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Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1253919
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Wow that was intense! You wrote it so well that I could almost feel Bella's pain.....



Author's Response:

thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I really liked this chapeter. Edward saw that Jake and Leah had many insecurites about there relationship, so he did all that he could to put them at peace. It showed that he really cared about her and her family.

Dancing at the club was hot....... I liked that Bella dressed him, it shows a level of love and affection that some may not see in a D/s relationship. So no need to duck on that one.

 



Author's Response:

I;m sorry about theose teasers I hit the wrong button on my keyboarf and sent them before I could stop them....Now for this review.. I liked her dressing him too, but he got someslack for that move and yet i think it was hot .....lml

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Thanking Edward was able to bring Bella down from her panic so fast at the club. I just hate that her sleep was interupted by that asshole.

And of course they are... They have been the whole story...lol



Author's Response:

she has a sleep problem as anyone who has been through trauma ususally does ...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Thank God! I really thought that Sally was going to leave and call again, but this time Bella wouldn't of gotten there in time.



Author's Response:

children are usually the breaking point ...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Laurent works at the club, shit I don't know why I didn't think about it before. If James is envolved then I'm sure that is how shit is coming out at the club. The there could be the crazy bitch Tanya trying to get a man back that was never hers in the first place..... ooooh the possibilties.



Author's Response:

so many possibilities...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

As much as it hurt I'm glad Bella got it all out. And I am even happier that Edward didn't look at the papers.



Author's Response:

a good cry always helps and I don't think tha Edward wanted to see what those papers held, he certainly didn't want to see the pictures ....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I have a feeling Edward is going to be beating himself up over this one.



Author's Response:

I think that Edward had his own trauma from this experience

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Heather was defently planted there, I wonder if she is from the club?



Author's Response:

hmmmm... heather is just another possibility ....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Oh that was just mean..... But I love you anyway.  I am trying so hard not to think ahead and make guesses s until I figure it out. I jut keep telling ,yself that it could be anyone, but then you go and do something like this and my mind wants answers...

Great chapter and I can't wait until the next one...



Author's Response:

he he...that's my job ...lml

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Okay out of everyone I wasn't seeing it be Mike that may of had someone brake into Edward's house. Sure he lusts after Bella, but would he really go that far?????

 

Great Chapter.



Author's Response:

Does he lust after her? ...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Seth is awesome. I can see it now. Bella is going to have a whole lot in her hands handling that one at the club. But by then her and Edward will be married and maybe with a baby of their own so who knows what might happen. New Moon would be a great place for Seth to work, Edward could keep a eye on him and also have a person that he could trust wholeheartly. 

 

James is defently sick and deranged. No jail cell is too good for him. Personal I would rather a small box six feet under be his resting place after a very painful death. I hope that James isn't trying to have babies with these girls so he can create his image of a perfect person. Boys that would be sick masters like him and little girls that he could mold from birth to be subservient slaves. He's just sick enough to try it. But then again he may only want girls. Alright I have to stop I'm making myself sick. 

 

I can't wait for their night at new moon. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Oh I'm glad the shower went so well. I was afraid there would be drama. It's great that she let the girls see the pictures. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

The game was really fun. I loved how Bella got around not talking to Jessica.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

That was a relief I was almost afraid that Edward would take her outside on her leash. I really liked how he is using it.



Author's Response:

like i said I wouldn't put it past him to use the leash in the club ....

Thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you...

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

 

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Oh Shit I wonder if that is for Seth....



Author's Response:

Nope ... that was for Bella...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

That was so much fun....

I wonder who has more money Edward or Bella?



