Reviews by cjrich
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

Really like how this story is starting. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone seems to be loving the story and we are so happy about that.  Not a lot of questions asked this go around, but there will probably be some more by the next chapter.  This story will be somewhere between twenty and thirty chapters when complete.  We mentioned this will post once a week on Mondays.  If for some reason Kasi can’t post Monday morning, it may post late Sunday night.  The Cullen’s are very accepting of Edward’s choices in life and his lifestyle, therefore yes the Cullen’s would be good to Bella if she were to be around them.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we look forward to hearing more of your thoughts as the story goes.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter: Two

I am loving this story and this Edward/Bella. Just like a fragile Bella. Can't wait to see where you guys take this! XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Well it seems like more and more of you are hating Bella’s parents.  That is quite understandable, but you haven’t even met them yet.  Yeah you get to meet them.  Form your opinions after you do.  The back story of what happened at Harvard will come out, soon.  You will also get to see more of the sweet side of our DomWard in upcoming chapters.

We had people worrying about throwing Bella right into scenes and such, we want to assure you that there is no way we could write that, because there is no way she could do that.  This story starts in September, and they will be friends first.  Edward has feelings for her, but he knows she is quite broken.  Have some trust in us, we are not perfect but we do try to provide a decent story worth reading.

We’ve had a lot of people asking about chapter count, and posting time frames.  At this point we are saying around 25 chapters.  There are 14 written and once we have it fully written we will post much more often.  We could easily post up to chapter 12 right now, but then you would be stuck waiting for 13 and on up.  We would rather put you on a week wait now, than have to say, sorry we got writers block no chapter this week.  We purposely started posting after we had 10 chapters written for a reason. 

We’re going to start giving teasers like we did for His Cimmerian View, and this is the first teaser and it is unannounced, so enjoy.

Nikky and Kasi~

 

I chuckle, before leaning in to whisper to her.  “These are exhibitionist submissive and Dominants that are in these. There are many showing different scenes—new things—teaching methods.  Some have sex in them, but unlike porn these, or most of them I should say, are collared pairings, who have been together for a long time and both agreed to do this.  There are some that are of a submissive that is into humiliation.  They’d meet with the Dom several times and build a trust between them, before these filmed scenes take place.  There’s always a contract between both parties, and both are screened for STDs beforehand.”

Bella looks at the DVDs and then back at me.  “Are you in any of them?” she asks, her voice is soft and low.

I look at her shaking my head.  “No, I’ve never done that.  Well, I never had someone taking pictures or a video of it anyway.  I have done a few scenes with my sub at the time.  When I’m not with a collared sub, like my current situation, I’ve done scenes with submissives’ whom I have a good relationship with from my club.  I’m due to do a teaching scene about rope bondage and spanking at the club three weeks from now.  No matter how many scenes I participate in, the one thing I don’t do is have sex during a public scene.”

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

I keep forgetting how young Bella is.  You know I have always loved Charlie, but I am so spiting mad right now I may just change my mind!  Glad Edward has her at his house, he just needs to keep her there!  Loving this story!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Well that is pretty much verbatim the reaction we were expecting.  We did have a reviewer or two who feels that Bella has been abused to limits of overkill and that Edward shouldn’t want to be with a kid.  I want to address this a little before things get blown out of proportion on this train of thought.  Showing the things Bella lives with and has lived with, is how we are showing her ways of adapting.  Bella has been severely neglected all her life.  She knows no other way.  Speaking from some experience on the matter, when you grow up in a household without both parents and you pretty much raise yourself, and get pushed aside for your parents needs can either make you or break you.  When you solely depend on yourself, you tend to learn to not react the way people normally would.  Bella’s childhood in this story is a lot like mine, in the place where I had no contact with my father at all from age of 6 to 16, who I then saw twice at age 16 and never again until I was 21.  My mom started dating when I was young, but when I was 9 she met a man who she chose to place before me.  By the time I was 12 I lived alone, she gave me the money to pay the bills.  So yes this stuff does happen.  I am by far not a perfect parent myself and I may be a single parent, but I am always here for my children.  I turned out okay, and with the exception of not being able to be in a healthy relationship I am not screwed up.  Edward in this story sees the good in Bella, and sees that she is more than she’s been made to believe she is.  Bella was made to grow up fast as a child.  She parented her mother for years.  She pushed away by the same mother she raised to go live with a father who resents her for choosing her mother over him.  Now we had some questions about waiting until Thanksgiving, and it will be Thanksgiving soon in the story.  Just a few more things have to happen first.  Be patient, everything in this story will happen for a reason.  We have had a great number of followers and reviewers for this story, so we do write one major reply and send to all, but we do try to answer all questions asked ... of course we don’t want to give away too much.  I do hope that this helped you understand a bit more about how and why Bella just lets things roll and adapts to what goes on.  You can always join us on Facebook at the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  On behalf of Nikky and I, thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a lot to us.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

