Reviews by Lunarchild21
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After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814518
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Awesome

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

I hope she doesn't fall for Edward's "tell me" look that he's giving her. One way to find out. 

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Post more, that's my vote. 

Thats Charlie at the door huh. I wonder how he found her, I also wonder if Jake is with him; hope not. 

 

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

Figures they'd find her at the club. I'm gonna guess it was Jake who grabbed her. Edward, Jasper, Alice, Rosalie & all other club employes to the rescue? Besides, legally Jake & Charlie can't do what they're trying to do. Especially since she's 19. 

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

Yay Edward called her "mine" yay he's laying a claim to her in his fury. Hope he doesn't take it back.

Yes, finally Edward POV yay!!!!!

How we only get 6 tomorrow? I thought you were posting 12 a day. This made the 12th post anyways so aren't you on track with your posting? I'm just asking, it doesn't bother me if you decide to post 6 tomorrow, its your story. See you tomorrow. 

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

Okay thank you for answering my question.

No, I don't think Edward ment to say that even though he obviously means it. This is going to be fun. 

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 165

Flashbacks are not what I was expecting, but it'll be nice to know what kinds of things were running around in Edward's mind during certain events & exactly what he was witnessing. 

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Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 167

So that's why he was trying so hard to get her out of there. I get why he was being that way but he was still being a dick. I wonder if he jizzed himself sitting there watching her stip that first time. That would be so funny. Ohhhh I'm so looking forward to him muttering the 15in comment & getting caught wakking off in the shower with Bella standing right there. 

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Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

YES!!!!!!! She made him jizz his pants!!!!!

NO!!!! DAMN It!!!!!!! If Bella had been just a little slower he'd of grabbed her & they would of FUCKED!!!!!!! Or at least kissed & fondled a bit. Sadness :'( Oh well looking forward to the next chapters tomorrow. Thank you for the bonus ones :)

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Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

This is so much fun. I love reading the hell Edward is putting himself through. It's so funny. Hey is he gonna bust a nut again?

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Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

Oh damn he didn't even know Tanya was there!!!!!! That is just awesome. I'm enjoying these Edward POV's.

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Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

Nice he "was" jacking off to her. That's awesome. I'm not surprised he was in a food coma. He did say he was hungry & she did bring him supper from his favorite resturant. Please describe when she's there ogaling his cock forever. I want know what he's thinking during her staring contest with his cock. 

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 191: Chapter 191

So that's what Angela told him.

Read you tomorrow 

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

So hot

Hope they have so much sex one or both of them pass out, then wake up to the other moving on top if them. I love sex-capaids. 

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 242: Chapter 242

Awww Edward is so sweet with Bella. 

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Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

Okay that last question got me, wtf? That was a weird question. Dude!!!!! You have seven kids! Seriously?!?!? I don't know wheather to be amazed or jealous. I have a weak cervix so it's its kinda dangerous & risky for my husband & I to have more than one. 

Im glad Alice & Bella are searing clear of their apartment for awhile. They should just put up a move out notice with their place since neither should be away from their guys for desire aswell as convienence. 

What did you see at Walmart the freaked you? I don't think I ever have. Or I just blocked it out. 

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Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 252: Chapter 252

I know I would be. Damn but it was fun. They can continue later. So is Alice with him? I hope so. She can comment on Bella's freshly fucked glow & sex hair. Though Jasper could too. 

Hey can there be a chapter or of Alice & Jasper getting it on too. I'm not a chubby chaser but come on its Alice/Jasper I think it's sweet what comes out if his mouth when it come to Alice. Especially when it's x-rated ;)

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Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 255: Chapter 255

Yay got to read a Charlie POV. I'm glad he's sorry but he's got a lot of kiss assing to do. 

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Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 258: Chapter 258

I don't know why but I was not expecting that. 

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Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 261: Chapter 261

I was kinda wondering if Charlie would (& should) be at the wedding. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 273: Chapter 273

I hope Charlie takes a really good look at Bella when she's looking at Edward & they say their vows. I hope he can see how truely happy & "in love" Bella is with Edward. She's going to be just fine. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 274: Chapter 274

Awwwww everything is wrapping up so nicely.

yeah Alice & Jasper are the kind of people to choose to live unmarried, some people live better that way & hey more power to them. 

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

Okay that rabbit bit was just plan cute & funny. 

