Reviews by TMTwilightGirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153105
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

I read this story before I dropped off the face of the earth.  I'm glad that you have continued it.  I can't wait to see where you take it next.  Please continue.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268835
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Once again, great chapter.  Bella makes me sad, but I'm starting to see a faint ray of hope shining through.  Now that she has asked for help, I can't wait to see how she starts to heal.

Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I can't believe that's all you have for now!  I want to read more.  I've been crying at the emotions you pull out of me with every chapter.  I read your whole story today and can't wait for you to update again and again.

Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Holy cow!  That's not good.  Bella is so lonely and doesn't know how not to shut everyone out.  I think she may have taken what she heard out of context because sometimes parents need to vent, but I really can't wait untiljo you update again.  This story is so wonderful.  You don't know how excited I was to find that you updated today!  I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I couldn't leave a review with explorer.  Google Chrome seems to work fine now.  I do want to let you know that I have loved your story for awhile now.  I just had no way to let you know.  Great job!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74031
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

I really loved this chapter.  I really enjoy it when Carlisle's calm exterior cracks and the coven leader comes out to play.  I hope that you can include that more.



Author's Response:

I will promise that we will see more of the unrefined Carlisle, but I don't plan to take him to that dark place again.  As much as it was necessary to deal with Bella, it nearly broke him from the inside out.

Thanks so much for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79428
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I can kind of see where the parents are coming from.  Most parents feel like they are robbed if their children decide to elope, and Carlisle and Esme just had 3 children elope while Will and Cat had 2.  I can see why they blame Bella.  The other two marriages were kind of dropped in their laps, and of course Bella was the catalyst for all of these weddings.  Of course they would be hurt.

However, that doesn't excuse their behavior.  They need a way to express their hurt to their children without attacking Bella or making assumptions about her that they actually have no way of knowing.

This was a great and very emotional chapter.

Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I like your story.  I really feel for Bella.  She is so lonely and vulerable.

Summary:

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To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple.  Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college.  They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming.  It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?" 

This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!

Checkout all the prompts! (some are still unclaimed)
http: //twikinkfest.tumblr.com 

 

The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing.  Either or.

Rating: MA/NC-17

Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!

18 and older please!

DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35416
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Enough is Enough...

I liked that chapter, especially Bella punishing little Edward's naughty behind.

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153181
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So far, I really like this story.  I can't wait to read more of it.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like it - thanks for taking the time to let me know.  Next chapter will be posted in a few hours.

Liz

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131907
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like it.  I really enjoy the way you've portrayed these two in this story.  Great job!

Temptation by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

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Carlisle never believed he could get over losing his wife and he knew starting over wouldn't be easy. But with his childrens' help, he moved to California to begin a new life. Finally settled into the life he belongs in, his world is turned upside down when he's faced with a temptation impossible to resist.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9975 Read Count: 424
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2012 Updated: 07 Sep 2012
Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Carlisle/Bella fic's, and this one was original and wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D