Reviews by k1942
Black Swan by Raven Jadewolfe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Black, having divorced her husband Jacob after he finds his imprint, reconnects with the man who stole her heart many years ago, but she soon learns that she isn't the only one keeping a secret. There will be lemons, language, and violence. If you aren't 18, go read something else.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109285 Read Count: 20701
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I had a strong feeling that Bella would flourish in her new life, and avoid most of the ususal newborn problems. This is going to be quite the family, vampires, hybrids and wolves, all together.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I hope Bella will trust that the family will find a way to keep Jake away from the twins and with them. She seems to be an amazing vampire, newborn not withstanding!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That sounds like the most fun thing to do! The whole bunch, family and friends, all three species, had an absolute ball! I don't blame Edward for loving his life!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

How sick is that, Jake sending a severed head in a box for their anniversary? I wonder if his imprint is urging him to kill Bella and the twins? Something else to worry about! This fight with Laurent and Irina is pretty messed up, too, especially putting them back together and waiting for Edward. I can't say as I blame Bella  a bit for defending her children.

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I don't like what Irina said about Bella and her children, and I'm not very happy with her mate trying to kill Seth, either! All's well that ends well, I guess.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I'm  glad the family out-voted Bella over takiing the kids and leaving, she was a wee bit ridiculous about martyring herself!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

What is wrong with these people? What a bunch of crazies! Kind of wish I could have seen that silliness, especially as the cops showed up!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Now I'm really glad Esme killed that psycho arsonist bitch! My only wish now is that they find and destroy Jacob! I feel bad they have lost all there things, but luckily still have each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Please tell me that was the last vengeful relative to be disposed of! After all this danger and drama, I think everyone deserves some peace and quiet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

You left them all in a great place, complete with grandchildren! What could be any better? Loved this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When everything goes wrong at the baseball field what happens to Edward and Bella? Can they survive what happens? What happens when you give your life for the one you love? Is there a heaven? What will Bella do when all her dreams come true and she really gets her Second Chance at her first love?  Cowritten with preciousfairymom80, go check out her stories too!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102807 Read Count: 55128
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This second chance at life for Edward seems to come with limits. He sort of remembers Bella , but hardly recognizes his family, let alone realizes what they are. This screaming and burning sensation is also weird!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 But You're Human...

So now the Cullens have not one human child, but two, one of whom doesn't remember them. I'm curious as to how Bella will react to this. Was part of her love for Edward tied to the fact that he was a vampire? Guess we'll see!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth

Edward must have been a very good guy, to get this chance to come back to Bella, and as a human, no less! It seems he doesn't remember that his family are vampires. That may come as quite a shock!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Someone is Watching Me

Guess Bella wasn't imagining things after all. I know this won't go smoothly, but at least they're all going to be together to hash it out. Hope nobody goes into shock.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Moving

I know this is a story and it's not real, but I keep thinking of Bella and all the Cullens without Edward, and it makes me tear up, I can't help it. It's just not right for him to be gone, even though he is. We all lose loved ones, but not Edward, damn it! How will Bella get through it?

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Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing

Killing Edward in the first chapter wouldn't be my first thought, but I do see why you warned everyone to read a few chapters before killing you both. I sure hope the readers paid attention!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Things were looking pretty good there for a minute, then Alice had to interrupt. Wonder who's coming to visit? Please don't let it be the Volturi!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Cracked me up when Esme yelled upstairs to tell Edward and Bella to quit fooling around and get to sleep. Just like that was perfectly normal. Wghat did she think was going to happenbetween two people  young and in love? That part about Carlisle sedating them was hilarious! These new vampires ought to get things stirred up nicely.

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Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward is going to have keep an eye out for Ally, if he wants to escape trouble with Bella's feelings. They all sound like their typical beautiful selves, as they go out clubbing and dancing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This may not end well, as Alice is pushing an awful lot of tequila down Bella ans Edward's throats. Wonder if she knows about humans and alcohol poisoning?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Who knew, my favorite vampires are a bunch of piss-ants? That was kind of a dirty trick to pull on Bella and Edward, and not very considerate of any of them. The confrontation between Bella and Ally was pretty darn funny, though.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Bella is evidently getting better at lying than she use to be, maybe from living with the Cullens all this time. Charlie seemed to accept all the story, anyway. Now I must admit to being real curious as to why blood is all over the house?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Halloween

I can see why you laughed yourselves silly. That was probably one of the best Halloween parties ever known to mankind. I laughed so hard  I choked. Great chapter!

