Reviews by luxmcghee
Summary:

Edward left Bella heartbroken in the woods a year ago. She tried to move on; she goes to college now, goes out with her friends and tries to have fun. But she is still chased by Edward's shadows. During the day she turns to Jacob, becoming what everyone needs her to be. But as night, when she is alone, the shadows find her.
When Edward returns will he be able to help her step out of the shadows and becoming the person she was truly meant to be?

After the first chapter, I will post every Tuesday.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30968 Read Count: 609
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2010
Reviewer: luxmcghee Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So I just finished "My Happy Ending?" and I was so impressed I went to see what else you had written. I went for this one since you posted the teaser in MHE. I usually don't start reading works in progress but since I found MHE on the recently updated page and you posted about starting this on one of your later chapters I figured you were currently working on it. Then I got to the end of this I went to favorite it and noticed that you haven't updated since 2010!  I'm crushed!  Please tell me that since you posted something (edits?) to MHE that you're taking this back up!!



Author's Response:

Hi! I am going to give this another go, I'm almost done editing the chapters so far, and hope to have another chopter up soon... on both of my stories. I'm not sure why MHE was on the recently updated, I haven't read it since I finished it; I probably should edit it though, it was so long ago that I wrote it! Thanks for reading! I'll have more for you soon! 

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59807
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: luxmcghee Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow- I have to say that this is very different and you do an excellent job of taking us all through Bell's ordeal and how she's slowly succuming to the brainwashing.  I am concerned that your last author's note said that this would be both HEA and B&E would end up together in the end.  Unless there's one hell of a twist coming, I find that very disturbing.  Yes, the whole concept you're working with is dusturbing and that in and of itself isn't a bad thing- it's quite creative and done very well so far.  What I mean is the idea that they could end up together- if everything is to be taken at face value- being considered an HEA ending is disturbing.  I will definately keep up with this to see how you plan to pull that together.  Keep up the good and disturbing work!

Summary:

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“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135539
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2012 Updated: 15 Jun 2013
Reviewer: luxmcghee Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this story- I think you're doing a great job and I can't wait to read more. So please take this small criticism in the spirit it's intended... Is Sue supposed to be mentally handicapped in some way?  First, if you're getting your idea of what New Jersey people sound like from "jersey shore" you should probably know that most of those idiots are not from New Jersey. And they're idiots. Second, in that vain you may want to consider leaving the description that she speaks with a heavy nj accent and leave it to the readers' imaginations instead of spelling the inflections phonetically. Reading the "word" youse over and over was actually painful.

Again, I've been with this story from the beginning and will stay with it till the end but that scene was so jarring to read that I almost skipped it. 



Author's Response:

You made me laugh. I was in no way offended by your review. I am happy to tell you that I have never watched Jersey Shore nor do I intend to (I like my brain too much for that). I purposefully made Sue a little...strange. Its how she appeared in my head, though she wasn't supposed to come off as mentally handicapped

Raising Ashlynn by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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thanks to teamalltwilight and le crepuscule for the awesome banners!

 

Bella meets a man who in one night leaves her body humming for more. What should she do when the next time she sees him, he is dropping off his daughter, begging her to keep her. With an odd sense of obligation, a person who never saw herself as a parent—is now moving across country with a child who thinks Bella is her mother.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30699 Read Count: 31986
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Jan 2013
Reviewer: luxmcghee Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Did I miss a chapter? I get that you're moving it along, which is good, but Edward just appeared out of no where.  



Author's Response:

yes you did. i forgot to update twcs on staurday so now you have ch 4 and 5 to read. i am so sorry and thanks for this review and letting me know!

Summary:

Someone keeps calling Paul's phone and Bella has had enough. Based off of the song Leaving Tonight by Ne-Yo and Jennifer Hudson


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1637 Read Count: 1282
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 13 Jan 2014
Reviewer: luxmcghee Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why DID he set that ring tone, though.... Did I miss it?  Good job otherwise!

Funeral by California Kat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Past Featured Story

funeral

 

Funeral is a True Blood story that picks up following Season 6, Episode 7. Nora has just died, and—at Bill’s request—Sookie has brought Warlow back to the human realm. Will the death that surrounds them cause Eric and Sookie to choose life—that “other” life they could have together?

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Canon
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85523 Read Count: 4415
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2014 Updated: 01 Mar 2014
Reviewer: luxmcghee Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Death All Around

This was great- I *wish* this is how last season ended!  Sequel?