Reviews by twilightobession
A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Loved getting both Edward and Bella's POV in this chapter. I love your Sam. Great job. I still can not believe that Bella is not sharing this with Edward. I am having a little trouble with that but I trust yu with your story. Can't wait to find out more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Loved this whole chapter. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!! I am so glad that Emmett and Rose are going behind Bella's back to try and get her and Edward back together. Someone needs to do something.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I knew that it was not going to be easy for Bella. I was expecting Edward to be upset but something about reading it my mouth still dropped opened when he told her her could not do this. I was expecting it but it still surprised me. Edward has lost some time with his son. I just hope that he doesn't lose very much more time with him. I hope he come to his senses soon.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I understand Edward being mad at Emmett. I would be to. But I understand Emmett's POV to. He was her Dr. and things are private. Bella should not have done that to Emmett. I am glad that Esme and Alice sat Edward straight. I just hope that ALice and Bella can work things out.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I am glad that Edward came to his senses and wants Bella and Charlie in his life.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

You write with so much emotion. I love reading this story. I love how you have Edward go and talk to Angela and him talking to the girls. It is so moving.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I love everything about this chapter. You did an excellent job with it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Glad that Emmett and Edward made up. I am really enjoying this story. You have done a really great job writing it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I LOVED this chapter. I love seeing into their future. This was awesome. You did a great great job writing this story. I have really enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing your story with all of us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/11959/images/An_Imperfect_Love.jpg

You're in for one hell of a ride!  Bella and Jasper's worlds collide as they find solace and comfort in one another as friends.  However, as Bella's dreams begin to unfold and she begins gaining certain abilities...it seems that maybe everything that's happened to lead them here, was all part of an intricate plan.  Can road trips, fun times in Vegas, and a crazy Peter help them find their Heaven?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215333 Read Count: 67870
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2011
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What is going on with Peter and Bella? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Love it!! ! ! ! ! ! ! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loved this chapter! !!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awesome! ! ! ! !  He finally remmbers!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So glad that he remembers the plan. I.think Jasper will have a hard time letting Bella die. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 34: OT - The Real Story Behind the Burning Bush

Lol, too funny.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

Loved loved LOVED  this chapter.  So glad they got to experience having kids. Perfect chapter! !!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Lol!!!!!!!!Too funny! ! ! ! ! ! ! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! It begins!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow, lots of information in this chapter. But still lots of questions. Thanks for giving us all this information.  Love Peter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Bella's got a great plan. Let the war begin.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I like how things have changed for them.  Jasper being human and breakable and Bella being supernatural. .....then Bella being human and Jasper supernatural.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Truly enjoyingthis story. Great job writing it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow, more information.  This storyline just keeps getting better and better. There are more twist and turns. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all the reviews, hon!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am so loving this story. Can't wait to see what happens with them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Let the battle begin! !! ! ! ! ! ! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Are Bella and Peter some kind of Angels? ??????? 

Glad Jasper and Bella have work things out with Edward and Alice. Can't wait to see how their visit with Peter and Charlotte go. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, this is a whole new twist on Twilight.  Since Charlie died the same night that Edward left.  Wow, poor Bella.  Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So glad that Jasper was there to save Bella.  Glad they have earned his other now. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Glad Bella and Rose worked things out. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am really enjoying reading this story.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

They are getting closer. What made Bella ask Jasper not to save her if there was a natural accident? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So Bella likes Jasper more dark and dangerous side. I don't blame her,  but I would like to see more of his kinky side and maybe dominant side. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That was HOT!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was really HOT! !!!!!!! I was worried that something ws going to happen at the party, like a fight over someone making a pass on Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think Bella was dreaming of Edward and what happened the night he left but why was Jasper feeling lust coming from her? The dream part of Jasper I think she was asking him not to go, to not leave her. They really need to talk. The conversation with Derek and his friends was funny. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I knew Jasper interpreted her sleep talking wrong. How did Bella dream what really happened?  Also, how did she turn off her feelings to Jasper?  I was laughing at the end of this chapter.  My husband  and I wentered parking before we got married and was caught by a cop. Lol 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What on the world is going on with her dreams? I am thinking that some of Jasper's gift is rubbing off on Bella.  So glad that Jasper still has the Cullens. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is awesome.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Perfect! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, that was lots and lots of sex. What is the deal with the weather?  What was she dreaming about?  A bunny rabbit? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I wondering how the limo driver is feeling. Lol. Jasper must have really been horny to pay 10 thousand for an hour.  Love seeing Emmett, Rose, and Jasper having such a good time and being relaxed. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why are Edward and Alice shocked??????? Did Alice not see it happening?  Lol!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What happened to Alice's visions? Why is she not having them any more? Love Bella's dream of Jasper and his sister.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 35: OT - Bella's Dance With the Devil

