Reviews by aelita48
Summary:

Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 48031
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Jun 2018
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Good chapter, thank you.

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

La visite de la ville va être intéressant.

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Merci, je l'aime cette fiction!

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Il est terrible de mourir de faim!

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Qui est cette femme?

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ce qu'il a à faire?

Dur pour Edward.

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ils ont atteint une sorte d'accord.

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

La décision de Bella est la bonne.

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That is not going to be easy to live in this manor house.

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

En combien de temps vit cet homme?

Les filles pauvres!

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yes I look forward to reading his explanations.

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Date: 17 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Je aime ce chapitre, je vous remercie, de poursuivre cette bonne fiction.

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Date: 25 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Je suis satisfait de lire la suite de cette bonne fiction.

Merci et à produire pour la suite ...

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Date: 25 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I like this fiction, it is a beautiful story.

Thank you.

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Date: 11 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

good ! <3

The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 403]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 145794
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hope that she is going to have the courage to tell him!



Author's Response:

She will be not quite yet x

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Ils vont y arriver!

Bon chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oui, il lui a dit !

Qu'est-ce qu'elle va se mettre d'accord?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Body

I like this first chapter.

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Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bella gets acquainted with "the body".



Author's Response:

She is trying to x

Summary:

 

Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126048
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

It is a good chapter.

The end is sad.

Thank you

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Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It is a beautiful story, a marriage, two beautiful babies!

I adore.

Thank you for it, I had some good times to read this fiction.

Kisses

Summary:

bannner

 

Isabella is an English woman, married to a Scottish laird, living in a foreign land. Will she be able to find the peace and happiness that she so desperately seeks, or will their differences be too much for them to bear? **Sequel to My Laird**


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20446 Read Count: 57222
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2015 Updated: 13 Oct 2015
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Il est une bonne fiction, je vous remercie.

Bisous

 

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Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Je adore cette Édouard, il  est vraiment complet et il veut plaire à sa femme.

Je espère que son plan est d'aller travailler.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Il ressemble à cela fonctionne, à bavarder vouloir protéger Alice!

Summary: Past Featured Story

All her life, initiate sorceress, Be'lah has been having nightmares of her death at the hands of a dragon-riding leech mage. Fleeing her fate, she winds up on Plaht Island, an outcast tangled up in a dark prophesy.  This legend reveals her part in freeing Prince Ehd Wyrd from his curse-if she lives. Elves, fairies, and dragons-no vampires. Part one of a potential trilogy.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101635 Read Count: 6323
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2015 Updated: 06 Aug 2015
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Gateway

Il est un très bon fiction.

Je passé Un moment très bon de lire DANS LA

Merci.



Author's Response:

I get a thrill when I see reviews in another language, knowing someone has enjoyed my story enough to translate it, or read in a less familiar language.  My one French class is barely adequate to know what you're saying without a translation.  So, I hope I get this right:  Merci Beaucoup pour la lecture.  

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Sacrifice

 

 

 

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your response and the sweet rating!

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Tooth Ache

It is a good chapter.

I can't wait that Edward gets rid of Tanya!

Thank you

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229536
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Il est un bon chapitre.

 

Merci

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oui, Aro est mort, Il est une bonne chose.

Je n'aimais pas nécessairement la torture mais je comprends qu'il est la coutume des gens de la mafia.

Il est un bon chapitre.

Merci. Bisous.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes I adored!

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Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Merci pour ce nouveau chapitre.

Happy New Year 2,016.

Je vous souhaite beaucoup de bonheur, l'argent (argent) et surtout une bonne santé pour vous et toute votre famille.

Baisers

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella is the best!

I hope that Aro is going to keep quiet.

Thank you for this good chapter.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I like very much this chapter, thank you.

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Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I like this fiction.

Je vous remercie.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I like this fiction! But this end is really horrible for the readers. Pity, do not keep waiting us too long.

Thank you, kisses.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Il est un bon chapitre.

Aro est impuissante, bien fait pour lui. Je suis impatient de lire le chapitre suivant. Baisers

Summary:



Banner by: AstridGreenEyes-Banners

Summary: Being born into a made family has both advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes a man has to reflect on which relationships he involves himself in.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98617 Read Count: 229012
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2015 Updated: 23 Sep 2015
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Il est le bon début.

Summary:

Head over Heels

 

Can a broken boot heel mend a broken heart and lead to a HEA?

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1610 Read Count: 2973
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2015 Updated: 15 Sep 2015
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this fiction, il est un bon chapitre!

Je vous remercie

Summary: Past Featured Story

ttb

 

Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171365
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Good chapter, Thank you.

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Date: 20 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Pauvre  Bella, je l'espère, que la princess ne va pas mourir.

Je vous remercie.

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Date: 18 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Thank you for this good chapter.

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Date: 22 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I am sad for Bella's puppy!

I hope that James is going to pay for that.

Thank you.

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Date: 29 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Bon chapitre, je vous remercie.

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Date: 12 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Bella Était responsable Pour Une Fois.

Merci, Il Est Un bon chapitre.

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Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

HER parents auraient eu à lui parler à propos de ce mariage avant

Deux semaines, il est vraiment courte.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Bruno est un bon chien de garde!

Bon chapitre.

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Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Bon chapitre, j'aime qu'ils aiment...

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Date: 17 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Good chapter.

I hope that Bella is not going to make of carelessness.

Thank you. Kisses.

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Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Yuk! Bon chapitre, je vous remercie.

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Date: 25 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Elle mérite bien sa fessée !

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Date: 25 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

They are on bad terms!

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Date: 02 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Kate est dans le coup, 

Garret veut se débarrasser d'Edward.

