Another great chapter.  It is amazing what brainwashing will do to a person.  I wonder how Bella will do within since she was a strong minded person before all of this.  Cant wait to see what you have instore for us next.

It is a shame Aro is taking out his sins on Bella.  I just hope Bella can figure out what is really going on before she is hurt both mentally and pyshically to much.  I cant wait to see what else she is going to be required to learn and follow.  Great chapter.

Wow!  I just read this full story and I have to tell you I will be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen next.  Thank you gor a great story so far.  I love it.  Keep up the great work you both are doing.

Shocked to see what Jacob's real story is now.  But glad to see he will be on their side to help keep Bella safe.  I have a feeling they are setting up the trap in the wrong place but I guess time will only tell.  Now I can't wait for the next update and see what will happen with Carlisle when he hears more of the story about what was slipping by him in his school.  Great story as always. 

Wow another great chapter.  I knew the chip as going to be what lead James straight to them.  But now I cant wait to see what they are going to do to find them and what is going on the Aro and Hiedi.  I am not surprised to see James lose it with Laurent.  Now how is he going to get the cock cage off. lol I bet he didnt think of that one.  Cant wait for the next update to see where you take us next. 

I am so glad James dropped his phone.  I really cant blame Edward for over reacting.  He just got Bella into his life and he is willing to do anything for her.  I just hope they get to her and Victoria in time before James hurts either one of them.  I love this story so much I look forward to the updates every week.

I love this story so much.  I can't wait to see where this will go.  I love the way you have developed this story.  And the plot is like nothing I have ever read before.  Keep up the great work.

I was right about the garden.  It is really good to hear Esme's full story as well.  She will help Bella surrive this life and hopefully get all of her sons back completely.  It is sick what Charlie and Carlisle did to all of the girls they have ever touched.  I am glad Bella has found her outlet to deal with all the pain and anger that she will more and likely go through.  Great job.  I cant wait to see what will happen next.

Oh boy what has she gotten herself into now.  This is a great story and I cant wait to see what you have instore for us next.

After hearing everything about both men I think she should leave Jacob and go finally talk with Edward until they both decide friendship or love.  At least that is what I would do in her shoes.  I also have a feeling it will be love with the way these two keep dancing around each other.  Great chapter now I will be on pins and needles until the next post.

great story.  sorry to see it come to an end but you did a great job finishing it.  i am happy they found love and happiness with each other if it was already there staring them both in the face the whole time.  you dont realize what you will miss out on until it is gone.  well in bella's almost gone.

God I hope they dont find her because that will not end well for her for sure.  But i am glad to see the fight in her and that she is seeing Edward completely through new eyes.  Great work like always.

I am so glad Edward found her.  I was shocked to see Felix let her go but very glad he did.  James is one sick fucker.  I hope it was Felix shotting James to keep him quiet.  Great job!  I cant wait to see if Edward will get her to safety and now that he has her what will he do about Aro. 

It is sad to see Mike die but I am sure it was the only way for Bella and Edward to have a chance to be together.  I know it will take awhile for Bella to work through the lost of her husband but I have a feeling Edward will be there every step of the way for Bella and her kids.  Great chapter.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hot as always.  It is good they are opening up to each other.  I cant wait to see what will happen tonight.  Since it will be there first night together since that first night.

I didnt see the accident coming but I figured some sort of drama would happen at the dance.  I have a feeling Edward's feelings are going to be found out because he will not want to be apart from Bella.  I just hope Emmett doesnt kill him.  I feel sorry for Seth since he was driving.  I have a feeling Edward is going to be taking some of his anger out on him.  Great story cant wait for the next chapter.

I am glad to see Bella up and awake.  Thank god Emmett is cool with Edward being her boyfriend because she will need them both on her side as she serves out her punishment.  I am pissed as hell at Seth for lying to Bella and put everyone in danger because driving while under the influence.  I wonder if Bella will tell her dad that Seth lied to her.  I know it will not get her out of being in trouble for planning on doing drugs and drinking later.  I am not surprised that Emmett and Edward were behind on her punishment.  Edward would not stand for being apart for her for two weeks. 

As for your questions I like getting the updates faster vs having longer chapters.  I understand about life demanding more time then you have.  But no matter what you pick I will be following this story to the end no matter how long it takes.  I love this Edward. 

Great job and I cant wait to see how Bella and Edward will handle Seth and what Bella will say to Edward now she knows he is behind her punishment.

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Wow.  I really am enjoying this story even though this chapter was more pain and sadness. It is good to see her finally opening up and letting Jasper helper.  I have a feeling this will make both of them stronger once they work through all of it.  Great job.

I have been following this story on ff and I cant tell you how happy I am to see it here.  I cant wait for the next chapter.  I wonder what Bella will ask and how she will be with Peter.  I love this story so much.  It is one of the best I have read.

I love this story.  I just ran across it today and I cant wait to read more.  Great job.

I loved you put Edward and Jasper together as well.  Love the twist with Mike and Tyler.  I wonder what Edward is going to do when he finds out she is not wearing anything under that dress of hers.  Another amazing chapter.

