Reviews by agrutle
Saving Bella by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/4534/images/savingbella.jpg

Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89652
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Nov 2010
Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm glad she seems to be more comfortable with them.. Time will tell though.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was awesome. I'm so glad they got to scare Mike! Jerk.

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

OH MY!!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

she needs to have responsibility for her actions. 

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

While it might be replacing the cutting with the tasting/ marking, it was Hot.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Hmmm.. What does Victoria want?!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Awww!! She loves him!!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Poor Charlie, he really has no clue.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

What a mess!!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Carlisle and Esme just need to go. and not come back.. Them being there is going to bring back Edward and that is going to be bad!!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Hmm.. Why did Alice send them there? I'm so confused by that.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh shit!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thats not the way silly Bella. Sex doesn't equal love.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

As always 1 forward 2 back.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Halleujah!! 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Loved Emmett going with her and handling the therapist.  She seems to be getting better but I think its temporary. 2 forward 3 back.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

It kinda feels like Bella is placing the anger she has for Edward on to Jasper. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love that shes getting stronger!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

wow. I'm glad she got that out there but then she closed right back up.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Piss off Sam.. he needs to shut it.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Uh oh.. I bet Its Jake.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

For a while it will always be 2 forward 3 back.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh I can't wait for that one!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Jasper needs to have a bit more patience. I know he's eager but it only pushes him away.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

He is good for her. I just hope he doesn't screw it up again.

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oy! Such a mess.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hmm.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What.. The HELL?!!?!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Someone needed to knock her out of her self

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yeah Edward is a major douche..

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

They should have their first kiss when you think.. Not us! Looking forward to it though.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

yeah I don't think she likes Newton, I think she just doesn't feel worthy of being protected.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

One step forward two steps back. 

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Charlie is a hoot. Love him. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow.. That was a great start. Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I hope it works. I have a feeling that when Edward comes back it might throw a wrench in to the works. great chapter!!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Bella.. I understand what she's saying though.. she probably feels like hes going to leave her like Idiot did.

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I wonder what hes going to do. I don't have any idea. I just can't wait until she is better. I hate that she hurts.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh no.. she needs to feel that anger and she needs to let Rose and emmett have it.. 

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Meh, I can do with out more wolves.. I'm so happy that he is pulling Bella out of her shell.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Evil, pure evil cliffy!! Off to read more.. cause I'm hooked!!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

What!?

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

woo! very nice!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Too funny! loved the fashion show

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

gah peter.. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I'm sad to see Peter and Charlotte leave!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Uh oh.. Edward is coming back.. its gonna be bad.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

probably passed out because of the blood loss. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Edward is a douche and the parents are just plain stupid.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Bye bye Edward!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I think he should just go. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Oh I'm sure its Jake. maybe sam. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Esme is delusional she thinks saying sorry fixes all her wrongs.. sometimes it does but not always.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Bwhahahaa Edward is bubble boy for the day.. awesome!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Great story!! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!!!



Author's Response:

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373445
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

What a great story!! I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

Another great chapter. I love this story and can't wait to read more. I am so glad that I am reading it completed so that i do not have to wait for updates. on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

I truly hope that Edward isn't like her father and cavortes about on her. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

wow.. I hope Jacob is right.. I'm sure he is. love the story!!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

Ughhh King Charles is gross. I don't doubt that Bella is afraid that Edward will be that way with her too. I can't wait until they meet!!

 

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

I love that Alice has taken Bella under her wing. Angela is great too. I like Jacob as her brother its different and nice. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

YAY!!!!! OH I am so happy they are wed and happy in it. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

OH my how embarrassing! I could not imagine having to have witnesses!! I am so glad they are well matched.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

awww young love..I would be sad to see my family one last  time as well..

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

They are taking to married life well. I'm glad that the King showed Bella kindness before she left. Not knowing when she would see her family again must of been heart wrenching.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

They are too cute for words. Im so glad that they are enjoying each other. I feel like its all to soon and the other shoe will drop. 

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

peace and quiet before they have to go back to their royal lives.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

I hope all goes well.. 

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

How sad they must be for him to leave.. It's they way they must live though. Love the story. Thanks for sharing!

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

ahh and so we meet Tanya. Always with the jealousy of Bella.. I hope Bella is alright!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

omg Alice cracks me up!!! I love it. Oh and Esme too!!! Wonderful inlaws Im sure that there arent better ones!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

OH no.. Shes not going to like that he didnt come to her chambers. Not at all. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

I knew she would be worried about him not coming to her chambers.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

Good I am glad Tanya is gone. I hope she doesn't come back to haunt them.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Ah Tanya strikes again.. Shes such a bitch.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

I love this story and Rose is awesome in it!! 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

OH yay!! Edward truly loves her.. Its so sweet.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

Finally shes out of the picture for good.. I hope that the real culprit is captured soon.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

Oh i just love this family of Royals!!!

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

OH 2 babies!!! even better.. Oh my goodness Alice in labor.. Can't wait to see what she has!

 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

Oh my a c-section in those days was deadly. I am so glad that Alice survived as did baby Sophia. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

AWWWWWWWWW a boy and a girl. So lovely.. 

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties

Ah love.. They has it. lol Its so beautiful and I am sad to see this story coming to an end.

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

What a beautiful story. I don't mind saying that your Epi had me bawling like a baby. I am so glad that they had as much time as they did together but it is so very sad that Edward died and she lived for so long after him. That had to be hard. I love that you showed how they met and were together after she passed. I enjoyed your story from start to finish and am so glad you shared it with us. Thank you so much!!!! 

Knights of Honor by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Knights of Honor

 

 Lord Edward is an Honorable Knight on a secret mission, Bella is offered to him as a gift from the Evil Duke Aro.

 “Age of Edward” contest entry.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14787 Read Count: 2753
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome!! I really love how you told this story. I do want to see what payback Aro gets. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, agrutle!

Kathie

Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue

A great story..  Thanks for sharing!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading!

Kathie

Summary:

Winter, 1693. The hysteria of Salem has reached the town of Carlisle, MA, where a group of magistrates including Edward Masen are sent to investigate claims of witchcraft. Will they find the truth & save those who are innocent? FGB o/s Javamomma0921.

 

BBB1

This banner was created for me by Rosalynn as a part of my FGB bid on her awesome banner skills.

 

BBB2

This is the banner I created for the story myself.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17336 Read Count: 1154
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2010
Reviewer: agrutle Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered

Great story! Thanks for sharing!!



Author's Response:

thanks so much.  I'm happy that you enjoyed it!