Reviews by fleur50
Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
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Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

1 test de grossesse/mois... quelle bonne idée!

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow!

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

super chapitre!

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

quelle bonne idée, un bébé pour Roslie et Emmett

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Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

génial

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Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

merci, merci pour cette belle histoire

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Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

j'adore

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

quelle belle façon de provoquer un accouchement!

Edward est un crétin jaloux, en ce moment!



Author's Response:

Je suis entièrement d'accord mais il est autant d'amusement à la droite quand il est !

Vous remercier autant de pour lire mon histoire !

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow! des jumelles, quelle belle surprise! 

On eut allaiter des jumeaux. Mais Bella peut-elle les allaiter??  Le regard d'Edward quand elle allaitera les enfants serait une joie pour Bella et moi!

Pourra-t-elle avoir d'autres enfants?

 

J'aurai peut-être une réponse au chapitre 16!



Author's Response:

Oui, edward regarde son everytime pour deux raisons, garder son sûr et parce qu'il aime le voir. parce que vous avez demandé je dirai un point de veiw quand il fait !

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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

wow! j'adore.

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Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

J'adore votre histoire, je lis avec le traducteur google.  Je lis le français.

 

Fleur50

Montréal,

Québec, Canada

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

J'adore

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

J'adore



Author's Response:

Merci!

Knights of Honor by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Knights of Honor

 

 Lord Edward is an Honorable Knight on a secret mission, Bella is offered to him as a gift from the Evil Duke Aro.

 “Age of Edward” contest entry.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14787 Read Count: 2753
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow... j espere une suite

 

montreal, quebec

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
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Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

J'adore... c'est si mystérieux.  J'ai hâte de lire la suite.  Je lis avec un traducteur anglais-français.

 

Fleur

Québec, Canada, 20h01

 



Author's Response:

Ce site ne me permets pas de ne fait pas languges mais le fanfiction.net multiples font, donc je pourrais pouvoir quelques-uns faire avec le translater sur mon ordinateur pour ce site. Lisez-vous ce site ?

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Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

génial!

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

j'adore, l'histoire est géniale!

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Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

génial!

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Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

J'adore

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Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow!

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Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow!

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Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

deuxième lecture...

 

je ne trouve pas ça horrible à lire surtout quand on sait que l'histoire va s'améliorer.

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Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

beau chapitre

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Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

J'adore!

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Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

J'aime quand c'est sombre! c'est différent...

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

J'adore

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

j'adore l'évolution de Bella/Edward. J'espère qu'ils vont beaucoup se pratiquer cette semaine!

 Les conseils de Esme, un petit bijou, j'ai hâte de voir les prochains conseils du prochain chapitre. 

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

superbe!

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

passionnant...

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
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Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

wow! Génial!

Fleur,

Montréal, Québec

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Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

wow!

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Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

génial!

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Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

woooow!

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Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

J'ai hâte de lire la suite

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Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?

J'adooore

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Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

wow!

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries

J'adore

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen

génial

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Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

génial

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

wow!

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Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

génial

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Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

Passionnant!

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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

génial!

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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

wow!

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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

Passionnant!

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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

J'adore!

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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

J'ai hâte de lire la suite, j'adore.

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

J'adore

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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

génial, j'adore

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

génial, j'adore!

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

J'ai adoré, merci, merci

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
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Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked

début prometteur!

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Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man

:)

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Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand

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Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me

wow!

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Secrets

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I was Broken

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The World at Large

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Even So

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

wow!

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Delicate

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 The Only Exception

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Chop Suey

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Best of You

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Dancing

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Worker Bees

wow!

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Karma Police

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Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Dosed

French. Google Translate.

 

J'ai lu votre histoire la semaine passée avec mon iPad et je ne pouvais pas laisser de review sur twcs.  Je fais mes devoirs aujourd'hui, lol, avec mon portable!

 

J'ai vraiment adoré votre histoire, c'était PASSIONNANT!  Merci à votre bêta qui m'a permis de lire facilement avec Google Translate.  merci, merci.

 

Montréal, Québec, 23:48



Author's Response:

Hello!

I'm so glad you liked it! 

 

Thanks for reading :) 

 

Katie 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella can't wait to marry Edward. As the wedding draws nearer, strange things begin to happen - and the nuptial nightmares have an unexpected source. Will Bella make it to the altar? Collab w/ConfettiRainfall, AH, O/S Entry for the Monster-In-Law contest on FFn.

1st Place DOUBLE WINNER - Public Vote and Judges' Choice.

Thank you to all who voted!

Banner by the lovely Bella's Executioner.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7476 Read Count: 456
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2010 Updated: 30 May 2010
Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

superbe, j<adore cet OS.



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup!

Summary: Past Featured Story

gbb

Bella has always been the odd one out, never having many friends.
College life could turn that all around. But her friendship with Edward Cullen
might not be exactly what it seems. Does the shy, sweet Edward have a secret?
AH, OOC, DARK

 

My very dear friend (and beta) made this video for me! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU BB!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InDa53qyRhY

 

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96619 Read Count: 12762
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2010
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Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A New Leaf

début prometteur



Author's Response:

Merci!

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What's in a Brain?

génial



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup, une fois de plus

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: After School Specials Don't Prepare You For This

Edward, a-t-il un jumeau!!!



Author's Response:

Vous êtes très perspicace! :)

Merci pour la lecture!

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bored and Lonely Weekend

wow



Author's Response:

:)

Merci!

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Can You Say Awk-ward?

génial



Author's Response:

Je vous remercie! Vous êtes si doux!

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: It's Just Like Lunch...With More Food

J'adore!



Author's Response:

Merci vous si fort!

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Firsts

wow!



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup!

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Karma is a Cruel Mistress

wow!

 

Je lis avec le traducteur google.  Je parle français.  Désolé, mes commentaires sont en français.  J'aime beaucoup votre histoire et j'ai hâte de lire la suite.

 

Montréal, Québec

19h00



Author's Response:

J'aime que vous commentaire en français! J'adore le français, mais mon français n'est défaut d'être loin de lui pendant 16 ans. :( Merci beaucoup pour la lecture! Je suis tellement content que vous l'aimez! :)

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Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Everywhere I Turn

wow! pauvre Bella qui est bien mélangée entre les deux



Author's Response:

Oui , les choses se délicate pour Bella , hein ? Merci beaucoup pour votre commentaire!

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Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: What a Tangled Web We Weave When First We Practice to Deceive

génial



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup, mon ami ;)

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Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: I'm Ready... Right?

je vais aller lire ... à la course...



Author's Response:

Je ne comprends pas très bien ce que vous entendez par "la course", mais je vous remercie beaucoup pour votre commentaire! Je vous remercie de prendre le temps de me dire votre opinion! :)

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Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Aftermath

Impressionnant, passionnant et génial.  Vous êtes un auteur pleins de surprises.  J'ai hâte de lire la suite.



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup!

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Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

moi aussi , je suis comme cela, un verre et c'est trop!

 

vite, vite la suite... svp, svp...



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup pour vos encouragements . J'apprécie chaque mot que vous écrivez ! Je suis si heureux que vous apprécierez cette histoire!