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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255212
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
What is Bella thinking???? She was soooo brave by hitting James. She really deserves a reward for that and then she goes and messes up. From rubbing her thighs together to coming back outside without the sweatshirt off and then pulling her shirt tight to show more of her nipples. I am sure that NOW she will not be getting a release. I was surprised that Bella did not freak out from Edward spanking her. To me that would have just brought back more awful memories of James abusing her.
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
OMG!!!!! I laughed so hard while reading about Seth being stuck in Bessie. That was halirous!!!!!! Great doggy lemon. lol. I was laughing at Jake and Bella's interaction. I am glad that Edward was not mad at her for showing her assets. lol. I am glad that Edward and Leah had their talk. Glad Leah is starting to come around.
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!! Why in this chapter did you call James....Jimmy??? Just wondering. I loved the interaction with Edward and everyone. You are doing an awesome job writing this story. Thanks for sharing with us.
Author's Response:
i didn't call him jimmy ...jared did...lol...jared was talking about james as a kid he came to the beach and he would have been know as jimmy...just like my son is robert as a kid we called him robby...some called him bobby...it was a childhood nickname...that once they grow seems to vanish...except where someone is trying to be condasending (like jared was) and of course to a mother...she will always think of him as her baby and will use the nickname.....yes? does that make sense? it did to jared....lol...thanks for reading...lml
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
I am sooooo enjoying this story, I get so excited when I get an update. This money that James has been putting away, is it coming out of his personal account or his parents personal account or business???? I think that James is maybe renting an apartment. OR if it is coming out of his parents or their business account, I think it is just a way of getting money from his parents that he wants. Can not wait for your next update. I am so ready for Bella to really service her Master. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Author's Response:
Sorry that it took so long to get back to you, r/l is well...r/l...lets see if I can answer your questions. The money is James's and coming out of his personal account. I can only suppose that Maggie knows about the transferrs becasue she's either nosey or he offered up the information for some reason...thanks for reading ....I do have a teaser for you,
“Stay still Isabella” I told her placing my hand on her knee letting my fingers glide softly up the inside of her thigh. “You are to speak freely and tell me about this morning”
Bella’s brow furrowed, I thought that meant she was confused as to what I was talking about so I prompted “At breakfast, you gave Claire a bite of food, something happened, tell me about it”
“This one doesn’t know what you mean”
Bella was over thinking she needed to let go of her inhibitions and tell me what was at the root of her reaction. My fingers drifted over her outer lips while I tried to coax the answer from her “Picture it in your head, the fork coming out of Claire’s mouth…”
“She did what your girl said”
“Yes she did and what did that do to you?’ I asked while my fingers became more insistent in their movements.
Bella whimpered opening her knees a little wider “It made your girl want to tell her to do something else”
“What would my girl have her do?”
She answered without thinking “She don’t know”
That might have been an honest answer, it’s not like Bella has had any training in being the top, hell she was just learning the roll of the bottom. But I wanted to make sure so my question became more direct. “Would you have Claire do something to you?”
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
I so loved this chapter. I loved that conversation that Vinny was having at the dinner table. That was too funny!!!!!! You are awesome at writing this story.
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
I am wondering if Esme will be wearing her heair in pigtails sometime during the vacation????? lol. Love what Bella wrote in her journal. She sure is coming along in he submission. Loving this story.
Author's Response:
Esme in pig-tails...LMAO .....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, until next time...lml
Date: 08 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
Edward handled Bella's slip of the tongue very well. I can not believe that Bella tricked Edward. I wonder if he is going to teach her a lesson. lol. GREAT chapter. Love that Vinny just lets things slip out of his mouth. What is the old saying....Out of the mouths of babes!!!!! lol. i busted out laughing when he told on them. LOLOLOL!!!!
Author's Response:
Kids always spill...