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 293: Chapter 293

Oh yeah high society bitch be slapped!

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 306: Chapter 306

So did not see the Lauren/Daddy thing coming. Love it though. I would so love an Alice chappy. 

Happy Birthday to Silverblossom

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Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 311: Chapter 311

I hope Bella don't pass out. 

I wonder how the news of a little Edward are going to be taken, gosh I hope they aren't getting married 'cause Lauren's pregnant too. That would possibly send Bella over. 

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Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 315: Chapter 315

*tear* that was a good story. I'm looking forward to the out takes, they sound exciting ;)

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Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 316: Chapter 316: Out-Take No. 1

Alice & Jasper sexy kink!!!!! With full on dirty talk;)

wow so that's the training that he went through. No wonder Charlie & Bella were laughing up a storm. 

I'll be sure to check out that new story for yours & I look forward to reading more out takes. 

Read you later ^_^

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Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 317: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

That was fun, I really enjoyed it when Lauren slapped Charlie & they started fucking like rabbits. 

YES!!!!! Alice/Jasper fun-time pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!?!?!!!?!!?!?!?!?!?

Summary:

Left alone to wait, Bella is a little frustrated, a lot bored, and finds herself reading one of those heaving bosom bodice ripper romances. Jasper conveniently wanders into the room and maybe Bella isn't so bored any more. Lemons. Jasper/Bella


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8850 Read Count: 2001
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 28 Jan 2013
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Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bodice Ripper Oh Mercy

I'm really liking these one shots you've but I got say I would love to know what happens next. So if you ever decide to continue some of these, I won't complain ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Sweetie! I did enjoy writing this one and it seemed to end in a good place. I've kicked around the idea of an epilogue of sorts, even written a few parts of it, but it's just not "flowing" so to speak. But thanks for reviewing!

Isabella Volturi by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After being left by Edward, I couldn't stand the thought of him controlling me even in his absence. I admit it was an act of defiance, but it was a decision that brought me more happiness than I'd ever thought I'd experience. New Moon AU/Canon

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93367 Read Count: 39594
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well it took Bella awhile to be okay with killing to eat too so, yeah. I wonder how the reunion with the Cullen clan is going to go. 

Ready you next time

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can wait a week. 

I like where this story is going & how it's being written, I'm asking "wait when did that happen" or "that wasn't explained very well can you specify?" 

Looking forward to reading what happens next. 



Author's Response:

I'm so pleased that you like it :-) Not many days o wait now :-)

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Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Never saw that one coming. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that I can surprise you :-)

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Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Um an emaciated Edward?

Maybe a vampire with mind control or suggestion mad Edward their new toy?

I really am not sure what direction you're going to go in. As always though I look forward to your next post. 

Read you later ^_^



Author's Response:

You'll see in the next chapter, which you will get later this week because I amso nice and I'll give you another chapter this week :-D

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I knew she would be a high guard. I gotta say though when Aro said first said he'd grown fond if her & she would not be leaving on mission unless Aro went the 1st thing that poped in head was that he wanted her to be his mistress. I wonder if Bella will ever take a lover? human lover? She's already making out with them & before that she was dressing up sexy for them. Curious.

Catch ya next week ^_^



Author's Response:

All of your questions will be answered in time :-P

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Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Isabella Volturi

Wow, that's an eventful first day. Oooooo is there going to be a romance between Isabella & Felix or at least lovers? I hope so, that would piss Edward off so much, but I'm not sure it would go with the story since Bella & Edward are mates. 

Reguardless I look forward to your next post. 

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Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmmm Bella the succubus? I like it, I think if I was in the same position I'd do the same; play with my food. At least they would have a smile on their face before they died. I wonder if every human she eats (when she gain control) will be her lover first or if it will only be a once in awhile thing?

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Victoria didn't last long as a threat. I'm glad that new born army never got to Forks. Charlie & everyone are safe. I'm curious to read how the visit with the Denali go. I hope none of the Cullens are around. 



Author's Response:

You'll get the answer to that in the next chapter :-)

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow she's really made the Volturi her home & family. That's cool! So thus means she gets the same black cloak as the family. This is going to be very interesting when the Cullens eventually reappear. I'm looking forward to that confrontation; it's gonna be fun. 

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Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Uh oh Tanya must be trying to have a conversation with Edward. I wonder if there will be a fight. 

