Reviews by aelita48
Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95369
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Jacob se conduit bien ! Il défend Bella et Edward devant ses parents et devant les parents de Bella. Je trouve les parents de Bella horribles.

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Merci, j'ai aimé ce chapitre bien qu'il n'y ait que des catastrophes !!!

Ah non il y a la demande d'Edward.

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Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

J'ai bien aimé cette fiction ! 

Le teaser de la prochaine histoire  me plaît, je la lirai avec plaisir !

Donc à bientôt.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Adult Content: BDSM When Isabella’s contract with Master Jasper Whitlock is ending. Master introduces her to his friend, Edward Cullen. Will Isabella be the perfect submissive for Master Cullen? Will Edward be the perfect Master for Isabella?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181505 Read Count: 281178
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2012 Updated: 01 Sep 2013
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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Do You Wanna Play?

Isabella a l'air parfaite pour notre Edward !



Author's Response:

My review said Isabella looks perfect for our Edward!

Yes, she does. I included a translation so everyone would be able to read. Hope you don't mind. Thanks for the review.

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Don't You Want Me?

Merci, j'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !

J'aime quand il y a une histoire et une romance pas seulement des scènes BDSM, donc pour moi c'est parfait !

Merci.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I love this chapter!   I love when there is a history not only romance and BDSM scenes, so for me it's perfect!

You are welcome, I have had a couple of people tell me that. Thanks for the review.

Merci. J'ai eu un couple de personnes me disent que. Merci pour la revue.

 

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: You Sexy Thing

J'adore ce chapitre avec leur rencontre sur Skype !



Author's Response:

I love this chapter with their encounter on Skype!

Je n'ai jamais utiliser Skype, mais j'ai lu à ce sujet dans plusieurs histoires. Je pensais que ce serait une bonne idée d'utiliser dans ces histoires. Je suis content que vous aimez le chapitre, merci pour l'examen.

 

J'ai accompagné d'une traduction sur ma réponse de votre réponse, et j'ai aussi inclure à la fois un anglais et un français de retour pour vous. J'espère que vous ne me dérange pas. Laissez-moi savoir si cela choque et je vais arrêter.

 

Bonne lecture :)

 

 

I have never use Skype, but have read about it in several stories. Thought it would be a great idea to use in this stories. I'm glad you like the chapter, thanks for the review.

 

I include a translation on my response of your response, and I also include both an English and a French back to you. I hope you don't mind. Let me know if this offends and I will stop.

 

Happy Reading :)

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: If You Don't Know Me By Now

Pauvre Bella ! James a été horrible avec elle.

 



Author's Response:

Poor Bella! James was horrible with it.

Oui, il est terrible et pense qu'il est un don de Dieu. Qu'est-ce une douleur dans le cul qu'il est. Merci pour revoir l'amour de voir quoi que ce soit une choses.

Yes, he is terrible and thinks he's god's gift. What a pain in the butt he is. Thanks for reviewing love to see whatever one things.

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: In The Air Tonight

J'ai bien aimé ce chapitre !

 



Author's Response:

 reviewer:    I liked this chapter!

Response: I'm glad to hear that you liked it. Thanks for the review...

Je suis heureux d'entendre que vous avez aimé. Merci pour la revue ...

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: I Touch Myself

Je crois qu'elle a aimé "cyber" !



Author's Response:

Reviewer:     I think she liked "cyber"!.

Response: You could say that, I think she liked it alot. LOL  Thanks for the review keep reading.

On pourrait dire que, je pense qu'elle a aimé beaucoup. LOL Merci pour la revue continuez à lire.

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Natural High

Quand on lit le formulaire c'est amusant, mais aussi ce n'est pas simple comme jeux !

Merci.

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....

C'est un bon chapitre, j'aime cette scène à trois ! 



Author's Response:

This is a good chapter, I love this scene three!

 

R: Heureux que vous aimé, merci pour la lecture et l'examen.

Glad you liked it, thanks for reading and review.

