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At His Command by dpdp2317 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary:

 

Isabella Swan, 21, a student at NYU, spends a passion filled night with billionaire Edward Cullen, 31. The next morning, he tells her that he wants her to be his submissive. She finds herself thrust into the world of BDSM, where pain is pleasure, and less is more. Follow Bella on this kinky journey, as she tries to be Edward's perfect little pet. But, is there more to the story?

Thank you BE1965 for the wonderful banner. 

I'm ever grateful to RAH07890 who is painstakingly beta'ing every chapter. She is an essential to the story, and I'm so thankful to her.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26137 Read Count: 26170
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Jun 2014
Reviewer: biteme36 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: biteme36 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope your exams went well. I really enjoy this story so please update when you get a moment!

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601848
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: biteme36 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah!  A new story combining 2 of my favs - Don and Dom Edward. Also don't mind Dom Jasper! Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: biteme36 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wished Edward had just shot James. I'm sensing trouble there in the future. Glad Edward didn't fight his connection to Bella for very long. It will be interesting to see how Bella reacts to the reality of being a sub versus reading about it..  Great chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bad boy Jacob Black doesn't return Bella's crush, so she decides to date someone safer: a harmless nerd in her math class named Edward Cullen. Little does she know that he is secretly a powerful and ruthless gang leader enmeshed in a vicious drug war that will put her life—-and all her beliefs—-at risk.. AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6456 Read Count: 88308
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Oct 2016
Reviewer: biteme36 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Dead man walking!  Hopefully E holds his trigger finger long enough to learn about Kim. I know this is shocking to some, but I kinda hope her deadbeat mom uses the sugar.  And Jazz is badass!!

Reviewer: biteme36 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward is the captain and I presume he's using his internship for access to chemicals.  I just don't know yet if he's a good guy playing a role or bad guy.  I do know I like this story and can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

I know I like your review :) and I promise everything will be revealed by the end. Thanks!

Reviewer: biteme36 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Criminal master mind or not, I'm liking Edward. He sounds genuine in his feelings for Bella. Can't wait for him to deal with James as well as her abusive mother.

I'm curious about Carlisle and Esme.  I'm going to reread the chapters but I don't recall them. 

Keep up the good writing.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Edward despite his darkness. He will get better... and thanks so much for the kind comments about my writing.

Bramare by LunaEclipse Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Bramare

 

Everyone knows she belongs to me… apart from her. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2654 Read Count: 1742
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2018 Updated: 01 May 2018
Reviewer: biteme36 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Bramare O/S

Please continue this story. I love the characters you have developed. Both strong and intelligent. I have read this story 3 to 4 times and it never fails me.  I can hear and see the scenes play out, which is not usual for me. Come back soon!