TEASER: I quickly snap a picture, before speaking to her.  “No, just a normal picture, but you can pose for me anytime you’d like.” I wiggle my eyebrows at her as I snap another picture of her.

I keep snapping pictures as we talk in my office.  I know I have a few that I can use, but I can’t seem to stop taking her picture.  

“I think that’s enough pictures of just me.  Come on, Edward. Why don’t you take one with the both of us?”

I take the camera away from my face, before grinning at her.  I walk over to the oversized comfy chair then sit.  Off to my left is the large stone fireplace, and the flames are casting their warmth on my feet.  Once I’m sitting, I pat my leg in motion for her to join me.  “Come on, Beautiful.”

Bella looks at me, then to my leg as she slowly stands and makes her way to me.  She glances at the arm of the chair and I shake my head at her.

“Please, Beautiful, just to take your picture. I swear I don’t bite.”

“Liar,” Bella chuckles, looking at me. 

I look at her and frown.

“Don’t give me that look Edward, I’ve seen your club and read the first two books you loaned me.  Plus, you look like the type of guy that likes to bite, at least a little.”

I chuckle nodding, because she’s right, I am a biter. “You’ve got me, dead to rights on that one, but I swear I won’t bite you ... today.”

Bella sits on my knee and I pull her back so she is flush with my front.  I raise my hand with the camera in front of us and snap away.  Slowly, I feel Bella relax in my arm and she drops her head to the side of my neck.  I take a few more, before kissing the side of her head.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow,just wow.  Tough chapter, I don't understand Charlie. Hard to wrap my head around a parent like that.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wonderful chapter and yes nice surprise at the end!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Well it seems the majority of you really liked this chapter.  There was some confusion regarding Edward’s family, they all really love Bella, but have been warned to not be too handsy or huggy with her, because it is nothing she is used too.  Please don’t fret, Edward’s family is there and will be there to support Bella.  Lots of you still want instant retribution for Bella against everyone who has hurt her, but please be patient Rome wasn’t built in a day.  As always our update schedule is every Sunday night/Monday morning, so far I have been able to post every Sunday.  There is a lot of stuff going on and things will be interesting here very soon.  A lot of people were surprised by Bella’s actions of kneeling naked in his playroom, but only Bella knows what she wants.  Edward wants her there is no doubt about that, but he wants her to want him for herself—not just because she thinks this is what he wants.  Edward has a fine line to walk, but he is not stupid and will handle this situation accordingly.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.  Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:
I glance down at my cell, when it rings seeing that it says Beauty.  I frown, because I know that she should be about to start her last class.

“Beautiful, is everything alright?” I ask worryingly.

“Renee called, I didn’t pick up.  I was unsure if you wanted me to call you first or if it was just Charlie. I’m sorry, I just thought ...”

I smile and sit back down.  “No, Renee wasn’t on the list, but I’m glad that you called.  Please wait until I’m with you before calling her back.  I will make a list of people of who you are not to answer to, it’ll make it easier for you—us.” I hear Bella clear her throat a few times. “Is there anything else, Beautiful?”

I hear a light chuckle. “You know me so well.  Two things, one I want to know what would happen if I skipped my next class, and second, they want me to see Mr. Whitlock, Jasper, sometime today.”  I can hear in her voice there’s something more and I know this may need a face to face talk. “I am on my way to make an appointment with Jasper right now.”