I cant believe the way Rose and Emmett are treating these two.  I guess when they are completely out of their lives they may realize what they did.  I am glad they are going to tell their family about who they truly are.  It is hard to hide something that big that is a large part of who you are.  Great job and I cant wait to see what will happen when the girls tell them. 

I am glad Edward and Jasper are there for both of the girls.  They are going to need the support now more then ever since both sets of parents want nothing to do with them.  I am glad Rose and Emmett are trying to work on getting use to the four of them together.  I have a feeling these four are in it for the long hault.  I wonder what Thanksgiving will bring to the four of them plus Rose and Emmett.  Great job and i cant wait for more.  Oh and by the way the sex scene was hot!  Every girls fantasy.

I am so glad Esme is in her corner as well.  They will always know that she will be there for them.  I love this chapter and cant wait for the next one. 

I am so happy they have at least one set of parents standing behind them and not judging them because they all four fell in love with each other.  I am wondering if Charlie is going to be added to that group as well.  Great job.

How sweet.  I am glad they have more support now then they did before Thanksgiving.  I cant wait to see what is going to happen next with these four.  I am sure more drama is ahead because life is never easy.  This is a wonderful chapter.

I am glad to see they are getting their memories back.  I hope when they do they can live with the outcome as well.  I wondered how long it was going to take the boys to start realizing the girls are their mates.  Carlisle cant be that stupid to think the Volturi boys are gone for good.  Great chapter cant wait to see what will happen when the boys and girls start putting together what really happened that night and where Rose is. 

I am glad to see Bella starting to remember.  i just hope it will help push her towards Edward not from him.  She will need all the help she can get when they both remember everything they have been through.  I am afraid the only way Edward will be able to get into her mind is the journal or Bella opening up.  I am just afraid what he will feel when he reads the sex dreams.  I have a feeling Edward will be the key to unlocking her memory.  Great job and I so cant wait for the next chapter.

Just as I though Edward did find out the truth about the girls that night through Alice's mind.  I really think Edward and Jasper need to man up and tell the girls the truth because if they dont I have a funny feeling Emmett will and the girls are going to be hurt more and not trust them.  They both need to trust Jasper and Edward right now because I have a feeling the guys Demetri and Felix will be coming back.  I think the only thing that will stop them is if they have fully mated with Jasper and Edward.  Now I will be sitting here waiting for the next update.  Great job.

I am hoping Edward is not back to his old ways but if he is I am afraid Bella will get to see it with not going in to the lunch room.  I wonder if she is going to confront Edward or find someone to help her piss him off.  I have a feeling Emmett is going to be able to tell Bella and Alice how to get into the clinic after watching all night.  Awesome work and I cant wait to see how far Edward is willing to dig himself into a hole before he wises up and bonds will Bella completely since the bond is already there and started faint as it is.

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I wonder how long it will take Edward to get his head out of his ass to see what is really happening.  But i am glad to see this story is developing slowly because Bella would not just jump back into a relationship after everything she has been through.  I cant wait to see what will happen next but I was glad to see Bella is at least starting to open up and telling the truth.  Awesome work.

I am glad Edward to the lead to tell Bella what he was thinking and feeling.  It was more and likely good for her to her it from Edward that he just wants as much as she is able to give him and he will not push for more.  It is so hard to let any one in after you have been hurt as badly as Bella has.  Plus with the way she views herself as a monster in the worst way she will push away anything that bring comfort to her.  I think it will help Bella now that she knows Edward feels the same way about himself and his past.  I know it will take time but I hope Bella will be able to open up to Edward even if it is just a little at a time.  She needs to start getting rid of the stress she is carring around on her shoulders all by herself.  I am still surprised after Edward talked about mating that he didnt put the pieces together that is what is happening to him.  I guess he is just as pighead and stubborn as Bella is.  Great job and I cant wait to see what will happen next.

I am so glad to see she is opening up to Edward a little more each and every chapter.  I am glad Alice threaten Edward if he would leave or do anything stupid.  I know for a fact it would have killed Bella at this point if they left her.  They have become a security blanket for her.  It was good for Carlisle to show Edward what had happen because he would have never believed it otherwise.  I have a feeling the more Bella and Edward spend time together she will open up to him since he is someone she is really starting to trust but it will be slow going for a little while longer.  I can see Edward is starting to figure out just how much he needs Bella as much as she need him.  I am sure the light bulb will go off soon.  Great job and I am really looking forward to seeing what is going to happen next.

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I am glad to see the contection with Edward and Bella is even stronger now.  They will need it to help Bella get though all of this.  I know it is going to kill Edward to hear everything Bella has been through but with his and his families help I have a feeling Bella will finally be able to start healing from her past.  I wondered if that is not what sent Bella into her head again waiting to hear the out come of the trial knowing Edward didnt care about her scars.  I am glad to see Alice coming because I have a feeling Edward is going to wait to slowly murder any one that has hurt Bella at all.  I cant say I am looking forward to reading the next two chapter expect for the fact I am glad to finally know what Bella has been through.  I know what it is like telling my story I can only imagine it is close to what Bella will be going through.  With me it was like living it all over again each time I had to remember what was done to me.  This story is one of the best I have read in a long time.  I hope you post soon.