Author's Response:

Mmmmm... stay tuned the money talk is coming up....

yes I meant tete-a-tete...do I say it alot? Now come on you don't really think that I would have them go to Forks in full swing D/s.?...lol...that was a joke. Although here are several who would like to see it...lol...Bella is in no way ready for that and Charlie would be ...I can't even imagine what his reaction whould be. He is going to have enough of a problem with the tattoo...lol.....When was Jane around Alice? I think the only mention was when Alice said about coming to dinner at B&E's and Alice said about Jane's talk and that she calls Aro Master....did she say that happened in person? or did she say that she just doesn't like it ...((you know like it is common knowledge that Jane behaves that way ))...Because even in Bella's room, Jane talked in 1st person because she thought it would make Bella more comfortable I can't imagine that she wouldn't do that in front of Alice...or Esme....(just a thought)

I'm trying to tell this story as true to life as posssible. I know that I take some liberites and I did rush their relationship (( but that was due to time restraints and my day-by-day intent to tell my story))...Ok, I wouldn't say that it was a wasted chapter. There was more information about Aro and Bella's relationship then might have been needed, but thrown into the conversation was some tid-bits of information that was important. Such as people were mad that Edward didn't do something to Jess...well he doesn't have the power to do that. However Aro does and I think he will and I also think that Jess is not going to be happy about that...also Aro is taking care of the Mike situation. (why?) he said he didn't care about Jess but does he really? Jess is signing in under his name and then he has a few weeks where it was clear that someone erased a guest that signed in under him ((did that just make sense?)) that is what Aro wants to talk to Mike about....hmmm....and there were a few other pieces of information in the chapter... so no, I don't agree that it was a waste...besides as I said it was a requested conversation and they needed to have some dinner conversation anyway...lol.....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.

 

“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting. 

 

“W..Why? You said I could keep it”

 

Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”

 

“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.

 

“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”

 

Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”

 

My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”

 

“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Thank god Bella is being reasonable and not fighting Edward on his ideas to keep her safe. I just hope they can figure it out before any more damage is done. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

I think that the caning seen was one of the sweetest thing that Edward has done for/to Bella. He was so attentive and took such amazing care of her. 

 

I can't say it enough I love this story. While some BDSM stories are all about he kink, it is refreshing to read a story with a great story line as well. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

I absolutely love Dougie. I hope they have a play date. It could be very interesting. 

 

I wonder if watching Rosalie have to go through a trial will be the push Bella needs to finally speak out about James. 



Author's Response:

I'm not sure what it will take to push Bella over the edge - but something tells me from the way Edward has to go to drastic means to force Bella to open her eyes, it will be something --- Major ....so i guess we will see....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Interesting. I wonder what Jake is going to find when he looks under the hood. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 14 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

God things ate really starting to heat up. I wonder if James is in on the whole thing, the undercover club, the pictures, Karen needing to talk to Bella. Is he the puppet master pulling all the strings. Victoria is also a possibility   

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Oh Alice is so pregnant. I have no doubt in my mind that is totally pregnancy hormones talking there. I had a similar melt down over baby names when I was Pregnant. I walked out of my in laws house on thanksgiving. 

 

I wish the pictures were real because they sound absolutely gorgeous. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

I love this story and I am greatful that you are giving a positive message to women. While I personally know how hard abuse is and know how hard it is to leave and feel safe I'm happy that you don't sugar coat and abuse. You don't make it desirable and make it seem romantic. And while I hope no one under 18-21 is reading it, if they are I'm glad that they are getting true facts that may help them advoid a abusive relationship and I hope that by reading this if someone is being abused it will help them find the strength to get help and walk away. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

See Edwards mind went to James doing that to Bella when she wouldn't remember it, like he drugged her or he did it after she was passes out. But he said Bella enjoyed it, if she was drugged her body may enjoy it but she still was afraid of James so even with the drugs I don't think her body would have a positive response. If she was unconscious there would only be so much response. I'm wondering if James has watched them together. Did he somehow get a look in the playroom or other places they may of been together. Someone was following her who's to say the pictures were all the person saw.

I wonder what will happen with Alice. I know Edward is a man of his word but Alice is stubborn. I can't imagine how that will end. I adore Vinnie and Mia I would hate to not see them as often. 

 

Rose is so strong and glad Edward was able to calm Emmett down. Rose didn't need to see him lose control like that. Her strength is what will get her through that and she needs everyone to believe in her. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

It's Dougie or DD right????