I smile a little and grab my car keys.  “I coming and getting you from Jasper’s office, stay there until I arrive.”

“I will, Sir ... it’s, oh, Jacob,” Bella says.

“Well, hello there, Isabella.”

I move faster towards my car.  “Don’t speak to him.  Go into Jasper’s office and hand Jasper your cell,” I say to her, while Jacob was talking.

“I’m sorry, but he’s blocking my path.”

I let out a sigh, and start my car. 

“Who are you talking to?  Not that old guy?  Is he still fucking you?  I’m surprised he’s been able to keep himself hard around your whore ass.”

I grit my teeth together. “Shout Jasper’s name now,” I say as Jacob rattles on.  When I hear nothing coming from Bella, I put on a firm voice.  “Now, Little Girl, scream for him and hand him your cell.”

“Jasper!” I hear Bella yell.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG pink hair!?! XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Many of you have already figured out that Renee is not quite motherly material. We were laughing and shocked by some of the stuff said about Renee’s pink hair.  Gotta love it.  We think you’ll like the next chapter, we get to see Renee and how she treats Bella, but we will also see how Edward gives Bella the ability to stop letting Renee walk all over her.  We think you will love it, we know we did.  A lot of you are worried about Jake and Charlie as well as Tanya ... with that being said we don’t want to give away anything much, but trust by the end of the story all things will be resolved.  I think you all will enjoy Edward’s protective ways of Bella, now that he knows she is his both casually and contractually.  We hope that you love the teaser, we had to share something juicy with you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:

“I couldn’t tell you for how many years we’ve been married. I know it’s been a few, but it still feels like yesterday.”

I roll my eyes at Renee’s performance, because that’s what she’s doing—performing for them.

“Mr. Cullen, when were you going to tell the world about your marriage to this woman?” one of the paparazzi yells out.

I shake my head at them. “Mrs. Dwyer is not my wife; she’s the mother of my girlfriend. Mrs. Dwyer was talking about her husband, Phil Dwyer, he plays baseball.”

Renee turns and glares at me. “They know who he is. He’s the best baseball player that has ever lived.”

I glance at the paparazzi seeing they’re all trying to figure out which team he plays for. The bright one of the bunch of course starts questioning me again. “Where is the new girlfriend, Mr. Cullen? Do we get to know her name?” I smile and look beside me to see that Bella has moved to stand almost behind me.

“She’s a little camera shy, and her name is Isabella Swan. However, we have to go, her mom and step-father have had a long flight, and it’s been a few months since they’ve had a chance to visit.  As you can imagine, they want to spend some time together, so please excuse us and have a nice day.” 

I start to walk away, but see Renee has failed to move. “Push this for a second, Beautiful,” I say before walking back and grabbing Renee’s arm lightly.  “Time to go.”

She huffs at me and I give her the look which managed to only shut her up for a whole two seconds. She really is obtuse. “Look, I need to do stuff like that with the paparazzi. I know you’re just a newcomer, but I’m famous because of who I’ve married.”

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Whew, I am exhausted. So glad Renee is not my Mom! Can't wait for Esme to meet her. XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother.  With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise.  Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should.  Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well.  Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself.  Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths.  I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance. 

A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing.  Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood.  Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them.  I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents.  This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know. 

As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.

“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.

“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.

Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this.  Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”

I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”

“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.

“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.

“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.

“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Time for Renee to go home now.  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love, love, love this story. XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

You gotta love Mommabear!  XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yahoooooo!  Wonderful chapter, but then guess I am a pretty nasty person. Loved all the revenge.  XOXO, Cheri

 



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Loved Esme pushing Renee into the water.  Still laughing!!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wonderful story, I have enjoyed it so much!  Thank you.  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Thank you all for reading and reviewing.  We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said.  Thank you again for everything.  Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation.  Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post.  Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January.  We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect.  We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic.  We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us.  We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page.  The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings.  Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment. 
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked.  I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office.  We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections.  “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.

“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots.  Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say.  I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.

Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”

“But he’s only two months and still small.”

