Reviews by rodeinti
Shape the Narrative by LaMomo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 156]
Summary:

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Sequel to “Correct the Narrative.” OlderWard, LawyerWard
After years of pining for Bella from afar, Edward finally confessed his feelings to her.
But between their age difference and busy careers—Bella’s impending MBA graduation, Edward’s academia at Cornell—will they be able to navigate all the challenges they face in their new relationship?

Follow their fast-paced romance as they shape their narrative.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Narrative Series
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67629 Read Count: 14441
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2022 Updated: 29 Aug 2023
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Date: 28 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Thank you for the update..well done.  until you post again

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Date: 28 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Thank you for the update..well done.  until you post again

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Date: 25 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Thank you for the update. Well done. Until you post again 

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Date: 25 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Thank you for the update. Well done. Until you post again 

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Date: 25 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Thank you for the update. Well done. Until you post again 

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Date: 25 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Thank you for the update. Well done. Until you post again 

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Date: 21 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Thank you for the update..I loved this chapter. Edward got to take Bella away & she is enjoying herself.  Well Done.. Until you post again

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Date: 13 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 10 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Thank you for the update..the witch is gone.  YAY!! until youi post again

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Date: 12 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Thank you for the update..well done. Bella will get her own space. Although I don't know for how long lol Like Edward said closer. I guess it's to soon to move in with him. until you post again

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Date: 15 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank you for the update..Well done..Things are progressing  nicely. Bella needs to tell him about  his friend That's not a friend at all. Until you post again 

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Date: 27 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Thank you for the update..She gotta go. I like that they're  taking out thed trash πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚until you post again

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Date: 11 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Thank you for the update..well done.  Rebitch is out.  YAY!!!..until you post again

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Date: 21 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Thank you for the update.  Well done, The fight is on. Until you post again 

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Date: 15 Dec 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thank you for the sequel I love the first story.  I'm happy they are on their first  date..until you post again..I can't wait to see how it all unfolds

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Date: 21 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank you for the update..I guess dinner went well. Edward  is already doing Cornell, can't wait to see what happens when he returns.  Let's hope Bella gets to taste Edward & Edward  Bella.   Until you post again 

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Date: 29 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aww they had a nice date..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again

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Date: 29 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aww they had a nice date..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again

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Date: 12 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

😁😍 awww thank you for the update....Bella said take me home....until you post again

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Date: 12 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

😁😍 awww thank you for the update....Bella said take me home....until you post again

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Date: 19 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thank you for the update..They are on their way..well done..until you post again 

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Date: 25 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you for the  update..well done..I'm happy they had a very nice night. I can't wait to see what happens next. Their conversation  should be interesting ..until you post again

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Date: 05 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update..well done until you post again

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Date: 05 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update..well done until you post again

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Date: 09 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh my. we knew that.  Thank you for the update..well done.  I wonder will Edward go after him and make his life miserable.  until you post again

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Date: 19 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you for the update..what does this mean for the couple..until you post again

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Date: 22 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

well thank you for the update..I see Alistar was trying to give Bella a heads up about new hire.  I hope she doesn't make things bad for Edward & Bella.  Maybe Edward has clout to not hire her.  Hopefully Bella can handle this women.  I'm sure Elliot has her back.  Until you post again.

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Date: 02 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update..well done..I don't  know Carlisle.  She is going to cause trouble..until you post again

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Date: 02 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update..well done..I don't  know Carlisle.  She is going to cause trouble..until you post again

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Date: 15 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Thank you for the update..Rebecca gotta go. Until you post again

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Date: 22 May 2023 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thank you for the update..well ok Bella, I quess she told Charlie.  LOL Until you post again

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Date: 04 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thank you for the update..well done..Bella got spunk. Her parents have a lot to think about. Until you post again

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Date: 29 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Thank you for the update..well done.  until you post again

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Date: 03 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Thank you for the update..I thought they already got rid of her.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  until you post again

 

Summary:

 

Sometimes ... you find love in the most interesting places. B/E AH/AU

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25878 Read Count: 9146
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2022 Updated: 06 Jan 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

Thank you for a lovely story.  I really enjoyed it

A Clueless Christmas by LaMomo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

 

CluelessC

 

BCG and the Emperor of Cheese are about to celebrate their 7th wedding anniversary, but there's one thing missing from their life lived in the fast lane.

