Reviews by cjrich
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113784
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I tell you this after every update, but it is still true. You are my favorite author, by far.  Your ability to bring so much life to your characters is amazing.  How you do that with so many characters is is truly a gift.  Love all the kids, all the olders, all the parents.  Thank you for sharing your talent, no matter how long it takes.  As for this chapter, I think Edward is going to regret not tell Bella what is going on. Regardless of the reason a promise is a promise. I love angst, but I love these kids so much and I don't want anything to happen to them. OK yes I trust you to give us all our HEA, just a little nervous about the in between. See told you that you are a wonderful author!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Tell you this everytime, but I LOVE this story!  Best thing I ever did was print out your first page pictures (especially the kids) and I pull it out with each new chapter it just helps keep them clear in my head.  You did such a wonderful job bringing each of these Cullen/Whitlock kids to life with your choice of pictures. OK, this chapter was hard for me. Nadia needs to go straight to He!!. I hated Nick being uncomfortable and down right scared.  Yes he isn't a kid, kid but a predator is stil a predator.  Love Lexi and Tiff, but of course like his father Jackson is my favorite.  He is just a carbon copy of his Dad, and God I love his Dad!  Till next time, thank you for sharing your talent with all of us E/B lovers that can't write their way out of a paper bag, as much as I wish I could! PS Really enjoyed the background with Josh & Lexi.   XOXO, Cheri

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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love, love, love this already!  Feels like I am right back into their lives.  Love how you portray family in this story, alway did, always will.  Hardest part is the waiting.  Love your pictures as always, they really help tell the story.  Lots of Love, Cheri

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Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Know I say it every single chapter, but I love these two and I love this huge, wacky, wonderful family that you contine to share with us.  Wish Max and told them his worry tho. Love that the kids know about their parents problems, but don't know. Just plain love this story!  Take care of you, I remember 9 stitches in my left thumb from TRYING to remove carpet in my living room about a year ago.  Actually carpet knife 9, Cheri 0 so I understand what you are going through. Hope to see  you and this story again soon.   XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Don't appologize for something out of your control. OK, yes I jump up and down whopping and hollaring when I see an update from you. Yes I savor every word. Set aside time when I can read without being disturbed. So what I am saying is I will wait however long it takes to reap the benefits of your words. Best moment... Bella telling Edward how amazed she is with him 'at his age'!

Love this family, love your story.  Thank you.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story already.  I love your characters so much.  They seem real, its whyat made me love PLU and this is no different.  Thank you for sharing your talent with your readers.  Lots of Love, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ginger, have said this before and will say it again.  For your stories I would wait forever.  Will admit I had a couple of small panics that maybe you weren't going to post anymore and I am sorry for my lack of faith. Love the way you wrap me into your stories and your characters.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

You were one of the first authors that I found on this wonderful site way back when People first started. My first author that I made a "favorite" on my list. You had me hooked and amazed from the first paragraph. PLU will always be a favorite of mine and AFLO is no different. You have such a wonderful way of bringing your characters and story to a point that they seem so real, so relatable even tho I'm not a millionaire, not a movie star and unfortunately very single. You showed me a side of BSDM that I could understand and enjoy. You let me in to your imagination and let me believe in a true love that could survive bad times and a crazy family. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER and you are truly appreciated. Please don't deny your fans your amazing talents. 

XOXO,Cheri

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

As always just plain wonderful! Just started PLU for the 5th time. Yes I need a life! XOXO,Cheri

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Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So thrilled to see this story back!  PLU has always been my fav fanfic.  Love the pics, just having a hard time putting names and faces to whom belongs to whom. Will get there and love the pictures of all the kids. Great job.  After 20 years would be hard to hope for 24/7 HEA, but I know you will get us there with a great story along the way!  Can't wait to get started!!!  Lots Of Love, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Absolutely wonderful, and boy does Poppa C have his hands full!   PS Any chance E & B will make the two weeks?  Didn't think so!   XOXO, Cheri

