Reviews by aelita48
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419155
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oui c'est bizarre que Charlie ait été libéré... Peut-être quelqu'un de riche (Jacob ?) veut nuire à Bella et Edward ?

Jasper est un idiot mais il a peut-être eu un problème avec une femme grosse et du coup il aurait une haine pour ce genre de personne.

Bon j'ai aimé ce chapitre.

Merci.

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

J'ai bien aimé ce chapitre !

Bella a dit son fait à Jacob !

 

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

J'aime ce chapitre !

Pour la question, je dirai Jasper !

Merci.

 

 

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Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Angela est très amusante et Bella est.. Bella !

Bon Jacob fait des sienne, je crois que ça va mal tourner pour lui, les drogues sont pour Charlie ! Non ?

 

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Merci pour ce bon chapitre.

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20


I liked this chapter!
Gift for Edward was right.
Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Encore un bon chapitre.



Author's Response:

Merci.

E.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bon chapitre, j'aime bien.



Author's Response:

Je vous remercie beaucoup. Merci d'avoir lu et en laissant des critiques. J'ai utilisé Google translate pour écrire cela. J'espère qu'il est correct.
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Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 294: Chapter 294

j'aime !

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Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 273: Chapter 273

This is a beautiful drawing

I love this chapter

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 185: Chapter 185

Bon chapitre !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186

Bella pleure...

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Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 271: Chapter 271

It's true, it's fun!

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

En tout cas nos chéris s'amusent bien !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

C'est une belle photo.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

Comme Bella, il faut faire le ménage.

 

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

Bella est curieuse ! 

Moi je crois que tout ça m'aurait fait peur.

Merci.

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Bon si c'est son plaisir, on ne va pad discuter !!!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 176: Chapter 176

Elle est courageuse cette Bella, Edward pourraît lui faire du mal mais elle a confiance en lui.

Merci.

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Elle a du caractère la petite Bella !

Merci.

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ah Alice arrive !

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170

C'est exactement ça !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 171

C'est un grand peintre je pense !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

Un bon bain pour Bella !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 269: Chapter 269

:)

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Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 270: Chapter 270

Rosalie is Emmett support!

Good chapter.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 243: Chapter 243

Edward A while hot, I like it.

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Mais qui téléphone ?

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

J'attends de lire la suite !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ah c'est un vampire ! J'aime.

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Brave fille !

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Mais de qui parle t il ?

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

J'espère qu'il ne va pas lui faire ça !

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

C'est un gentlemen ? Surement !

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Adieu Tanya !

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Beurk ! James est dur avrc son soumis, aucun respect !

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ah oui je crois que nous voulons toutes être punis par Edward.

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oui ça doit être quelque chose à voire !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

Bon chapitre !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Edward commande... Bella va-t-elle le faire ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

La discution est amorcée !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

Bon chapitre !

Ne nous abandonne pas trop longtemps, j'ai hâte de connaître la suite des amours entre Edward et son papillon !

Merci et bonne chance pour l'écriture.

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Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Edward est un très bon 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Merci :)

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Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

C'est un bon chapitre !

Edward se pose des questions, il ne peut pas lire les pensées de Bella, j'aime ça.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Vous remercier autant de pour votre revue ! Je l'apprécie. Je suis content que vous l'aimez. 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Edward est quand même très réconfortant pour Bella, j'espère qu'ils va la rencontrer prochainement.

Merci.

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Tanya ! Je n'aime pas cette femme.

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Ouf, elle est partie ! Bon vent ! Beurk !

 

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Là Edward prend un risque d'être découvert !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Hi Hi Tu m'étonnes qu'il n'est pas bouleversé, il doit plutôt être content le petit coquin !

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Ah tant mieux, j'ai hâte.

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

J'aime toujours !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

Désolé mais je n'aime pas les slash !

Mais j'aime ta fiction !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Merci :)

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Google est mon ami !!!

Bon chapitre.

Merci

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Edward est cmplètement "gaga" de sa Bella !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Méchante ! Bon et bien tu es cruelle avec tes lecteurs.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Que va t il lui faire faire ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Tu as beaucoup d'imagination ou c'est Edward ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Ha ça a bien marcher le chandelier...

Bella est contente.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Elle fait ce que lui dit Edward, brave fille !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Et bien Jessica va avoir à faire avec Rosalie si elle continue, j'aimerai ça...

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Bien fait pour lui, il veut trop son papillon et voilà.

Il devient jaloux.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173

Merci, c'est toujours agréable à lire.

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

Moi je n'aime pas les fessées !!!

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175

Bon pour qui ? Pour les fesses à Bella ou pour Edward ? 

Je pense que c'est pour Edward, pour Bella c'est autre choses, elle n'est pas encore habituée.

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132

Bon chapitre !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Alice a vu ce qui allait se passer.

Merci

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Je ne sais pas mais j'aime bien ce chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

J'aime !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Oui je crois que nous sommes toutes pour le bandeau !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Oui enfin !

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Coquine !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Merci, j'aime ce chapitre !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Oui il est très chaud !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Je n'aimerai pas faire ce genre de choses

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

C'est un beau chapitre !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

C'est un bon chapitre !

 

Je pense que ton autre fiction n'attire pas trop les lecteurs car ce n'est pas le couple ED/Bella.

Je préfère moi-même les couples habituels, je ne lis pas les Slash.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

J'aime ce chapitre !

Merci.

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Oui tu nous mettras une photo quand tu l'auras fait !!!

Bon chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

Ha Ha, j'adore ces petits commentaires !

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

Hum Hum j'aime bien ce chapitre !

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Midnight Caller

Bella est obéissante ! 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Merci pour ce chapitre.

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Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

Wahou il va l'épuiser !

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Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

Beaucoup trop, il teste toujours son endurence ?

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

Bella est une championne !

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

Merci pour ces chapitres !

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Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 165

C'est gentil un bouquet de fleurs !

Merci.

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Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

Je ne pourrais pas rester comme ça, même pour faire plaisir à Edward !

La position est très dure à tenir, bon courrage à celles qui y arrivent.

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Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 307: Chapter 307

I like these images, it go well with the chapter.

Thank you, kisses.

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 167

Moi aussi j'aime bien être frottée !

Bon mais je sais que ça n"intéresse personne ! 

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 168: Chapter 168

Bon chapitre !

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

Elle est contente après les massage d'Edward.

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 180: Chapter 180

Notre vampire a beaucoup d'idée pour occuper Bella.

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 181: Chapter 181

Oui !!! elle est toujours prète !

 

 

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 182: Chapter 182

Je n'aime pas trop cette position !

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 184: Chapter 184

C'est très mignon ces papillons !

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

Il a arrêté et ensuite il se montre encourageant, je pense que c'est un bon maître pour Bella.

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

Donc on continue...

Merci.