Reviews by k1942
Summary:

 

Yolanda Banner v2

Beautiful, terminally ill, Yolanda is abandoned by her partner to die in the woods near Forks, but is stumbled upon by Rosalie and Emmett while out hunting.  The kind-hearted Cullen family take this former journalist under their protection & care; see how she learns what they are and that there really are vampires in this world.  Her story plays out in a way she could never have imagined. 

What would you do if you discovered vampires truly existed?  What if you were offered immortality? What if a chance encounter brought you the love you had always dreamed of?

All your Cullen family favourites are very much involved in this story.  An Irish vampire comes calling to add a new twist to Cullen life. 

This is in essence a love story, mostly told from Yolanda's POV as a newcomer to the world of vampires.  Sometimes the story is told from the perspective of one of the others as they watch her adapt to her surroundings. 

Plenty of erotic moments contained in the story for the gorgeous Yolanda you see pictured in the banner.

Story rated for explicit lemony scenes and language and dark issues.
It has been migrated across from the FanFiction site and is now complete.

“Is she even alive, Emmett? I can’t hear a heartbeat from here.”  Rosalie stood there, hands on hips, glaring at me as if it was my fault we had stumbled upon a body in the woods. She clicked her tongue impatiently.

We’d been out for a couple of hours hunting and making out gloriously and lustily in the bracken. When the day had started, bright and early, I’d never imagined it would take this turn of events. Vampires don’t like surprises.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240866 Read Count: 8480
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 34: ULTRAVIOLET

Trust me, my dear, reading your words did the same for me! It was so beautiful when they were quoting back and forth, I had to stop and wipe away my tears, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: NOCTURNE

You do realize, a person could run out of superlative adjectives, reading this story? Damn! Just gorgeous!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: INTERMEZZO

Took my breath away when I read the sentence about Yolanda's daughter, who was still-born. Was I reading too fast and missed that part of her history? I can't wait to hear what she will think when she learns of the imprinting of Jacob and Renesmee. The setup in the bedroom and Alice's ministrations, the dress and jewelry, all sound fabulous.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 30: REVELATIONS

She will take it all in, chew on it a while and digest it, and accept it very well, if I have any sense of Yolanda at all. She's one strong womanwith a good mind and a big heart.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE

Who would have thought to find a vampire family near Forks, Washington, of all places! Really looking forward to learning Yolanda's story. Fun reading Emmett's thoughts as he chases Rose around the woods, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: NO CONTROL

I think I may help her do the revenge scenario, just on general principles! "Thing" sounds horrible, to do these mean, nasty things to Yolanda.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: END OF THE ROAD

One big question comes to mind, why drag this poor , sick woman across two thousand miles of this country? If all he wanted to do was get rid of her, he could have killed her and dumped the body somewhere. Why keep her mostly alive and bound in the back seat and drive for days? Weird!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: SCARY MONSTERS

Come now, they're vampires, not omniscent! This must be  a new situation, even for them. I'm looking forward to an explanation as much as the Cullens.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: SAVED

That's quite a story to blurt out to your rescuers. Wonder what they thought when she said what had happened to her? At least Yolanda has landed with a family that will take care of her, even though she doesn't know that yet.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: QUANDARY

My God, this woman is a fighter! And the Lord knows she's had some hellish things to fight against, especially this guy, and the cancer. I can see why Rosalie is so sympathetic to this poor lost woman.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: ALL THAT I'M LIVING FOR

Emmett's favorite occupation, loving his Rose. Second favorite, maybe playing, either electronic games or goofing around with his brothers. Em isn't stupid, by any means, but he's truly a simple, uncomplicated soul.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: PINK

Never has been any doubt in my mind that Emmett and Rosalie love each other in all ways and for always. There seems to be something about Yolanda's plight that is deeply affecting Rose, making her need Emmett more than usual.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: NOT WAVING, BUT DROWNING

Now that Yolanda is back among the living, she has some big surprises coming. I'll bet she can handle whatever life dishes out, even the supernatural.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: IRONIC

Especially in the condition Yolanda's in, I would opt for immortality, no question. No more cancer, hell yes!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: OH WELL

All these revelations only prove what truly good people all the Cullens are. They won't try to influence Yolanda, just give her the facts and let her decide.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: RESOLVE