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wonderful chapter. Thank you for giving us both E/B and the Tahoe side in one chapter.  Was anxious for the Jasper/Jackson talk and it went so well. Love Lexi. Makes me wish I had a twin! I love how in depth I feel with ALL of your characters, of course the pictures help to 'see' them and really feel like you know them.  Silly, but I printed out the pictures in a collage of each family so I could keep it handy while I read and keep everyone straight. Really helps and I so love the 'people' you chose for the kids. Josh & Jared remind me of Em. Tiffany is absolutely a perfect mini Alice and Jack, Lexi, Nick and Sam... perfection! Still wish I could find the PLU picture of Edward holding Jack & Lexi in his arms when they were newborns. That picture haunts me to this day.  Cried happy tears when I saw it and I have never forgotten it.  Too much to ask for it to make its way into this story somehow?  Love the way you write and can't thank you enough for sharing! XOXO, Cheri

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Little undecided about this story.  Not sure if I am more in love with the hawt love scenes between E & B or the fantastic part of the story with all the kids. You have made each of the kids so individual and interesting I keep getting pulled into their stories. So hard to wait for your updates, but you give us such great, long chapters that I can easily forgive.   Torn, but loving it!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Beautiful, wonderful, amazing.  This just keeps getting better and better!  Love that Edward can now sympathise with Charlie, because Lexi may have just found her "Edward".  You have done such a wonderful job with Lexi & Tif.  Seem so real and such a combination of each of their parents.  As for Josh, Jack & Nick...whew.  See lots of sequels here (I hope!)  Love your stories! XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Hugs and smooches back for this wonderful story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sweet, hawt and beautiful relationships.  Just perfect!  XOXO, Cheri

Wish you would post the picture of Edward holding Jackson and Lexi as newborns, one on each arm.  Was the best pic you ever posted and I miss seeing it. No pictures showing now on PLU. I checked. Please...

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Can't figure out why the girls were taken, and can't figure out which of the kids are next? You are good lady, at keeping us all guessing!  As usual can't wait to see where you take us.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

You make these characters so real. I find myself sad that the biggies are all heading out and away, I feel for Bella. Also afraid for the Mini's. You always keep us on our toes and I love you for it.  You also always leave me wanting more, the sign of a great writer. Thank you again and again. XOXO, Cheri

 

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Little Lexi is all grown up. Little bit sad, but wonderful.  XOXO, Cheri

 

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Love Jackson and Bonnie. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Michele, yes have missed this story, but for your words I will wait as long as I have to.  When I get to missing this story I go back and re-read PLU. It is alwasy a favorite no matter how many times I read it.  

Sad about Seth & Jesse, can't quite figure that one out yet.  Missed the bigger kids, tough when the grow up and away. B&E handled it well tho. Would love to figure out how to become one of their children (or I guess the kids Grandma with my age being what it is). Always look forward to the next installment (no pressure, honestly) just enjoy the heck out of them when the notice comes through.  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

First, I will never give up on you or this story. Second, RL can be a bitch, that we all understand. Third I am so darn happy to see this update! I was just reading a fic the other day that listed AFLO & PLU as a recommendation. I replied to the author that PLU was one of my favorite stories of all time. Now, this chapter, hard to read but I knew it was coming. So proud of the Cullen kids, all of them. Hope Nick realizes that he probably couldn't have stopped this. Hope E/B can help each other stay strong. Also hope that if you ever decide to quit this story you will let those of us that love the way you write know. Until that time - you have a fan for life. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wonderful to see this update, thank you. I love these characters and this story. XOXO,Cheri

Summary:

 

Dark desires and deep-seated fantasies. Edward watches the one he covets the most…with another man. Anger rages and plans are acted out. Will Bella survive the night he has in store for her? GRAPHIC SCENES DEPICTED

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3479 Read Count: 7975
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2013 Updated: 04 Feb 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: My Darkest Desire - Black as Night