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Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

They had to drive clear to Chicago, but at last, Bella and Edward are one!That was beautifully done and certainly worth the wait.

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Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Just when you thought it was safe to get in the shower, Tanya shows up! She ought to be thrilled to see Edward again , even in his human form. Can't wait for Bella to get after that blonde vampire, on top of her man!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Of all the rotten luck! I hope the Cullens catch up with Tanya and kill her! How could she be  such a selfish bitch, and hurt Bella and Edward so much? Her family will be so ashamed of her actions. Thank God  she didn't kill them both!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Some happy news and some worrisome. For instance, where is would-be rapist Tanya? I wonder the Cullens arent't still hunting her. Glad Bella and Edward are going to be fine, hope that holds true when Charlie finally processes the news.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Poor Charlie, must have shocked him pretty badly, for him to faint. Good thing Sue was there to care for him. This must have happened while Bella was away. Wonder if wolves will be involved?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I remember mood swings from being pregnant, but Bella is a little over the top. She is the female equivalent of Jekyll and Hyde! All this can't be good for the twins, or for the relationship between her and Edward.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Nothing like a little good loving to make everything okay! Of course, a shopping spree/spa day doesn't hurt, either. Edward is the most romantic guy, no wonder Bella loves him to pieces.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That phone cal to Renee was pretty funny, but not half as much as Bella teasing Jasper. I'm sure glad Bella's moods have settled down. Now to see about calming Charlie. Maybe he'll be in a better frame of mind.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That went really well and a whole lot better than it might have. Good for Charlie and Bella  to make up. Probably some of Sue's influence on him. I love it when everybody gets along.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I see the hormones aren't through with Bella's moods quite yet. Mike and Jessica are just as bad as they were in high school. I guess some people never change. It's probably best that Bella knows about the Quileutes and their wolf gene. No sense keeping secrets with that bunch.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Embarassing, but very funny, too. At least Esme, Alice and Rose didn't find Edward and Bella asleep on the piano! All this hustle and bustle is going to get worse before it gets better. Wedding plans, shopping trips, Bella will be a basket case here pretty  soon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

How nice to have that whole boubdary thing settled. Nice too, that Jacob and Edward are becoming friends, as well as Bella and Crystal. Friendly relations won't hurt any of them, it's lots better to get along with your neighbors.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

As long as you're not planning one, or having to pay for one, don't you just love weddings?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ah yes, the VCullens, my very favorite, loving pervert vampires! How lovely that Carlisle and Esme gifted the house to them, and Emmett and Rose were super, rehabbing Bella's old truck. The new Volvo was great, but Alice and Jasper gave wonderful gifts also.  Lucky young couple, to have such a loving, generous family!

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Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

It's nearly time and preparations  almost done. The hen party at Charlie's was touching, with all the heirlooms and gifts. The trip to Port Angeles for the suits, not so much. Poor Edward, he has to fight them off with a stick! He takes such good care of his Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That was weird, to have a beautiful wedding and then have Mike Newton attack Bella! Even more weird was how everyone blew it off after Edwardbeat him up and Charlie arrested him, they all went back to the reception and danced. Oh well, at least no real damage was done to Bella or the babies.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Honeymoon

So much for the theory that you have to go somewhere exotic for a honeymoon to be memorable. Bella and Edward's three weeks in Chicago were perfect, and just what a honeymoon should be!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Holidays are Approaching

Edward and Bella got a little carried away with their role playing. Angel and Buffy, indeed! How silly! Shopping with the Cullens was kind of a fun experience, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 So This is Christmas

One fabulous, fantastic Christmas, followed by the rather traumatic birth of little Miriam. That was so sweet, hearing Jacob talking to his new little daughter. The gifts all the Cullens gave each other were absolutely wonderful, by the way!