Bella laid it on the line, good and bad alike, so Yolanda has a clear idea of what transformation entails. She sure enjoyed seeing all the information she received from Renesmee, too. It seems she's accepted the Cullens and all their gifts, rather easily, I think.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: HOPE SPRINGS ETERNAL

Yolanda knows in her heart and in her mind, that these are good people and they will do the very best they can for her. She's been given the facts and has made her choice, so the next step awaits.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: MIRACLE

Who is this that Yolanda thinks she knows, as Jasper seems to, also? The longer she stays with them, the better Yolanda comes to like and appreciate the Cullens.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: AS LONG AS YOU FOLLOW

Liam sounds just right for Yolanda, and your picture affirms that! Life is funny, you never know how things are going to weave together and match up. That's the wonderful part!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: SOMETHING SO RIGHT

Oh yes, there's definitely a spark between Liam and Yolanda, which I'm sure is only going to grow with time.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: WHAT IF I DO?

How wonderful that there is hope in Yolanda's future and good things to look forward to!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: IF I DIDN'T

I'm a Mulloy, by birth, and all this talk of the Irish is absolutely lovely! I'm so happy for Yolanda, and hope she hangs on to her Liam, he's a keeper! Love your story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: LET ME TOUCH YOU

Liam is going to be important in Yolanda's new life, is he? I sure hope so , he sounds great!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: SLEEPYHEAD

What to think about Liam. Beyond the fact he's got all that Irish/vampire charm going on? I think he's one terrific guy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: LIFTED

No worries, the pacing of your story seems about right to me, but then I'm old, what do I know? Seriously, this is how it ought to go, slow, but not too slow. Wonder when Yolanda will find out about shape-shifters?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: STUNNED INTO SILENCE

Wouldn't you just love to have someone hold you, sharing the dawn and quoting poetry in your ear? Not just poetry, but Shakespeare? It may not get mush better than that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: BEWITCHED, BOTHERED & BEWILDERED

What a little ego boost, to know Liam's cared for her for years, since their first meeting! The sun-born sparkles were cool, as always, though your description was better than most. My take on Liam's hesitation, I think he's weighing the idea in his mind, wondering if he can do it without harming Yolanda.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: THE EYES HAVE IT

I like to think that little interlude was nothing more than mutual pleasure, enjoyed by both participants, and not some sort of obligation. It was freely offered, freely accepted and lovely to boot! Tickled me no end, that Liam wants to be the one to change Yolanda, it will be so much better if it's his venom coursing through her veins.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: COUNTDOWN

The pain and suffering Yolanda has endured ought to be enough for several liftimes, so ease up on that scary adventure stuff! Now that the date's been set, I hope nobody gets cold feet, so to speak. Wonder who all will bear witness to Yolanda's transformation?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 26: TRUTH & CONSEQUENCES

Always thought you should ask for complete honesty from your doctors, no matter what. Yolanda needs all the ammunition she can gather to make it through the coming ordeal. Lucky for her, she's got the best support system in the world of vampires, and a man who cares for her deeply. Best weapons she could have!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: LESSONS & TALES

That was a wonderful, magical afternoon, even the part interrupted by Emmett's silliness! As Liam shares himself with Yolanda, I can see the threads pulling them more tightly together. She is so appreciative of all the Cullens are doing and what's happening with Liam, it's truly touching to read.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 28: PRELUDE

How many talents, I wonder, does Yolanda possess, that she hasn't yet revealed? It would be cool as hell if she has some gift that carries over into her new life.

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 29: COMFORT

I really don't know how you could have made that any better than it was!Just simply perfect!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: OVER &OUT

That went much better than I expected, rather like a planned assault in a war. Yolanda is amazing, in that she can battle her way through the agony with the power of her intellect. What a mind she has. Liam did real well and had no problem stopping when he should. Carlisle must have really prepped him, and it sure didn't hurt to have Edward's gift to monitor the process.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 36: ON THE MEND

As Edward said, no going back and changing things, but it sure would have helped Bella to have had this amount of support during her transformation. At least she told them all what would help the most. You couldn't ask for more than what Liam is doing, and the Cullens are all so helpful.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: LIGHT MY FIRE

I'm with you, there, that was an amazing way to begin a whole new existence, and with violet eyes, no less! It made me smile when Yolanda made her Liam aware of what exactly she wanted and needed from him. Extraordinary how short a time this change took, even outdid Bella, I think.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 38: HEAVEN