I have truly enjoyed reading your story. It has been an amazing journey.  Thank you for sharing with us. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

She was born special and had a destiny that could change the world.  She is the Keeper! He will be the Overseer!  Together they try to save the Cullen's and restore the balance.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64270 Read Count: 26857
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very interesting

The Faith by TwilightDramaTeach Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

The Faith BannerThe Faith BannerIsabella Swan lives a solitary existence.  She is the only child of a single parent father.  Bella is also a daughter of The Faith.  She is isolated and segregated, but all that is about to change.  Today is September 13.  It’s Bella’s sixteenth birthday, and at 11:58 pm, the time of her birth, things will never be the same.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8920 Read Count: 2583
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Faith

OW!!! Different. Let me guess, Tanya was not a virgin. What about James? Is he going to be a threat?  Can't wait for you to update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.  Yes Tanya was not a virgin.  As for James I never thought that far.  This was a one-shot.  I am considering making it a full story though.

Thanks again,

TDT

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Faith

YOu have my support for a full story. I would love to read it. Please think about it. I will be waiting to hear from you. GO WRITE!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote of confidence!  I appreciate the review.  It probably won't happen until school is out.

TDT

Summary:

Edward and Bella are both divorced. Seeing and flirting with each other everyday while dropping their kids off at school finally results into a wonderful night together. Language/Lemons Please read & review. The one shot that inspired A Long Way to Go.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13883 Read Count: 723
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Flirting Goes A Long Way

Great story. Loved it. I always love Daddyward. I will be looking for your other story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I love Daddyward too! I'll post the first chapter of the full story sometime this week. The name is A Long Way to Go.

Thanks again,

freakybella

Summary:

stories/15495/images/MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpgEdward isn't The only one lusting for Bella's blood!

Carlisle has a few DIRTY secrets ,involving how he creatively quenches his thirst.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Carlisle/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1980 Read Count: 3799
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Apr 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carlisle Cums Undone

This is different. I am off to read chapter 2.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I'm happy you are staying for chapter 2:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The First Sip

OK, Carlisle has problems. That was just gross. Can't wait to see what else happens. lol...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Grab a cup'o' tea, enjoy,lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Blessings

THat was funny at the end. Carlisle thinking about how good he has it.

How did Jasper know that the drop of blood on Carlisle's desk was Bella's???



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

You have really  given me something to think about...of course the obvious answer, wonderful strawberry freesia numiness,etc.

But what fun would that be? I have a couple ideas to explain how Jasper knows. I am working out the next chapter in my head, thanks:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Making Sense Of It All

Vert interesting. Enjoyed reading about a perv. Carlisle and Jasper. lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

It's funny because when this first started, I had no idea Jasper would join the party like that!

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40841
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Initiation

Sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more. I am off to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Initiation

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: At the club

Loved the scene between Carlisle and Bella. HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!!

Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.

 

**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I cant wait for you to update. Can't wait to see what James has in store for Bella.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I feel so sorry for Edward.

Sorry I am a perv but I can't wait to see what James has in store for Bella.



Author's Response:

Then you will really enjoy the next few chapters. ; )

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WOW!!! Can't wait for more. Need more details.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Will we see this from Bella's POV??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This story is definately different.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really feel sorry for Alice.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I hope Bella can hold on till the Cullens can get to her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I hope Bella can hold on till the Cullens can get to her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

WOW!!! This is getting really really interesting. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am so glad that Bella really did get to talk to Carlisle. Can't wait to see what else is going to happen.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The Cullens to the rescue!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

James scares me. Can't wait to find out more and more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I feel sorry for Alice and for Jasper. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Aro scares me.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So glad that James is gone.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

This is very interesting. Can't wait to read the rest.



Author's Response:

So glad you are liking it.  More next week, and weekly after that!

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

That was very mean to leave us with a cliffie!!!! We need no foreplay...we need lemons, lots and lots of lemons. Come on girls, you can do it!!!!!!

 

 



Author's Response:

It was.  But it doesn't mean we don't love you! And don't worry, this is me afterall (RB75) - there WILL be lemons.  *mwaha*

Thanks for the encouragement and for reading!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

I am glad to see that Bella does regret her actions back in high school. At least she has grown up and does her own thing now. Can't wait for the meeting.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she's suffered just as much as Edward has.  Maturity is a beautiful thing!

They meet next chapter!

Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

I like how you wrote this chapter. Very believeable. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances

WOW!!!! Loved that they both have told each other how they felt. Can't wait to the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

The is chapter was HOT HOT HOT!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

The was another HOT HOT HOT chapter. GREAT JOB with your lemons. MORE AND MORE!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

Enjoyed reading this chapter. Glad they finally got together.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the feedback!  Thanks for reading!!!  :D

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106345
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OH MY GOSH!!!! Edward and Bella have been through sooooo much stuff. When are they ever going to catch a break. PLEASE let everything work out alright.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW that was quick for Bella and Edward. Not even 24-hours. Way to go Bella!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more. I love me some Daddy Edward.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OH MY GOSH!!!!! THAT WAS WONDERFUL!!!!!!!

I love this story.

Does Alice know what is going on?????? Can't wait for you to update. PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WOW!!!! This chapter was VERY moving. I loved it. You did a great job writing it. I am soooo falling in love with this story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thank you for updating so quickly. I am so in love with your story. This story line is wonderful. You are doing an amazing job writing it. I am sooo into this.

I love how you have written Edward and Bella's feelings for each other. Please don't let Bella sleep with Jake. What is Kate up to??? Does she want Emma back?? I hope not.

BOY, I can't wait for another update. Please don't leave us hanging for to long.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I AM SOOOO GLAD THAT YOU DID NOT LET BELLA HAVE SEX WITH JAKE!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for explaining the history with Jake, Leah and Bella. And also the history of Kate and her drug abuse. Poor Emma.

Loved the phone sex with Edward and Bella.

Edward is so much trouble with Bella. I can't wait to see how he handles this.

I am really worried about Edward and Bella's relationship. Long distance relationships are always hard but when you throw all of these factors in, it makes it really HARD.

I will be waiting patenicely (yeah, right) for your next update. lol. Please hurry.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am sooooo glad that Jasper talked to Bella and she FINALLY called Edward. I am also glad that she did not freak out when Kate answered his phone. LOVE Emma. I am so glad that she is letting Bella do things for her. Was Bella telling Emma the  truth about the name for her baby??? WOW!! Can't wait for more and more and more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am behind on my revewing and have already sent my review for the next chapter. OOPS!!!! I am so much in love with your story. You are doing an amazing job writing it. I love everything about it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am so falling in love with this story. I love Bella with Emma. Love a drunk Bella. HaHa!!! Great job with the lemons. I just wish that Jake could have seen Bella and Edward after their declaration of their relationship. I would have loved to read that Bella rubbed it in Jake's face.lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

SOOOOOO LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! I am excited that you are updating so quickly. Loveing it. I can not believe that Kate would do that....YES I CAN!!! With Edward out of town and telling her things like she will only see Emma when he says and that she has not right...there is no telling what Kate will do. I am worried.

I am glad that Edward and Bella do not have to hide anymore.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMFG!!!!!! I knew that something was going to happen when Kate took the money. When I read that Edward dropped Emma off and daycare and Rose was to pick her up I felt like Kate was going to try and take her BUT I never thought she would get away with it. I thought maybe Rose would show up at the last minute or the people at the daycare would call Edward to verify that Kate could pick her up and then the police would get called because Kate made a scene.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am so happy that Bella went out to Edward. This has to be sooooo hard on Edward. He has never been away from Emma this long. I definately do not like Kate. She lost her chance with me.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am soooo glad that Emma is back iwth Edward.

I can't believe that Kate got away with keeping her that long. I just knew that Kate would have screwed up before then. I hope Kate never gets anywhere close to Emma again.

My heart broke for Edward when Emma said she did not want to talk to him. That had to have killed him. But I am soooo glad that things did work out once Edward got to see Emma and talk to her face to face.

I can't not wait for your next chapter. You have done a wonderful job writing this story. I loved your Daddyward!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I feel sorry for Bella and for Emma. Emma has been brianwashed that Bella is BAD. Poor Bella. Her hormones are all out of wack because of the baby and then to have to deal with Emma's outbusrt. THat is awful. I also feel sorry for Edward. He is caught in the middle. They have a lot to work out.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella and Edward are really in a hard place right now. I feel really sorry for them. But for the most part, they seem to be handling it pretty good.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I did not have a good feeling when I was reading this chapter. I am scared.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella is getting herself in deep trouble. I hope Edward can pull her out before it is to late.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Glad Bella is getting help and that Emma is coming around. GREAT GREAT job with this story. Can't wait to see where they are in the future.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123471
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Boy Tanya and Esme both are a piece of work.  Tanya I'm not surprised, but Esme, I definitely am. Does she not think Edward is lovable??? I just don't understand.  Loved that Bella had Edward's back when it came to the school  board. Also, loved the grocery store scene. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months

Wow, Esme must really have a problem with Bella even after her dad came and talked to her.  Front page news. I would definitely say the cat is out of the bag now. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Christmas Break - The Third Year

Who was in Bella's apartment and how did they get in?????