Reviews by aelita48
Summary: Past Featured Story

ddkc

 

ddkc

Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814520
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yeah, well I do not like Jacob. yuck



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I find this very nice Alice.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

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Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 202: Chapter 202

I hope Charlie will hear what Jacob said.

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 192: Chapter 192

What a dirty liar this Angela!

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I would have said I'm leaving salvation and hope to never see you again.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 276: Chapter 276

Who told them?

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 275: Chapter 275

The wedding of Bella and Edward, I love it.

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think it will please me.

Needless to meet me unless I ask a question.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)~

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Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

no, no! Disagree.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)~

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella did not really look excited!

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)~



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella is angry ...

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)~

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It's not possible! His father is crazy!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Nikky)~

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

My God, I'm angry!

Bella takes your business and saves you quickly ...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

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Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This is a good deal for Bella

She found her friend and a home.

Thank you.

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Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Not too good character Eddychounet!

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Elle va acheter un steak pour Edward.

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 165

If I understood correctly, she was immediately liked.

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

It is true that she is a slut!

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Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 315: Chapter 315

This is a very good story.

Thank you!

Kisses.

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Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 316: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1

This is a very good chapter.

Jacob had a good lesson.

I love the new banner.

Summary:

 

Winner of the Mine to Mark Judges Vote, 2nd Place Public Vote, two Judge Favorites and Most Original Public Vote. l Fueled by desperation, a queen turns to a king known by the world as an uncivilized barbarian. Will he be able to save her from a fate that seems unavoidable by taking her as his own or will he turn his back on her like everyone else? ExB

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11094 Read Count: 3103
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Jan 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I look forward to reading more.

This is a good chapter, thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Isabella is a magazine writer, whose life is thrown into disarray when her husband leaves her for another woman. To escape her routine life, she accepts an assignment to interview a Parisian Madame, whom she believes is running a brothel. But Isabella will soon discover that there are more facets to love and romance, especially when Madame Esme selects her as her next project.

WRITTEN FOR THE 2013 JANUARY DRABBLE WARS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83682 Read Count: 124964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Sep 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Something Nude

Good advice Rosalie!

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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Red Handed

Wow!

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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Simple Boring

Goodbye Peter!

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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Friendly Surprise

:)

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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I like!

Isabella Volturi by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Story cover

 

After being left by Edward, I couldn't stand the thought of him controlling me even in his absence. I admit it was an act of defiance, but it was a decision that brought me more happiness than I'd ever thought I'd experience. New Moon AU/Canon

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93367 Read Count: 39594
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this chapter.

Bella will be changed by Aro, I look forward to reading more.

A Monday! Good Sunday.

Summary:

Here are the Outtakes of my story Too Gay For You. It's all about a man falling in love with his gay Nanny. My own version of a love story!


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4248 Read Count: 331
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2013 Updated: 05 Apr 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake 1 : I Promise

I like!

Thank you.


Summary:

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He was just doing his sister one last favor by letting one of the girls from her shelter stay with him. He didn't expect her to be so young, he didn't expect her to be so broken, he didn’t expect her to have a link to his past, and he sure as hell didn't expect to fall in love with her. 

Hurt/Comfort/Angst/Romance/Friendship/Drama

 

Banner made by: Astrid 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29165 Read Count: 13525
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good chapter!

I hope that Bella knows how to cook.

Summary: Past Featured Story

tbw

Homeless Bella meets Edward just after being rescued from an assault. Mob boss Edward meets Bella just after being told he's out of time...he has to find a wife. Can they help each other? AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36637 Read Count: 102267
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2013 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope it will go well with Aro.

Bella would be happy to have a grandfather! Not?

Summary:

Banner By: Ro Normann

When seventeen-year-old Bella is kidnapped while out with Alice Cullen—she taken as a prize to be awarded the winner of an underground fighting tournament.  Will Alice’s adopted brother be the unlikely hero to save the day?  All Human/Rated M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 137 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15976 Read Count: 315388
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2013 Updated: 17 Mar 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good start!



Author's Response:

Hello and thank you for checking out our entry into the March Drabble Wars.  Nikky and I have decided to use this totally awesome HUGE one shot she started writing and came up with and we've together turned it into a really nice drabble.  There will be 137 chapters posting total, (136 chapters and the prologue-already posted).  Full story post starts on the 15th and all chapters will be posted by the 17th.  So yes that means a crap ton of updates in just a few short days.  I really hope that you enjoy this drabble fic, it was somethig off base and new for both of us.  There is a really awesome banner for this story posted on the March Drabble Wars facebook page as well as a link posted on FFN and of course the wonderful people at TWCS allow us to have our banner set with out story entry.  Thanks again for your time in reading and we look forward to hearing your thoughts and reviews.

Summary:

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When you're homeless, you have nothing. When someone opens up their heart to you, you gain everything, even if they've physically given you nothing. Sometimes kindness is enough to save someone's life.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15377 Read Count: 1037
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2013 Updated: 17 Mar 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful story!