That was so good, I'm surprised they ever got out of bed and in the shower. Helps to have an extra pair of hands I guess, especially such talented hands as Liam's. What an adventure Yolanda is embarking upon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 39: VIOLET HOUR

That was cute when Bella told Yolanda she was a bit jealous of how little time it took for her transformation. I still can't get over how perfect her violet eyes are. The first hunt will be very instructive, I'm thinking.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: SENSES WORKING OVERTIME

Quite a successful first hunt, and the dessert was to die for! Oh lucky Yolanda, and lucky Liam!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 41: LEAPS & BOUNDS

I hope Yolanda comes to appreciate her gifts, and not be upset by them. I think it's great that at least one of them is defensive, you never know around Forks when you might have to ward off the Volturi, or attacking nomads.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 42: SIGNAL FIRE AT RAINBOW'S END

Their lovemaking is incredible, that's all I have to say!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 43: FOR ONCE IN MY LIFE

This amazing woman is adjusting to being a vampire better than anyone, except possibly Bella. Still waiting to see her reaction to imprinting.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 44: BLOOD SEX MAGIC

Mostly good , only a bit of bad to deal with. Yolanda is a newborn, after all and Charlie is the first human she's had a whiff of. As long as the guys control her, it should work out the way Alice has seen. One step at a time, I suppose.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 45: MUSIC SOOTHES THE SAVAGE BREAST

For having gone through a few highs and lows, the day ended on a great note. Kind of makes you wish you could have been there, listening and dancing. I wonder how much of the Southern wars Jasper and Liam shared with Yolanda? Lots of stories there, I bet, both good and bad.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 46: WHEELS

I nice new silver Beemer, how exciting! Not to mention a run up to the ocean, my favorite place, too. It seems Yolanda fits right in with the Cullens.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 47: JUST SAY YES

That was a close thing! Too bad Yolanda didn't think for a second, about how Edward tried the same thing with Bella, and how very wrong that had been! This business of deciding your life's course, and not sharing that decision with your partner, is just plain stupid! Lucky that Liam is so eloquent and convincing, he saved them both a lot of heartaches.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 48: SURRENDER

There's just something about music that speaks to your heart, isn't there? It expresses so many things so beautifully. I really like that you have woven it so nicely through this story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 49: LOVE ALL AROUND

I'm really hoping Liam and Yolanda can stay connected with the Cullens, wherever they end up settling. You are truly blessed when you find friends like these, considering how rare they are. We meet many people in our lives, but few you can call true friends.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 50: WHOLE LOTTA LOVE

Including mind-blowing sex, this was a wonderful day, nearly alone, for Liam and Yolanda. I think it was enhanced a bit with Edward and Bella's  joining them, and it's always fun with Renesmee around.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 51: POZHALSTA

The conversations between Liam and Yolanda are so honest and open, it makes a person wish every man could be like he is with her. Is it just me, or are all the Cullen men and Liam, just the cat's meow?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 52: BURNING QUESTION

I would be shocked if Carlisle didn't want to marry them. He most likely would deem it an honor. Now that she's thought about it, Yolanda wants to get this show on the road!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 53: ALL THAT YOU COULD WANT

Another little piece of Yolanda's history in this chapter. I like the way you parcel out some of hers and some of Liam's, quite interesting. I suppose now Alice will be in full wedding planner mode. That girl sure likes to organize these things!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 54: I'LL BE THERE

I just love Liam, and of course, Yolanda too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 55: SEEING THE LIGHT

Who doesn't love lighthouses? It was an inspired choice on Alice's part and should make for a memorable wedding!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 56: WILD HONEY

You're no slouch in writing lemons, either! I particularly like the fact that this is a very good story, with fabulous sex, not sex with no story. Hope I'm making sense.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 57: ONE, TWO, THREE, FOUR, FIVE

This hunt was going so well, feeding and loving, and then possible disaster! I sure hope Yolanda can avoid killing some hapless human!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 58: THE HUNGER

How could I not enjoy it? That was almost too much excitment for one day. Good old Emmett, he seems to never take life too seriously. It sure was a case of all's well that end's well, and Liam definitely kept his promise!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 59: STRANGER IN MY BODY