I absolutely love the meeting in the Throne room between the Cullen's & Isabella. I also loved the way she handled escorting them to their rooms. I would have behaved similarly. Bella Swan died decades ago. Isabella Volturi, princess of Volterra is who they are addressing now. I wonder how things will progress from here. 

Read you next week ^_^



Author's Response:

Yes, and from now on, since Edward's entered the story, it's going to be even more obvious how much she's changed :-)

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Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

YEEEEESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!

SEEEEEEXXXXXXX!!!!!!!!!

Finally, it's only been what 50? That's nothing to a vampire :P

Also thank you for the extra chapter ^_^

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Date: 31 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That's a good idea but I wonder if it will be allowed.

I feel bad for Alice but Isabella is right, she knew what was going to happen & she had a choice. Alice picked the wrong one & now she's paying for it.

Hey is this going to be a HEA? 'Cause I can see this going for HEA or total chaos. Just wondering you don't have to answer. 



Author's Response:

Yes, there is an HEA :-D

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Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I have, I rather enjoyed this story but I'm glad it's not going to be one of those stories that has a hundred chapters. 

Looking forward to the next (last) chapter. Read you soon. 

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Date: 10 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was a good story, I liked how you didn't make anyone evil who wasn't suppose to be. The Cullens stayed good, the Volturi weren't evil just justice. Edward & Bella still got to be together & while everyone could have been happier the ones who mattered got what they wanted. ( did that make sense?)

I really enjoyed how this story went & ended. I'm also glad that Bella isn't on friendly terms with the Cullens. I know this is all fiction but it wouldn't have felt real if she just forgave them. 

I hope you write more stories. 

Nice reading you, bye ;)



Author's Response:

This entire story was actually inspired by that one line that Edward says in Breaking Dawn. The one about how the Volturi are not supposed to be seen as evil as they are by Bella. They only punish the criminals.

she replies with: we're not criminals.

and Edward brilliantly says: they don't know that.

See where I got everything from? :-)

and I agree with The Cullens, which was why I wrote it the way I did ;-)

Oh, I'm writing other stories :-D If you've seen my facebook, there's a photoalbum marked future stories. There you can see all the banners for stories I am going to write eventually :-D

Summary:

 

Dark desires and deep-seated fantasies. Edward watches the one he covets the most…with another man. Anger rages and plans are acted out. Will Bella survive the night he has in store for her? GRAPHIC SCENES DEPICTED

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3479 Read Count: 7978
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2013 Updated: 04 Feb 2013
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Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: My Darkest Desire - Black as Night

Wow absolutely evil, I love it though. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Best friends since she was ten and he was twelve.  She had a hard home life, his family love and accepted her as their own.  She accepted him and his family for who they were, mafia royalty.  As they grow up, she becomes a dancer, and he gets groomed to take over for his father.  Follow Edward and Bella as they fall in love and take on the world together.  Violence and Lemony goodness.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177484 Read Count: 221133
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 09 Dec 2014
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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was so beautiful!!!!!

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Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OoooooO round 2? Mmmmmm

Oh man that was so hot!!!!!!!!!

More!!!!!!!! Must have more chapters!!!!!!!!!

Capture by Dinia Steel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 91]
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Capture

Alice, Bella, and Rosalie have been picked up in a scoop of humans by the Volturi to be used as slaves and for various businesses they have in their dealings with humans. Bella and Rose are chosen as sex slaves, while Alice is chosen to be eventually changed for the bureaucracy due to her potential for see the future. What will happen to them?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29581 Read Count: 26677
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
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Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Not a bad story, didn't go in the direction I was expecting but I was a good story. 

Summary:

Bella is strong, independent & a fighter. She goes to Forks hiding from her past only to meet Edward. With people going missing is it possible that the darkness she's running from has followed her across country? My version of Twilight but a lot is still canon. 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101852 Read Count: 10104
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2013 Updated: 05 Jun 2013
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Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

& so the plot continues to thinken. The mysteries this story keep getting bigger & bigger. 

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Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Wow, so, damn that was crazy sick & cool. I wonder what Edward is going to say when they meet (probably in her room when she gets there or down the street she's currently walking).

So, psychic huh? I would of guessed Wiccan or something. That's cool though, not for Bella but I think it's cool.

Looking forward to your next post; read you later. 

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Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Joe Mallory got shot before Bella passed out. I hope it was Charlie. 

Next chapter please. 

