Wow things keep going from bad to worse. I only good thing that happened is Carmen is dead. At least I hope that was her & not a lookalike that was paid to do that. 

Yay! Things are looking up!

I hope she knows where Bella is. 

God I miss having energy to fuck like that. Hopefully I'll be back into shape by the summer & I can buy a two-piece instead of a one-piece bathing suit.

Not many chapters left, I'm sadden by that but I'm also excited to see how this story ends. 

Read you next time. 

Poor Angela, gonna miss her. Was it James, Alec or Ben? That's sad. I don't think Edward & Bella are going to get the chance to run. I think it's already too late to leave. 

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!! They had sex, they finally revealed their feelings for each other. 

Im glad Bella has permission to leave to the mansion but how is she going to get away from Alec completely? The only way I see is for Alec to get killed & Edward to take over. 

I'm glad he made Alec suffer before he shot him. Alec really needed to die, I'm not surprised he wasn't even sorry about all he had done. Yay! A proposal is coming!!! Happiness. 

SHIT!!!! That's some loyalty; all Edward had was ask them & they basically jumped at the opportunity. 

So if James is back in town then he should have Victoria with him right? I hope she's okay. Ask for Edward taking over & Alec getting Banished, very possible at this point in the story. Some will cheer, some will be happy or okay with it & some will be pissed; like Caius. Honestly if Alec isn't careful I could see him getting killed by either another family or even his own. He has caused a lot of trouble & it's only a matter of time before enough is enough or he just goes too far. 

So guess we'll get to hear what's up Edward's past that he's unaware of. Read ya Thursday. 

Aww man I hate cliff hangers. 

Where the hell was Edward? Did he run out of cigarettes? 

I really hope that Alec dies

& after this Jacob too or at least injured enough that he never messes with Edward and/or Bella again. 

I hope they can be together. I hope I get to read the conversation/confrontation that Aro has with Alec. Alec needs to die. 

Aww this is so sweet!!!!!!

But it's dangerous, I'm glad Alec doesn't know where they are & I hope he he never finds out either. 

But still question remains, what are they going to do when they get back & have to face reality. Also what if codon breaks or doesn't works, those aren't 100% proof. I think that if anyone was to get Bella pregnant it would be Edward. The what would they do. 

And so the plot continues to thicken. What's the real deal with Alec's tip? Now it's lagit, something's up with that. Has to be. I wonder if he's going to try to arrange for Edward, Aro and possibly others to die at this thing. 

This story is so much fun. I when Alec is going to show his true colors? Maybe when Bella makes it known that she's not going back to him? When she & Edward come out about their relationship? how's Aro going to react? So many question, I hope they all get answered. 

Yeah there's a war. It's just a matter of when & with who.

What the hell made Alec think he could steal from another family & there would be no consequences. He obviously learned nothing from the Jacob incident. He may be Aro's son but that does not make him immune to a mafia's wrath.

Well, I'll say this: once Alec's out of the picture completely Edward can freely be with Bella. 

Wow, Lily & Emmett's first encounter, so much fun!

Im glad Alec got to Bella's "fuck you" dance. It was also funny when Alec got kicked out. I'm a little amazed Alec never tried to follow Edward before but I'm glad Edward knows what check for & noticed it.

No condoms? They couLd have 69 it. 

He looks like Anthony Masen, that's why Jacob was ordered not to kill him. Edward is either related to the other family or Anthony was a very important & well respected member that they could not kill his son. I wonder if it was Alec or James who wanted Angela dead. Well I look forward to the next chapter. 

Please please please whip cream a cherry & nuts on top. 

I was close, I didn't realize Edward's father was the "head" of the Leoni family. Cool, I hope Alec is dead but I get impression he's alive & Aro is dead since yore talking about an Alec POV. Hey if Aro is dead then I guess Marcus is too unless he leaked to Alec. Or maybe Alec knew his death was coming. As Bella put it "he's an asshole but he's a smart asshole." 

Yay! Edward's still breathing! Thank you Jacob, you're an okay guy after all. 

I never would have thought of that, that's a great idea for Bella. I would be very rewarding & it would a win-win for both Edward & Bella. I can Bella doing a lot of good. 

"Who was that guy?"

"oh no one. . . . . . . . . just the police chief of Miami, nothing to worry about."

"WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!"

Hehehe, that was funny. 

Bella's pregnant isn't she? Hope they get married soon. 

Wow. I guessed that Alec would start something at Edward's party but that whole confrontation with Alec & Marcus went a lot better than I thought it would. For some reason it never even crossed my mind that Marcus would be there too. 

So it's basically over now, just gotta clean up & that's a wrap. I'm a bit amazed that Bella hasn't passed out yet. With everything that just happened; that was a lot to handle. 

Read you later. 

Will there be more? I'm starting to get into this story. Also, where's Jake? Is he going to be in this story 'cause Samis a terrible leader. 

This was a good story. I would have liked it longer but I understand a story is as long as it needs to be. A continueation would be nice, I'd like to read that. 

Well I'm a bit intreaged, what happens next?