That fine mind of hers goes into overdrive sometimes. Yolanda still has this notion that she's more trouble than she's worth. Lucky for her, Liam has the right answers. The beautiful part of that is that he truly means every word!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 60: TANTRIC

I do believe you've said everything necessary! WHEW!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 61: ACROSS THE UNIVERSE

Had to chuckle at the description of Carlisle's unsteadiness. That was pretty darn cute! Esme surely loved the fallout! Theses evening visits and family discussions are so nice, for all involved.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 62: STEAL MY HEART AWAY

Does not get any better than that! I hope you had someone to love while you were turning out chapters like this! If you didn't, what a waste!



Author's Response:

Hi K, thank you so much for following me over from the Twilighted site to have a look at this story too. Your reviews and support have been wonderful. Thank you so much, from the bottom of my heart. Apologies that the updates have been a little sporadic :-/

I'm afraid that writer's block is still preventing me from updating my Loving Edward story but hopefully I'll get there one day soon. 

As to your comment about having someone to love when I wrote this particular story, I was, in fact, in the throes of a divorce and all my pent up emotion was going on this story.  Eventually though, I was lucky enough for my own "Liam" to walk out of the chapters of this novella and into my life.  He has not, to date, read my work, but he has already used many of the loving epithets seen here and has overridden my own angst about being a burden to him through chronic ill health.

So, when I wrote of Yolanda's worried notion about running away due to loving someone so much that she didn't want to "ruin" his life, it was very much from the heart. I'd certainly harboured such thoughts about the future. However, my "Liam" won me over and told me not to worry and that we'd have fun together doing simple things. We enjoyed a jaunt out to the coast yesterday (he has just moved in with me) and enjoyed a sunny afternoon by the ocean. Very healing and very much recommended.  I've visited arid places such as Arizona/Nevada which have their own beauty, but having lived away from the ocean for 20 years, I'm very glad to be back near it again, after returning to the region of my childhood!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 63: SURF'S UP

The beach has always been my favorite place and I've even made a believer of my husband. We live in semi arid country but make it to the ocean at least once a year, if not more, for the last fifty years. So this interlude with Yolanda and Liam was lovely!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 64: YOU GIVE ME SOMETHING

I can't wait to see what the girls have come up with for the wedding. The clothes sound  lovely and the dancing should be magical, from the few hints I've read. I love that Liam can't stand being apart from Yolanda for more than a few hours, and she is affected the same way by him.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 65: MY LOVE

There are certainly worse things to do with your time than make love 24/7, 365. Lucky vampires!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 66: BIRTHDAY BOY

Neat watch, lovely inscription and a nice birthday, so far. I can just picture the whole bunch of them hunting through the woods.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 67: TIMBER

And a dandy Marilyn she made, too! Liam really did get a great birthday. The treetopsex, with all and sundry was kind of hilarious as well as sexy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 68: AVANTI

When Alice puts on a wedding, large or small, stand back and watch in awe! This sounds fabulous!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 69: THE WEDDING

That was as beautiful a wedding ceremony as any I've ever seen or heard of. Altogether fabulous! Carlisle should marry people more often.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 70: THE RECEPTION

You are forcing me to reuse some good adjectives here! This segment of the reception was all things wonderful, magical, fabulous and touching. You outdid yourself!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 71: NEW DAWN

I don't know that I would categorize them all as giving in to their baser natures, just being vampires, I thought! Anyway, a really wonderful time was had by all!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 72: TOGETHER

I can tell this will be a wonderful honeymoon, in every way. Truly the newlyweds are blessed in the friends they have.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 73: NIGHT TO REMEMBER

You naughty girl, you! That was a fun, sexy chapter for sure! The redecorating of their roomwas gorgeous from the sound of it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 74: NEED FOR SPEED

Sorry for the sex, indeed! As if! You know we all enjoyed it as much as you enjoyed writing it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 75: SHE SHALL BE FREE

Frankly, I'm kind of looking forward to Dallas myself. I hope Yolanda pays that miserable bastard back in spades! That aside, I had an idea of how much the delightful Liam loves his lioness!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 76: RETURN

Like that's been a deep, dark secret! I think we are all a bit in love with Liam.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 77: HOMECOMING

Whatever she decides to do to him, it probably won't be enough to even the score.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 78: LEAVING FORKS

Fifty years before they can come back, wow! It must have been especially poignant for Yolanda, so much happened to her in the Forks house, most life changing, to say the least.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 79: SERVED COLD

I'm glad they didn't do away with Stuart. What they took from him, besides the money, was any peace of mind he would ever have. That's almost a worse punishment anyway! Serves him right, the prick!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 80: EPILOGUE

Eighty chapters, I nearly didn't favorite this story. Boy, how glad I am that I did! This was a super read and worth every minute ! Always have loved the Cullens, and Yolanda and Liam only added to my enjoyment. They are great characters and I'll always remember them! THANK YOU!