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

I absolutely adored this chapter. Sure it didn't move forward, but the relationship that Bella and Dougie formed today is remarkable. Dougie let down his walls and let Bella see the real man. I'm hoping that with this new relationship Bella will be able to draw strength from it and open up to him as well. Bella deserves all the happiness in the world and Dougie is now a big part of that. 

 

I don't know what happened but I had never gotten the alert that this story posted. I was sad that I could of read it sooner. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

Sorry I'm just getting to read this now. I also live in what sounds like the same general area that you live in. I'm around the lower pocono's area. I hope that everything is cleaned up where you are. I personally wasn't without power long but where I work was out 12 days. Now everything is almost back to normal. Still some tree clean up but they may not get to those until spring. I hope that you and your family are all well now. 

Denise

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Amazing. And I'm glad Edward won. While Bella is amazing at what she does ;) it's good to see Edward in control. He is her Master and as such I think it may of shown just a little weakness if Bella had won. And while Edward said it was luck there is no way a 'normal' guy would of lasted past 2 minutes if Bella did that to them.

 

And was it me or did Dougie's call come right at the exact moment Bella needed him to call. Could Bella have asked him to call to help her win the bet?



Author's Response:

Lol...that would make her a very naughty girl...but I guess you'll have to find out in the next chapter...thanks for reading...LouiseLouise

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

I love Dougie! I want one to. I sort of had a Dougie at Temple U. His name was Max, but it was no where near as great as Dougie. 

 

At least Bella now knows that Clair will accept her no matter what. That should at least be a little positive.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Oh I adore this story. Truthfully it is one of the most well rounded smut stories I have ever read. With the exception of 2 or 3 other stories all the others I have read are all smut/sex/porn. There are no real story lines. I love that not everything is about sex. Sure there are a lot of great sex/kink secenes, but there is something deeper going on. I'm glad you didn't rush it and allowed us to really see the journey Edward and Bella have been through. It truly is a remarkably beautiful meeting of two lost souls. 

 

Okay about this chapter. I love Dougie. I knew he wasn't going to tattle, but I never in visioned that he would challenge her. That was beyond fabulous. And Bella's reaction to winning was hysterical. I wonder what Riley is thinking? I would love to be in Dougies head right about now. 

 

With everything going on with Calius and Karen. I can't wait to see where it all leads. I can feel the drama building. It seems Dougie maybe a key to unlocking g at least half that door. I wonder how I twined Tanya is with Caius! I always thought she was behind some of it. Trying to discredit Bella anyway she could so she could have another go at Edward. 

 

Cant wait to see where you are taking us next. 



Author's Response:

I think all will be answered, at least all the main parts will be and some of the rest will happen In the sequel "polished to Perfection"

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Wow! You really are the Queen Of Drama. I absolutely loved this chapter. It had everything a girl could ask for. A great sex scene, Playfulness, watching friends and family interact which was extremely funny then mystery. The pieces are building up on the table. All that has to be done is put them together. You really gave us a lot to think about. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Wow! Poor Bella just when she starts to have a little fun life really does ccome and bite her on the ass. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

That chapter was great. Not that all of them aren't. But I loved Bella's rants. It was nice to see her letting all her emotions loose instead of bottling them up and pushing them away. And I'm really glad she has such loving real people beside her. 

There is no way that things will not get worse. James is still breathing so you know there are horrible things in store. Things with Alice and not going to get better anytime soon I'm afraid, and I hope that she sees it for what it is and is able to move past it. Karen is scared, angry, and off her meds. there is no telling what she is going to do, but we all know she is capable of anything.  So really bad things are coming at her from every direction. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Oh you describing Bella eating makes my skin crawl. Lol I have to admit I have food issues. That is so inappropriate touching. LoL

 

I have to say I was so happy this chapter happened in Edward's POV. To see the level of love, commitment and love he holds for Bella is beautiful. I am so glad the missing piece of Phil was put together a little. Phil is related to Cauis the middle name is to much not to believe it. Phil's mother may not of named her sons father on his birth certificate but she did give him his name. And the way you snuck it in there and tied it to Bella's scholarship was genius. 

When and how Edward though about helping Bella and himself with maintance was really sweet, sexy and hot all rolled into one. I love what a positive spin you put on it. There is no way that anyone can even hint that it may be abuse or violence when it's spoken of with such regard to her and his well being.  