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I wonder what twist this will add to Jasper and Edwards relationship.  I am glad these two boys have found each other but I am afraid they have a few bumps in the road to over come still.  Great job and I cant wait to see where this is going.

I am glad to see Edward staying to open his feeling up.  I cant wait to see what Jasper will say Edward tells him.  I love that the only picture in Edward home is of Jasper.  It is just ashame that Jasper doesnt know it yet.  I have a funny feeling Friday night is going to be big night for these two.  Great job and hot as hell as well.

Oh Edward please dont go and be stupid and throw yourself to the boys again.  I understand he is hurt and he is going to do the only thing he knows and that is shut himself off from his feelings and push away all that care about him.  It is so sad seeing how much Jasper is hurting I just hope he doesnt give up and Edward because I feel he will come around at some point.  I just hope it isnt to late.  Awesome work.

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I dont blame Bella for reacting the way she did.  I did something similar but not as extreme as not talking for two years but i did shut everyone out emotionly and no pyshical contract with anyone.  I totally understand wanting not to live anymore. I was there as well.  Great story keep up the good work.

I can totally understand Bella's thoughts about how she feels.  For the longest time I blamed myself for what happened and it was not until i could get around that did i start to see myself different.  I am glad to see she is communicating even if it is just a few nods or shaking of the head and writing down what is going on.  That in itself is a step in the right direction.  Great job.  I cant wait to see what will happen next.

Wow of all the people  I would have never picked Mr Newton to be the one to do this to her.  I am glad she trust them enough to tell them what happened.  It is hard seeing your rapest every day and feel threatened that he will carry out what he said he would do.  That is one of the hardest things for a rape victim to live with outside of the rape itself.  Great job.

When I finally told my parents about the first time I was raped it took me 7 years.  By then there was nothing I could do to make them pay for there crimes but my Mom and Dad felt just as at fault as I did even though we all knew it wasnt.  After that you are right the next few steps are the hardest.  I am glad her family and friends are the to help her and Charlie through all of this.  Great job.  I cant wait to see how this story grows.

What an emotional chapter.  The things all of them have been through it heart wrenching.  I am so happy they have each other to lean on when they need help.  I cant blame Bella for not wanting to talk to someone else about what happened.  She will be blaming her self for a while still.  I know it took me years to stop blaming myself and there is still time I will still feel that blame to this day.  I hope Bella's first day back to school goes ok.  Awesome work.

The blame is always easier to take when you believe everything you were told as a rape victim.  There is still to this day I still blame myself even though I know I did nothing to cause it.  I hope she is ok and who is there will not hurt her.  She has been through enough already. Great job.

I am glad Bella is standing up for herself even if it is just with Emmett.  I know it is scary to talk to other about what happen but it will help in the long run not carring everything around all on your own.  She is right with living in a small town like she is every one will know what happened and it will suck.  I hope when Bella starting talking to the therapist she will start feeling a little like her self before she was raped.  Great job.

I am glad to see Peter is not pushing Bella to tell him everything.  I had a therapist do that to me and I was as scared that I didnt want to go back.  It is good to see her talking with Peter.  I hope group therapy and art therapy will help Bella open up.  Great job.

I wondered if Edward was not already in love with Bella it was being shown by the way he cares for her every chance he gets.  I dont blame him for being afraid of not being loved in return.  I hope he just takes his time and waits for Bella to be ready to hear it because right now she is not ready to hear it.  But I do believe she is growing to care for him as well.  I cant wait to hear Emmett and Jasper story.  They all really do need each other and I am glad they all over each other to lean on when they need it.  Great job.  Looking forward to see how Edward talks his way out of this one and how there first niht together will go.

It is sad she is pushing him away because she doens feel worthy enough of his love or afraid that he can love her because of what she has been through.  I just hope Edward doesnt give up on her and fights for the love they both feel for each other even though Bella is running from it right now.  Great job.

I am so happy Bella finally said it out loud to Edward that she is in love with him.  I am glad opened up to Bella and showed her that even with phyiscal scars you can still be loved.  It is sad what Jasper had to go through but in the end it has made hime who he is today.  Awesome chapter.

Why do I get the feeling Bella use to be a prankster before she was raped and hid herseld way from people.  The way she player Emmett was priceless.  I am glad to see Bella becoming more like her old self again.  Edward will be really good for her to relearn who she is now.  I loved it how they two of them were together before they had to go to school.  Edward always has away of making Bella feel safe and loved but not pushed.  I wonder how thepary will go since Edward wont be there this time.  Great job.

I am glad to see Prince Edward is changing his ways.  I cant wait to see what will happen when he finds out he has not had to give up on true love.  Everyone else has seemed to figure it out already.  Great job and looking forward to the next update.