Reviews by Oldove
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255125
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Oldove Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

I am and always have been a huge fan of this story, I also wrote a review to you after the demonstration chapter saying how I questioned how Edward could treat Bella in this fashion given her history. Though it still bothers me a lot I can now better understand your analisis of the reasons why. I still feel that it was extremely harsh but I also only understand this life style through stories such as yours. It just seems that with the extreme abuse that Bella suffered at the hands of her ex-husband that this demonstration may have set her back rather than moved her forward in this life style. Obviously I was wrong and I would like to apologize to you, the amazing writer, for trying to influence your plot line. I can't wait to read more, until then..................



Author's Response:

My plot is set, it won't change, and Edward understands Bella better then she does herself. He knows what makes her tick and what would set her off...and that was what i was trying to get across -- Is that He knows her so well, and she trust him so much ...that all it took was the sound of his voice to put her at ease....becasue Edward didn't really do anything he hadn't done before...he's pinned her to the bed and F**ked her senseless ...he's held the back of her head and F**ked her mouth ...its just this time the intent was differant...instead of it being kinky games...he was using her, as she had used him...(to get off)...and so the connection wasn't there. He wasn't hurting her, and he didn't do what James did...there was also no anger, or malice. There was just a lack of feeling, so the sex wasn't tender or passionate...it was just a means to get off.

Anyway, at this point in their relationship, there is no getting through to Bella. He did talk to her, she blew him off and would have continued to - causing more problems - she is the type of person who needs a swift kick in the ass before she sees what is in front of her. She needs to almost come to rock bottom before she makes a decison ...and Edward knows that...he knows (at this time in her life) he could talk until he is blue in the face and she would argue with him ....in time that will stop...and she will learn to listen and take what he says to heart, she just wasn't there yet ,,,,but i think she's learning...lol....

Anyway...that was my thinking, or rather Edward's thinking and his motives....bottom line he knows what makes her freak out and that is why he is worried about the canes...her triggers are sounds and smells ...ok enough about this, becasue i could go on and on and on ...lol ...thanks for reading and no apology is needed, you are intiled to your opinion, and i can take a disagreement with mine...what i didn't like was the personal attacks with  no way for me to reply...(not you...others) that's rude and nasty...ok i'm done... thanks for reading until next time...louise

Reviewer: Oldove Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

You know I have been a huge fan of this story but this last chapter has been hard to rectify in my mind, I am trying to understand why the severity of this so called lesson. It seems to me that this woman has suffered and been abused enough in her life and for someone who supposidly loves her to treat her in such a manner does not make any sense to me dominant or no dominate. I am hoping that the next chapter can help me understand why he felt a need to abuse her in such a fashion, all in the guise of a lesson.

Reviewer: Oldove Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I have read this story a few times and will continue until it comes to a fitting end. The characters in this story deserve to have a finish to their story, it is a wonderful story of perserverence and love. Could you please let us, your many many fans know if and when you plan to finish it? Waiting until then..................

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37302
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Oldove Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Sound of Waking Up

I love this story and can't wait for the updates. You have very successfully showed the anguish present in both Bella and Edward also showing the never ending love between them. But now is the time for forgivness and healing and I can hardly wait.

Yes I love this Charlie, so understanding and loving.

Summary:

Edward Mason was a changed man because of his four year old daughter. The day his daughter went missing because of his past, was the day his life turned upside down. Isabella Swan was just another student at the University of Chicago until her father's actions came back to haunt her. When their worlds collide, will they be able to overcome their differences and survive? All human


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21042 Read Count: 3995
[Report This] Published: 16 Nov 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Oldove Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

A very intriguing story, I hope that you do not abandon it. Please continue I want to know the outcome. Thanks until next time...................

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82046
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Oldove Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am intrigued with your story and the characters, you are a very good writer and know how to get your reader involved. Keep up the good work.

Summary:

A poem about season 6 finale in Stefan's POV.


Stelena


Categories: The Vampire Diaries/The Originals
Characters: Stefen/Elena
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 398 Read Count: 23
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2015 Updated: 14 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Oldove Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like your poem and I cannot agree with you more, the writers ruined the show for me when they split up Stephan and Elena. The show doesn't make  sense to me anymore and I doubt if I will continue to watch it in the coming season.

 



Author's Response:

@oldove: First of all, thank you so much for the review. It was deeply appreciated. Second: I totally agree and it was why I stopped watching. I only watched the season 6 finale bc out of curiousity since Nina was leaving and it was the most wasted 60 mins of my life. I wanted to turn back the time and forget what I had seen. The show has long passed forgotten the premise of the show and it was about Stelena not Delena as they have repeatedly said Stelena was epic love. It was not epic love when Damon stole his girl and Elena turned into a whore. What kind of character development was that? They severely wrecked Elena beyond repair and it was no wonder why Nina left the show.