Reviews by mariskaatje
Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

i'm sorry but she shouldnt forgive him. I have reread the first few chapters of this story and i'm still not happy with the fact that she forgave him NY so easily. She is a swan for god sake she should put a bullet in between the eyes of vicky for her part in ny and for her disrespect when they met again and him aaargh the way he said he fucked others while thinking of her is just sick and than saying it to her as if it is a good thing.Also he was allowed others but he demanded to know if he was the only one talking about double standards. And she is the daughter of a mob boss not a pathetic little girl, but not once did I recognisez a mob boss daughter in her actions the first chapters where is her dignity. I would have liked if she fought him harder and stood more up for herself. So I really hope she does it now. So Go Bella Go

Author's Response:

Yeah, sometimes even the toughest girl will bend and forgive without batting an eyelash when it comes to love. I can totally understand your stand for her not to forgive him, though.

Maybe she'll do just that. hehehe

Summary:

 

Heartbroken when Tanya told him she cheated on him with his best friend after he proposed to her, Edward vowed to give up on love and women. Bella Swan, they shy freshman at the Univ of Wash, catches his eye.  He fights to stay away, but can he? Love can heal many wounds if you give it a chance.  Travel with Edward to see if he gives into temptation while dealing with his tainted past.

 

Rated NC-17 for language, dark themes, adult content and future lemons! Enjoy

Stephanie Meyers owns everything Twilight, but I own the plot! This is my first story I hope you all like it!!

There is now a group site for my story on facebook.  If you want to keep with with updates and fellow groupies, feel free to come find me... ;)

http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_152421278164462&ap=1

The first few chapters were reviewed by the Project Team Beta, Betas - thank you to them for their assistance.  But I am very proud and excited to have Woodlily and itsange helping me with revisions and future chapters.....THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146797 Read Count: 15151
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2015
Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17-Baby?What do you mean baby?

please don't let the baby be his



Author's Response:

Well see...I don't wan to give anything away, but stay tuned....it's about to get intense! Thanks for sticking with me this far!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When The Twilight Never Comes

Could it be that some things are just meant to be?

Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.

Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.

Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.

So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.

Some things even Alice can't predict.

WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 30772
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Apr 2012
Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Doubts

i really like this chapter, but i still hope you let bella get more experiences before she meets edward. He isn't pure in this story so he doesn't deserve to get a pure bella in my opinion. I really can't stand it, but hey thats maybe just me, but please indulge me. Than I can see them more as equals.



Author's Response:

I understand your feelings, but there are two problems with obliging to your request:

1. I can't see Bella having sex with Jacob, or Mike, or Tyler in this story. I really can't see a way for me to make her "less pure." Honestly, I think I would be stoned to death if I let her have one of them, hehe.

2. This story is already finished. The only reason I'm delaying in posting it is because I'm having it betad to make sure it looks readable. I've actually already have the outline for the sequel for this story and am about to start writing it.

Thank you for reading and reviewind, and I hope that you'll stick around to see how this story ends :)
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Answers

B and E should have equal footing but E is a manwhore here and she is a timid virgin  girl I really hope you do something abou that i'm really sick of stories where Bella is a mousy insignificant virgin girl who let everubody walk over her and make decisions for her i really hope she has a backbone here



Author's Response:

I know that they are not on equal ground in terms of expirience, but Bella isn't a doormat here (at least I hope not! lol. I certainally didn't write her like that).

She has a little breakdown toward the end, but she is strong and she won't let anyone walk all over her.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir.  Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.

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PretendersToTheThrone2

Banner by Rosalynn


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 86574
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i'm sorry burt why tomorrow and why doesn't she question emmet further about Jacob, is she so stupid that she doesn't she what jacob is doing. She should have given him a good tong lashing with what he said about the king cinsidering the name of the baby, the king is still higher in rank than Jacob she should stand more behind her man than she does now

Buried In Words by Gnomea Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

OOC. He wanted her to heal him. She needed him to draw strength from. The only problem was, they couldn't give what the other needed. E/B. All human.    

Banner by RachelxMichelle (rxmbanners)

 

***This story contains sensitive issues like sex, drugs, death and mental problems. Please be warned. If you don't like, just walk away.

You should be of legal age to read. Just sayin'.


 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28437 Read Count: 1716
[Report This] Published: 16 Jan 2012 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

she should give him the cold shoulder and let him work for it that's the second time she sees him with a different girl in a very intimate setting the first time she set on his lap while he spottet Bella. If he wanted Bella so bad he should have put the girl away or something and now he shouls have chased after her if the girl means nothing to him. It seems to me he just strings her along, she should let him work for it and he should let her see what she means to him or how bad he wants her, not that when he sees her in public he acts like he doesn't know her. I hope she stays strong i really do!

 



Author's Response:

We will soon have an EPOV, so you can see how his mind works. Bella is a strong girl; she definitely can handle him.

Thanks. 

Sinful by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

As the end times approach the battle for souls on earth begins, so many people have yet to choose sides.

 Heaven and Hell have opened the gates and let loose the best they have to offer, the gates closed and

nothing may re-enter until the battle is won, unless, that is, you perish.

Amazing banner by; My husband

Fantastic beta's js18 and RAH07890- who also Americanises this story

This story will contain lemons...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25453 Read Count: 12625
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2012 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Desecrating Heaven

i hope bella and jasper are angels from heaven at least bella i hope she isn't naive as they always make her out to be and is something spectaculair



Author's Response:

All will be revealed shortly,

I don't mind a naive Bella, (sometimes,) but not in this story. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

what the fuck....