Reviews by allyvera
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255164
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I would mind hanging from his ceiling either I don't think - he is a good Dom, that is for sure :-)  Loving the story, can't wait to read the next chapters. AV oxo



Author's Response:

yeah ... I would hang from his ceiling, his bed ...hell lick my back and stick me on his frige for all i care ...lol...just so I couls be with Edward, i'd be happy ,,,,

Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hi lmlx8,

Just wanted to say "hi" and say how much I am enjoying your story, sorry for not reviewing earlier chapters, I got carried away reading :-)  I always love a good Dom/Sub story and yours is shaping up nicely!  I love your Edward, he is very, well, Edward if you know what I mean, I love when authors can bring canon elements of Edward into their stories, like his protectiveness (not to mention, utter yummy-ness), especially when the storyline itself is very non-canon.

I am looking forward to the next chapters and I promise to review more often! AV oxox



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review and I wanted to welcome you to the story ....I tried to keep most of the major characters true to their personalities ....because like you .. I love them ....

Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Such a great chapter - loved the sound of the collar - and Edward was so gentle with her. 



Author's Response:

there is a picture of the collar and a few other pictures on my extra's page...(my other story0 I think the pictures are in chapter 6...check them out if your interested....louise

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

God, I am so enjoying re-reading FYW - there is shit I missed before!  Like the waxer dressing like an extra from Dirty Dancing - LOL - mine does too...  maybe it goes with the profession or something?

Bella is one strong woman, that is for sure!  And as this is my second read of FYW, I know she only gets stronger..  takes quite a woman to put up with Roughie, but I am sure we would all like to have a go at that..  heehee.

Reviewer: allyvera Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

hehe - he is a cocky son of a bitch..

I so feel for your Bella - talk about being between a rock and a hard place.  Out of all the hundreds of versions of Bellas I have read, FYW Bella really needs for someone to cut her some slack.  She deserves some pleasure in her life - but I suppose that is what Roughie is for!  hehe

Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Hi Jada - how are you babe?  I hope Roughie is liking his new home! 

I don't think I have ever felt so conflicted with an Edward before, part of me wants to tell Bella "RUN" and part says "DO IT" - guess which bit is bigger..  yeah the "DO IT" part ..  lol  Hell, I would have done it for free...  but I am a hoor.

Since you have relocated to TWCS, I have decided to re-read Roughie as I go and I don't think I have told you before, but truly, FYW is so eloquently written - you have such a talent, girl!  I am so looking forward to re-reading - onto the next chappy I go! AV oxo

Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Jada, it is just awesome that you have posted here at TWCS - when I saw your note on Twitter I got my ass over here pronto :-)  I just absolutely love FYW, it is such an epic story, with possibly one of the most mysterious Edwards I have ever encountered.  At times I feel very sorry for Bella, and yes, there are times when I am dead jealous..   just sayin'..

I am so looking forward to reviewing all your chapters here - it doesn't matter where you post, I will follow you and Roughie wherever you go! oxo AV

Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Jesus..  seriously, Roughie is one INTENSE son of a gun.  I have never been so conflicted in fanfic as I am with him, I want to hate him, but he is so fascinating!!  I just can't wait to see you peel back his layers!  *sigh* I love you jada :-)

Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Yep, I am reviewing in both places, cause I can :-)  Also, cause I am a greedy hoor, I read it in both places too. 

Now that I have read it twice, I am wondering why he is back.. to apologise?? For more sex - please let it be more sex *giggles*. So many questions to be answered...  I love a good mystery.

I'm gonna be up all night wondering now.  As I commented over at your Blog, wonderful chapter, so worth the wait (and really it hasn't been that long, it just seems it when you miss Roughie). 

Thank you as always for sharing Roughie with us - we love him, but you know that!  Until next time Jada!  AV oxo

Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Jada..  what a chapter - I just want to get these two and give them a good shake - but they do have reasons for being the way they are..

Your chapters always shake me to the core, so worth waiting for.

Thank you as always for sharing with us, I miss Roughie when he is not around, but I really want your Bella to be happy..  she makes my heart ache :-(

Disciplinarian by indefinable1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Student Isabella Swan wants something - her hot teacher Edward Cullen.  Can he resist her seduction - or will he give in and bend her over his desk and teach her just the lesson she's been dying to learn?

One-Shot - One-Giant-Lemon!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3936 Read Count: 5449
[Report This] Published: 20 May 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi!  Oh.My.God, simply fabulous!  This is one of the hottest one shots I have ever read, thank you so much for sharing with us!  I don't know what it is, but I just love a  disciplinarian Edward :-)  I will definitely be recommending this story to all my Fan Fic friends..  they will love it!  I look forward to reading anything else you write.

Take care .. AV



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!!!  And I appreciate you wanting to spread the word. It means a lot to me!! xoxo - M

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: allyvera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi there!  Thank you so much for your review reply, I just loved Midnight Caller when I read it for the D2D competition :-)  I look forward to reading it as a full fic, and I so excited to see you have other work for me to read too!  

Until next chapter! AV xo



Author's Response:

thanks sooo much for reading and reviewing!