving you grief about this story. Bella and Emmett aren't even related. And you can't help who you have feelings for. 

Thanks for another great chapter, and for reminding me about the pictures. I'll definitely go check them out. Love the banner, btw. I'm assuming it is the work of our mutual friend. ;)

I'm off to read about my dishwasher. 



Author's Response:

Hahahaha

Thank you very much! :D

Yep, Bethy did a great job on it! ;)

Dreaming in Blood by Discordia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Emotionally distant investment banker Edward Cullen struggles with his attraction to the mysterious vampire who changed him. Angry and denying that they're mates, Edward must reconcile the pull he feels to her. When her past threatens the fragile equilibrium they've established, Edward must decide if he'll forgive her, or abandon her to the monster from her past. Dark, non-canon


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62307 Read Count: 3927
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Oct 2013
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH DISSY!!! You know how long I have waited for this, and you did not disappoint!! It's even better than I remembered. I love that you have made Bella the vampire and Edward the one who is in a sexual thrall. This is going to be so much fun. Thank you so much for deciding to continue this. If you get tired and don't feel like writing, I will hop in my car and bring you dark chocolate, wine and anything else you might need. I'll do your laundry and your home remodeling projects. Just keep giving me more Vampward!! This vamp is going to have me in serious lust with him, and I can't wait. 

I do feel sorry for Edward. He is so alone and emotionally empty. But I know you and Bella are going to take care of that!! Btw, you made me spit my coffee with this line:  'Oh, baby' works just fine for me."  

Love this story already, and love you too. Your writing is absolutely stunning! xoxoxo

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I have MAJOR LUST for pissed off Vampward! I don't blame him for being angry at all.  But soft-hearted me feels very sorry for Bella. If I saw that man and knew he was my mate, I'd have done what she did. Who am I kidding, I'd have done it even if he wasn't my mate. He's too hot to leave alone!! ;)  I love how you are giving us this cnflict beween them. An immediate "head over heels in love" scenario wouldn't have been nearly as much fun. Besides, it will make the sex that much hotter if they have to wait for it. 

Great chapter, Dis!! Can't wait for the next one. XOXO    Soph

 

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don't know who I feel the most sorry for, Edward or Bella. I definitely understand his anger. However, I think Bella was probably very young when she was turned, so maybe she didn't make the most mature decision. She could have handled the situation a little better, given him time to become completely enthralled with her and then given him a choice. She knew he was her mate, but not being a vampire, he wouldn't know that. And we all know that sometimes we have to let men THINK they are making the decisons, right? If he had refused her, she could have just changed him anyway. ;) So I guess I feel the greatest sorrow for Bella. His rejection must be breaking her heart. After all, Edward now gets to live forever, gets to have great sex for hours at a time without getting tired, and has a ready-made hot woman to do it with. Nope, don't feel as sorry for him. ;)

Great chapter, Dissy!! I can't wait until next week. Btw, I will be happy to take care of Edward's "frustration" for him until he and Bella work things out.

xoxo Soph

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter, Dis! I got a good laugh out of Edward running inside when he saw the sun coming up. Then he hid between the windows... bwahahaha. That was good,girl!! But then you made my heart hurt when he was being so mean to Bella. I wanted to cry when she said, "You don't have to be so cruel."  I can imagine how I would feel if the person I knew was my mate, was being so hurtful to me. Her heart has to be breaking. You've made me wonder whether she knows for a fact that he will eventually feel the same about her; or does she think it is possible that he will leave her. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!  I'm getting the feeling that there is a really good back story to Bella's change. 

Btw, I thoroughly enjoyed Edward's time in the shower. I'm just glad you let me watch instead of having to just hear him like poor Bella did. It was a perfect scene!!

This was my favorite chapter so far; but then you just posted No. 5, so that could change.   xoxo   Soph

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank goodness you let Edward get a little relief. ;)  Can vampires have blue balls? How long is he going to continue to deny poor Bella? He must be made of steel to be able to resist his feelings, especially after she showed him what it could be like between them. I was glad to see that she is confident that he'll eventually realize they belong together. Now I'm not as worried about her. Wow, Dis, that was some scene in the woods. You may melt my laptop when they finally get down to the real deal! This was one of my favorite chapters too. It was great to see Edward finally embracing his new abilities, and feeling better about his new body. And I love Bella more with each chapter. She is so strong in refusing to let Edward destroy her confindence. Thanks for all the fun, my friend.  xoxo   Soph

A Light in My Dark by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Darkness was my friend, my comfort, my constant companion until he came back into my life for good, lighting my path and my soul. He is the light in my dark. Xtreme OOC Bella/Jasper Vampire fic. Mature themes/language


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26017 Read Count: 9233
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2014 Updated: 05 Jan 2015
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just finished the first chapter, and I love it!! What a unique idea for the New Moon story. Plus I have a confession... I am a true Jasper h00r. Edward will always be my first choice, but Jasper is a very close second. I read every Jasper story I can find. So thank you for giving us a new one. Your writing is beautiful; and I can't wait to see where you take us with this.



Author's Response:

Oh goodness, thank you so much for your wonderful review and kind words.  I am happy that you like it!  Especially seeing as how I wasn't so nice to Edward. LOL

I hope you stick with me through this journey.  It should be fun!

 

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, Bella is going to be a hired killer!!! I love it!  That's one way to take out your agression, and get rid of those hurt feelings. ;)  I'll bet Edward had no idea what he was unleashing when he pissed off sweet, innocent little Bella. I'm laughing so hard!

Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the fun.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing and your fantastic commentary.  I really love hearing (reading) your thoughts and reactions.  Glad you enjoy it so far!

