Reviews by aelita48
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

:)

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 190: Chapter 190

J'aime beaucoup les papillons !

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 191: Chapter 191

C'est un bon chapitre !

Merci.

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 192: Chapter 192

J'aime beaucoup ces papillons aussi !

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 193: Chapter 193

Ah oui elle aime bien Edward quand même !

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 194: Chapter 194

J'ai l'impression que Bella a des doutes sur Edward !!!!

Merci.

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 198: Chapter 198

Merci pour ce chapitre !

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

J'aime beaucoup cette photo !

Il l'aime, qu'est ce qu'il va décider de faire pour la garder avec lui ?

J'ai hâte de savoir.

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 207

Edward se pose beaucoup de question...

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 208: Chapter 208

Ils sont plutôt mignons nos petits vampires.

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 209: Chapter 209

Que va décidé Edward ? 

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 212: Chapter 212

Mignon ces photos !

Que va faire Edward ?

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

Ah Edward ! Quel coquin ! Est ce le joli porte-jartelles et les bas de la photo du chapitre précédent ? C'est très mignon...

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 215: Chapter 215

Merci pour ce chapitre.

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

Pourquoi ? Emmett en femme !

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

Très mignon !

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Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

Bella a faillit être blessée par Edward !!!

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Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 229: Chapter 229

Qu'est ce qui se passe ?

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

Ah the hussy!

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Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 235: Chapter 235

Thank you for this great chapter.
I think it will give ideas to Edward!

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 236: Chapter 236


Thank you for this chapter.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 237: Chapter 237

Edward will then do the same to Bella and maybe tell him what he is.
Thank you for this great chapter.

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 238: Chapter 238

I look forward to even set myself.

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

He takes risks!
Thank you.

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 241: Chapter 241

I hope it will be fine between Edward and Bella!
These images!

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Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 247: Chapter 247

Edward Bella but probably still good!

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 250: Chapter 250

I love this chapter, Edward plans to do more things with Bella, I can not wait to read more.
Thank you.

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Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 251: Chapter 251

Bella dreams that his master is like Edward!
I look forward she discovers that Edward really is.

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 253: Chapter 253

I can not wait to tell her that Edward is.
Carlisle gives good advice.
Thank you.

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Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 255: Chapter 255

This is awesome!

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 262: Chapter 262

Is it really going to believe that this is a dream?

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Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 263: Chapter 263

Edward takes care of Bella!

I always look forward to it reveals it

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Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 266: Chapter 266

Bella finally arises the question: Who is the master?

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Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 267: Chapter 267

Bella once again did what his master asked!

I look forward to reading more.

Thank you.

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Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 268: Chapter 268

I love this picture.

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Date: 11 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 274: Chapter 274

I think Bella will have the red ass!

This photo is beautiful Edward.



Author's Response:

Thank you... i took a photo from an earlier chapter and made it into a sketch in photo shop :)

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 276: Chapter 276

Good chapter!

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Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 278: Chapter 278

I like what Bella wrote ...

thank you

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279

I love it!

Strongly thereafter.

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Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 280: Chapter 280

I think Bella is comforted, Edward looked pleased.

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Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 281: Chapter 281

I love this necklace.

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Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 282: Chapter 282

You expect us ...

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Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 285: Chapter 285

He finds it amusing!

I prefer the smile in the first picture.

Thank you.

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Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 286: Chapter 286

Me too Bella, I can not wait!

Yes the photo is perfect.

Thank you.

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

She found the sexy feet, collar he likes as I wait for her to see his master.

Thank you.

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 291: Chapter 291

Ah, this is too good!

Thank you.

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 293: Chapter 293

Bella is fun, it has only fear is that Edward is married.

Thank you.

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 299: Chapter 299

I love this chapter.


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Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 301: Chapter 301

I love this chapter.

Thank you.

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 309: Chapter 309

I love their kisses!

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 310: Chapter 310

I love!

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Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 311: Chapter 311

Thank you!

Summary:

SYSM Banner

 

 

When life gives you lemons, you make lemonade. But, what happens when life throws you a bad-boy biker, an uptight neighbor, and a couple of kids? You cross your fingers and hope for the best! AH-Rated 'M'.

Beta: Sunflower Fanfiction


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89 Read Count: 13545
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2017
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

J'aime bien ce chapitre !

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Leur premier contact n'est pas très sympathique.

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Edward et Emmett en motards, j'aime beaucoup.

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Bon chapitre ! Bella est cuite !

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Encore un bon chapitre !

Bella est retournée travailler !

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Bon moi je vote pour Edward évidemment !

 

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Mon Dieu que se passe-t-il ?

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

J'adore ces deux là !

 

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Mon Dieu que cet enfant est amusant !

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Merci !