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
I am glad that Edward set Jasper straight. I want to know why Bella was talking to Jane. What is gong on???? Does it have some thing to do with the club? Can't wait to find out. LOVE that Alice and Rose are going to take out Emmett.!!!!!!
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109
Was so excited to get this update. I am glad that Leah and Jacob finally got some. LOL!!!!!!!!! I still want to know where Caius gets information from. Can't wait to get to the bottom of that. I hate that Bella has feelings like she does toward Esme and Alice but I completely understands why she does. Maybe she needs to talk to her Master about that. I have a feeling that more is going to go wrong before it gets better. As always.....a wonderfull chapter and you have me wanting more and more and more.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
I busted out laughing at the end of this chapter. I love the girls getting back at Emmett that was funny. GREAT job with this whole story. Loved Edward putting Gina in her place.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it ...lml
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 (1st half)
I am sorry that you were effected by Irene. I hope all is well with you now. I have been praying for everyone that was effected by the storm.
I turst you with this story. It is your baby and you know where you it is going. Edward and Bella are both learning. It is definately a fine line there. I can see both Edward and Bella's POV. Can't wait to see what Bella is keeping from Edward.
GREAT GREAT JOB as usual. Can't wait for more. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you and the new chapter should be up in a few days...louise
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
This chapter was very emotional. The was also WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! GREAT GREAT job!!!!!! I am a little lost with the end of this chapter. Why did Bella say Rose's names?????
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter. I am so glad that Rose has Bella to lean on. Glad they have each other. I busted out laughing when Bella took Emmett down. That was GREAT!!!!!!!! I can not wait for Esme's OT. I would love a Jasper and Alice OT, about everything!!!!! The longer the story the better to me. That just means We get to read it longer and longer. Keep going!!!!
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
OMG!!!!!!!! James really is a piece of work. I would have never guessed that. I am so proud of Charlie for the way he acted when he was recieving all the information and about Edward and Bella's relationship. I cant' wait for Bella's Master to have some time with her. She really does need her Master right now.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
I do not think that Bella will appreciate being on "lockdown". She is not going to be happy....unless....Edward keeps her busy in the playroom!!!!!!!! I am a little scared of Karen. I want to know what is up with her. I do have a question. Jess said something that Bella gasped at she said that Karen "keeps blubbering about how it hurts to be touched and being afraid of the cage.” What in the world does that mean????? Can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response:
I'll give you a sneak peek intto Bella's mind (and the next chapter) ...going back to chapter 12. It was their 1st night in the playroom and Edward carried Bella to her bed and she had a dream...about James and the box...he used to put her in a box a cage...and Jess saying that karen is fearful to be touched and afraid of the cage...probably reminded Bella of those times along with clearly bringing home the fact that Karen was a 14 year old girl, who had to endure the same sick twisted actions that nearly drove her insane and still gives her nightmares....so now you have a sneak preview --- shhh...don't tell anyone...lol....louise
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
I think you did a wonderful job with this chapter. That was what I was expecting from Edward. Well, not all of it but some of it. I did not expect him cumming all over Bella but making her cum multiple times, yes. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I always love what you have planned and what Edward has plans.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
WOW, lots of information in this chapter. At least now we knoe what caius is up to. I can not believe that he thought Bella was Aro's daughter when she was clearly with Edward. That would be just wrong. Loving this story. You are doing a GREAT job.
Author's Response:
yeah ...kissing cousins....YUCK!! ...actually i liked Emmett's phrase "Boning your cousin" ...lol...he's so crass...lol ... thanks for reading ...louise
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
I am glad that Edward and Bella talked things out. I am loving this story so much.
Author's Response:
The frantic 'I need you' sex was needed but the they needed to talk it through too...
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
I think Officer Hawk really cares. Bella does have a valid point about not selling her house. Why does she not just rent it out. I am really wondering what is going to happen with James. Will he contact Bella???