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Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I wonder where she fell to?

This is not a story I've read before. This seems pretty original; the only thing similar ive read to come close to this story was a 2 part story on fanfiction that sadly wasn't finished. It was like it was called something like "Branded" or Idk. Good story, sad it wasn't finished. Oh well, I hope gets finished I really like this story, please don't stop writing!!!!

I look forward to more updates. 

Read you later. 

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Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ahhhh, I see what you're doing with this. Okay so damn poor Bella. Is Jake just going to sit there & watch her or is going to take her back to Charlie's?

NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh Edward is loving this conversation. I wonder what he's going to have to say about Lucas let alone her meeting him later. On that note I wonder she's going to say about Lucas, if anything. Oh the rumors that will be flying about that little meeting, add on the fact that Bella left in the middle of class to meet him. 

I don't think Charlie knows about Bella, not all the super natural stuff anyway. 

Next chapter please, I look forward to this story being updated. 

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Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Okay I am so hooked with this story, I want to know what happens next. 

Please tell me you update regularly?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes i update regularly, every week is my intention. 

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is turning into a pretty fun story. I like where this is going. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

O-Kay freaky, I wonder what it's going to take to get Edward back in good graces with Bella? Also what was leading her? A power inside her? The bones? Or someone else? I wonder Edward is following her. 

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Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So that's who Etta was; her sister. I imagine the things Etta saw are similar to what Bella sees only Etta was a different level & Bella learned to stay quiet about what she saw. I wonder what method Bella tried.

So is Edward giving her the cold shoulder because she took off without a word or is it the same reason as in Twilight? He's trying to protect her. Also I'm gonna guess it Edward that she keeps feeling is there but when she looks nothing is there. 

Im glad Charlie was so excepting. It was a really good excuse, at least I thought so.

next chapter please. 

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Date: 07 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Seriously, that's why Edward was ignoring Bella all week. Because of what she told Charlie.

So, sedusing Bella huh? This sounds like fun but let's see where & how far this goes. I wonder what Edward is going say when Bella tells him about all her injuries. 

I wonder what the story is on Mr. Mallory; that's a strange family. 

So, next chapter please; I look forward to this story being posted. 

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Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ooooohhhhhhh you tease. 

A news article for an update?

Okay whatever, Happy Mexican Mother's Day I guess. 

Please post again soon, I want to know what happens. 

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Really? This story doesn't feel anywhere near finished yet but I'm glad there's going to be a sequel. 

So her plan that night was to kill Lucas huh? Honestly didn't see that coming.

Wow that was really embarrassing what happened at the Cullen's. Maybe now they can grasp how important it is to do things on her terms & be careful not to surprise her. 

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Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Well this was all hot & dandy then left on a sour note. I wonder what the next threat is going to be. Mr. Mallory is gone but maybe it was a family thing & they'll be after Bella next. 

Next chappy please ^_^

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Drunken Disclosures

Well she's still hot her undies on & I think Edward does too at the very least though he might have pants on too. Oh the venom & vomit that will be coming out of her mouth next chapter. I think will consider it worth it no matter what (I hope). I wonder Rosalie & Emmett got it on last night. That would be awesome but she was shit faced so she would be pissed. Not that I'd blame her. 

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Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: The arrangement

That'll work, damn they just seem to grate on each other's nerves. I wonder Bella will have a sexy dream/fantasy about Edward now. 

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Home

Occuard, good thing she didn't stab him or she might have been the one in trouble. I'm glad she got an eyeful. Before she ran. How long till there's a juicy lemon?

Oh Alice & Bella have a lot of explaining to do to Edward. 

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Bad day

Well now that she's gone the whole night & day worrying about being evicted lets see what happens next.

Let me guess: Tanya was the French slut; cheating?

Summary:

Banner By: Ro Normann

When seventeen-year-old Bella is kidnapped while out with Alice Cullen—she taken as a prize to be awarded the winner of an underground fighting tournament.  Will Alice’s adopted brother be the unlikely hero to save the day?  All Human/Rated M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 137 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15976 Read Count: 315388
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2013 Updated: 17 Mar 2013
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Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm looking forward to more ^_^

Summary:

Edward finds what he needs most in an unexpected place. After finding her ... he needs her, craves her ... because she is the light of his life.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34269 Read Count: 4608
[Report This] Published: 04 May 2013 Updated: 16 Sep 2013
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Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Why Did It Have To Be You?