 

Will Santa fill their stocking with the one gift they wish for?

 

A Business Class Girl futuretake.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9657 Read Count: 1104
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2022 Updated: 31 Dec 2022
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Cute story!! I really enjoyed it

Summary:

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At age 7, Edward Cullen witnesses his father's death. Traumatized and terrified, he blames himself and runs away.

Two minor league criminals stumble upon him when he wanders the streets at night, freezing and starving, and they decide to take him in. Years later, Edward is confronted by his past and must decide if he'll take his rightful place as the head of the Irish mob or remain with those who raised him.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Esme (non-slash), Edward/Carlisle (non-slash)
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102169 Read Count: 11555
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2023 Updated: 10 Apr 2023
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Date: 17 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Thank you for the update..well done..I wanted Carlise to realize it was his brother.  until you post again

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Date: 19 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Thank you for thr update..well done..I hope they find out before it's to late. Renee is going to train Bella, I hope Carlisle trains Edward now also.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  Until you post again

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Date: 23 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Thank you for the update..well done..sorry Edward had to see his father shot & killed.  maybe if he wouldn't have called his father's name Carlisle could have focused on his suroundings.. so sad until you post again

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Date: 26 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update..well done..Cauis can not get away with this.  I can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again

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Date: 30 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Thank you for the update..well done..unil you post again

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Date: 02 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next.  Until you post again

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Date: 12 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Thank you so much for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens  next..until you post again

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Date: 15 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see how it all unfolds...Will they be able to tell Esme & Charlie that Edward is alive?  I hope so, maybe not right away.  Until you post again

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Date: 22 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update.,well done..Bella has Edward  and will train him & his brtotherrs...until you post again

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Date: 22 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update.,well done..Bella has Edward  and will train him & his brtotherrs...until you post again

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Date: 27 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

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Date: 02 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Thank you for the update..well done.. I can't wait for the next chapter. until you post again

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Date: 06 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update..well done. I can't wait for the next chapter. Esme needs to see her son.  I can't wait for Caius to get his comeuppenced.  until you post again

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Date: 09 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Thank you for the update..well done.. I'm happy they had a talk, I'm sure if they survive bring Caius down they will be together like their Parents wanted.  until you post again

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Date: 13 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Thank you for the update..well done.. until you post again.  I can't wait to see what happens.  I hope Edward can see his Mom today also.

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Date: 16 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thank you for the update.  well done.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I hope esme gets to see her son soon. I hope the reunion is a good one.  until you post again

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Date: 20 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Thank you for the update.,well done. I'm happy Esme got to see her son. Until you post again

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Date: 23 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next.  until you post again

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Date: 30 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Thank you for thr update..well done.  Go Rosalie!!!. I can't wait to see what happens next.  Until you post again

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Date: 12 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

Thank you for a lovely story!! I'm happy all is well. Edward came home Esme & Rosalie are doing fine now I hope. Edward & Bella are getting married. Jasper & Emmett are still by his side.  Great story.  Well done. I so enjoyed it.  Thank you. I look forward to sequel

Better Man by mama4dukes Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella is stuck in a terrible relationship with a deceptive and manipulative man. When she is shown the reality of her situation, she decides to make a change. But will she will ever be able to find trust in a relationship again?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8968 Read Count: 376
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2023 Updated: 15 Feb 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well done.  Edward deserved everything he got. Bella enjoyed her life after 11 yrs of just serviving.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked the story. I agree Edward deserved what he ended up with. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. XOXO mama4dukes

Summary:

Mare

 

Edward is in need of a new Mare to continue growing his family. Will Bella be everything he needs? Will she be able to fulfill her role as the third Mare of one of the most important men in Chicago who already has two other mares and three children...or will she be driven away by an evil plan?    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41199 Read Count: 7189
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2023 Updated: 23 May 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

New reader to your story.  I can't believe these woman.  They know what the Mare program is about.  You have to share your man. Now you want to kill any new children that come along.  Edward needs to keep everyone seperate, these woman will kill each other.  until you post again



Author's Response:

Hello! Your review made me laugh πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜„ 😁 🀣 

Are you sure you don't read minds? How did you know what Edward is going to do after this? Just wait until you read the next chapter. 😏 thanks for reading and reviewing πŸ₯°

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Date: 13 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank God Edward is no fool. Until you post again..thank you gor your response