Well that was a fun first meeting. I wonder what the full story is that happened at her old job? I also wonder what she's going to dream now that she's actually met Edward?

I think Renee is going to be leaving Charlie for another man. I can't think of what Bella's surprise could be. She's taking him on a guided tour of something but idk what. I hope she's not in too much trouble with Charlie when she gets back home. You know, she's 18, she could just move out of her parent's house. It would be a bit weird, till they finally became a couple, but she could move in with Edward. 

He's gay isn't he, that's what he ment by "I'm better than I thought" huh? I think he said Victoria's dad was a banker right? I don't think there would be a problem with dating her. Dating a guy though, that's a different story. 

When is Edward going to reappear? Maybe he'll save her from herassment by Mike. Maybe Mike gets his ass beat by Edward & he can't say anything 'cause Mike would never live down getting his ass beat by a "blind man." I'm just guessing but I hope you hope you post again soon. 

Read you later. 

I'm so glad you're continuing this story, I love it! I love sexy fun time^_^

Does Phil really hate Bella for being the 18 year old of his girlfriend's first husband or is he just trying not to touch his girlfriend's 18 year old daughter. Either way, I wonder when this is going to blow up in their faces. Sneaking around with your older boyfriend is fun (been there done that) but the lying & sneaking around does get noticed. (I know from experience, getting caught sucks & I was only 16 at the time. Luckily it worked out.) please update again soon!!!!

Quick but nice. 

"OMG Bella!!!!!!!!" Follwed by a hug & a possible "your dad & Jacob have been calling for days asking if I've seen you!" then maybe a "I'm so happy to see you!" or a "I'm so proud of you!!!!!!"

Thats my guess

That sounds like how I looked on my wedding day. Minus the black ribbon. I wore a white dress that was already hanging in my closet. My husband black slacks & a black button up shirt with thin silver strips. Our honeymoon was staying at home & turning off our cell phones for the weekend. It was funny & a bit annoying telling people. "We're getting married!!!!" "Ahhhhhhh finally!!! When?" "Friday" ".............. This Friday?" "Yup" "............ Are you pregnant?" The answer is no I wasn't but everyone kept asking but needless to say both our families were watching me to see I would start showing. I finally did, about 4 years later.

Bella & Edward are going to be so happy. Is this story almost done?

Oh I hope Jasper rills him a new one. 

Ooooo are you going to post Angela getting fired? I hope Jasper does it, that would be so awesome. 

That hurts that he still voted against her but I'm glad he gave his reasons for it. 

I'm kinda stumped on a come back to this. 

I don't do bets, I hate loosing. Her birthday could be a good guess but depending on how well things go the night of the Jacob/Charlie incident they could very well do it that night or few days later. 

It's the same in Texas, unless you're military. If you're military then you can get married in afew hours. 

im getting antsy over here, will there be penetration today? Please say yes. I hope neither of them has second thoughts after the marriage. Oh the look & words exchanged when Charlie/Jacob find out Bella is not only married but married to Edward. Priceless.

The thud was his head hitting the desk. 

He heard all that Angela said last night & then had the nerve to tell her she should go home!!!!! I would be so pissed at him right now but at the same so happy the Angela is gone. 

Hey that's an embarrassing thing to say for a girl like her. Not that Im saying she's slut or anything just that if she wasnt that moment right there wouldn't be so nervraking. I remember when I still had mine I preferred not to say anything or talk about it 'cause my friends or people I would talk to would look at me like I was the strangest creature they had ever seen. So I can understand why she was nervous. 

?????? Um Emmett or Rose have mentioned her?

I did not expect that. Okay well she wants him anyways & this way Charlie & Jacob really won't be able to take her without charges being brought against them if Jacob tries to touch her again let alone take her. 

Given the summary you put for this story they turn her down. I'm guessing that getting turned down makes her want to prove Edward wrong & show him what she's got.

Hey when do we get to listen in on Jake & Charlie again? She's been gone for area weeks now I wonder what is going through their heads. 

She'll win in the end. 

The other non-vote was Edward. Angela has issues with Bella because she's new, she's young & fresh plus Jsaper was sweet on her the moment she walked though the door. She feels threatened. Unjustified but whatever. Jealous people don't always think with a full deck of cards. 

Well they definatly heard the part about the hitch hicking but other than that I'm sure. 

This starting to heat up though. 

Can there be another Alice/Jasper scene soon?

My best friend has that problem too. She can others battles no problem but when it comes to her own she needs to be saved. 

Oh I can't wait to read what Jasper has to say. Also I hope Edward's reaction to the cake & who made it are priceless. 

Finally she says something to get Jasper moving. Plus a smack to the back of the head always helps; works for Gibbs on NCIS. 

See what's gets me though is that she didn't go off on him for his apology. In his apology her called her a gold digging whore whose all about the money. I get the looking out for his friend line but in his apology he still managed to insult her. 

He should give her more nights to dance & allow her to give lap dances. 

Yay, so now Edward is finally starting to be nice to her. Question is: is he being nice to get to know her or is he being nice to prove that he doesnt care for her? Hmmm