Reviews by Sandraev1
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Wow they got married and evething. Thanks

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. I hope you'll check out my other stories as well. I also have an original novel "Blind Faith" available thru twcs ph and amazon which was published last year and a second novel coming out this summer. Darkness of Perfection is loosely based on TPW concept (without the graphic or incest).

Take care!

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Well they all truly needed therapy. I'm glad Bella was found herself again. Thanks

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Carlisle dead good residence. Let me go? Well I was not exactly expecting that.

Author's Response:

But really after everything she's been thru, can she trust herself and the decisions she makes? She needs a break to step back and come to terms with everything that's happened and what's been revealed about Carlisle watching her all these years.

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I'm scared.

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

Aww they love each other.

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

Aww Edward is so sweet, their getting married. I'm scared that their happiness won't last though.

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

Yeah Carlisle is sick psychopath. He's meaning of love is just wrong. I'm pretty sure seeing his dad kill someone infront of him had something to do with it.

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

Wow their definitely changing.

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

Bella could have totally left him, but she stayed. The Phoenix trip really help their relationship. Thanks

Author's Response:

It takes a truly strong, brave person to give someone like him another chance.

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Aww I loved that Edward cheered her on, when she was hitting the baseball as kid. I hope Edward can finally see Bella is happy when she is and individual not when someone make her choices for her. Thanks

Author's Response:

He's getting there slow but sure.

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

I'm so glad that they went to Arizona. Bella having that breakdown was good because Edward now knows what Bella truly feels. I don't now how Bella can get over what has happen to her. I guess she dosent want to live in fear and she wants to prove she can have a normal life. Hope is that last thing you loose. Thanks

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

I'm glad edward finally saw how wrong he was for abusing Bella. They're are going to start fresh know, I wonder what will happen when they go back to forks.

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Oh my goodness their finally being a real couple. Not Bella barbie and Carlisle's edward. Yay!

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

They've come so far. Bella choose to satay with him. Edward would have let her go. Their gonna make it!

Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

Esme is a very loving mother, I don't know how she lasted all this years with Carlisle. But like she said it was the love of het children that made her stay.

Author's Response:

There's a lot you'll do for your kids you'd never do otherwise.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Sandraev1 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Ok I've read the whole story and have not reviewed. First I want to thank you for the story which I liked very much. Your Edward was a little dense sometime but he found the right path in the end. I'm glad Bella finally got her HEA I bet it's even sweeter sine she really fought for it. 😃