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
Some how I missed reviewing this chapter. Edward is going to have a nervous break down and get gray hair if he does not quit worrying over Bella. I think Bella needs to win the bet. She deserves the Fruity Pebbles. Edward has enough control over her and other things in her life. She needs some sugary fun. Don't get me wrong. Edward is lots of sugary fun. lol.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96
Loved this chapter. Great job. What is Alice's problem?? I thought she liked Bella. Alice said something that makes my think that she is pregrant and that her hormones are out of whack and that is why she acted the way she did. Am I right????
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97
Ok, Alice is pregrant but I am like Edward. That does not give her the right to just be ugly. I have been pregrant 3 times and I was never like that. I know everyone is different but still. I know Alice is spoiled but someone needs to put her in her place. I think Carlisle should have a little talk with Alice. Loved the whole scene with Vinny. That was perious. Loving this story. As usual, I can not wait for more.
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
Ok, something is up with the internet. I am typing this review for the third time.
I am glad that Edward had it out with Alice. I had never thought of Esme/Alice and Bella/Jane connection before. DUAH!!!!!!! LOVED LOVED LOVED their playtime. I did think that Edward some a little hard at time. Sometimes he seemed very controling. I did not like that he brought up their bet. That was done on Edward/Bella time. That was done in fun. That is something a couple does when they are dating. The tampon issue would not have been an issue for me, I have been married 25 years, so anything goes. lol. I really hope that James did not share Bella with someone and her not know it. I hope he did not drug her and let that happen. That would be awful. Can't wait for your next update. Loving this story.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough
I hope Bella can keep her cock block plan going. I think Edward deserves to lose. I am sorry but he just seems to smug sometimes.
I am thinking that her babysitter is what's his name. Oh crap, I can't think. Her serves Daddy. He got a spanking at the club/party.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101
LOVED this chapter. Love Douggie!!!!!!!! I can not believe that Bella did not win the bet. Edward is soooooo LUCKY!!!!!!!!! He was thinking that he was losing. He needs to let her have her fruity Pebbles for the fablous blow job.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102
I still wanted Bella to win the bet. Glad that whole teen marriage thing is been cleared up. I am dieing to know what is up with James. What in the world is he thinking trying to impregnant teenager girls???? I can not believe that Edward is ok with taking them to the club. Can't wait to find out what his conditions are. Had to laugh at Bella thinking about what Leah is going to do when she finds out that Seth wants to go to the club. lol Thanks for the update. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and that you have completely recovered from Sandy. Happy New Year!!!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Diamond in the Rough
OMGosh!!!!!!! I am LOVING this chapter. Bella is just getting in trouble everytime she turns around this night at the club. LOL!!!!!!! What is the deal with Tanya and Cauis?? Will Elenazr tell Edward what he found out from Tanya???? I love that Demtri gave Bella two boxes of Fruity Pebbles. I just hate that she has to wait 2 months. I am wondering what Claire and Quil think about what all is going on.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104
OMGosh!!!!! I had to laugh at Douggie!!!!!! I hope everything is fine with Bella and Douggie. Hope they are not mad at each other.
I am glad that Bella is still getting her Fruitty Pebbles!!!!! Even after she got in trouble for not listening and not responding quickly enough.
Can't wait to see/read about Edward's reaction to her Fruity Pebbles!!!!! LOL!!!!!
I can't wait for the next update. As always I love this story. I don't know why people are fusing that this story is to long. As long as you are updating and the storyline is good....girl....you write it as long as you like. I will be here with you.
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105
What in the world is going on with Caius????? Can not wait to find out. What was meant by his father's dirty little secrect. I hope James gets his hands on Tanya. I know that is wrong but she needs to be put in her place.
Love that Bella got her Fruity Pebbles!!!! Loved the trick that she played on Edward!!!! lol
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Diamond in the Rough
Another great chapter!!!!!! I like a drunk Bella. She is funny. I am glad that Edward was not mad at Bella. What does he think about Bella letting Claire read her journal???? In the author note at the bottom You are talking about Paul. I did not read any of that in this chapter. Am I missing something some where???