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: But Whips and Chains....

Journée sympathique, ils ont fait davantage connaissance !



Author's Response:

Nice day, they have more knowledge!

 

Yes, they do. The better they get to know one another the stronger the bond will be, and the more they fall in love with each other.

Oui, ils le font. Le mieux qu'ils apprennent à connaître l'autre plus le lien sera, et plus ils tombent amoureux l'un de l'autre.

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Excite Me

Mon Dieu ! James est là !



Author's Response:

My God! James is here!

This is a flashback in the story, her remembering the things he done to here. We won't offically see him until around .... Chapter Down on the corner we have his POV, then Edward sees him in a chapter. Can't remember which one at the moment. He will be back when she is more confident in the playroom.

Il s'agit d'un retour en arrière dans l'histoire, son souvenir les choses qu'il fait ici. Nous allons le voir pas officiellement jusqu'à environ .... Chapitre vers le bas sur le coin, nous avons son POV, puis Edward le voit dans un chapitre. Ne me souviens pas que l'on à l'heure actuelle. Il sera de retour quand elle est plus à l'aise dans la salle de jeux.

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Disturbia Part 2

Pauvre Isabella ! James mérite d'être brulé vif après avoir été démembré.



Author's Response:

Poor Isabella! James deserves to be burnt alive after being dismembered.

 

J'ai pensé fortement à faire cela, mais je ne sais pas quoi faire avec la ventouse visqueuse encore. Seul le temps nous le dira, mais il ne sera pas agréable. Merci pour la revue.

I have thought strongly about doing that, but don't know what to do with the slimy sucker yet. Only time will tell, but it will not be nice. Thanks for the review.

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Everyday Is A Winding Road

J'aime ce chapitre !

La police est toujours là quand on n'a pa besoin ! Non ?



Author's Response:

I love this chapter! 

The police are always there when you do need pa! Not?

Oui, ils viennent toujours quand ils ne sont pas nécessaires, besoin d'eux et ils ne sont nulle part autour. Heureux de voir que vous avez aimé le chapitre, continuez à lire et réviser. Merci

Yes, they always come when they are not needed, need them and they are nowhere around. Glad that you liked the chapter, keep reading and reviewing. Thanks

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: I'm So Excited

Ils ont passé le contrat !

Bon chapitre.



Author's Response:

They spent the contract!

Good chapter.

Merci, et oui, ils ont signé le contrat. Ils ne vont pas par elle strictement mais à ce point. Je pense à faire mon prochain chapitre où ils le suivent mieux. Surtout, étant qu'elle devient plus confiant et sûr de son statut de nouveau. Continuez votre lecture et merci pour l'examen.

Thanks, and yes they signed the contract. They don't go by it strictly though at this point. I'm thinking of making my later chapter where they follow it better. Especially, being that she becomes more confident and secure in her status again. Keep reading and thanks for the review.

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Kitchen Rendezvous

Bon chapitre !

La cuisine c'est bien !



Author's Response:

Good chapter!

The kitchen is well!

Rien de tel qu'une bonne cuisine se défouler pour faire sourire tout le monde. Merci pour la lecture et l'examen de l'amour d'entendre vos pensées.

Nothing like a good kitchen romp to make anyone smile. Thanks for reading and reviewing love to hear your thoughts.

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Call Me

C'était une bonne soirée !



Author's Response:

It was a great evening!

Merci pour la lecture et l'examen et ce fut une bonne soirée pour eux.

Thanks for reading and reviewing and it was a good evening for them.

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Down On The Corner

J'aime cette scène que joue Bella, je l'imagine dans sa tenue !



Author's Response:

I love this scene plays Bella, I imagine in his outfit!

Ouais, j'ai essayé d'être aussi élaboré que possible au sujet de sa tenue. Merci pour la lecture et l'examen.

Yeah, I tried to be as elaborate as possible about her outfit. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Easy, Peaceful Feeling

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !

Bella et Edward se sont avoués leurs sentiments, c'est un très beau moment.

James se rapproche..



Author's Response:

I love this chapter!

Bella and Edward have confessed their feelings, it is a beautiful moment.

James approaches ..

Oui, James a été la suite et regarder Bella depuis qu'elle a quitté. Sucker visqueux, et il sera de retour à un certain point dans les histoires. Merci pour la lecture et l'examen.

Yes, James has been following and watching Bella ever since she left. Slimy sucker, and he will be back at some point in the stories. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: You've Got A Friend In Me

Bon chapitre avec la rencontre d'Alice et Bella.



Author's Response:

Good chapter meeting with Alice and Bella.

Ouais, c'est bon de savoir que Bella gagne une sorte de système de soutien pour l'aider à travers tous les moments difficiles de la vie.

Yeah, its good to know that Bella is gaining some kind of support system to help her through all the tough moments in life.

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Hit Me Baby One More Time

J'ai bien aimé cette Bella en "maîtresse d'Edward", elle reste quand même très respectueuse et gentille, à mon avis, elle ne peux pas trop "dominer" son maître.

Merci.



Author's Response:

I liked the Bella "mistress of Edward," she's still very respectful and nice, in my opinion, it can not really "dominate" his master. Thanks

Oui, elle serait une bonne maîtresse, mais pas pour cette histoire. Souvenir de ce qu'il a fait principalement à l'aider dans ses craintes. Il était dangereux pour lui de laisser faire, elle aurait pu lui faire du mal. C'est pourquoi elle s'est arrêtée, une fois elle a compris toute l'énergie qu'il a fallu pour contrôler une scène. Elle se sentait comme si elle était en de bonnes mains. Merci pour la revue.

Yes, she would be a good mistress, but not for this story. Remember he did this mainly to help her with her fears. It was dangerous for him to let her do it, she could have hurt him. That's why she stopped, once she figured out all the energy it took to control a scene. She felt like she was in good hands.  Thanks for the review.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Where Breaking Dawn end, this is where Leaving Forks picks up. It has been four years since the Volturi attacked the Cullen's and everything is going well. Or, is it? Aro has something up his sleeve to lure the Cullen's where he wants them, with the introduction of a new vampire. See what happens now, and will they survive?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Historical, Hurt/Comfort,, Mpreg, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94062 Read Count: 19845
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Volterra

Bon début, j'ai l'impression qu'Aro va faire du mal à nos amis !!!



Author's Response:

Good start, I feel Aro will hurt our friends!

Merci pour l'examen, vous êtes le seul ici qui a passé en revue et je l'apprécie. Ouais, le diabolique Aro va essayer à nouveau de détruire la merveilleuse Cullen.

Thanks for the review, you are the only on here that has reviewed and I appreciate it. Yeah, the devilish Aro will try once again to destroy the wonderful Cullen's.

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Half Breeds

Aro est malin ! Il fait tout ça pour récupérer les Cullen, il doit vraiment s'ennuyer dans son château !!!



Author's Response:

Aro is smart! He did all that to recover Cullen, he must really be bored in her castle!

Lassé sans doute, mais pour moi Aro possède un complexe de dieu. Je pense qu'il se sent comme il est au-dessus tous les autres. Il ne se soucie pas des humains autres que ce qu'ils peuvent fournir à lui. S'il avait loin de les contrôler qu'il le ferait. Avec Joham et les hybrides, il pourrait bien trouver son chemin. Merci pour examen.

Bored probably, but to me Aro has a god complex. I think that he feels like he is above everyone else. He doesn't care about the humans other than what they can provide to him. If he had away to control them he would. With Joham and the hybrids, he might just find his way. Thanks for reviewing.

Summary:

Edward Mason was a changed man because of his four year old daughter. The day his daughter went missing because of his past, was the day his life turned upside down. Isabella Swan was just another student at the University of Chicago until her father's actions came back to haunt her. When their worlds collide, will they be able to overcome their differences and survive? All human


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21042 Read Count: 3995
[Report This] Published: 16 Nov 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good start!