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Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Could you choke our chickens just a little more?What a place to leave everybody! Boy, I hope Edward and Bella make it through this!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Thank you so much for the happy ending! I see what Alice meant by two birthdays, the twins actually were born on two different days. Those are two lucky little children, with so much love and caring, and anything  they will ever want!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

This was a wonderful story, even the teary parts, so thank you so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Carlie are twins with mysterious powers.What's the fallout after they are abducted by a psychotic vampire? OOC! mostly canon pairings some OC's

NOW COMPLETE!

BEING BETA'D AS OF 9/19/10

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240263 Read Count: 18343
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 WTF?!

That was great! Carlie didn't see that coming, at all! Neat way to start the new year!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Small Victories

Too bad Bella didn't end Tanya, I think she has just made a mortal enemy instead! It would be just like her to run tattling to the Volturi and bring that evil down on the family.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Something Wicked This Way Comes

This is going to be one hell of a confrontation, perhaps leading to a battle of epic proportions!

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Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Coups and Monsters

Talk about a baptism by fire, I think Raine has just had one! At least there are no illusions of trying diplomacy with the Volturi. This way, they train to win a life or death battle, because it's all or nothing with this one!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Progress Through Epic Failure

Very interesting and I see why Allen and Mischa have kept that nugget of information to themselves.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Graduation Jitters

Kudos to Edward and Jacob for totally surprising their girls! I absolutely agree with the timing of their marriages. It's definitely a case of carpe diem. The graduation party seems to have been a rousing success also!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Countdown

Time is running out and they are just about ready. I'm very curious about what is being assembled in Volterra, but glad Jane and Alec won't fight the witches!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 What Things May Come

OMG! Here it goes and there they all go! I'm tempted to cover my eyes, or pull the covers over my head!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 War Games

Don't tell me Carlie makes it out of Volterra, only to die under rubble from a wall! This fight has been a real son-of-a-bitch! I sure hope all the rest got out okay!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 The Fork in the Road

Though it left me breathless a couple of times, this was a hell of a good story! Great family, great action adventure and great love stories!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Burning

This chapter was tough to read because Carlie is descending into Hell and can't ask for help. The cutting is scary for me, I think I died that way in another life, I hate sharp things so bad! I hope to God she gets some help before it's too late!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Secrets

This is agony on a whole different level, and not only for Carlie alone!

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Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Oh Shit

There will be blood tonight and I don't know what that means for the family! I just hope they can stop Carlie from killing Lauren! That stupid bitch has no idea what she is messing with!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Fighting Again?

So glad life is getting better for Carlie! That just spills over onto all the rest of them! The glitter and sex toy covered car was priceless!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Moving Forward...Maybe

Oh dear, I'm seeing the seeds of another terrible experience for the twins and all who love them.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 No, You Did Not Just Do That

I see, Carlie thinks because she was lying to her mom about being injured and in the hospital, she somehow caused the accident that killed Phil and Renee! I guess logical thinking is not this girl's strong suit.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Two Teenage Girls, one bathroom? Grab the Camcorder, I'm putting this on YouTube!

I will put money on Bella finding out what Carlie is trying to hide from her. That mindreading twin thing will be her downfall.  Got to go, I think Bella is about to see her old red pickup, just as soon as Billy and Jacob quit laughing at the girl's clumsiness!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Not so starcrossed after all?

Wow! So the girls have some powers besides the mindreading!  Sounds like it came in handy after dinner, for doing the dishes and claening the house! Carlie is quite taken with Jacob Black and Bella loves the truck he worked on, so at least there are a couple things about Forks that they don't hate!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Forks aka 7th Level of Hell

Typical girls, embarassed by Uncle Charlie's squad car! It's going to be a big adjustment for them, living with him and missing their parents. What in the world makes Carlie think she caused her parent's deaths?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Goodbye Sunshine, Hello Hell.

Well, well, this is a different beginning! Charlie is uncle instead of father. Or is he? Any chance Renee  had Charlie's babies and said they were Phil's?

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Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Half-Life

That's pretty sad that Carlie seeks a way to tell Bella Charlie is dead, and Bella is searching for the same thing! I'm so glad there are more good things than bad now. Life is never going to be perfect, but they will keep working on it because they have hope!

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Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Effing with Siege Engines

Just when things were starting to smooth out a little, too!