Author's Response:

No, thank YOU for taking the time to read this story to the end. I am heartened that you took the time to do so. 

best wishes,

Sammi

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That's about the most wonderful gift they could have for Christmas, another little miracle baby!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Outtake 1: Alice and Jasper

Wonderful and sexy and so romantic!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

What a truly fabulous way to wrap this up! I absolutely loved this story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

They are both cute, really hot together, but cute too , especially with their son!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Faster than a speeding bullet, that boy! It all went just great, even the ride to the hospital, lights flashing and siren wailing! Glad they had a son, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was such a romantic proposal, and such a surprise to Bella! Too bad there's not much romance in Victoria's life, if those bruises are any indication! It takes a real bastard to punch a pregnant woman!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

You did such a good job with this sorrowful event, I had to wipe away a few tears! It's a part of life, but you just hate for that kind of sadness to happen! I don't blame Bella for having nightmares and Edward for his fears! After all, they may be medical professionals, but they are also just a couple having a baby!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I knew it was just a matter of time! Quite an exciting birthday dinner for Carlisle! Hopefully Sophie and her daughter will be okay. Can't wait for Bella's answer!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Edward has just been waiting for the day he could feel his child move in Bella's body! He must be so happy! Their trip to the baby store was a real cute thing to read!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

It's okay with me for Edward to deliver his own sister, it made for a really nice scenario! Now that Alice and Jasper have a daughter, I'm hoping Edward and Bella have a son. Since it could be their only child, it would be so special to give them a boy to carry on the name!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wonderful wedding, heartfelt vows, everything just as it should be! The spark between Victoria and Jake is interesting, Charlie is really into Kara, romance is in the air! I live it! Especially the lovemaking at the Fairmont, that was fabulous! I'm so happy for the way this turned out, just beautifully!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Such a lovely holiday, even if they will be seperated for a few days! Too bad Jacob hasn't met Edward yet, but Charlie seems to like him well enough.These two are so dedicated to their profession and it's fun to read about all the moms and babies. That was great about Mrs. Johnson and Marcus! Couls have turned out much, much worse!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'll just bet they will find ways to occupy their enforced stay in the Emerald City! It must be such a hardship but they are both brave and resourceful! If you must be stranded by a snowstorm, it helps to be with the man you adore at a fabulous hotel !

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

The posted picture is gorgeous, you picked a dandy one for Bella's wedding dress! Oh boy, do I love weddings, and the place they will build their home sounds beautiful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Good for you, killing that monster and keeping him from hurting anyone ever again! I just hope Bella and the baby will be okay! Now maybe Victoria and her son will be safe and happy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I can tell, this is going to be a busy spring and summer, what with the wedding, Alice and Jasper's baby, then a Thanksgiving child for Bella and Edward! It's going to be such a wonderful time for everyone, even with a little morning sickness!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Meeting Charlie went rather well, but I figured it might, ashe can see how Edward cares for Bella. They think they will be okay apart for a few days at Christmas, but I doubt it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That really was worth the wait! Plus you really did a great job of sharing their lovemaking with all of us!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was close, if not for the emergency, they would have finally made love to each other! How frustrating and yet how likely in the life of doctors and nurses! Hopefully, they will have more time after theYule Ball!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It's a shame about Billy and I'm sure Charlie is taking the news almost as hard as Jacob. I get a sense of Alice maybe doing a bit of matchmaking for her brother, but Bella should just relax and enjoy dinner. It always irks me that she automatically assumes a guy like Edward wouldn't be interested in her! My attitude is, why not?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It figures a kiss from him would have her melting ! She had that dream of him doing just that after dinner Saturday. I'll bet the reality was much better!