I will read more quickly.

Too Gay For You by Jaymili Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary:

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Edward Cullen, a hot-shot and hard-to-hire attorney, is looking for a nanny to watch his niece and nephew, from whom he just gained custody. If they are not driven crazy by the two little devils, they are trying to get in his ‘sexy pants’ and Edward is tired of it. Here comes Isabella Swan, his assistant’s sister, proclaimed tomboy and not able to keep a job for more than 24 hours. By some kind of circumstances, Edward comes to think she is a lesbian,therefore, in his eyes the perfect profile for a nanny. After all, she loves women, or does she?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50977 Read Count: 16512
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
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Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope it will continue like that, it's more fun to read!

The banner is wonderful with children.

Thank you.

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The job market is bad, and recent college grad Bella's dreams of being a teacher are crumbling away. Edward is a single father and doctor, struggling to raise his seven year old daughter by himself. Fate intervenes, changing them both forever. Drabble fic. Alternating POV's.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22851 Read Count: 161044
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

But Bella did not lose hope.
Good chapter.

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18


Edward played sports, Bella is a good cook too.

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella will keep Lainie during the summer holidays.

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lainie is a really pretty girl.

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like good news, Bella has a proposal for the work.
Thank you.

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think he needs help.
Thank you.

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thank you for this great chapter.

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward, I know a charming young woman who could suit you!

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good meeting ...

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Miss Swan is not so young and it Lainie like.

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good chapter!
Lainie poor, she wants a mom.
Thank you.

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It should invite him to lunch.

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

:)

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Is it going to take care of her?

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Bella.

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Esme will help Edward.

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Edward offers him a job for him and Lainie.

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Friend is a good start!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love this girl.
Thank you.

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Good but the best way to keep it is to marry!
Thank you.

Summary:

Flighty Bunny obsessed writer Bella and IT business owner Edward have a crash encounter, leaving them stuck together, literally. The first of many interesting encounters. A tale of plot bunnies, fate, flashlights, and lol. Short chapters and laughs.

 

wba


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10748 Read Count: 5243
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 10 Dec 2012
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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Yellow Submarine

Beautiful encounter between our two darlings

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Swing Set

Ah this time they were able to share their phone number.

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Email

I love this chapter!

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Marble Stairs

Very funny game.

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Train

Funny though that Edward!

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Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Starbucks Around the Corner

I love these two, they are both crazy.
Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story October 2013*

"I thought that I was alone and lost in the world. I was a wanderer heading nowhere, but you've become the compass I needed in my life."

AH, BPOV, EPOV.

Special thanks to my friend Ineke for the amazing banner. I'd also like to thank Chase Corin and Dinkadot for being my betas.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40091 Read Count: 21942
[Report This] Published: 05 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 May 2015
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1:
Chapter 1

Good start !

I love.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked the story. Thank you for your review.

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Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2:
Chapter 2

Est-ce-Édouard?



Author's Response:

Merci d'avoir lu mon histoire, j'apprecie beaucoup votre commentaire. Oui, c'est Edward.

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Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3:
Chapter 3

Les parents de Bella sont vraiment mauvais avec elle.



Author's Response:

Merci d'avoir lu mon histoire, j'apprecie beaucoup votre commentaire. Quelquefois il faut que le mal passe pour que les personnes changent, j'espere que tu continues a lire l'histoire pour savoir le comportement des parents de Bella.

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Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4:
Chapter 4

Edward est un type jeune homme ...



Author's Response:

Merci d'avoir lis mon histoire, j'apprecie beaucoup votre commentaire. Je suis heureuse que tu aimes Edward.

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Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5:
Chapter 5

C'est horrible! Qu'est-ce que Edward est blessé?



Author's Response:

Merci d'avoir lu mon histoire, j'apprecie beaucoup vos commentaires. Tu peux trouver la réponse dans le prochain chapitre, j'attends tes commentaires.