~L~

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, hello, dirty-talking Jasper!! That boy is pure sin. And I'm asking the same question Bella is asking... When is he coming to visit her?  Soon, I hope. I'm glad we are going to have Peter in this story. He's always been one of my favorite characters. But I don't picture him like the guy in BD2.  Loved the chapter. I'll be waiting patiently for Jasper's visit. ;)

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, the phone thing.  LOL  Thought I'd try something a little different with that.  Glad it worked out!  I really try to put effort into mixing things up so that the lemons don't all wind up being the same old thing every time.  Don't want things to get boring!  LOL

Thanks for reading and reviewing once again!

~L~

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, America's young sweetheart on screen, is starring in her first R-rated film. Her co-star is Edward Cullen, Hollywood's reputed playboy, and he won't give her the time of day. Will they fizzle onscreen as Bella attempts to turn up the heat in her first erotic scene, or can she cause a reaction powerful enough to burn through his arrogant, impassive facade?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39631 Read Count: 6257
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2014 Updated: 04 Apr 2014
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I loved this first chapter. As far as "learning as you go", I think you don't need to learn. You already KNOW!! Your writing is so concise, and so captivating. This was a beautifully written chapter. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I'm looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  This journey in FF--both reading and writing--has been amazing so far.  I can't believe I only now found it.  :)

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story is so good. I love Jerkwards, so your Edward if really pulling me in. I have a feeling there is going to be a good reason for his attitude. Can't wait to get to the filming. If I were Bella, I'd probably throw up all over him, from nerves. ;)

Thanks for another great chapter.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WOW!!! That was some "first take"!! I think I need a moment, before proceeding to Chapter 4. ;)

You have me totally hooked!!

At His Command by dpdp2317 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
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Isabella Swan, 21, a student at NYU, spends a passion filled night with billionaire Edward Cullen, 31. The next morning, he tells her that he wants her to be his submissive. She finds herself thrust into the world of BDSM, where pain is pleasure, and less is more. Follow Bella on this kinky journey, as she tries to be Edward's perfect little pet. But, is there more to the story?

Thank you BE1965 for the wonderful banner. 

I'm ever grateful to RAH07890 who is painstakingly beta'ing every chapter. She is an essential to the story, and I'm so thankful to her.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26137 Read Count: 26179
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Jun 2014
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just read your first chapter, and I am totally hooked on this one! I even rec'd it in one of my groups. I hope you continue to post on this site, because I enjoy reading here much more than on FFn. But for now, I'm going over there to read the rest of the chapters you have posted. Thanks for sharing this with us. There aren't enough authors writing Domward these days, and I really hope you continue with this one. Great job!

Claiming by Lilith Blood Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

She could love me. She could even hate me. She could loathe my guts but she was not allowed to forget me. Love and hate, both can pave the path to obsession, especially when the thin line that separates them begins to blur. Warning: Dark!


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122715 Read Count: 44816
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2014 Updated: 14 Jan 2017
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm loving your story! I like this Christian; and I love that Isabella has an secret love of erotic literature. That makes the situation even more fun. Please keep writing. You've got :)

The Writer by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

She thought she was writing fiction but what happens when her vivid imagination gets a little too close to the unknown truth? Twilight AU Mature language/material Vampire/Human Bella/Major Whitlock pairing DARK/DOMINANT MAJOR not a fluff story! SOME DOM/sub SITUATIONS Can't handle that, take yourself elsewhere. Full summary now heading Ch. 1.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26483 Read Count: 13515
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2014 Updated: 04 Jan 2015
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WOW!!! The Major didn't waste any time, did he? This story just gets better and better. Did you really kill Jake off? (not that it would bother me)  I can't wait to read more. Thanks for a great story.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooh, someone's been checking out her house! Could Jake smell that the Major had been there? ;) I should be doing housework,since it is Saturday, but all I want to do is read your story. I'm so excited about this. 

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

SQUEEEE!!  I am blown away by this first chapter. What an amazing premise for a story!! Your plot line is GENIUS!! I am such a vamp fic fan, and then throw in a dark and dominant Major, and it's like Christmas for me. It's like you peeked in my mind to see what kind of story I'd like to read. Thank you so much for writng this and sharing it with us. I can't wait to dive into this one.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Dominant & A Gentleman

Growing up with a father in the military was hard on Bella. She made a promise to herself that she would never date or fall for a Marine like her father. That is until she runs into a pair of identical twins that have her reconsidering her rule.

Anthony is shy, extremely polite, and a true gentleman.

Edward appears to be in control and exudes confidence, and has a very dark side.

Will she take the risk or walk away?



A special thank you to Chandrakanta for creating the awesome banner for this story.

And a heartfelt thank you with undying gratitude to my awesome beta LostInPa who has helped with this story from the very first chapter.

I ♥ you hard!

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134473 Read Count: 94314
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2015 Updated: 01 May 2016
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Shit Hot

Oh, sweet Andrea, I was so excited to see this story back. It was one of my favorites. But then I can't think of one of your stories that wasn't one of my favorites. Thank you so much for reposting it. Edward and Anthony are going to heat up my reading time once again. I hope all is well with you. You have been greatly missed. xoxoxo

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Water Warrior

Don't worry about the pictures or the formatting. We are just so excited to have you back!!! You could be writing in a foreign language than I couldn't read and your talent would still shine through. NO ONE writes a hotter Edward than you do! Your descriptions of him are so wonderful. 

Wow, it didn't take long for Edward to recognize something in Bella, and she recognized his tone of voice!! This is going to be such fun.

Love you, babe!!!

 



Author's Response:

I missed you Sweetie....hugs!!!!!!!!!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 602293
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: sophdrea Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I loved their romantic date, especially the dancing. I can't wait to see what happens with the Volturis. Thanks for another great chapter.