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107
Ok, in this version or chapter I see the part that you are talking about with Paul. It must have been left out of the version or chapter that I pulled up and read. I know you had problems with format.
Author's Response:
I did, but only on the coffee shop site...and when I posted the firts chapter 107, somehow 106 got deleted...lol...it was all messed up and I was just glad, the same way you told me about the messed up chapter, one of the other readers told me about the missing one...so thanks again...LouiseLouise
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106
Some how I missed reviewing this chapter. LOVED it as usual. Love me some Douggie. Like that the girls are so comfortable with each other.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108
Wow!!!! Three years!!!!! This is one awesome story. I am very thankful that you are sharing it with us. Thank you!!!!!!!
Why did Bella stiffen when Quil mentioned his grandfather?
I know Edward pulled the Dom card but I was ok with that. Bella knew what he was doing and she allowed it. She could have stood her ground like she did with the secrect with Pappy. Glad that she had a good time riding the bikes.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110
What is the deal with Bella's college??? I am thinking that Phil's will paid for Bella's schooling and was disgused as the scholarship for some reason. I am also thinking that when Edward looks into it, (which we all know he will), he will find something to tie Cauis to Phil and then to Bella. I just want to know why Alice was ok with being close friends with Bella during college and at the beginning of Edward and hers relationship but is not now. I know she knows about Edward/Bella's Dom/sub realationship and she does not like it but that is no reason for her to act like a bitch. And what is the deal with Alice/Jasper not wanting everyone to know about her pregnancy? Loving this story. As for me, I do not care how many more chapters there are in this story. I hope there are a LOT more chapters. I am not ready for this story to end. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 24 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I want you to know that you are missed. PLEASE come back and finish this amazing story. Your readers miss you and your story.
Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14810
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: In My Life
Love his Mother's day breakfasts.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Best Friend
I had to come check out your outakes. I enjoyed reading the main story.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: The Letter : EPOV
Bless Edward's heart.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Save Me San Francisco
Glad they had are good vacation
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: This Is Halloween
Love reading these outtakes
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Broken : EmPOV
Thanks for doing Emmett's POV.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
Poor Jack. He has been through so much
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV
Enjoyed reading Edward's POV. Thanks
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 10: In The End : VictoriaPOV
Well at least she tried to do something nice for Jack in the end.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
Love this one!!!!! So Bella and Edward ended up with 3 children.
Thank you to Mekek18 for the great banner
Entry for the Twi-Girl Revolutions "Under Her Thumb" Challenge. Follow Edward as he auditions and becomes the sub of a strict Domme. Will it just be a professional relationship or will it become more? BDSM. Mature.ExB
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39360 Read Count: 19800
Date: 09 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Suck Like You Mean It
Oh my!!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The End?
Ok, I have a question. In one of the chapters you wrote that Edward and Rose were brother and sister but did not share the same blood. What did you mean by that?
Date: 06 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Going Old School
Oh wow. Bella is having feelings for Edward and it is scaring her. That is my theory.
Date: 06 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Enlisting of a Rose
Lol. Edward's family is hilarious!!!!!!! Is Dizzy Izzy Bella??????
Date: 06 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Enlisting of a Rose
Lol. Edward's family is hilarious!!!!!!! Is Dizzy Izzy Bella??????
Date: 06 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Bella also wants a regular relationship with Edward.
Date: 06 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Lol!!!!!! Oh my gosh!!!!!! Poor Edward.
Date: 05 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar
Love your long chapters. That was intense.
Date: 30 May 2021 Title: Chapter 1: With Flying Colors
Hot hot hot!!!
Date: 30 May 2021 Title: Chapter 1: With Flying Colors
Hot hot hot!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
Hot hot hot
Date: 18 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Bedroom Confessions
Hot hot hot. Is this the end of the story??????