I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.

“I know, believe me, I know.  Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”

Bella nods and lets out a sigh.

“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her. 

Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.

“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever.  They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.

I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.

“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted.  But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public.  Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”

My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.

“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up.  At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.

“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear.  First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing.  So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for.  If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”

My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words.  I start to get up to head over to her.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Will miss this wonderful story, but want to thank you for sharing.  XOXO, Cheri

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Sorry, but still imagining the last few chapters in my head and am in love with your story. Hope Edward can find it in him to be a little bit lenient and let Bella win them over. Can't wait to see where you take us with this. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Whew, loving this!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

What do I think? I think I can't wait to hit next!!!!  XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love stories that are different.  This looks to be very interesting and I am looking forward to what comes next.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Kinky and I love it. XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loving this and can't wait for more. XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love stories that are different and love where you are taking this!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

!!!!!!!!!! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loving your imagination, and your hot, hot loving scenes. 10-15, wonderful numbers!    XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love your imagination and can't wait to see what a pregnancy belt entails.  XOXO, Cheri

 

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

God I love your amazing imagination. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

With your story I am always happy. X

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Will miss this wonderful story, sad knowing the end is coming.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This story makes me smile. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Finally a little girl, ahhhhhhh!  Love this.  Thank you, XOXO, Cheri

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can't wait for Edward to meet Levi. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love this story.  So glad to see Edward taking this big step, but he has a lot to make up for, not being there when Bella needed him most.  XOXO, Cheri

 

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love this story. Sorry for all the hassles you have been getting.  Only people who loose are the people who love these stories.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

OMG you are going to make me wait after ending like that!!! I will wait but only for you. PS T better get what she deserves! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love this story! Can't believe he didn't read her story but if he was pissed before the next chapter should be interesting... XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

You could never ruin this story. If we as reader's get so involved in a story it is because of a wonderful writer that pulls us into the lives in your amazing imagination. My only complaint is with myself. I am to impatient to wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG, I knew it was bad but had no idea. Still loving this story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Love seeing this update.  Can't wait for the interview.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Will hate to see this story end.  Love this Edward!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Loved this story from day one. Congratulations on an amazing story. Hope to hear about future stories or maybe a sequel... XOXO,Cheri

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272418
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Just found this wonderful story and so glad I did. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Why do I feel so afraid for what will come?  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Not sure Bella realizes just how much Edward held back at the feast watching every one dance with her. XOXO,Cheri

 

 

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Am truly enjoying your story and hope that you will continue to post. XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

A pediatric oncology department is the last place you expect to find: the child you want to adopt, a childhood television star borne famous singer turned love of your life, a selfless guy and his polar opposite or see someone you become attached to die.  This is a road that Dr. Edward Cullen finds himself on, how will it all unfold?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73863 Read Count: 33741
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2013 Updated: 19 Nov 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Didn't need tissues, needed paper towels.  So what kind of dog is Minnie? Knowing Charlie I would say a great dane... XOXO, Cheri

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

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A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142597
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Three

Wishing I was in Hawaii right now, dreaming of a world without snow, wind and below zero weather...just saying. Loving this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Five

So happy to get chapters 3 times a week, so sad only 10 chapters left... XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Wonderful story, wonderful characters!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Hard for me to hate Alice, but easy to hate Malice. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty

Love this story! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Outtake

Loved this!!  Can't wait for the sequel, but will try.  XOXO, Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella Cullen is at home in Washington State. She's a middle school teacher, missing her husband, who is deployed in Afghanistan. It's been over a year since she's last seen her husband and this will be the second Christmas in a row that he will miss, with no luck in sight of his request of leave being approved. Her only wish is for her husband to be safe, in her arms, on Christmas.

Across the globe, Edward Cullen is working his hardest to grant his wife's wish of being home for Christmas. He also wants to tell her, face-to-face, that after his tour of duty is over, that Edward would be returning home. Permanently. Will he be able to make it home to his beautiful wife?