Nightmare by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary:

Summary: There's a serial killer on the loose and he calls himself Sent From Hell. Edward is a little strange and his past is jaded. He's let his crush on Bella be known, but she's scared of his unknown past. When Bella is hunted down, will Edward be her saving grace or will he be Sent From Hell?

 

Banner by: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68989 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Jan 2016
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Le bon début, je tremble à l'avance.

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Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ils ont tous les yeux verts.

Charlie est vraiment super avec son (sa) fille.

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Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That gives me the pulpit of hen.

Home to Stay by Sher Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Coming home to Forks after being gone four years, everything looks and feels the same. Edward couldn’t wait to see the love of his life, Bella. She’s the one he left behind, but, first, his attention is captured by a young girl that looks just like him, and the woman with her is just who he came to see. Could the little girl be his?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74811 Read Count: 35766
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2015 Updated: 30 Dec 2017
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It is a chapter where everybody is happy, it is pleasant to read.

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Date: 04 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

They are too cute!

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Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Beautiful chapter, it is the reunions of our heroes.

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Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Beautiful chapter, they crossed a very good time together, it was completed.

Thank you, kisses.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

They are very cute.

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Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank you for this fiction, I like !

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Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Poor man Edward, he worries!

I think that Bella is going to say yes!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this début.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I hope that Bella is going to be happy of the return of Edward.

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Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I believe that Bella is fast going to forgive Edward.

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Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

They are very cute.

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Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They get along well. Bella is certainly going to crack, Edward is charming.

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Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It is the beautiful journey which they made!

They gets closer more and more...

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bad boy Jacob Black doesn't return Bella's crush, so she decides to date someone safer: a harmless nerd in her math class named Edward Cullen. Little does she know that he is secretly a powerful and ruthless gang leader enmeshed in a vicious drug war that will put her life—-and all her beliefs—-at risk.. AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador.

 

Banner by Rita01tx

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6456 Read Count: 88316
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Oct 2016
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good chapter.

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

his Edward is charming even if he hides something.

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This Edward is charming. I think that the fire is its vengeance.

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella aurait dû tout dire à Edward.

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Maintenant, il  sait, qu'il  va faire ?

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Bella ne peut pas résister à Edward.

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Cette fiction deviennent de plus en plus intéressant.

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Kim veut tuer Bella, je souhaite que Edward ne va pas la laisser (it) faire.

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Est-ce chien bleu de Bella?

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella the very developed sense of smell.

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Quelle horreur!

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yeah, too beautiful!

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bon chapitre!

Edward a également pris sa revanche.

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bon chapitre!

 

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Je crois qu'il  est grave!

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bella calmed Edward, Jacob and has him almost fought.

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Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Bella is a scamp, she would have of to drink that some fruit juice



Author's Response:

Dear Aelita, thanks so much for all your lovely reviews in both English and French. Please feel free to leave them in any language you prefer! I especially appreciate that you rate and leave a review on every chapter. xoxoxo

So wonderful to read all these great notes today. Thank you for making my day!

Hugs,

Alisa

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

SYTYCD

 

The competition is fierce. Dreams are at stake and a budding romance between All-Star, Edward and contestant, Bella are the talk to of the competition. Not to mention jealousy and bitterness from fellow contestants. Will Bella's dream become a reality or will her dreams be dashed before she even gets a chance to compete? Will Edward open his heart to the sweet brunette who captured his attention at the auditions?

 

"And America's Favorite Dancer is..."

 

 

Banner by the talented Mina Rivera

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ON HIATUS


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209773 Read Count: 45870
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Nov 2016
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: When Love Takes Over

I like this chapter, there is only Alice and Bella, Jacob and to Chatter. That is going to make Alice to damage Bella.

Thank you kisses

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Someone to Watch over Me

Je suis certain que Alice a fait délibérément blessé Bella.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre, je vous remercie.

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Date: 21 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Road to the Finale

Merci pour ce bon chapitre, j'aime cette fiction.

Baisers

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Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Cheap Thrills

Renée est diabolique et Alice est fou.

J'espère que Bella va échapper à leurs projets d'assassiner.

Je vous remercie.

Blood Master by Wonwordful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner

Banner by IpsitaC77

Beta: EdwardsFirstKiss

COMPLETE. When Bella asked the ruby-eyed vampire to end her life, she never expected him to 'kidnap' her instead. Who is he, and where is he taking her? A crazy adventure begins, unravelling unprecedented secrets. World travel. AU/OOC. NC17 for strong language, some violence and mild BDSM.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131671 Read Count: 94033
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2015 Updated: 23 Jan 2017
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling

Edward manages well. 

What is going to make Carlisle?

Kisses



Author's Response:

He did! And more to come regarding Carlisle <3

Kisses!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29 - Tick Tock

Nous vous remercions de ce chapitre !

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Date: 09 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27 - A Better World

I love this Edward! Bella me irrite un peu, elle veut toujours à résoudre les choses du passé.

Merci pour ce bon chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 28 - Metamorphosis

Then that's it Edward bit Bella!

Kisses

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Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13 - Eumenes

Good historic chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10 - Two Histories

I like this story. Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your consistent support :)

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Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 - Welcome

J'aime ce chapitre. Bella n'a pas très à l'aise à Voltera.

Je ne fais pas confiance à ces trois rois et ses femmes.

Baisers



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup! :-)

Baisers

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors

J'aime ce chapitre.

Edward va trouver Bella et les autres.

Aro va certainement payer pour le mal qu'il a fait pour Sulpicia.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - Of Vampires and Alcohol

Bella est jaloux!

Il est vrai, Edward est un idiot ...

Merci pour ce bon chapitre. Pas trop d'alcool, il is pas bien



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup! Oui, Bella est très jaloux! :D Don't worry, I don't really drink in real life ;)

PS. Sorry for my bad French, I only had basic classes for less than a month xD