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Date: 20 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank you for the update..I'm not sure what's going on now.  I don't trust Jessica, I'm not so sure about Tanya, she seems genuinely concernd about Bella.  I don't know what to think of CARLISLE.  Does Bella come from money? She is renting out her family home does Carlisle want her inheritance? I'm confused unless there is someone else we don't know about yet.  If I was Bella I would leave also, not safe.  until you post again



Author's Response:

Hi thanks for your review. Tanya went through the same thing twice, she didn't leave because she had the twins. She's still hoping to get pregnant again. Do you think she will get pregnant successfully? The cullens are loaded Carlisle has no claim over Bella's inheritance. The house is paid for and it's hers. The apartment she lived in before its also hers she got it for cheap. The Cullen's (and any family that has Mares) have to sustain the Mares. Their children (if any) will be given an inheritance whenever the father dies or when they come of age (21). But every child has a trust fund. (Edward barely touched his so it belongs to Eduarda)

 

Bella technically hasn't fulfilled her contract. (Meaning she hasn't give birth to a legitimate child of Edward) That's what he means. But that will be explained in the next chapter. 

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Date: 24 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update.. I still think it's Jessica unless there is a mare we are unaware of.  I think the plan to keep Bella isolated was a good one. I think Jessica gave her something.  If not Tanya is the culprit and doing a very good job of throwing suspicion off of her.  until you post again.  well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you 😊 

More things will be revealed on the next. Chapter. Some people are just evil and conniving. 

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Date: 18 May 2023 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thank you for the updates well done.  Bella & Tanya are happily pregnant, Edward is ecstatic about his new babies coming.  Tanya threw a nice children's part for the twins, I don't know what kind of party Jessica threw for a 4yr old? what would she do for a 5yr old.  the party was way to extravagant for a 4yr old.  Even though everyone had a great time.  Jessica is to much!! I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan.  Eduarda really loves her daddy telling everyone who would listen her Mom killed her daddy.  Until you post again!!!  BRAVO

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Date: 23 May 2023 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thank you for a very interesting story.  well done. Jessica got what she deserved. I'm happy Eduarda was able to risa above all her mothers bad deeds.  BRAVO!!!

Summary:

Renesmee has been separated by her family as a baby and was left in the care of young man straight out of college who loved and treated her like his own. What happens years later when she finds out about her vampire abilities?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Renesmee/OC
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Humor, Mystery, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Supernatural, YA - High School
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130034 Read Count: 664
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2023 Updated: 21 Aug 2023
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Date: 06 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 28: Outtake 8 - Ch. 19

Thank you for the updates,.I love this story & outtakes. Well done  until you post again

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Date: 21 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 30: Outtake 10

Thank you. I love tis story & the out takes

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Date: 11 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 23: Outtake 3 - Chapter 8 & 9

Thank you for the outtakes.  Go Cody.  well done.  I'm happy Allie & Cody got together in the end.  I loved this story well done.

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Date: 14 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 24: Outtake 4

Thank you for this. Yes they were very sad and struggling to make it.  well done. until the next outtake

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Date: 05 May 2023 Title: Chapter 8: What Is Happening?

New reader to your story and I love it.  I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 08 May 2023 Title: Chapter 10: Signs Part 2

Thank you for the updates.  well done..I'm so proud of Cody for  taking care of his daughter.  I'm happy for Allie & Cody I hope it works out for them.  The girls are best friends.  I hope the Cullens find them soon.  Maybe they will go back to where they left Nessie or smell her in the woods.  I hope Alice see's her soon.  very good story.  until you post again

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Date: 18 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 25: Outtake 5

Thank you for the update..well done..Poor Jacob didn't recognize Nessie not even her name, but she looked familar.  until you post again.  I think you should do a sequel

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Date: 18 May 2023 Title: Chapter 12: Miscommunication

Thank you for the update..Cody is finally happy with Allie his crush & apparently Cody was Allie crush.  who knew. lol  I hope thing progress with them.  Until you post agin.

 

PS waiting patienly for the Cullens.  I hope Alice see's that Nessie is alright and soon she will meet her family again soon.  Well done

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Date: 22 May 2023 Title: Chapter 13: Closer

Thank you for the update.. We need the Cullens to come & get Nessie & help Cody & the crew.  Well done..Until you post again

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Date: 04 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 16: A Nightmare Becomes A Nightmare

Thank you for the update  well done. Thank God the Cullens & Jacob made it to Cody  just a little late.πŸ™πŸ˜’I want to know who called the school? I hope they find her before they can run any test on her. I'm so happy Cody documented  Jessie life. Sorry Jake didn't recognise  her or feel the pull. I can't wait to see what happens next. I so love your story.Thank you.