Summary:

Edward's been dead for years, trapped in his former home that was just purchased by Bella Swan, a woman more perceptive than most. Will he scare her away like the others, or will they form an unusual bond between the living and the dead?

 

    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6861 Read Count: 1570
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this is a good chapter, the ghost soul mate are expected to go with her.
Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"So, you have a kid?" He asks. "And you live with your best friend? Who happens to be a dude?"

I nod, and answer, "That would be correct."

"Isn't that weird?"

I smirk. Wait for it! "No weirder than the fact he's also my son's father." Needless to say, my date comes to a screeching halt.

BPOV. Family/Humor. Drabble.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24443 Read Count: 102175
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
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Date: 08 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think she dream if she thinks it will work, no, she knows that it can not, so she wants to make Edward jealous ... Not?

Summary:

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A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my  banner!  

Was it wrong to want you...for so long, watch you mature from the sidelines…ripening for my pleasure? I have no right to...want...need...desire...crave your beautiful body, but I do. Fantasizing, hours about the things I could…want…need to do to you. Sugar and Spice, and everything nice…that s what Isabella Swan was made of... B&E Drabble, Canon pairings...

 

Beta´d by the Dream Team: jess2002, RAH07890, jdonovan, & famaggiolo...pre-reader: TeamAllTwilight, thanks for all your help ladies!

DISCLAIMER: I OWN NOTHING!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4090 Read Count: 19770
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2012 Updated: 25 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

thank you

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I like!

 

 

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Bella dream too!

More Than Life by Tardis19 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bestselling author, Edward Cullen is newly divorced and sworn off women until Bella Swan comes into his life and turns everything upside down. However, his ex is still pining after him and will do all she can to get him back. Can Edward and Bella have their happily ever after?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85675 Read Count: 43885
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this chapter!

The story begins well, it's exciting.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bella was angry when Edward told Charlie!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Edward, he's scared!

Good chapter.

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Edward, he's scared!

Good chapter.

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Meet Bella!

Very interesting chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

tglc

Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152447
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I just read this fiction and I liked it.

Thank you, happy new year 2013

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Dispute between Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Bella and Rosalie have doubts about Edward and his family.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good chapter!

Bella wants to leave, Edward did not seem to agree.

Thank you.

Watching You by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Edward's been watching Bella for three years during college and now graduation is only one week away! Will he finally man up and ask her out, or will he be too late?

 

watching you


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1971 Read Count: 1999
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Watching You

I love this story!

I've read in French but I can not remember where, anyway I like it.

Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113787
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this chapter.

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am happy to find this great family.

Thank you for this great chapter.

I love the pictures.

 

 

 


Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this new chapter!

This story is very promising.

Thank you.


Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love this chapter.

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is a very good chapter.

The plot is already in place.

I look forward to reading more.

thank you

Dearest Edward by Leigh Warner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Bella writes a letter to Edward telling him everything she has felt for him over the years.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4201 Read Count: 1892
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2013 Updated: 29 Jan 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really sad!

How not to be angry against Edward?


Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

My God they were both stupid!

Finally, I liked the end when she picked him up to his death.

This is so sad.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is a beautiful letter, Xavier is a good man.



Author's Response:

Yes they were both stupid for not telling each other how they felt for one another. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my story :)

The Tree House by ADAdancer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Banner made by TwistedinMasen

Every first I had was in this yellow tree house. Now, I was going to do another first and hopefully Bella would say yes. This is the story of Edward and Bella and their yellow tree house.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6211 Read Count: 1200
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2013 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this OS.

It is very fun.

thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you!

One Night by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

One Night Banner

 

 

One night...in the life of the living dead. Take a peek into the life of this most elusive species – the new parent. Watch as they navigate an extremely rare night out without their offspring. Can they survive a night of misbehaving babysitters, portly cops, and the monotony of married life? AU / AH.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14730 Read Count: 1589
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2013 Updated: 12 Jan 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this chapter!

