Reviews by Teamedwardmom
Amelia's Eyes by PriscillaMoon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Amelia is a young artist living in the City. She was born with lavender eyes and ghostly pale skin. Since she was nine she's worn contacts in an attempt to appear more normal. But when she meets Young Jeremiah Carr he teaches her that beauty is not skin deep, and he happens to think she is beautiful just the way she is. Don’t be fooled, Jeremiah is no saint.  The wealthy playboy has been known to love them and leave them.  Will she be caught up in his game or can she play for keeps?  

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20924 Read Count: 1740
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 18 Mar 2015
Reviewer: Teamedwardmom Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow two in a row.  Both are very good can't wait to read the next one.

Running Scared by PriscillaMoon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
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Abbie has been on her own since she was 16, running away from her Stepfather and Stepbrothers.  Hiding in a big city with a new appearance and a new identity just wasn’t enough. Her new life is almost perfect, she has finally made it.  In the upcoming rendition of Cinderella (the ballet) she will be the Prima.  Everything is going great until he finds her.  The man from her past who threatens to destroy everything that she has worked so hard for. Will she stay and fight for the new life she has created or will she go, Running Scared and start anew.

Jason is a Bounty Hunter with his own rough past.  A bind date threatens to change his life for good.  She is beautiful, smart and funny.  But she has secrets, sure everyone has secrets but hers may threaten to destroy them both.

 


Categories: Suspense/Thriller
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16457 Read Count: 748
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 21 Mar 2015
Reviewer: Teamedwardmom Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Very good. There were a few jumps in the story, but it was an excellent plot.  The plot could have been expanded much more building up to the ending.