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14777
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Best Friend

Cute fluff

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella lives a charmed life, Edward has skeletons in his closet. They are drawn to each other but fight the pull, how could two people so different ever make things work in the real world. Dark themes and Canon Pairings.

 

Thank you to Decode Banners for the wonderful banner.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58248 Read Count: 12970
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very promising!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Oh they work together.... I like Edward's kind of fun... But maybe without the pot....



Author's Response:

LOL, yes Edward and his pot.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

OMG! They finally talk. They were so cute. I love the sexual tension that is flowing between these two.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm a big fan of sexual tension

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I thought Edward was color blind?



Author's Response:

He is color blind. Being color blind does not mean a person only sees in black or white. They more get colors confused, like can't tell the difference between blue and green or red and pink.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Well I am so glad that they finally put all the cards on the table.



Author's Response:

Ah yes, the calm before the storm. Thanks for reviewing,

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I feel so bad for them, neither one of them know their own worth. They are both amazing people that belong together.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I agree.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Oh Shit! Bella is a adrenaline junkie. I like it nice twist.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I'm glad that she told Edward. A hard as it was it was for the best. I'm really glad that Edward was not okay with it. I'm glad he is taking the time to figure it out.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I try to always have my characters react realistically no matter what situations I throw at them.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I wonder if there is really a party or if Lauren just wants to get Edward alone....

I'm also glad that both Edward and Bella opened up to someone else.



Author's Response:

ha ha, that would have been a twist. But as you see Lauren has something much nastier up her sleeve.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I wonder if Edward is going to feel the same way about Bella after this. Maybe now that Bella saw it with her own eyes she will be able to controlor get help for her feelings.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reveiw.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope that Edward is going to be okay.



Author's Response:

I can't say but thanks for reading. LOL

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

On no whaat is Jane going to do? I can see a big law suit occuring and Edward becoming a rich man...



Author's Response:

No, she doesn't have that kind of clout yet, she's still just a law student, but she has her ways.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I really hope that they can work throught this.



Author's Response:

Me too. LOL

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I am so happy to see that he is going to try with Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40293
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland

While I like Alice's character and I hate to do it but I have to agree with you. She is way to focused on material things and loses site of the big picture. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Daddy's boy

I really enjoyed that. It was nice to be inside Riley's head. He has such a strong masculine presence to Dougie's playful boyishness. I enjoyed seeing him grow under Bella's spell as Alice would call it. I didn't realize she had spoken her theory to anyone and I'm glad that Riley didn't take her at face value and decided for himself what kind of person Bella is. 

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105109
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Very different. I have never read a story about vampire Edward being a dom. I love that he can hear her thoughts.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving this story a shot. I hope to keep it fresh and new throughout the whole story! I look forward to hearing your thoughts on it as it progresses.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

I really liked the set rules and consequences. I wonder what Bella is hiding? I really like that Edward can read her mind. I wonder if Bella will ever be able to block him as they become closer?

So many ways this can go. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Only time will tell what she will be able to do. I am so happy you are enjoying the story! thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

I feel bad for Edward and Bella. Edward having to watch himself kill Bella over and over. Then poor Bella getting spanked. To make it worse it had to happen on their first time.



Author's Response:

I think Edward learn a thing or two about just how much he needs to be mind full of her humanity and Yeah it was tough but it was also sweet. So much more to come from our favorite couple!

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well that was intense I wonder what Jacob did to her. I hope she is alright. 

Summary:

The body of a young girl is found and all signs point to Royce King, convicted serial killer currently serving a life sentence in prison, who has spent the majority of his time in solitary confinement.  FBI agent, Bella Swan and her team are now charged with piecing together this poor unidentified victims' tale, and also ascertaining how it's possible for a murderer to strike from behind bars.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Criminal Minds Twilight Style, Twilight, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25716 Read Count: 15817
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so different, I can't wait to see where this is going to go. You have blended the characters from twilight with the science of a CSI / Criminal Minds / NCIS mix. I wonder if there is going to be some crazyness to the characters in this setting.