Wow!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Best friends since she was ten and he was twelve.  She had a hard home life, his family love and accepted her as their own.  She accepted him and his family for who they were, mafia royalty.  As they grow up, she becomes a dancer, and he gets groomed to take over for his father.  Follow Edward and Bella as they fall in love and take on the world together.  Violence and Lemony goodness.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177484 Read Count: 221069
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 09 Dec 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Can just see the ball in my mind, wonderful!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loving this story, just gotta tell you!  XOXO, Cheri

Who am I? by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 364]
Summary:

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Banner made by  vamp_luvor

My life drastically changed after I saw an ad online; I still cannot believe that I answered it!  I never expected it to turn out like this, but anything was better than before. When the pain became too much to bear; I realized that love heals.

This is a BDSM story A/H E/B HEA

Beta'd by: RAH070890


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21554 Read Count: 112977
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Please, I love this story!  Want more, please!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Have you reviewed all chapters it will help get to 200 faster ! cause I want to post the next chapter tomorrow too !

Thanks for reading hun !

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 18 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Truly loving this story. Unfortunately all I want is...more.  Your fault for such a good story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 My Demons

Really liking this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 29 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, keep it coming - Loving this!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

OK.  I think I like! XOXO

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Guess the pills kicked in huh?  Loving this!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Whoa, wasn't expecting this.  Interesting.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm here! XOXO,Cheri

Capture by Dinia Steel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 91]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Capture

Alice, Bella, and Rosalie have been picked up in a scoop of humans by the Volturi to be used as slaves and for various businesses they have in their dealings with humans. Bella and Rose are chosen as sex slaves, while Alice is chosen to be eventually changed for the bureaucracy due to her potential for see the future. What will happen to them?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29581 Read Count: 26677
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Different story and I am anxious to see where you take this! XOXO, Cheri

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Teen mother Isabella finds herself in a precarious situation. The person, who has given her and her baby a home, has passed away. The landlord wants her out at all costs. Insert DSHS worker Edward Cullen. What happens when he steps over the line of his job? What happens when Isabella is more to him than he expected? A/H, M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42147 Read Count: 22695
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Jul 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful, wonderful story!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Summary: Past Featured Story

She's lost her muse. He's missing inspiration. When Bella and Edward meet, will they be able to heal the tattered pieces of their hearts? Or will they forever be alone?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131985 Read Count: 92180
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, like it! Interesting. More please!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 31 May 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Yes you are sick, but I love you and this wonderful story.XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 May 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

How could anyone not love this story. Your characters are so real and broken. Love watching them fight to be "normal" and survive their God awful past. Thank you for sharing your talent. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Good chapter, a feel good chapter. Love your characters. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Don't know why you worried, wonderful chapter and a great story. Thank you for sharing. XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Edward is king of a dying race, his planet torn by civil war. Bella is abducted to become his bride. From college student to Queen... Can she learn to love this strange man and help save his people? AU/OOC

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161406 Read Count: 42532
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2011 Updated: 21 Jul 2012
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Outtake - In the Fever, Dreaming

First read this amazing story as you wrote it and never forgot it. So thrilled to see it showcased at TWCS and enjoyed it as much as the first time. Your talent and imagination are awesome. Truly a story I will always remember and count as a favorite. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is offered the job of a lifetime. The personal assistant to one Hollywood's biggest A-listers. When she begins to develop feelings for her boss Edward Cullen will she be able to handle all his personal requests or will his domineering behavior cause her to run from her chance at true love. Story will contain, language and themes of domestic discipline including spanking.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Stories I've read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71498 Read Count: 52759
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2013 Updated: 26 May 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved the 'kiss my ass'!!!   XOXO, Cheri

Summary:

 

Bella prepares to navigate through the entertainment industries perils as famous Edward Cullen's new girlfriend. Will she survive or will she be just another Hollywood tragedy? What happens when Edward reveals something that may cause Bella to rethink her relationship with the man she loves? Read Part One first. Warning for spanking and domestic discipline.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148461 Read Count: 50479
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2013 Updated: 27 May 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