Edward has been a bad boy & deserves his just punishment; plain & simple. Honestly, I'm not sure what its going to take for Bella to even look at him let alone listen to him. He messed up big time. He should of talked to Carlisle first instead of confronting Bella at her place of work & threatening her; it got him nowhere but in trouble with everyone. 

Well I don't know when you are going to update again but I look forward to the rest of the story. 

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Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Getting Together

Well he's got his foot in door, hopefully he gets that itch of his scratched. 

I wonder how Bella us going to react when she gets that form Edward filled out. 

Please update again

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Apologies, Domination and Confessions

Neither Carlisle or Esme had perfect lives. It was terrible but I'm glad they were able to save each other & are happy now. 

I wonder how soon Edward & Bella will get to do a scene. 

My only one by Anonymous91 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

She was his, he was hers. Her one and only.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1308 Read Count: 1663
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2013 Updated: 05 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: You my one and only

I really like these stories you write, they're sexy & sweet all at the same time.

More stories please!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, i just posted the story i told you about last night.

Summary:

second

 
Bella is a twenty two year old mother of three and a widow. Her husband Emmett gunned down in a shootout with the DEA during an undercover raid. She vows to take her children away from the life, to let them grow up normal but then she meets the new Underboss Edward Cullen who falls for her and her children but refuses to play second to Emmet's ghost. Can she let go of her past?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30219 Read Count: 11772
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2013 Updated: 02 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Interesting story, I don't think I've read this kind of story before, kudos. I've read plenty of Mobward stories but not a widow Bella with kids he falls for. Looking forward to this one, hope you update frequently. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The best made plans go to hell

What a very interesting night. And it's not over yet ^_^

more chapters please. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

aboaf

 

Bella's life changed all because of a fire and some hot firemen!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18487 Read Count: 13054
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2013 Updated: 15 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awwwwwwwwwwww that's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They all want a piece of Bella. Sexy. I love that they're falling all over each other. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ooooooooo 4-way? Sounds like fun. It might happen once but Bella strikes me as a one guy kinda girl. Love the flirting though. 

Next chappy please

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is such a fun story. I love the sexy teasing. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You'll figure it out, I'm sure you will. 

So this was a fun, that room she's in us for his submissives to sleep in huh? He's a Dom. He controlling in that "you can say no or tell me to stop" kind of way. He wants her but if she says no he'll respect her choice & not push it. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ha I love this story, it's so funny

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So I guess, she decided to not only stay but to be with Edward after all. Cool. 

The Demon's Mate by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Ellie Wolf

'It is decreed that the mate of the heir to the crown of the Dark Kingdom will be of human flesh born of pain, loss and hate.' Follow the dark prince as he finds his mate and seeks revenge on the one that harmed her.    

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, The Demon Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127795 Read Count: 100927
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 19 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Okay I have to stop right here before I go on. That was so beautiful *tear* 

She got to say a proper good bye to her father, say she was sorry for certain things & tell him she loved him, & him her. That was touching. Okay moving on to the rest if the story now. 

Rescued by Anonymous91 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Foster Bella is rescued by Charlie. He never imagined that she wanted to be his...A few plot/smut filled chapters.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12858 Read Count: 16196
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2013 Updated: 27 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: More

That was fun. I'm sad there's only one more chapter but I'm glad I started reading this story; it's great. 

Next chapter please. 



Author's Response:

it may be four chapters long, but  i will post them at the same time, what i have in my head is too big for just one chapter. lets see how it goes!

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Rescued

I think they should have a marathon all the next day (or two, hope that was a Friday night so they don't have to come up with excuses for missing school & work). I don't read many stories like this, but I like it. 

Next chapter please. 



Author's Response:

Next chapter is almost finished.

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Happily Ever After

I liked this story but am sad it's over. Will you write more like this? I hope so. 

Next story please. 



Author's Response:

I will post a little plot smut in a few hours but is Carlisle and Bella if you are interested... click on "add author to favorite" and you will recieve an update when I post! Thanks for reading, check my other work if you havent!

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: OUTTAKE

That was interesting, didn't see that coming. 

Looking forward to your next post. 

A True Heir by Anonymous91 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Carlisle's world comes crashing down with the resuilts of a blood test on his son.