Another great story from you.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yeah! Big daddy C is here to help..... So is he going to be the copy cat???? Now that would be a messed up twist if I ever heard one... lol

I am really liking this story.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ah I like the Jane twist. That girl really is a bitch..... Mike is a real loser going where the money is.

I love this story, it is so different. I love the technical aspects to it. Sorry it has taken me so long to get to it but I am seriously behind on my reading and this is one story that I didn't want to rush through.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is just getting better and better. I know it's twisted but I love the fact that the babies DNA matches King's. I wonder if the baby is actually the victums or did they implant a frozen embro into the poor girl after she was kidnapped.

There are so many sick possibilties and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is really great. I thought that maybe it was a twin but put that out of my mind because I thought for sure that it would of come out in his trial. I'm really glad that you went this route. Because so many things can come from it. Kings defense could say that his brother did everything, while J.C. (I'm so glad that James is the other killer) lawyer's could say that they had the right person. That could cause so much doubt in a juriors mind that they could both walk. I can't wait to see how they tie this one together.

I can't wait to read more. Congrats on the book, can't wait to read it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This story just gets better and better. There is nothing about it that I do not love. I want to let you kmow how sorry I am that I didn't read and review sooner, but I wanted to reread the first 5 chapters and in order to do that I needed to find a time where I could do it without little eyes around. When I like something I tend to zone and that is not good with a 7 year old.

 



Author's Response:

That's alright hon...I know how it is.  Thanks for the review and glad you are enjoying it~!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

You have twisted everything around so well that while you see the true characters from Twilight they are so far removed that it is truly amazing to read.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Now how is she going to ditch Emmett and Edward. I can not see that happening so where are they going to be following her too...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella is something always so self sacrificing. I'm sure Rose is going to be pissed when she finds out what Bella is about to do..

This was one of the best chapters yet.....

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Too short!!!!!!!!

That was really slick him letting Rose go. I love the hidden room. Hopefully the guys don't take too long finding her.

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106879
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I was at boring meetings for work today, so I spent my time reading this crazy story. There are so many ways that you can take this and I can't wait to see where exactly it will go.

I am so glad that they are being honest with themselves and each other. This is going to be a crazy ride, with the potential of everyone being riped apart. This is crazy and fun and the potentail for drama is great.

Am looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

They are so going to get caught one of these days... I personally can't wait for the shit to hit the fan...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It's great that Em is coming around.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am so glad that Bella overheard. There is no way that Edward should give up a oppertunity like that. And if they are meant to be then it won't matter how far apart they are.

An Angel in Hell by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]
Summary:

Bella is the newest nurse working at the MASH 8076 during the Korean War.  While there she meets Cpt. Edward Masen, who sees in her an angel in the hell they are living through.  Will they find a way to be together in a place where life can change in an interest.  Entry for the 2010 Age of Edward Contest.

 

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Another amazing banner made for me by Rosalynn.

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Beautiful banner made as part of the AoE Banner Contest by Becksishere.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96660 Read Count: 16307
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Grave Mistake

That is so sad. But I'm glad that everything is cleared up. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 17: The First Steps of Forever

It's sucks how seperated they were during delivery. That should be a time for them to grow together. In glad it's not like that anymore. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: An Angel in Hell

That was really great. All the raw emotions that come with the uncertainty of war. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: A Christmas Angel

It's really sweet how Edward takes care for Bella. The gifts were thoughtful and funny. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Baby It's Cold Outside

I'm so glad that our current military personal have better conditions then they did then. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: A Miracle of Eastern Medicine

That's was really scary but I'm glad that everyone made it out alright. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Bug Out

Wow! Edward and Bella are really taking a bold move by trying to get Bella pregnant. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: The Aid Station

I'm glad that they are goin to be able to get away from the stress for a little while after what they did on the front. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Seminar in Tokyo

It must of been exciting to be in a place so different from home. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Goodbye Old Friend

Poor Bella and Jacob. But thankfully he didn't die alone and Bella was able to give him the comfort of having a proper send off. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 9: The Woman in White