Charlie and Renee bicker, but they keep Emily.

Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

tig

 

She left him without explanation, now she returns to make things right. Will he give her the chance to explain? Will she be brave enough to face him? This is the story of two families in a feud, which started to end the day a kiss was stolen ten years ago. Written for Katalina.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9888 Read Count: 2769
[Report This] Published: 16 Jan 2013 Updated: 25 Jan 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: L'unico Che Io Amavo

I like the reunion between Edward and Bella!

Alice asks if Edward still love Bella, this is a great story.

Thank you for this great chapter.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Un Lieto Fine

I liked this little fiction, it is pleasant to read.

Thank you.

Summary:

 

 

Edward is a loner of sorts, who thrives in his life, striving for perfection.  What happens when he finds attraction in a broken woman?  When she rejects his normal advances, how far will he go to make sure he has the perfect plan in place?  Will she let him control everything in her life? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20753 Read Count: 5190
[Report This] Published: 16 Jan 2013 Updated: 05 Feb 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Personified Idiosyncrasy: Part Two

I loved this story!

Edward was neat and had her baby and her Bella.

Thank you, it was very enjoyable to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to reply.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to PI.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked that Edward is madly in love with Bella!

He would never have told him what he had done.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Wow the reviews we have gotten for this have just blown us away.  First thanks to all of you who reviewed or pm’d us saying you can’t believe we didn’t place in the contest.  We were sad that our story seemed to not get the attention that some did however there were a lot of great entries.  The next chapter is being worked on for this story.  We are planning to wrap things with this story in the next chapter.  It will obviously be a future-take and show things over a period of time.  I like the plotted out plan that Nikky and I have for it and we think you will too.  Thanks again for being such wonderful fans and great reviewers.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Ps.. sorry for the timely manner in which this review reply arrived to you, PI’s wrap up chapter is just about ready to go off to the beta and will be posting soon.  Thanks again for all your patience and thanks for reading and reviewing.

School Of Mischief by mkystich Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

 

 

 

Having to maintain the family tradition, Bella starts her two year requirement at the prestigious CV Academy. To the outside world CVA seemed like a socialite high school where students ended up becoming governors, senators, CEOs, lawyers, and doctors, but the students knew there was more to the school then that.

 

::this is a drabble::


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9009 Read Count: 27191
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2013 Updated: 17 Jan 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start, it really is a special school.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Severe this school!

Summary:

 

 

Bella's friend's arrange for her to meet her crush for her birthday, the lead singer of Midnight Sun. What happens when attraction turns into a protective friendship to fun and flirty to love. Watch as their love blossoms despite problems that come. ****this is the newly revised version of Midnight Sun


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37190 Read Count: 10019
[Report This] Published: 18 Jan 2013 Updated: 14 May 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Jacob is horrible!

Girls join the tour, I like it.

Your story is difficult to read because google does not put space between paragraphs, can you double meter please.

I am French and google translator is my friend.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter!

Bella is brave.

Summary:

Banner: TwistedinMasen

“Hi, I’m Edward Cullen, and I want a baby. So, will you be my baby momma?”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7172 Read Count: 3607
[Report This] Published: 19 Jan 2013 Updated: 19 Jan 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is she going to say yes?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Raising Ashlynn by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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thanks to teamalltwilight and le crepuscule for the awesome banners!

 

Bella meets a man who in one night leaves her body humming for more. What should she do when the next time she sees him, he is dropping off his daughter, begging her to keep her. With an odd sense of obligation, a person who never saw herself as a parent—is now moving across country with a child who thinks Bella is her mother.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30699 Read Count: 31986
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Jan 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope they get closer.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good chapter, I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I believe that fiction is much to please me.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter!

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm glad Ashlynn okay.

Edward Bella wait forever.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The reunion is a little strange.

This is a good chapter.

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

They will try and this is the most important

Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ddkc

 

ddkc

Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814520
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This is great!

Go ahead Bella .



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think Alice will be happy.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~