Reviews by katmom
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Thanks, so much, for updating so quickly...

Kathie

Reviewer: katmom Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

I can't see it either...sigh....

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

Beautifully done, Sweets!

Lovely indeed...

Kathie

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful first chapter...

Kathie



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie! :D

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm late again for an early peek!

Loved this...and glad to hear that #3 will be along shortly!

Kathie



Author's Response:

whahahahahahaha okay, wanna make a deal? I wont update until you've had your early peek for Etched 3! :P

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You are very welcome...this is a great story.

Esme...she makes me laugh.

I love the way Edward is with the kids...it feels *real*...

Thanks for sharing the visuals of the tatts too...

Kathie



Author's Response:

Kathie, my dear, I owe you :P

 

Hugs, Emma

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yes, I am happy they met!

And the Emmett knows them too...

And that Doctor Cullen is the baby's doctor...so nice to look at!

Kathie

Author's Response:

;-) I know... I'm a genius :P whahahahahahaha yeah right

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A very manly locket! I like that...

My hubby was good with the girls when they had colic too...thankfully!

Wonderful chapter...thanks for sharing!

Kathie

Author's Response:

Finding that locket was a nightmare! But I'm glad I did before you thought I was turning Edward into a queer :P

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I loved the "getting to know you" part!

And Edward with Lily? WIN...

AND with his kids...

Very cute...

Kathie

Author's Response:

oh the "getting to know you" part was so much fun to write! I was actually giggling because of myself. Made fiance look all weirded out though :P

Thank you :D

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was born in Seattle...and have seen the sky look that way...

Yes, tricky girl there at the beginning!

Loved their date...

Kathie

Author's Response:

:O Seriously! Wow...

And yeah, guilty :P but it added a nice touch huh?

 

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow...Mama Bear Esme to the rescue!

Loved that...

Kathie



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweetie :D:D

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope that the coming weeks aren't as hard as anticipation makes them...

I loved the Emmett/Big Brother moments...

Thanks for sharing...

Kathie

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Ah...I did love this...and was blessed to get to see it EARLY each chapter...thank YOU...

Going to check out the NEW story now...

Kathie

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I need to finish the OTHER story...but had to check this one out too...

Lovely visuals!

Thanks for sharing...

Kathie

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

What a nice Queen and Princess Alice and Esme are...

And Renee, a lovely character here...

Kathie

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

Ah, the plot thickens...

Thanks for sharing Edward's thoughts...

Kathie

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

I home schooled my children...and we did a unit on Princesses...they decided after that, that being a Princess wasn't all it was cracked up to be!

Being a pawn and used...it made them sad.

You are certainly catching the flavor of that...but have given Bella Jacob...that's so much more than most of the *real* princesses had...makes it easier to read!

Thanks for sharing...

Kathie

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

Lovely!

I like "sweet enough to hurt my teeth"...a wonderful relief from angst!

I hope the King is going to let Angela go with her...if it hasn't been set in stone, he may change his mind...nasty old pervert...

Thanks for sharing...EARLY...I agree, it has to be Monday SOMEWHERE!

Kathie

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

Hope everyone gets healthy soon!

This was a lovely chapter...

But the foreshadowing of WITCHES ON THE WIND is hard to read...lol

Kathie

Summary:

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A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149098 Read Count: 50406
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Whew...not as sad as the last one!

LOVE this!

Reviewer: katmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

PROMISE!

GAH! Tanya...mincemeat might be nice...!