 

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Banner by Chandrakanta!! Thank you! 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Bella's Christmas Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15455 Read Count: 6336
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 24 Dec 2013
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful!  XOXO, Cheri

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OK, so I don't trust Isabella Jr.  Too much of a coincidence... XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Such a dark Edward, so nice to see his softer side.  Have my fingers crossed for baby...  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Really enjoyed this amazing story. Thank you for sharing. XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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It was actress Bella's first love scene and she was nervous. Director Edward tries to encourage her. However, when the scene starts, can Edward keep himself together? Remain professional? And after, keep himself in control?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9798 Read Count: 5196
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2014 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Director's Cut

Enjoyed this!   XOXO,Cheri

Daddies Precious by pienuniek Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Head-Chef Edward discovers a beaten girl in the dumpster of his restaurant. He saves her, and while her injuries heal, he finds out her past. They seem to be perfect for each other.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12362 Read Count: 3500
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2014 Updated: 01 Mar 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Daddy's Precious

Wonderful story. Love Daddy Edward and little Bella stories. Wish you could continue this.  XOXO,Cheri

Summary:

 

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Banner made by Eva

War has ripped the world apart. Bella is living in one of the few cities left. Life is cruel, food is scarce, and a few people hold all the power, but all is not as it seems.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11544 Read Count: 13306
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2014 Updated: 02 Mar 2016
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Jurisdiction

Loving this story. Just want you to know. XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your review. Sorry its been so long. I haven't been keeping in the best of health these past few months, but I am starting to get back on my feet now and feeling somewhat normal.

The next chapter is written and should be up soon. Just waiting on one person sending me it back.

Kara xx

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Jurisdiction

Wonderful story, wonderful chapter. The verse brought me to tears. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! The verse was beautiful and when I found it I knew I had to use it. I just wish I could credit the person who wrote it. x x

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Jurisdiction

Loving this! XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your review, honey. It really is appreciated.
The next update is with my beta and should be with you soon xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by:CaiteexxGraphics

SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loving this. Glad Edward saw for himself. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wonderful! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh boy this story sounds great!  Can't wait to see where you take this. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loving this story and love that you will try to update daily.  So hard to love a story and wait a month to see what will happen.  Shouldn't be grousing when you are providing me a wonderful story for free so thank you and excited to see where you plan to take this.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loving this story!!! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So enjoying your story! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

So enjoying your story, thank you for sharing.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wonderful chapter. Feel sorry for Jessica, or should I? XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Thank you for sharing your beautiful story. XOXO,Cheri

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126173
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loving this story. Can't believe Bella said that to Edward. Can't believe that he did what he did. Also can't wait to see what happens next. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow was not expecting Uncle Charlie! XOXO,Cheri

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

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Banner by Chandrakanta!!

 

Star Crossed

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Banner created by Mina Rivera! Thank you!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82045
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

So thrilled to see this update. My thoughts are with you and your loss. I try not to think about what you have been going through because my time is coming and I can't imagine my life without her. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Just want you to know how much I am loving this story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Appreciate your wonderful story so m. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. This story looks so interesting. Looking forward to more. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loving this story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So thrilled to see this update. Sorry for your RL, going through the same and my escape is reading all the talented writers like you, so thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wonderful story. Thank you! XOXO,Cheri

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72878
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Way to go Bella!! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow what a change in plot. Wonderful to know that she has people on her side. Not sure I could go back to that. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Summary:

I was content in the limelight until a coffee girl flipped my world upside down. Titles like 'Academy Award Winner' and the 'People's Choice' used to mean everything, but it's my newest title that I cherish the most...the Hollywood Dad.

 

*The True Confessions of a Coffee Girl Sequel*

 

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*Banner by Mina*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52074 Read Count: 39331
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2014 Updated: 13 Jun 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen

Love Daddyward especially your Daddyward. Can't wait to meet the two newest beans. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen

Edward and you are amazing! Have loved these characters from the beginning and love getting to see this side. Thank you.  XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen

Nothing as beautiful as E/B babies so bring it on. Of course I am not the one that is pregnant and has a 4 month old. Thank you for this wonderful story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two

Love you too! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow this story is back!!! Loved number one and can't wait to see this. Thank you! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen

Have followed this story from the beginning and you always leave me with the biggest smile on my face. Thank you XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen

OK it is official...again, Edward is perfect. I can so picture this. Edward holding their baby and Bella pregnant. Ahh heaven. Thank you for bringing a big smile to me with your wonderful words. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty

The girls are good for now and we can hope that they continue that way. Wonderful chapter. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One

Just such a wonderful story. Feel for them but just know that you won't let anything bad happen. XOXO,Cheri

Fairy Godfather by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Young doctor Edward pulls a beautiful girl out of harm's way, and finds that he may have just stumbled onto his greatest desire. Daddykink, so if that's not your thing, go elsewhere. For abadkitty.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33156 Read Count: 40029
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2014 Updated: 25 Mar 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So thrilled to see this update! XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A serial killer’s on the loose. The victims are all 5’ to 5’7, brown eyes, long brown hair. To make matters worse four friends are being stalked. With letters, photos, phones calls and threats, will the stalker get too close? Is the stalker and the killer one in the same? What happens when tragedy strikes and the girls pay the ultimate price? Annual Halloween story, all human.

Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41521 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Always love a new story from the two of you! XOXO,Cheri

Summary:

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All of Bella's memories have been erased. She knows nothing about herself or the two men that are holding her captive. The only thing she can recall is a feeling of urgency ... Danger. She knows that she needs to escape ... Run ... While she still can. ***DRABBLE***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23513 Read Count: 41755
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2014 Updated: 06 Feb 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wonderful story, thoroughly enjoying this. XOXO,Cheri

Summary:

 

 

 

Summary: Esme Cullen has a plan for Christmas this year, she's playing matchmaker. The two she's trying to get together aren't even searching for someone else. Can she help her friend, single mother of three – Bella, find a man who will love her and her children? What will happen, when it's Esme's own son is who she's trying to match Bella up with?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11709 Read Count: 3097
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love you both. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner By: Tiffany Kennedy - thanks for making this banner for us.

After the death of Gabriel Swan and Charlie Swan, the running of Swan's Toys, Trees and Reindeer is left in the hands of a very young Bella Swan. Why don't the majority of the townspeople remember sweet little Bella Swan? Who is this cold hearted woman who is running the Swan Plantation? What will the workers do when the normal two week vacation at Christmas is canceled?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39677 Read Count: 21862
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2014 Updated: 31 Dec 2014
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love everything you guys write, this is no exception. XOXO,Cheri

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Wonderful chapter. Yes I am happy teary but big smile on my face as well. Thank you XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad it was happy tears this time!  :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 25 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Yes the hate for Pops is there and the storyline should be happy that I am not B. Think he would have been flat on the floor regardless of his size had I have been in the room. Take care of our boy until Monday! XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

LOL!!  If I need Edward Sr. taken care of, I'll consider hiring you.  But I have a feeling you might just do it for free!  There was much hate for Edward Sr. in the reviews this week.  Quite colorful swear words!  :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Found where I needed to go. Voted for my favorite story/author, you. XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you SO much!  Can you see me smiling at you?  :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Back from the beach too. Bet you had a better time than I did. But the being with family was wonderful. 

This beautiful story just keeps getting better and better. Can't think of any one who deserved to win more than you. Thank you for sharing your amazing talents with all of us. XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Yay!  I did have a good time!  Not sure which of us had better.  I had my two kids plus another family (and their kids) with us.  Was yours an adult vacation?  If so, you probably have me beat!

Aww ... thank you so much!  Your sweet words really do mean the world to me.  I'm so happy you love the story so much!  *hugs*

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 11 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Hanging on to your A/N in chapter two right now with everything I have. Trusting you and hoping. XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

You just keep hanging on to that--I never break my promises.  I won't betray your trust.  ;)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Wow this story just jumped up in temperature about one hundred degrees. Love this healthier Edward. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Loved this chapter! Have a wonderful vacation, I will think of you while I am at the lake with no internet. At least I won't miss the next chapter on Monday. Haha.  See you on the 10th. XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you won't be missing a chapter and that I scheduled my vacation at the right time for you.  ;)  I hope you had a good time--I sure did!