Date: 14 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Lesson Learnt
Wow, 2 weeks without sex. That is cruel.
Date: 15 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Pussy Whipped
Oh my, outside sex on the balcony!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Crossing Lines
I am glad that Edward did not let Bella punish him. They were not in a scene. She was definitely crossing the line.
Date: 14 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Welcome To The Family
Love how easy Bella is handling Esme.
Date: 14 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - A Little Insight
I don't blame Bella for being upset with Edward being so late. Domme or girlfriend, I would be pissed. He should have called her.
Date: 12 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Devil In Disguise
Love what Bella did!!!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Insatiable
Hot hot hot chapter!!!!
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Contract
WOW!! Great job!!!! Very impressed!!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Aro's Recollections
I like your Aro. He seems loving and caring. Your Jane even seems nice. Thanks for letting us get a glimpes into his mind.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Diamond Extra's
Double penetration Yes – 4????? Did James share her with someone???? I can't wait to find out more about Bella's past with James. He is one sick dude.
Author's Response:
you don't need two men for double pen... dildos do the job...lol...remeber she did alot of research and would fantasize...she knows what makes her feel....full...lol in more ways then one....thanks for reading and leaving a comment...lml
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Chat With Edward
Very interestng chapter. I enjoyed the questions. I really can not wait for you to update the story. Please SOON!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Aww...I'm sorry ...I update Monday and Thursdays ....i feel your pain, I hate when I really enjoy a story and have to wait for updates...lml
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
Very well said!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks ...
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)
WOW!!!!!! That was DEEP!!!!! Bella really really feels bad for what she did.
Author's Response:
She does feel bad, and it is her nature to take the blame all on herself...
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: B & E answer your questions
Loved the interview. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: 1000th review OT
Oh you are soooo sneaky. No wonder Emmett didn't say anything to Bella or to Edward the next morning. He was getting his on kink. He probably didn't even hear Edward and Bella. GREAT JOB!!!!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Janes OT
OMG!!!!!! I loved this chapter. I do not know why some people have problems with Jane talking in the 3rd person. I think it is neat. I think you do a good job writing Jane. Heck, you do a good job writing the whole story. I had to go look at your pictures to see what you invision what Aro and Jane looked like. I for some reason thought that Aro was an older man. When you wrote that he and Jane stayed up till 4 in the morning I thought....WOW!!! But the picture of Aro, he is not old at all. In fact, he is HOT!!!!!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: An interview with Aro & Jane
I love this chapter. GREAT JOB with the interview. LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!!!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Beach Ball
Can not wait to see what Edward does to Bella. lol. Thanks for giving us Edward's POV of this.
Author's Response:
lol..thanks for reading
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Jasper's OT
This is GREAT !!!!! Love the information on Jasper and Alice. Thanks for sharing with us. So, they are not into BDSM but they do do a little kink!!!!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Esme's OT
I still love Esme. She is and will always be a Mama Bear. I am just glad that she saw the error of her ways. lol. I hope that she can mend her relationship with Aro and Jane. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Charlie's Surprise Visit
Love Charlie's POV. I really enjoyed reading what Charlie has been thinking. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Jessica's Dilemma - read after chapter 79
Thanks for sharing Jess with us. She really is so dumb. She really had no clue.
Author's Response:
She really is dumb, Edward wasn't lying...lol...
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Early Morning Chat
REALLY!!!!!! Some of your readers thought that Edward raped Bella!!!! WOW!!!! That did not even cross my mind. I am just blown away with that. I think you did an excellent job with that chapter. As you said, it gives a realistic look into a Dom/sub interacting. Loved the interview.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Ladies Luncheon
Glad that Esme and Bella are getting along. I think Esme is nice but she just has a hard time accepting what Edward/Bella and Aro/Jane have. She just does not understand it. But I think she is trying to.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland
I can not believe that Alice is blaming this preganancey on Bella, REALLY!!!!!!! I am sorry, but I think that Alice is a little snob. Alice is never wrong, it is always someone else's fault. I wish someone would open her eyes to the way she is acting. I was hoping that when Edward and she talked that she would see what she was doing. I hope someone gets through to her.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Daddy's boy
That was interesting. I am glad that Riley like Bella.
