Reviews by revliesel
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: revliesel Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

Just a correction in Chapter 4.  You say that Esme and Bella are heading "to Port Angeles for party supplies."  Port Angeles is in Washington state near Forks, while you have placed the Cullen Home for Unwed Mothers in Phoenix, Arizona.  I don't think they would drive 2,000 miles for party supplies.  Just saying....



Author's Response:

i was aware, my beta is going through this chapter and when it gets cleaned up i will post  with the correction, thankyou for the review

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89225
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: revliesel Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Putting The Move On

Great story!  Looking forward to Edward finally admitting his attraction.  Also waiting to hear the backstory on what happened to make Edward so gun shy with women.



Author's Response:

Hi revliesel!

I'm glad you are enjoying the read. I hope you continue to enjoy. It's going to be a bit before Edward realizes that he's interested in Bella---that doesn't fit into his plans at all. But it will overwhelnm him at some point. And you WILL get his backstory. There is a reason why he is so standoffish and reluctant...and not just to skanky Jessica. LOL

Thank you for reviewing.

-bannerday