Reviews by smw slut
Summary:

 

Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan?  Maybe his online friend can help...

AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge.  Now expanded into a story.  :-)

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Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 21016
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awe this was so awesome! I loved it.

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love it soooo much! Why is Emmett so mean to Edward? I wanna kick Emmetts ass. Great chapter

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yaaaaay Edward! Oh I love Gambit, and Edward dressed like him...oh just sexy, sexy, sexy! Great chapter I loved it. Maybe now Emmett and Mike wont mess withEdward to much.

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love, love, loved this chapter. I'm glad Charlie didn't go all crazy on Edward. Yikes what's going to happen next???

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter! See even though Emmett and Rose were mean to Edward. He still helped them when they needed it. He could have just turned and walked away. But he did the right thing! Love it!

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love our story sooooo much! It's so good. Great chapter I hope Emmett isn't just going to use Edward now. I hope he is truly sorry for the wway he treated Edward in the past.

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yikes Leah really needs to tell someone. Is Edward going to keep her secret? If she wont tell someone he should. Great chapter I love it

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ahhhh I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! Ahhh he should have told Bella. Now she's going to be mad at him for keeping it from her. Ahhh Edward!

Great chapter I loved it

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

LOL goooo EDWARD! Give Bella a orgasm...to funny! Great chapter Jacob got what he deserved. I'm glad Bella wasn't mad at Edward.  Great chapter loved it.

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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

LOL google that was just way to funny! Poor Edward got caught looking by daddy. I couldn't stop laughing. Awesome chapter I can't tell you how much I love this story.

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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ohhhh I realy loved this chapter! Awesome as always. Loved how Bella just totally flipped out at the end. Now I'm sad I have to wait for an update

 :( Please update as soon as you can. I need my fix of this story



Author's Response:

LOL, thank you so much.  :-)  Hope you enjoyed all the chapters.  Thanks agaiN!

 

Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

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Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

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Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31054
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Need a Hero

Oh God I love this! Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Aw, you're making me blush. I'm glad you're liking the story so far. Keeping reading and enjoy. :)

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: I am Inside

Again what a great chapter. I do feel sorry for Bella in a way. I would hate to have to deal with that. I know she loves him, but at the end of the day is that enough? Gah I love this story.



Author's Response:

I can't believe I missed all of your reviews! I apologize for that, and am going to answer all of them right now. 

In my opinion, love is never enough. Unfortunately, Bella is young and hasn't quite learned that lesson yet. She's in for a long, hard road ahead. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Roulette

Oh I hope Edward doesn't blow their date off to go some where with Jazz. great  chapter love it 



Author's Response:

Well, Edward isn't a complete ass, so we'll see. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Blue Orchid

Oh I really loved this chapter! Edward was sooo sweet. I hope he keeps it up. But why do I have a feeling this is just the calm before the storm?



Author's Response:

You pretty much called that. When I wrote this chapter--that's exactly what I meant for this to be. :)

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Love-Hate-Sex-Pain

Ahhh awesome chapter! Good God I knew Edward was going to mess again. But not this bad! Oh no was he just in a car wreck? Ahh I must go read what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, Edward did mess things up pretty good. Unfortunately, when drugs are involved, it's kind of hard not to. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Talk Box

Sad, sad chapter. How is Edward going to deal with the ultimatum? Loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

I haven't written that part yet, but it's going to be a hard chapter. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Faultline

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I got tears in my eyes reading this chapter. Poor Edward. And I feel so bad for Bella poor girl can't catch a break. Loved the chapter



Author's Response:

Believe me, it was like murphy's law was in full effect. Everything that could have gone wrong did.

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Breath

Awe the  fake proposal was cute! Great chapter I loved it.



Author's Response:

I was pleasantly surprised by the postive response to this chapter. I'm glad you liked it, too. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Invisible

Again what an awesome chapter. Sad still but well writen! Oh God please don't let Edward die! Loved it



Author's Response:

All I can say is, a lot of this story sticks close to RL. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Nobody's Daughter

Yikes is it getting worse? Say it's not please! I feel so bad for Bella. Great chapter I love the way you flip back in forth with the past.



Author's Response:

Like I said before, everything that could possibly go wrong did. It was a nightmare to live through. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Letter to God

Oh God how sad! Gah please let him be okay. Loved the chapter.



Author's Response:

I cried writing this chapter. I think waiting to see what would happen next was the worst part. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
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Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story! I guess I really don't need to say that, just look at my name. I started reading it on my cousin account on fanfiction. I just can't stop reading this. I've read it at least four times now. You two do such wonderful work together.

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Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I don't know which one of you came up with this idea. But this is the best story EVER! I still laugh at Emmett he's a trip. Oh god I just love it so much. It never gets old no matter how many times I read it. It had everything drama, funny in all the right parts, lemons in ALL the right parts. Which I love the lemons. I could marry this story I have to be your number one fan-girl! Please let me be I'm begging you two.

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Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

Angela got stuck with Eric! I love it. And Edward walking around smelling the girls was just to funny. Poor Bella thinks she stinks was to funny! Love you both with your great story! Thank you both for writing this!

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Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

Another spectacular chapter from you two! I can't tell you how much I enjoy your story. Great job to both of you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 43189
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 18 Dec 2012
Reviewer: smw slut Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Club Hype

Very good start! Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

why thank you very much I'm updating as soon as I finish writing back to my wonderful reviewers such as yourself ;-)