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom
I loved this chapter. I am so glad that they finally admitted their feelings to each other. Now, when will Bella learn that he is a vampire. And I forgot to ask. when she was at LaPush, did Jake and them smell Edward on her???
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas
I like Edward's punishment. lol. Loved the lemons!!!! Can't wait to see what Jasper finds out.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
OMGosh!!!!!! Loving this story. Who is the vampire at this party???? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. You are doing a GREAT job with this story. I can not wait to find out what has happened to Bella in her past, what has happened to Charlie, and why Edward can hear some of her thoughts and can't hear all of them. What happened the time that they were communcating through their thoughts???????? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Found your story over on fanfiction. Read and left reviews there. I read over here too, so I decided to put you on alert here and start reading you on this site. I am copying my reviews for this story and leaving here too, so your review count will go up.
Loving this story.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Ok, I have to ask...Can Edward read Bella's mind in your story. At times it seems like he can and then there are times that him seems like he can't. Enjoyed reading this chapter. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
You don't have to answer this question now. This is my review from fanfiction. You have already answered. Thank you.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I am confused. When did Bella disobey Edward? Was it when he told her to cum the first time and she wanted him to be please first? I am so glad that Edward did not drain her. Off to read the next chapter. I am also glad that Edward went to Bella and asked if he could sleep with her. When is Edward going to realize that he is falling in love with her?
Author's Response:
sorry if i didn't answer this one on ff. yes you are correct it was when she didn't cum right away. by now you have read that he does have more than regular feelings for her. so that is answered.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
Some how I missed reviewing this chapter over on fanfiction. But loved this chapter. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!Very much liked the playing in the playroom.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom
Was Bella just upset in the truck because the truck had died on her or did something happen at LaPush? Who was the vampire in Bella's dream? What happened to Charlie? Did one of the Cullen clan kill him?
Author's Response:
She was more upset that edward would be mad at her. she didn't want him to send her away. can't tell you yet who the vampires are but i hope you like the surprise that is coming. no one ever saw charlie again. no the cullen's didn't slip. no worries!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!
6. Who are Max and Jonathan? You do not have to answer that question. You have already answered it for me over one fanfiction. Thanks
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served
7. What the heck are Esme, Carmen and Tanya up to. Can't wait to find out. So glad that I don't have to wait for an update, I can go on to the next chapter now.Yeah me!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer
8. Ok, the first part of this chapter was hard to sallow. I just don't see Esme doing what she did. Especial after what she went through in her human life. That was why she was against Edward's lifestyle to start with. BUT I do understand that Tanya can be manipulating. Glad that Bella was there for Edward. LOVED his family are the pleasure class.
Author's Response:
i have always felt succubus have a power of persuesion and she used it on carmen and Esme. They will slowly rebuild her relationship with edward. that is why she didn't ask for forgiveness just an apology.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology
I am caught up on this site for reviewing this story. Glad you are here. I can't wait for your next update. GREAT job writing it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! you rock!
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
What is going on with Bella? Why did she refer to "DRAINING" the teacher?
Author's Response:
you are close but it wasn't bella saying it. thats a hint. I hope you guess it no one has. nails233
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
DOES BELLA EVER GET TO EXPLAIN WHY SHE WAS IN LA PUSH AND WHO IT WAS THAT SHE WAS VISITING?
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
OMG!!!!! I CAN NOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT EDWARD DOES TO HER IN THE NEW PLAYROOM. CAN NOT WAIT TO FIND OUT MORE ABOUT BELLA.
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Thanks for giving us Bella's POV on this. So, Jake and the other guys do not know who Bella's Master is. That is interesting. Can't wait for more.