She is NEVER going to make 30 days!! Loving this! XOXO, Cheri

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 30 May 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Really, really enjoying both of your stories.  So glad I found them!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG!  You can't leave it up in the air like this! From OMG happy he proposed (and in such a beautiful way) to OMG Edward you never spank when you are angry...  Ok, lady, you are the one who got me sooooo pulled into this story, so you better write fast because I NEED to know who she is running to and where Edward is and OMG he must devistated to realize what he has done.  XOXO (yes I still love you), Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Loving this wonderful story!XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Loving thisstory! XOXO, Cheri

Summary:

Edward Cullen's life is turned upside down when his wife Bella falls victim to a horrific attack. How will he handle watching the love of his life "fade to black." Companion to A Working Title Series. This is EPOV. Takes place six years after Edward and Bella meet. Contains spoilers, do not read if you want to be surprised with upcoming story lines in A Working Title.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Tragic Affairs
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29535 Read Count: 6735
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Perfect ending!!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMG I am so thrilled to see this update. I was so afraid that some thing had happened to you or you had decided to give up on it.  Thank you, thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when dysfunction meets dysfunction? Neither Edward nor Bella are prepared when fate brings them together. Will they be able to overcome the odds and find happiness? Or will the ghosts of their past keep them apart? Canon coupling, but non-canon families. Dark themes, high emotion, and standing tissue alert. AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed, to read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142814 Read Count: 100029
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2013 Updated: 04 May 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting! XOXO Cheri

 

Summary:

Bella has had many ups & downs throughout her relationship with famous Edward Cullen. Now it is her time to shine in the spotlight. But in order to do that she will have to find the strength within to fight for the things she wants in life. Will Edward be able to let go of the control he once had for the sake of his and Bella's relationship? Final part of A Working Title Series


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance, Rich & Notorious
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 272703 Read Count: 68161
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2013 Updated: 28 Apr 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love your sense of humor in this story and Bella's 'snarkyness' (ok not a real word but for her it works).  Love the more confident Bella, but can't help but drool when Domedward makes his wishes known.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh boy,can't wait to read the disaster!XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Thank YOU for sharing your talent!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Love this story and look forward to you updates. Thank you!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Wow, just Wow.  Left me stunned.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Way to go Alice!! Yes, Bella time to grow up.  XOXO, Cheri

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with all of us!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OK, so can we all agree that Bella took on way too much.  With that said I will take on all of that and more if I can get an Edward massage...  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Grinning like a fool! Love this story.XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This chapter made me just as sad as Bella. It was wrong, very wrong I wish it hadn't happened.  That said I trust you to find some way out of this and will try and be patient.  Seems like that is all I am doing these days, trying to be patient and waiting for the world to right itself. Love this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh boy things are going to get interesting now!  Love this story! XOXO,Cheri

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Holy Parcae Batman!!! Can't wait to hit 'next'!!!!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

God I love this story. Little surprised she forgave Edward or G75 so fast, but I am worried about poor Jake G79. That boy is going to have to do a lot of groveling!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wonderful ending to that chapter!!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS READING AND REVIEWING!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Not sure how this girl even has enough time to even breathe let alone sleep, sing, love And plan a wedding. Me, I would never leave Edward's bed! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think she is going to want the big assed needle! Love this story! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Sorry, but as far as I am concerned this story could last forever. Just my opinion so take it with a grain of salt and all the love that I have for your writing. XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Not sure what the fallout is going to be, but proud of Bella for sticking up for her friends.  Don't understand why people have to be so narrow minded.  As always, love this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Glad she is taking a breather, was exhauted with her schedule and I was just reading about it!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh boy, what has she done now???? Or maybe I should ask what she is signing up for next???  Love this story you always keep me on my toes!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Hope this means that B and Alice find this as a way to get closer again. Always love Alice.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

No, not Charlie!  Please, I love Charlie...crying here. please.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Crying. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Love these two in Italy.  Finally a wedding to look forward to. Thank you for a wondeful story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So happy. XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!    