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 17: For Her

Thank you for the update..well done.  You gotta love Jasper.  I hope they find Nessie & she is unharmed.  You go scooter you find Nessie. until you post again

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Date: 12 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 18: Decisions

Thank you for that update..well done. What a wonderful chapter!! everyone is safe. I'm hopeing they will keep in touch with Cody & the rest of the crew. Thank you I love this story so much!!

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Date: 20 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 19: It's Never Goodbye

Thank you for the update..got me crying this early in the morning.  well done..I hope this is not the end. until you post again

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Date: 27 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

Thank you for a wonderful story!! I hope you make a sequel, I would love to see how Rose & Emmett take care of the baby. How Cody & Allie do with their baby. Before you know it Nessie & Jake will get married & have children.  You did a wonderful job with this story !! I loved it.  Well done



Author's Response:

Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for reading this story! It means a lot! I had more outtakes to be put up and as for the sequel, I don't know about that yet. I had ideas but can't exactly string them together if you get what I mean. But if I ever come up with a sequel, you will see it here!

~ FireRed21

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 21: Outtake 1

Thank you Cody & your friends

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Date: 03 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 22: Outtake 2

Thank you for the out take well done

Summary:

CURRENTLY ON HIATUS: Two shy souls run into each other literally, and their lives change irrevocably. Separated by over 2,500 miles, their thoughts never drift far from each other regardless of that one small moment in time. Will fate step in and restart that shock to their souls? An E/B love story with minimal angst, livestock, farms, college, life, and citrus. No cheating!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28669 Read Count: 625
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2023 Updated: 12 Jan 2024
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2024 Title: Chapter 6: Author's Note

I wish you the best!! I will wait for your return

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Date: 01 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

New reader to your story!! I love it!! I can't wait to see what happens in their first year at college. Will there be drama? What will the parents say?I know Rose & Esme thought it would be nice for them to meet...well done..until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you! There will be a little bit of drama, because it wouldn't be a story without just a little bit thrown in here and there, but I promise no long term angst...I'm too sensitive for that :)

Parents know by now, but they haven't seen them together yet...that will be coming soon! 

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank you for the update..well done.  I'm so happy that they had time to themselves to explore & learn each other.  I wonder who the roomate is. I hope it's Alice.  I eally enjoyed the chapter!! until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you! We'll see... I promise I won't leave you hanging too long. I'm about 3/4 the way through writing Chapter 6 already. 

Edward and Sprite by ReasonToBe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

She's always been my little Sprite, but can I handle it after she becomes a little Nymph? Let's see what Edward does to control himself when his little Sprite becomes an adult. Rated NC-17 E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53560 Read Count: 2870
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2023 Updated: 03 Jun 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2023 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

New reader to your story.  Well done!! Great story!!

Can Love Survive All by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, but things are not the same as the events in 'New Moon' because Bella learns the truth as to why they left thanks to Alice, but in an effort to find them she gets attacked by Laurant, but then saved by the wolves only this time they were too late to stop Laurant from biting her and they let her turn into a vampire.

She ends up being forced to leave Forks for 24 years and when she gets back events happen that means that her path crosses with the Cullen's again...

Can the love between Bella and Edward survive him leaving her and everything she has been through since they left that wouldn't have happened if they didn't leave?


Categories: Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50929 Read Count: 1558
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2023 Updated: 01 Nov 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Graduation, Fighting newborns and the Volturi

Thank you for the update..well done. I don't like that Bella made a deal with Aro though..until you post again



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I promise there is a reason for her deal and Bella in my story is not meek and mild and sometimes we all have to go through storms to protect the ones we care about, but I promise storms wont stay around for too long

Summary:

doubleDeceit

The Swans and the Blacks have affluent companies. They want their companies to merge by marrying their only children Isabella and Jacob. Isabella and Jacob marry, but everything is not what it seems. What could be the reason? And what is Dr. Edward Cullen's role in this whole situation?