 

Will he be able to overcome the pain from the treason he was submitted to, and have what he always wanted; an heir? 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34315 Read Count: 16616
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2013 Updated: 29 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Dream Comes True

Wow, Esme lived. Didn't see that one coming. I'm glad Emmet Sr. stepped up to take Esmeralda & hear everything that happened in his absence over the years.

Yay!!!! Baby Edward!!!!!

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Settling In

Wow, so after all these years she's pregnant by the father of her first baby. Was she seeing him through out their entire marriage?

Next chapter please 



Author's Response:

No she wasnt, emmett sr. (as another reviewer called him) is a military man. that and more will be revealed on the next chapter!

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Three steps forward, one step back

It was such a happy chapter too. I'm not surprised though, complications like she was having are very touch & go. Mine weren't the same but I had similar problems. My daughter & I almost died but luckily we're both fighters. Looking at her now she's vibrant & full of energy & sunshine you'd never know she was a micro preemie born at 24 weeks. 

Im sad that Esme died, I wonder what's going to happen to the baby. I hope she lives. Please don't write an infant death. 



Author's Response:

Nothing will happen with the baby. Lets see about Esme...

Summary:

WARNING - NOT FOR KIDS !!!

Bella Swan has just been accepted with a full scholarship to one of America's most prestigious private scholls, Forks Academy. Centered in you guessed it Forks, Washington where the rich and famous are molded into the future generations of entertainment and industy; also where many surprises lurk inside.

Contains: Futanari,smut, crossdressing, bdsm, fem slash, MxM, fem x futa, and a few other fetishes.

Private shcool


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5999 Read Count: 2953
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2013 Updated: 09 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Character Bios and Fetishes

Carlisle's the submissive. 

Does Bella have a dick? Just wondering since you put that Edward like chicks with dicks; or is it just the porn?



Author's Response:

Great job on guessing Carlisle's sub :D. Yeah she has a dick and Edward has only seen it in porn and is really turned on by it but has never seen a girl like that in real life so I guess we'll find out when he and Bella get ... closer. ;)



Author's Response:

Great job on guessing Carlisle's sub :D. Yeah she has a dick and Edward has only seen it in porn and is really turned on by it but has never seen a girl like that in real life so I guess we'll find out when he and Bella get ... closer. ;)



Author's Response:

Great job on guessing Carlisle's sub :D. Yeah she has a dick and Edward has only seen it in porn and is really turned on by it but has never seen a girl like that in real life so I guess we'll find out when he and Bella get ... closer. ;)

Give Me Love by bee1982 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 158]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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One shy virgin Edward, one confident Bella who wants to help Edward out. When sexual boundaries are crossed between these two friends, what will happen? (DRABBLE FIC Updated daily.)    

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19286 Read Count: 50602
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh please!!!!!!

U know they aren't going to have sex in the shower but do you think there could be some heavy petting at least? Maybe some head or nipple play?

I love that he just shows up & pins her against the wall. She's not dreaming is she? Please don't tell me she's dreaming all this up 'cause that would suck. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I hope he was a virgin, if he wasn't than that's one he'll of a line to get in between a chick's legs. 

More sexy fun time please. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

That was a nice story, I loved the ending too. I love a HEA. ^_^

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I've stated it once I'll state it again, they're idiots. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Slow build up but I getcha. 

I love that he got to grope her tits a bit. Hopefully there will be more groping in the shower. Hope he doesn't squirt in the shower, if he does I hope he recovers quickly. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So hot, more please. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm up for for an EPOV, the doesn't need one I don't think but I'm not opposed to it. Really do like this Edward, he's cute & it's not an Edward that I get to read very often. 

I hope the sex part is up next, I'm really looking forward to it, you said it would be a long chapter

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I really hope he asks her out & says something like "Bella I want to be with you not Tanya." That would be awesome. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Wheather he wants to or not he'll do it because Bella tells him too. Unless he flat out says he wants Bella, which I dought he'll do it he's way too shy, he may try to ask Tanya out. Gotta wait & see how things go. 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

They're both idiots. They want each other & can't say it. *sigh*

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was freaking scary how quickly Renee got another good guy in her clutches. Luckily her skeem was put to an end before the marriage which truthfully wouldn't have been legal anyways since she was still married to Phil. Poor Bella was alone with Crazy Renee for awhile. Probably telling her to back up her sob story so she could be "happy" with Elizar. That woman has done serious mental issues. Even if Bella had played along no one else on that boat would have & I would have been a moot point. I really did love it when Esme threw her over board & was Disapointed that Renee didn't melt; awesome. 