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Best present ever, but is she really ready? XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Thrilled to see this update and know you are well.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Oops.Hope Edward chills. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

You continue to amaze me with this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Have loved this story from the very first chapter so long ago. You never let us down, you never quit. You have every right to be so proud of these words. Love that this will continue, I'm so not ready to say good bye to these wonderful characters. Thank you for sharing your talent. XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285490
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Enjoying this so much! XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

thanks for your note - the next chapter posts tonight, i hope you enjoy it.

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 - apple harlot

  Not sure who I will miss the most, but think it might be Lil Bit. She could always make me smile. Thank you for sharing your amazing imagination and talent. Yes I will truly miss this story. XOXO,Cheri

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading Sweet Temptations and sticking with me all the way.  I have really enjoyed writing this story and am glad others have enjoyed reading it too.

I know what you mean about Lil Bit she is such a sweetheart, for me though I think young Anthony really captured my heart.

take care and happy reading,

 

LB

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

Love your story! Thanks for the beautiful update.XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 - utter chaos!

So, I guess the question is will Edward survive the pregnancy? Love this story! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 ~ delicious mushroom ravioli

Love, love, love! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast

Just wonderful! XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it.  i loved writing it.  there is some fun ahead for our little family.

thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.

cheers,

LB

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 peanut butter sandwich and a large glass of milk

Such a sweet and wonderful story. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird

Wonderful story, thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That man needs to buy a ring ASAP!  XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

Happy Holidays and thank you for the wonderful present of this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry

What a wonderful chapter. Yes, a little bit weepy but can't wipe the silly grin off my face. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Lovely! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

How could anyone not love Emmett? The wedding was wonderful. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53~ barbecued sausage & potato salad

Such a sweet story and love your characters. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 - Risotto boscaiola

Not sure that I am ready to trust Caius, just saying. By the way, love this story! XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334491
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Loving this story.  Boy, I knew Jessica was a _itch and jealous but Wow, wasn't expecting this.  Can't wait to meet Charlie.  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Many of you are questioning how Jessica knows so much about Bella.  Bella and Jessica are both from Forks.  Jessica is jealous of Bella, because Bella beat her out for valedictorian.  Jessica was always the smartest of her class, until Bella came along.  Several years younger and doesn’t even have to try in order to surpass her academically.  Bella got all the best scholarships and awards, all things Jessica wanted.  When the stuff happened at Harvard, of course Jessica heard about it, and being from Forks she certainly knows Jacob.  A lot of you want retribution in blood or however it can be gotten.  Rest assured that what comes around goes around, but as long as Bella is close enough for them to hurt, Edward will keep his cards close to his chest. 

Things are progressing well, and where this is a slow burn thing will heat quicker now that she lives there.  It’s still a slow burn, but no longer dragging feet pace.  For the record, Edward does want her to go to supper and meet his family, but he is tense about it because his family is very in your face caring and loving and Bella is not used to that type of family interaction.  Edward doesn’t know it yet, but he loves her.  Be patient and you will see this, I assure you.  Next chapter will post on Sunday, see you then. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  “Yes, my girl performed a special dance for me earlier. She said she would, with our approval, teach something similar to Sulpicia.” Aro gets a dreamy look on his face and grins even wider at me.

“Yes, there have been talks about that dance your girl performed since I arrived earlier. If you are in agreement with your girl doing this, then so am—” Aro gets cut off with the ringing of his cell phone. “Speaking of my pet,” Aro says before he answers, “Sulpicia,” he says answering the call. 

Before he says another word he looks to me as if he is concerned. “Yes, I’m with him right now,” he stops talking and has a look of anger coming across his face. “Keep her as calm as you can. Edward and I will be with you both soon.” I look to him as he talks and close his cell.