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Je crois qu'on arrive tout doucement à leur compte.

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Bon chapitre !

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Phoebe Grey never had many friends growing up. It’s hard to know if people like you for you or your father. Christian Grey is the richest man in Seattle and Phoebe has grown up under the constant companionship of her bodyguard Chuck Travis. Now it’s time for college and Phoebe is finally going to be just Phoebe, college freshman at Columbia University. Will she make friends without her father’s name and money to influence them?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32579 Read Count: 20861
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

J'aime bien !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Small Gathering vs Ragging Kegger

Elle sait ce qu'elle veut et heureusement que maman est là pour l'aider...

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Planning My Escape

C'est un plan diabolique !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Party Time

Wahou, je crois qu'elle va se faire "remonter les bretelles" !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - In the Hospital

Bon chapitre !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Fallout

J'aime ce chapitre !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Touring the City

Enfin un compromis entre christian et sa fille.

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Back to the Hospital

Je crois qu'Ana l'a fait expré pour que Sara sache qui est Phoebe.

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Truth

Ouf, elle a dit la vérité à son amie, c'est bien !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Ballet

Bon chapitre, j'aime beaucoup !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Lunch at Maxwell's

Sarah a fait connaissance avec Christian Grey !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Back to Normal

Est ce son premier rendez vous ?

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Preparing for the Night

J'aime bien ce chapitre.

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Sunset Over the City

Donc ils se sont embrassés, c'est bien, il est sympathique ce Brandon !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Thanksgiving Break

J'aime bien ce chapitre, c'est gaie, léger !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Skype Date

Bon chapitre, papa veille toujours.

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Making Winter Plans

Sarah a des projets pour Teddy !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Winter Break Begins

Sarah est en visite chez Phoebe ! 

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Snow Bunnies

Les règles du papa sont strictes !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Dinner in Town

Les ennuis comment ? Non ?

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Oh What a Night

Pauvre Phoebe !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - No More Games

Bon et bien j'espère que ça va quand même aller car j'aime bien ce petit Brandon !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Reinforcements

J'ai bien aimé l'arrivée de Teddy !

Dommage si tu ne fais pas de suite !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Going Home

Brandon et Ana sont à la maison !

J'ai hâte de lire la rencontre avec Christian.

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The Club

Pauvre Brando ! Il est stressé je crois.

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Meeting Mr. Grey

Ah oui c'est une bonne question mais c'est normal que Christian soit méfiant !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Growing Up Grey

Bon chapitre !



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews. I had to use a translator to read them and I think some was lost in the translation but I appreciate you taking the time.

Surprises by EmziBob Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Jessica comes home after a 3 year trip expecting Edward to be waiting to marry her, but she is in for one hell of a surprise. Told from Jessica's POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3430 Read Count: 5753
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really stupid Jessica and she breaks the most beautiful cups Bella, she deserves a slap!
Bella and Charlie entertained the situation.

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Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like the beginning, it is very fun.

Ginnungagap by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 165]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Ginnungagap Banner: the castle, the servant, the Queen, and the land.

Forced into a marriage with a man she fears, Izabel must choose between changing him or falling in love with a stranger. 

 


Ginnungagap has been

  • Nominated for the TwiFanfictionRecs Top 10 Completed fic in May. Vote here! Polls close on June 30th!

 

  • Rec'd by The Other Realm.


  • Featured on Fic Central as an "Under the Radar" fic.

 

  • Listed on TWCS under "Featured Stories"

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149484 Read Count: 42210
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 23 May 2016
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Hunt

J'aime beaucoup cette fiction !

Je vais lire sur FF c'est plus facile pour moi.

Merci.

Save Tonight by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

AU - It's been nine months since Edward fled the woods in Forks, fled from her for her. Each day his willpower crumbles a little more, feeling the insistent pull to return to her side. Upon returning, a passionate night will erupt between them.

Bella and Edward


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16688 Read Count: 6788
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2012 Updated: 26 Nov 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Merci pour ces bons chapitres.



Author's Response:

aelita48,

 

Okay - I give up. ;-) I tried Googling this (as I don't speak French) and I've just gotta ask - what's it mean?

 

Thank you for the review!

~anyanka jenkins~

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

mhnf


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131907
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

J'aime ce chapitre !

Charlie est horrible mais il a quand même fait le bon choix pour sa fille, il doit l'aimer quand même.

Merci.

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward et charmant mais il ne veut pas se rapprocher de Bella, je crois qu'elle va tout faire pour qu'il change d'avis.

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

J'aime bien cette Bella, elle a du caractère.

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella est contente d'avoir l'air plus agé !

Tout ça pour plaire à son mari.

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Mais pourquoi est-il si méchant ?