I loved it, thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

wrc

 

A homeless boy, hitch-hiking in the snow, a woman on her own, running from an abusive relationship. Is she crazy to stop, or are their paths destined to cross? Can this mismatched pair find succour and salvation together, or will their pasts intrude and drive them apart?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119972 Read Count: 27846
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Apr 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Tragedy

This is a very good chapter!

They will end up to admit their desires!

I love these two.

Summary:

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Edward Cullen found the love of his life six years ago at summer camp, but after losing contact with her, he doesn't know where to begin the search for his lost love. That is until Emmett shows up with a couple of surprises of his own.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: The Forbidden Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14610 Read Count: 2009
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2013 Updated: 17 Apr 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Thanks to My Brother, the Bear

I loved this story, it's beautiful.

Emmett is really nice.

Anthony is very cute, I love it.

Thank you.


The Selkie Wife by Lissa Bryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary: Past Featured Story


 


 


Set during the reign of "Bloody Mary" Tudor. Bella is captured by Edward to raise his daughter. He promises to release her one day, but will he? Court intrigues and danger around every corner. Can they, and their new-found love, survive? Rated M/OOC/AU


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Selkie
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190594 Read Count: 29593
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2011 Updated: 07 Apr 2016
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This period was really dangerous

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Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Elisabeth est tout de même une princesse drôle.

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Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you

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Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Rosalie is bad, I hope that she is going to change.

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Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thank you.

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Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

chapitre Sad!

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Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It's getting worse and worse, I fetch my handkerchiefs!

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Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Kisses

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Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella gave a son to Edward.

It is a good chapter, thank you.

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Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I like this fiction.

Il y a beaucoup de références historiques intéressantes.

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Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella has almost died, fortunately, Edward understood what it was necessary to make.

Thank you.

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Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bon chapitre, merci.

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Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Good chapter, thank you.

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Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

J'aime ce chapitre.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this chapter!

Thank you for the poster again.

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Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank you for this chapter.

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Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Emmett deceived his brother, it is not good.

Thank you for this chapter.

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Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Je vous remercie. 

 

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Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

J'aime lire l'histoire des notes.

Je vous remercie

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Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Bravo Jasper!

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Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella knows what she wants, it is Edward.

Thank you.

too quiet by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

tq

 

 

Banners made by MinaRivera.

Summary: Edward left to give Bella a better life. A life full of beautiful noise. This is what she was really left with.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49311 Read Count: 49542
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2013 Updated: 16 Nov 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

:)

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Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

:) :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

stories/77342/images/sweet_temptations_banner_large.jpg

 

 

Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285577
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
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Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Petit Fours

Edward likes Bella's pastries !

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours

Edward is angry

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery

The good beginning

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this chapter.

Tanya is jealous ...

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

C'est une bonne fiction!

Merci.

Je vais voter pour elle pendant toute Juin et je souhaite qu'elle est bien placé.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a good chapter!

Thank you.

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Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thank you for the chapter!

It is us who have a beautiful present.

I like this chapter.

Edward and Bella are again together.

Levy is deserving son of his father.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Tanya is angry!

Lectured good, I like.

Thank you.

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Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter, I like.

Thank you.

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Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Beautiful photo! I love.

Thank you.

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Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank you for this chapter.

I like what made Edward to James.

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Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank you for this chapter.

James wants to hurt Edward.

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Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Je vous OUI à toutes les questions raconte

J'aime ce chapitre.

Edward voulait tuer Tanya! Bella est irritée!

Bisous.

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272447
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella est triste du départ de son Viking.

Elle lui prépare une belle surprise pour son  retour.

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Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Fait bien pour ce méchant personnage!

Bella était courageuse.

Merci pour ce bon chapitre

 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thank you so much for the update :)

 

Oh Brother by Kim Rathbone Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Sequel to Oh Captain, My Captain. Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41569 Read Count: 16611
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2013 Updated: 07 Oct 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It is beautiful! I hope that they are yes going to say.

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Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The girls are spoiled.

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Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Purchases are well.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It is a good chapter.

Edward is beautiful and rich!

Bella is lucky.

Summary:

Edward Cullen receives an email from his sister Alice telling him about something she found online about him. Student Bella Swan is harboring a crush for a certain professor. What happens when they meet up outside of school.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58592 Read Count: 16750
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2013 Updated: 09 Oct 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this chapter!

Thank you.

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Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love it and I hope she'll say YES:

Thank you.

If Only by Vampgirl79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

IO

 

*UPDATING in mid/late 2023*

"Come over, I need you. Now." As always, I go to her. Except this time, it may be the last. I love her deeply, but I don't know if I can do this anymore. Each goodbye is harder than the last one. I want more than just being hers behind closed doors. If only we could truly be together; if only we were meant to be. 

AH/OOC, Told in EPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17231 Read Count: 7974
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2013 Updated: 13 Feb 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Dream That Will Never Come True

What a pity, it was completed.

Summary: Past Featured Story

mdd

Bella is a divorced English teacher, who doesn't know she has a vampire in her class.

