Reviews by Karriek
Summary:

Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, one of the most powerful men in the business industry. She left Forks years ago, acquired her MBA and set out for New York with a head full of dreams only to discover the only job she could get was working for an asshole as his personal assistant and being available for his every beck and call. Bella hates Edward but her feelings soon start to change as they go on a run of the mill business trip to Los Angeles. AH. AU. M for Lemony lemons.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30733 Read Count: 5523
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella well put Edward in his place!

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104537
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6- The beginning of the end

I really like the mixture of present day and flashback element of this story. You want to be mad at the "now" Edward, but after reading the "then" Edward you want to cut him some slack (just a teeny bit mind!). Alice seems to of lit the initial touch paper, though I can't decide whether it was through concern or malice yet.

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2- Dropping the bomb

Bella sounds like she's going to go postal on Edwards arse, can't say I blame her!



Author's Response:

lol. Yup, mommy isn't exactly happy with how things went, is she? ^^

thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3- Edward's side

I have more sympathy for the young and scared Edward but I still really want to smack the "now" Edward ....... hard!



Author's Response:

aww, yeah. I'm having fun with a not-so-perfect-Edward here. hope you won't judge him too hard ;)

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- Doing what's right

I'd of loved to at been at dinner with Bella andc Seth as they spilled each others secrets! I also agree that Karma's a bitch..........



Author's Response:

I bet that dinner was chaotic!

thanks for your constant reviews!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

"not pregnant. Yet." brilliant cliffie!

Summary:

Drabble fic - Bella's life was ordinary until a package came and opened old wounds she thought were long since healed over. She thought wrong...

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4579 Read Count: 20769
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The banner caught my eye and I couldn't resist peeking in; I was't disappointed!



Author's Response:

Awe, thanks... I know my errors are annoying but I'm trying to learn and this is my trial and error. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Short enough to leave you wanting more!



Author's Response:

YAY, thats what I am going for.

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

.... and so the questions begin...... I'm looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

You're welcome to ask as many as you like and I may even answer a few but not enough to have an aha moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here is another coming, since I did so well on my first final of the day!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

First congrats on your final projects & test and good luck with the rest of them.

I keep looking at the banner for extra clues and now I have so many theories going around in my head, I'm in danger of confusing myself! I think I'll just wait for your updates!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I have been mega scared over these finals. Sadly Ive only taken one of three. BOO!

Yes, the banner has many clues and they're EPIC! xoxo

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good luck (again) with those pesky finals! My mind is whirring with different theories!



Author's Response:

I don't think anything actually informative happens until ten or so chapters from now just alot of filler! *smooches* you're awesome!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

....a new chapter and a new picture clue, not that it help's my theories any!



Author's Response:

About to add two more... So I hope it doesnt help your theories... *grins and winks*

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Cancel date night and call the "others", I need more!



Author's Response:

I may give you two more tonight. I hope you continue to like!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can't wait to find out who, what and why!



Author's Response:

Riight, I just loved writing this!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It's 4am here but yep, I'm ready for more!



Author's Response:

I will give you more tomorrow. Its only 8pm for me, so... good morning from me as it is my good night. *snuggles in bed*

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Emmett? Sad that this is the last one for now, but at least I won't be distracted for a few hours!



Author's Response:

You are very smart... Yes! Emmie poo the over protective brother from hell.

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

More characters are coming in to play, there's still a few of the usual suspects though!



Author's Response:

I hope your still enjoying this... and yes there will be a nice bunch of people!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Will all their pictures reveal more of the story? I certainly hope so! Good Luck with your writing final



Author's Response:

Yes, Almost all of the images will reveal a piece or two...

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Someone who takes no enemies when telling the truth........... this story just keeps me wanting more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am trying to write more while I am studying. I have it almost finished so YAY!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Definitely like!



Author's Response:

YAY!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope Emmetts' photo brings back happier memories for Bella.



Author's Response:

Oh it does... *smooches*

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This has to be my favourite photo so far, Emmett looks awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I knew I had to use that one. I will have more chapters today...

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I need to know more about Sam & Emily; and actually you happen own a fuck awesome story! (IMHO)



Author's Response:

They are minor characters in the sceme of things but I will try to fit a bit more of them in. Also, thanks for your opinion.

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

The pictures you use always compliments your words, they blend together seamlessly.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well someone has to hand Edward his arse and who better the big brothers (even if one is a wanna-be!)



Author's Response:

I love that she has her own brother and others to try and make things easier for her... that type of support is amazing.

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Can Bella give him a slap or three? She'll feel better for it!



Author's Response:

I'm sure she would if she could...

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

0.o !! Now you've really thrown me in a loop!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow, I need to take my son to school but I have to catch up firsrt!



Author's Response:

I was having this same problem with needing to finish up the chapters for you'll

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh Lordy!



Author's Response:

I hope that means you enjoyed it, Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It's tomorrow  here now!



Author's Response:

I've given you two more... YAY!

Summary:

SYSM Banner

 

 

When life gives you lemons, you make lemonade. But, what happens when life throws you a bad-boy biker, an uptight neighbor, and a couple of kids? You cross your fingers and hope for the best! AH-Rated 'M'.

Beta: Sunflower Fanfiction


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89 Read Count: 13545
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

well this is a whole new story for me and so far, so bloody good!

The One by naughtydreamz Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

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Edward meets Bella on the first day of elementary school.  Their story as told by him.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2495 Read Count: 26301
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love little stinkers !

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

purple nurples! I'd forgotten about them!

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He isn't all bad then?

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think I'd of agreed with your brother!

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

...but you have to love a clueless Edward!

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awwww, bless them!

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'd of battered Edward or Vinny if I'd of caught them under my bed, at least I think I would have ;)

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I flove this story!

 

Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

First loves, so sweet

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Karriek Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

This is a fabulous story, and I'd love to read more. The way you've introduced all the different characters leaves me wanting to know more about them!