“Sulpicia is at Bella’s work. From what I can gather, there is some money and belongings that have gone missing.  Her boss checked out the staff lockers and found a laptop that another staff member claims was hers in Bella's locker.”

I nod at him, but I know my girl and she is no thief. It only takes us a short time to reach Bella’s work.  As I walk in my eyes fall on Lauren and Jessica, standing together.  As I look at Lauren, I see she has the laptop I bought Bella.

I smirk and move over to them. “That's my laptop and I don’t believe I gave you permission to touch it.” Both girls look my way and Lauren glares at me.

“No, this is mine. Look, it has my name on it.” I raise my eyebrow at her as she turns it and shows me the stupid sticker displaying her name.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love the way Edward takes care of her.  XOXO, Cheri

 



Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love, love, love this story! XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We were very glad to see that the major majority of you are no longer questioning Edward’s abilities to do the right thing.  The next chapter is the chapter that will really set things into motion.

 We have had some concerns brought to our attention regarding the fact that Bella talks to Edward about herself in third person.  We are not saying that EVERY submissive talks to their Dominant in third person, but the research we’ve done, more often than not it is the way it is.  Keep in mind that we’ve spoken to Dominants and submissives alike during our research.  In this story Bella has a photographic memory, she could have read any number of books which reference the usage of third party speaking as a natural way to show submission.  Neither of us is saying anyone else should do this, but in this story Bella is quite the natural at speaking as a submissive. 

Some have suggested that Edward try to just be a boyfriend and not a Dom to Bella.  Edward will discuss all of this with her soon, we assure you that no stones will be left unturned.  Chapter eight you will get to meet Charlie, but first we will have a turning point in seven that many of you have been asking for and suggesting since chapter two. 

There have been a lot of comments and references about the neglect Bella has withstood from her ‘family’.  When Nikky and I first talked about this story I wanted us to play up the neglect, because it is a huge amount of the way many children live.  I have shared with everyone, in the author’s notes and review replies, that I was a victim of neglect.  When I talked about my own experiences it was not for your sympathy it was to say that I know it happens.  I want to say thank you to all of you who have made mention of my past abuse, and send hugs to those who have shared some of their own stories with us.  Not everything Nikky and I write about Bella happened to me, and as an adult I had a moderately decent relationship with my parents.  I cannot say that Bella will, or that this story will end with her having contact with her biological parents. 

We hope this addresses the majority of your concerns and or questions.  We will see you next week with a pivotal chapter in the story! 

Much love, Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:
“Please, excuse me, I need to take this,” I inform Aro and move away while answering my cell. “Beautiful, how are you this evening?”

I don’t hear a reply, but I can hear music in the background.

“Ah, shit! That hurt,” Bella’s voice comes across the line, but it sounds off and slurred.

“Bella, are you okay?” I ask alarmingly, already moving toward the exit.

“Oh, this ... weird ... I was going to call you.  I feel ... real funny ... strange.  My head ... hurt and ... I feel ... um ... so dizzy ...”

I see Felix standing guard close to the door and I head to him. “Bella, I’m on my way.  Stay on your cell.”

I pull my cell away from my mouth before speaking to Felix. “I need to go. Find Aro tell him I had to leave, he will assist you in any details you need.  Let him know he is in charge.”

He gives me a nod, and I exit the door and run to my car.

“Okay, Beautiful, stay right where you are and stay on the phone with me. I’m on my way to you.” I try to take some deep breaths to calm myself. “Where are you, Beautiful?” I start my car as I switch my cell to hands-free.

“I ... hum, bathroom ... I think. Fuck ... it’s warm in here.”

I know right now it is best to keep her talking. “Have you been drinking?” I ask frowning, because I know even when I’m out with her, Bella does not drink much.

“Nope ... I am ... a goo ... girl ... I swear ... Sir, no ... drink-ies ... for me.”

“There you are! I was wondering where you got off to. Who are you talking to?” I hear a male’s voice ask, and I move my car a little faster.