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Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Taken

She may not be a monster,  but I certainly won't think less of Bella, or Carlie, for taking revenge on that hideous bastard, James! It was horrifying to read what he did to them, and thank you for not being anymore explicit than you were, by the way! Mostly thank God the guys found them when they did!

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Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Fallout

Come on, can't these girls ever catch a break? They are just starting to recover a bit, and here comes crazy Victoria, hot on their trail!

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Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Good Intentions usually blow up in your face.

I would lay odds that Bella and Carlie are Charlie's daughters. I hope it's better all around, now that Charlie knows about everyone. I really hope they can destroy Victoria and breathe  freely for a while.  I also want Edward and Bella to be married!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Vegas or Dust

This just made me want to cry. Poor Charlie, and Carlie, and all who love them!Looks like the good guys won, but not unscathed, Bella is a vampire! Please tell me Victoria is ashes!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 The Truth Effing Hurts

Bella hasn't told Carlie about the vision she had of Charlie bringing Carlie to town and leaving her to be found.  I guess he's that shell thing they were talking about, since Carlie brought him back after he died and it's all that is left of Charlie Swan. It may not be perfect, but at least they are all still together.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 More Changes

I hope this thought that Carlie has, that she and Bella no longer have their twin connection, is wrong. There has been so much for them to deal with, both good and bad, recently!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Carpediemquam minimum credulapostero or Seize the day and place no trust in tomorrow

While not perfect, this seems to be a pretty good solution, for the time being.

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Let the Chaos Commence

I was so hoping that Carlie was getting bvetter in her mind, shedding some of the guilt. The merry band of vampires, werewolves and witches was having a pretty good time before this meltdown. I'm still worried about the psycho vampire stalking the twins. It gives me the creeps when you write his thoughts, yuck!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Playing House

Carlie is pretty sneaky, colluding with Jake, Jasper and Alice, to get Edward and Bella to consummate their love! All six of them living together should be a lot of fun!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The Duel

Crap! I guess it really was too good to stay calm and happy in Forks. Now that Bella and Carlie are happy with their loves, and everyone is getting along pretty well, crazy James shows up with evil intentions on his mind! Boy, I hate him!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Furploded?

Now that they have mated, there will be no parting Carlie and Jacob! I suppose it's inevitable that their lives will always be divergent to some extent, since their loves are mortal enemies! I hope Bella and Carlie get to Jake soon and find out what's wrong!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Date Night

I was pretty sure the girls could defend themselves, but that display was spectacular! Then Jacob phases and scares Edward and Carlie faints! Quite the first date, I must say! Loved the description of Edward's room. Nothing is ever dull or boring around these two girls!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 It's Complicated

Bella better tell Carlie about Edward pretty soon, before her twin thinks of any more mischief  to visit on him! I really like your Edward, he's so different from the original version! I also like that Carlie has Jacob and now Bella has her vampire! Good thing she wasn't hurt too much in that parking lot!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Don't Panic

Billy's reaction was pretty cool, so that's one worry off their minds. Wonder where Bella has found a job? Things are going too smoothly, so I'm bracing for some trouble to come calling!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Roses and Revelations

That really was a sweet little vignette!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Changes

It's so nice that Bella wants to help Carlie with her secret relationship. The sisters are surely opposites but care for each other a lot. Maybe Carlie can help Bella when she finds her"one"!

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Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 New Car!

Good for Jake, for stepping up and letting Carlie know how he feels, especially since she feels the same!

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Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 HIM

I can see why Carlie is drawn to Jacob in the normal course of things, since they both lost their mothers. What I don't think either of them yet understands is the supernatural bond they share, he is, or will be a shape-shifter and she's a witch! Now, all that's left id Bella and Edward to get together!

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Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 High School. Oh, Joy

Bella is just incredibly clumsy, and it even spills over onto Carlie at times! I feel sorry for Bella since she feels as if she is somehow at fault for Edward's apparent dislike of her! Carlie has immediately fallen for Jacob, it seems, and Bella sure has some kind of feelings for Edward Cullen. I can't wait for them to share there "otherness" with each other!  Speaking of which, it's amazing the difference between the twins!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Love at First Sight?

That was awesome and confusing! Why would they need to be enemies at school tomorrow? By the way, that was so ornery to ruin his car like that!