 

WARNING:*Do Not Read If You're a Jacob Lover!There's cheating & violence* EXB HEA


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48132 Read Count: 1751
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2023 Updated: 10 Mar 2024
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2024 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: California Pt.3

Thank you for the updates.  well done.  What happen to Edwards son? Why is Dr. Lee haressing Bella? I'm sure Dr. Lee & Jacob are in cahoots with one another.  Why would Bella listen to her in the first place?  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Gomez & Morticia

Thank you for the update...I hope she is pregnang with Edwards baby not Jakes.  We will have to wait and see what Dr. Cullen says.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2023 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Two Peas in a Pod

Thank you for the update, what could have happened? Did Jake do something to her?  I'm sure he was in cohoots with the doctor giving Bella the wrong meds.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  well done.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Aftermath

Thank you for the updates..well done.. What will happen to Jacob this needs to be addressed.  until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:Jacob & Bella

New reader to your story.  I want t know what kind of pills was jacob giving Bella.  I hope she can still have children, they don't have to be Jakes.  Until you post again



Author's Response:

Hello! Let's see what happens on the next chapter. Thanks for reading πŸ“š πŸ˜€ 

A Sympathetic Ear by hmerdan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

When you lose a loved one, it's always handy to have a caring neighbour to lean on. - 2023 Bodice Rippers' Souls of Different Ages Award


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4477 Read Count: 293
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2023 Updated: 25 Aug 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you that was cute. Mike & Jake didn't stand a chance. lol

Summary:

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TFN Badass Babes Contest Entry. Edward Masen has his first day at a natural habitat reserve in Nigeria, where his job includes studying the development of a pride of lions and noting how many cubs they produce on an average. However, in order to get as close to the lions as he needs, he needs to convince their leader he is there to help. Judge's Choice and 3rd in the Judges Votes


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7478 Read Count: 129
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2023 Updated: 21 Oct 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Leader of the Pride

Thank you for a wonderful story.  I would like to know if the got revenge on the poachers.  well done.  Bravo!!!!

Lost Swan by Leigh Warner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Bella Swan is kidnapped at a young age and raised by her abductor who she only knows as The Man. What happens when she leaves to find food?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40666 Read Count: 636
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2023 Updated: 03 Dec 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

New reader to your story!! Well done!  I 'm really enjoying it.  I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.    Until you post again

Dancing Men by yagalinus0420 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: I know what you are thinking and you are completely right about that 100%... we are glorified chubby chasers. Based on the article.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3118 Read Count: 113
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2023 Updated: 12 Nov 2023
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you new reader to your story.  I think it might be interesting to see how it all unfolds.  until you post again

Summary:

RNFSG


Summary:  I was sent packin' after the fiasco that was Bella's 18th Birthday. Edward almost drained her, but I got the blame! I was accused of pushing my bloodlust onto him. Oh, they all believed him, all except two! (Bella/Jasper)


DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32922 Read Count: 2354
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2024 Updated: 04 May 2024
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Right

new reader to your story.  very interesting.  I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.

Summary:

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A guy trying to prove himself in the big city goes to the same bar every weeknight for one reason, and one reason alone…her. After pining for months, something sets him into motion to do what he’s wanted to do since he’s set eyes on her. Will she accept him into her life, or will she reject him?

A girl who grew up in the country wants a piece of the big city, so every weeknight she drives up and works in a famous Memphis bar. She felt like she got what she wanted, so she was about to quit…until he walked in. He’s come in every night she works for months, but besides sweet waves, blushing smiles, and sneaky glances there is nothing, until that night. Is it just him being sweet or is it the start of something new? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15681 Read Count: 699
[Report This] Published: 18 Jan 2024 Updated: 12 Feb 2024
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: What Is This Feeling?

Thank you for the update..well done.  until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Excitement

Thank you for the update..well done.  I'm happy for them . things seem to be progressing nicely.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Talk

Thank you for the update..well done.. I can't wait for Saturday eight lol until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Talk

new reader to you story!! I love it!! I can't wait to see how it al unfolds.  Until you post again

Summary:

Summary: Edward hadn't given much thought to having a family of his own, but when a tragedy struck, he stepped up for her. Being someone's world is hard when you're used to life on your own, but help can come from unlikely places. The question is, can love follow, or is that someone else's story?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6011 Read Count: 198
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2024 Updated: 30 Mar 2024
Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for a wonderful story.  Well done.  I really enjoyed it!!