"Please don't push me away, Bella. Isn't it my choice if I want to be with you? I'm not a child in the way I feel."

"I'm not the older woman who's going to spend a season educating a teenage boy so he can go off and remember me fondly. I'm looking for forever."

"How do you know I couldn't..."

" Because you're a boy, Edward, a beautiful, sweet, confused, boy! You've got your whole life ahead of you. This kind of thing doesn't work out."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 453800 Read Count: 80996
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2013 Updated: 30 May 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Natural Magic

J'aime cette proposition de mariage!

Votre Edward est grande.



Author's Response:

I think I've rubbed off some of Edward's edges.  Some have said that makes him out of character, but I see it differently.  I think people change, and most people don't conform to a rigid set of personality traits.  This chapter was about showing that things can change and still be good.  Some hated that I changed the meadow, but I thnk this change worked out for them.  My whole story is about how things changed over they past 25 years, but what matters stays the same.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Better Safe

Pas de bébé, triste pour Bella ...

Edward va certainement tout faire pour lui (elle) s'il vous plaît.

Merci pour ces bons chapitres.



Author's Response:

Thank you again.  Finding out she isn't pregnant had a surprising affect on Bella.  It made her realize it was something she wanted to do with Edward, and it showed her the choice might be out of her hands.  "Don't it always seem to go, that you don't know what you've got til it's gone."

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Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Risk Management

Je me pose la question: bébé ou pas bébé?

J'aime ce chapitre ...



Author's Response:

One of the things I changed in my story, was to have Edward aware that he could get her pregnant.  This awareness changed a lot of what they did together.  Baby or no baby?  It does seem like Nessie was the signal for the story to end.  

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Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ghosts

J'aime ce premier chapitre.



Author's Response:

Welcome new reader!  Thanks so much for the kind review and rating.  I only had one year of French way back in high school,  It should be fun to see how close I come to reading these reviews, before I run them through a translator.  It always awes me when people of other languages read my story.   

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Life Alone

La vie de Bella n'est pas très drôle. Elle a une grande imagination et rêve de vampire.

J'aime cette Bella.



Author's Response:

I wanted to portray the life of an average adult, with all the responsibilties and not much else happening.  Her writing is where her imagination can take flight.  I'm glad you like how I've written her.  

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Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Hot for Teacher

Bon chapitre!

Bella est bien défendu.



Author's Response:

Thank you again.  My French is much worse than I thought.  But I think I read this one better than google translate.  

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mom's Moments

Bon chapitre!

J'espère que tout va bien pour Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind reviews.  At least this early in the story, you don't have to wait for updates.  

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Squeaky Wheel

I think that Edward spoke to Principal Houseman !



Author's Response:

Edward was a busy boy in the beginning of this story.  He couldn't confront the creep himself, so he did the next best thing.  

I was pretty sure your English would be better than many native speakers in my country.  I'm jealous.  Europeans have the benefit of learning so many languages, while here they're not really taught.  It's another negative in our education system.  Go with whatever makes you more comfortable, and I'll figure it out.  

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Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 New Friends

Sam must be satisfied.



Author's Response:

I can't imagine how it would feel to have my crush at thirteen visit my house.  Let's see ... his name was Rob, and he was the cutest thing:  a tall blond, with a sweet smile and a personality to match.  I would have been struck speechless for sure.    

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Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Car Guys

Quelle surprise de trouver Edward!

Bon chapitre.



Author's Response:

Edward managed to turn up almost everywhere she looked.  

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Cornered Cafe

J'aime ce chapitre.

Edward va être obligé de lui admettre ce qu'elle est.



Author's Response:

I loved this chapter too.  Edward doesn't give himself away yet, but he does manage to make it clear he's interested in her as a woman.  After that kiss, there's no way she can pretend he's just a student with a harmless crush.  

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Prowler

Alors, qui est le clochard?



Author's Response:

This is a mystery that takes a while to resolve.  

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Not Fair

J'aime cette fiction!

Merci.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  As fast as you are reading, I'm sure you will catch up before I'm finished posting the story.  

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 Wedding

C'est un beau mariage.

J'aime Toujours Quand Edward et Bella se marient

Merci.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I put a lot of thought into the wedding.  So many weddings have been written it's hard to make them meaningful and interesting.

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Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Tantrums

C'est une belle fiction, je suis impatient de lire la suite (.

Merci



Author's Response:

No, thank you.  If not for readers, I might still write, but I wouldn't have a reason to post.  

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Tied with a Bow

Il s'agit d'une fiction merveilleuse!

J'ai tout aimer  dans this L'Histoire.

Merci



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  It takes a rare reader to accept such a different story with their favorite characters.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After almost a century a panther shifter turned vampire finally finds his mate/imprint. Will his past come back to destroy his happiness?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28108 Read Count: 29457
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2013 Updated: 16 Apr 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this first chapter.

I like very much the panthers.

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Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The meeting is completed.

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Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward is sad, Bella is her partner, they are certainly going to hear each other both...

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Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Isa was unfortunate also but fortunately she met Edward.