Wowwwww, that was extremely captivating. It literally had me reading for a whole day, non-stop. Aside from a few grammatical errors, I have no complaints. I loved the transformation that Edward underwent on his quest to win Bella's love. I also loved how the transition had many rough patches, because that is how reality is. I commend you for composing such a masterpiece. On another note, I would like for you to know that I joined this site just to read your story which was on a list of recommendations by another author. I would like to say it was well worth the time and effort. And screw haters. FF.net is totally missing out. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for you kind words. I'm glad you liked the story. I hope you'll check out my other stories as well as others on twcs. There are some really great writers here. I've also written a novel "Blind Faith" which is available thru twcs-publishing house and Amazon. I'm working on a second novel "Darkness of Perfection" which is due out later this year.