All in all it was a lovely wedding, really sweet that Edward couldn't stop kissing Bella through the whole thing. It shows how much he loves her. 

Looking forward to the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm sorry you went through such things, no one should but while I'm sorry I don't want you to think I pitty you. I know pitty is not what most people want, you are not small & insignificant so I won't pitty you. 

Thank you for writing these stories though, I enjoy them. 



Author's Response:

First off, thank you for your kind words and you're right, I'm not into a pity party, writing about this stuff just helps me let it go.  If you get a chance read The Things That Make You Click that I just posted the other day.  With the exception of Bella joining a dating site, and meeting Edward and his kids it is my life, only rose colored somewhat.  The father of my children is exactly like the one you will find in this story.  Let me know if you check it out.  It's under the author name TeamAllTwilight.

Here is the normal review reply for chapter 5:

Hello everyone!  Thanks for all your kind words.  We want to start off by addressing some of the frequent questions.  This quote (“I know they love me, really ... I know but, it’s strange, maybe it’s just me. You know that I see and hear things differently from the rest of the world, but thank you for doing this and answering my questions.”) from chapter five had someone ask, what Bella meant.   Bella is referring to how she perceives her family versus the way others do.  Jacob is not a card we are showing yet, you’ll have to be patient to see what he has up his sleeve.  Did Bella hear him in the shower?  We have yet to hear that answer from Bella ourselves, but in my thoughts she surely did.  Will there be any chapters in Bella’s POV?  She is talking a little here and there, but nothing’s set in stone as of yet.  Shouldn’t Edward as a good Dom cancel the scene?  The scene is not canceled, but it has been modified from the original way it was written.  This was for several reasons.  We have sixteen chapters written, yet we still continue to makes tweaks and changes here and there before posting.  When we started making him have hard feelings about the upcoming scene, or feel nervous about it, we started discussing it more.  We found a way to appease us, our readers and yet still show what we wanted to show.  So trust us—please.  I’m glad we haven’t fallen into the pleads for more chapters to post faster, because in the last week we haven’t gotten another one done.  Of course WeeKittyAndTAT, JessAndTAT and TeamAllTwilight all submitted pieces of work into the Fandom Fights LLS.  WeeKittyAndTAT did an Epilogue of sorts for Ropin’ A Sitter.  JessAndTAT did a future take on Bases Loaded.  I wrote a new fan fiction novella, it’s called, The Things That Make You Click.  All of these will post to our FFN and TWCS accounts, but not until after December first.  Watch for two one-shots to post soon to our account, the winners will be announced tomorrow in the More is MORE contest.  Think that brings you all up to speed.  Feel free to PM us and ask questions if you have them.  Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  “Felix, my father is coming in tonight. Please have him come straight to my office.  Keep everyone else out until I’m done. If there are any problems, I trust you to deal with them accordingly.”

Felix nods at me, but doesn’t say anything. I carry on, walking toward Jenks, when I’m stopped by Tanya.

“Sir, I have some news that I would like to share with you.”

I turn and face Tanya who looks like the cat who got the cream. “Tanya, I’m very busy, it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.” 

I move away from her, but she grabs my wrist pulling me back. “It’s very important, Sir.”

I yank my arm away from her, turning to face her once more. “Tanya, don’t you tell me when I will speak with you. I’m busy, so unless you’re going to die in the next five minutes and need me to call an EMT for you, I don’t want to know. And never touch me again without my consent!”

I walk away without waiting for her response. As I approach Jenks, he shakes his head, looking behind me at Tanya.

“Ah, still trying to get your attention then?”

I nod at him, opening up my office.

“I’d stay away from that one; she’s clearly after money, fame and quite frankly, has ‘whore’ written all over her.”

I chuckle a little at his quite accurate synopsis of Tanya. “Yes, I know. Those are the main reasons I have always refused her, that, and she makes me lose brain cells every time she opens her mouth. But enough about her, what did you find out.”

Jenks looks at me sadly and I can clearly see the worry on his face. “This is not going to be easy to read. Even harder for you I’d say, because you’ve become somewhat involved with the girl.”

I nod at him in understanding. “Just show me.”