Such a bitter sweet chapter. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Beginning a New Life

I am so glad that Edward was able to get do much done in such a short amount of time. Poor Bella I was hoping that she would be pregnant after their honeymoon. But maybe she is, some women still get a period in the beginning of a pregnancy. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: False Hope

I'm glad that Peter is now in a safer position. He really is a nice man and I'm glad that James is where he belongs. Where he can't bother anyone. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 12: A Beginning and an End

It's very sad to hear about Dr king. Even though he could be a jerk no one deserves to die like that. I'm glad that Bella was able to be brave enough to try and save him. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Unmerry Christmas Without You

I'm glad that Edward was able to get out of his funk and enjoy Christmas just a little bit. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Making Plans

I guess it's normal that Edward would have a small amount of doubt. I'm sure Bella has the same doubts. But there live is true so that will carry them through the rough patches. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue: An Honor Due

That was a very touching ending. I'm glad that you had them there when all the Korean war veterans were finally honored. My grandfather served in Korea and we all went with him to see the wall shortly after it went up. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 134650
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can't wait for Rosalie and Alice to find out what Jessica and lauren did. They will defently mess them up. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Carlisle is right it is amazing that she let anyone near her at all. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have read so many of your stories but completely missed this one. What a powerful first chapter. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I understand the need to want to protect your children but there is no excuse for what will and cat are going to do. I see world war 3 in the near future. I would take them to court and have their parental rights terminated. . 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So much anger! I'm glad she is finally going to be able to get it out. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

They are so much nicer then me. If someone did to my daughter what they did I would of pushed to have them charged with assault. They were to little to be charged with withholding evidence and hindering a police investigation, but they knew better when they physically hurt Bella. I wouldn't want them to go to jail. But community service and a nice black mark on their record is exactly what they deserve.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

OMG. I almost peed myself reading about the 'pancakes'. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

Wow! That was a really gut wrenching story. I'm glad they allude it through in the end. 

Summary:

When Bella, Edward, and their friends go on a guided tour of a supposedly haunted Mental Hospital, they all find that they have much more in common than they ever expected.

Inspired by the closed mental hospital used in this banner near where I live.  
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, One-Shot, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4473 Read Count: 1771
[Report This] Published: 16 Oct 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Tripping the Veil

That was freaky. It gave a major flashback from when I nwas young. I grew up in Philly and we had a mental hospital byberry that did a lot of the things that you described.

Summary:

Carlisle's prayer to end his lonliness was answered by a dying woman's plea.  What happened in those hours before Edward's transformation...

Part of the Carlisle and Esme:  Through Their Eyes series

SM owns all of the Twilight universe.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme, Edward/None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Carlisle and Esme: Through Their Eyes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1463 Read Count: 106
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story. It was a nice background.

Summary:

We all have something that slightly irks us about the events in the Twilight Saga. For me, it was the fact that Edward's family seemed okay with him abandoning Bella in New Moon. I just couldn't swallow that. Surely, Esme and Carlisle had something to say about Edward's ridiculous decision to leave! So here is my version of what happened at the Cullen household leading up to the day they leave from Esme's POV…

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Winner of the Judge's Pick - Summer  2010's Most Tragic Hour Writing Challenge and a 2011 winner of the Vampie's Awards One Trick Vampie (best one shot)

Part of the Carlisle and Esme:  Through Their Eyes Series

SM owns all of Twilight.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Carlisle and Esme: Through Their Eyes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4021 Read Count: 267
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was truly beautiful.

Six Weeks by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has been avoiding sexual contact with his wife for six weeks. What happens when she lays it all on the line? After Edward and Bella reconnect she finds out she is pregnant what happens during her pregnancy?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25980 Read Count: 22342
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 18 Weeks

OMG! That is the most amazing gift that anyone can give.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 30 Weeks

On No I can just see Dr Edward at class. Doctors make the worst patients, I can see him scaring the crap out of all the women. My mom is a midwife and at times I wanted to scream with all the things she told me about when i was pregnant.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 12 Weeks

I like the family dymanics, I wonder if Alice, Emmett and the rest of the gang will have a place in the story.