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A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167628
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 27 May 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Endings

90 hours a week away from his kids? When the hell does he see them? They’re four, he must seem the at Weekends only, unless he’s working then too.

All these women dying in childbirth. Is USA a third world country?

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297712
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

A virgin?

of course she is. Seems that's the only thing Edward deserves. *rolls eyes.

cliche!

Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

And he's a dirty manwhore?

quelle surpris!

Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

She can get an annulment in five minutes, the've not consummated the marriage.

Pretty ridiculous. I'm out!

Ménage Triste by LaurieLou Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

It is the eighteenth century and a young Isabella Swan is wedded to the older, harsher Edward Cullen, Duke of Washington. He needs a male heir. She just wants to be loved. A one-shot about loss, love, lust and hope.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7299 Read Count: 4401
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 If he loved her so much, why did he leave her stranded at the alter after the vows and then abuse her when she found him with his whore? Ridiculous.

 

Summary:

 

 

 

Isabella and Edward Cullen have been married a little over four years, and been together as a couple since they were seventeen.

When Bella stumbles across some devastating evidence of Edward's infidelity on the night she is to announce her pregnancy hearts are broken,will the couple be able to move on and repair?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60066 Read Count: 30231
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Cunt!

People Change by kuntrygal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was the bane of Bella Swan's young existence until her mother unexpectedly moves her away. What happens years later when she moves back? Do people really change?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82271 Read Count: 32257
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It's as if this was written by a fifteen year old.

miraculously changed bullies, twenty odd year old virgins (only the females of course).

Misunderstandings aplenty and other ridiculous plot bunnies. Oh yes, let's not forget that every girl that gets with Edward, apart from Bella of course, is an irredeemable skank, yet Edward is a poor misunderstood man.

give me strength.

Phoebe's Wedding by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

A big secret comes to light the night before Phoebe's Wedding that changes everything...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44944 Read Count: 20852
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Sep 2012
Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Acts of Desperation

Not a thought about the daughter he loves so much? Why no explanation for why he went for Emily in the first place? Why he thought himself in love with the home wrecker? How he felt when Ana caught them? 

Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Karma

Hypocrite.

Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Room 301

Wow, what an A grade cunt!

Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 17: The Female Christian Grey

This phoebe is a spoiled little brat. She deserves a massive slap.

Back to Us by wordrunner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

"And even though I know somewhere in his twisted heart he loved me as much as I still love him—maybe more, in some ways—I know I couldn't stand to live with him anymore. He was killing me, slowly and painfully, and I had to go."


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 205120 Read Count: 65049
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2013 Updated: 25 Feb 2016
Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'd be more likely to believe it's because he still loves her and can't bring himself to hate her! Womans a fool.

Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

The fact that neither of us could come to the other and actually communicate our problems was the cause of our marriage breakdown. 

 

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And there's me thinking it was because he was falling in love and fucking another woman, whilst neglecting his wife and child for five months?

silly old me.

 

So Help Me God by Della Aarohi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

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Injured in a war and hardened by betrayal, she knew the moment she saw him that they would never be a family again. There was no forgiveness for her to get especially since he had claimed another.

Main Pairing: Isabella "Bella" Swan/ Edward Anthony Cullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10170 Read Count: 1555
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2020 Updated: 04 May 2020
Reviewer: kfoll Signed
Date: 05 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh it's all Angela's fault? F**k that, you leave your wife to her own devices because of some hero complex and then get shocked when she looks elsewhere for attention? This is so one sided, it's ridiculous. As for her family, who the hell does that to their blood? It's one thing to disapprove of what your sister, child does but, to outright betray and dispose of them is disgusting.