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stories/1619/images/All_the_Right_Reasons_Banner.jpgMy entry to the FML contest. See other entries and vote, go to http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2187120/    Voting open now!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5223 Read Count: 165
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have new-found respect for Rosalie, after reading what she did to defend herself and her child! Gotta love Emmett, too!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summer Outtakes for the story Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights.  It all began the year her parent's died.  The boys took her to the beach that first summer trying to cheer her up.  It ended up being a yearly tradition for Bella and her boys.  Watch as their relationship matures and develops from one end of the pendulum swing to the other until they finally find equilibrium.  These outtakes also fill a few of the gaps between the wedding and the epilogue.  Come enjoy the angsty, hot, and volatile journey.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69300 Read Count: 26418
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The First Summer, June 2002

The tingling hum was the sign, I guess, that there was a connection between these two right from the beginning. I wonder how hard Edward had to work to convince himself that she was too young and too innocent? That's quite a facade to maintain for the better part of seven years!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: The Second Summer: June 2003

No reason for anyone to hate on this look back to Edward and Bella's history. It is what happened and it took all this to get them to better times.

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The Third Summer: June 2004

Quite a dance these two are doing around each other, and not a real happy one, either!

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: The Fourth Summer: July 2005

I like that Edward has got his head out of his ass and decided to be Bella's friend again. This summer trip to the beach house was a good one just because of that fact.

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: The Fifth Summer: June 2006

That last scene on the beach almost made me sad, thinking how it will still be a couple years until that song can come true!

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: The Sixth Summer: August 2007

Kind of like Edward, I'm a bit confused. If the guys are so sure he and Bella have feelings for each other, why are they threatening him like that? It is a really twisted mess they find themselves in, that's for sure! I feel bad for the both of them.

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: The Seventh Summer, August 2008

Sometimes the interaction between these two makes me think of Jekyll and Hyde! Andy was so sweet to beat up Damon for hurting Bella like that, and I had to laugh when all the guys found out, except for Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: The Last Summer "Before": August 2009

So close but no cigar. Too much to drink didn't help matters either. Well, as you said, things are about to get better soon!

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Two Years Later: First Anniversary

What a painfully romantic gesture, to ink their names on their ring fingers like that! It was kind of cute, too, for Bella to remember the blackout kiss, which made Edward remember also. Funny what gets lost in a drunken fog!

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: The First Summer of Parenthood

Brings back a lot of lovely memories, this chapter! Nice to read about Bella and Edward and their new baby, and Carlisle and Esme.

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: The Last Summer With FDKK

Thank s again for a really great story! Everything about it, happy and sad, miserable and terrifying, delirious  and sweetly tender, was an absolute joy to read!

Summary:

 

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Beautiful, terminally ill, Yolanda is abandoned by her partner to die in the woods near Forks, but is stumbled upon by Rosalie and Emmett while out hunting.  The kind-hearted Cullen family take this former journalist under their protection & care; see how she learns what they are and that there really are vampires in this world.  Her story plays out in a way she could never have imagined. 

What would you do if you discovered vampires truly existed?  What if you were offered immortality? What if a chance encounter brought you the love you had always dreamed of?

All your Cullen family favourites are very much involved in this story.  An Irish vampire comes calling to add a new twist to Cullen life. 

This is in essence a love story, mostly told from Yolanda's POV as a newcomer to the world of vampires.  Sometimes the story is told from the perspective of one of the others as they watch her adapt to her surroundings. 

Plenty of erotic moments contained in the story for the gorgeous Yolanda you see pictured in the banner.

Story rated for explicit lemony scenes and language and dark issues.
It has been migrated across from the FanFiction site and is now complete.

“Is she even alive, Emmett? I can’t hear a heartbeat from here.”  Rosalie stood there, hands on hips, glaring at me as if it was my fault we had stumbled upon a body in the woods. She clicked her tongue impatiently.

We’d been out for a couple of hours hunting and making out gloriously and lustily in the bracken. When the day had started, bright and early, I’d never imagined it would take this turn of events. Vampires don’t like surprises.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240866 Read Count: 8480
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: ETUDE

How sweet that Liam presents the ring and asks for Yolanda's hand before he changes her. She is slowly learning what she needs to know about her new life. I always thought Carlisle's library was one of the best things about the house in Forks.