Unfortunately, I do not speak English, read a fixed start on the Russian site, he did Interested and because There he laid out slow, but wait I do not like, then had to read here through an interpreter.Because of this, can not say anything about the style of writing, a third of the words had no meaning, but the essence of the story I caught:)

 Frankly, after the prologue and first chapter had to miss a big chunk and start with only 11 chapters. Very hard to read.I read and then continued because it wanted to see how Edward will ask for forgiveness:)

 And know where some heads with 16-17 fixed me completely captured. I really liked how the changed point of view, Edward's attitudes towards women.And although I think that in life one does not change so quickly, the transformation occurs so consistently and gradually,that looks very realistic.

 In short, I liked your story, rmcrms5. Too heavy, of course, psychologically, not every person will overcome him, but catchy. I do not regretwhat they read.

Thank you for writing. Good luck and inspiration.