Reviews by adirondackmommi
Summary:

The Quileute legends were not entirely accurate in their depiction of imprinting. Who was to know that the pack imperative was so strong? Bella is just about to find out how strong. A/U. Warning: menage, mature themes, domestic discipline.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Brady, Bella/Colin, Bella/Embry, Bella/Jacob, Bella/Jared, Bella/Paul, Bella/Quil, Bella/Sam, Bella/Seth
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 277262 Read Count: 388292
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Oct 2019
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Departure

I like the idea, can't wait to see where this goes

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 16 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

She should have stayed over and snuggled up with Jake, they would have both slept better.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

I should be going to bed, but I can't .......I keep reading and re-reading chapters. I am in love with this story, with the boys. I'm thinking I need my own pack.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 15 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

It's okay Bella, we are all very hot for them. Take it slow, love each one as a person, then when you are comitted to your new life....fuck them until you can't move anymore.

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 15 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

Is Bella sick......or is she "I'm about to be a wolf" sick ?

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 15 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

I'd say her luck was pretty damn spectacular right about now. I'm hoping that she will develop relationships with each of them as individuals, as well as packmates.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 15 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

Or Sex Gods....... that works too Jake.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 15 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

Dammmmnnnnnn

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

I've always loved Jake, even when he is portrayed in a less than lovable way - there is just something about him. I really like the self posessed assertive Jake you have created, much more dominant.

Summary: Past Featured Story

KC - Wishing on a Star

 

Another day, another meeting. She fetched their drinks and typed their contracts, the efficient secretarial cog in the wheel that was Cullen Athletics.That is, until the day he walked in, and she began to wish for the impossible.

Bella/Emmett. Rated T

Banner by Christag Banners

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6232 Read Count: 761
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this, I think it captures how many of us would feel if the hotness that is Emmett looked our way. Would have loved to see a date where she didn't have a stick up  her ass though.

 



Author's Response:

Your review made me smile! I wrote her as the everyday insecure 'plain Jane' who never believed she would get the perfect man of her dreams. I like to think that once she realised that Emmett saw her true beauty, inside and out, she was able to see it too ;)  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~KC

A Shifter's Heart by Sitalia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

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Bella has been alive for centuries. She is a panther shifter and has previously come across her three mates, but thinking they were gone from her forever she takes a job with the La Push boys, but what happens when the Cullen Coven comes to Forks, Washington. Read and find out.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper/Peter, Bella/Eric Northman, Bella/Godric
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Shifter Trilogy
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50686 Read Count: 12366
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Jul 2015
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Fate

I like the premise - I'm looking forward to seeing the voice of the characters evolve.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 3: The Threat

I like the story, I like where it's going. Having said that, some of the conversations seems "awkward". I think what is throwing it for me is how they refer to each other as mates when talking to each other, it feels unnatural. I can see it the first few times they speak, but it feels out of place at this point and make the interaction between the characters feel less personal.

Summary:

What happens to the wolves imprint if a wolf dies? The legends always talked about what would happen to the wolf, but never the imprint. Find out as Bella goes through her pain and suffering, but also gets her revenge on the ones who took her love away.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Seth
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11408 Read Count: 664
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2014 Updated: 29 Apr 2014
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 21 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Hell Hath No Fury

I didn't think I would like a story with the Cullen's as giant assholes.....but you made it work, loved it !

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rain of Vengeance by Rickie Bansbach

 

 

Aro learned that after waking as a vampire, the seemingly controlled newborn Bella went berserk. There will be consequences.

Multiple character deaths. Graphic violence. Not for Wolf Pack fans.

 

After reading Shattered by Mrstrentreznor on FFN, this came to me. It set off an idea. I made a few subtle changes to suit myself. A sort of fanfic AU of a fanfic AU, if you please.

Aro, Caius, and Marcus. Implied canon pairings.

 

featured story TWCS

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5584 Read Count: 1470
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2015 Updated: 01 Jun 2015
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Rain of Vengeance chapter 3

I hope this is some sort of trap.......



Author's Response:

Caius is gathering as much information as he can before striking out to avenge the death of the Cullens. He's not doing it to avenge them so much as he's doing it for Aro.

It would be stupid for him to rush in blindly before he knew as much as possible. Whatever destroyed a coven of seven vampires must be very dangerous.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Rain of Vengeance chapter 4

Hmmmm, interesting plot twist. I wasn't sure I was going to like it, but I did. Well done.

 



Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading and for leaving reviews!

GeezerWench

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Rain of Vengeance ~ chapter 2

Im totally confused at this point.......



Author's Response:

Confused?

Here, Aro has learned of the demise of the Cullens, including Carlisle, after sending the Guardsmen to check up on Bella's status as a human.

It's explained/implied heavily later what the guard was doing there to begin with.

Aro has quite an unusual interest and attachment to Carlisle, and by extension, the family. Allowing Carlisle and company to get away with things other vampires would have been killed for. Why else would have had allowed Edward, Alice, and human Bella to leave Volterra back when Edward stupidly tried to suicide by vampire?