Reviews by Darkness Falls
Reptile by Thaigher Lillie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

 

She spread herself wide open to let the insects in. 
She leaves a trail of honey to show me where she's been. 
She has the blood of reptile just underneath her skin. 
Seeds from a thousand others drip down from within. 

Devils speak of the ways in which she'll manifest. 
Angels bleed from the tainted touch of my caress. 
Need to contaminate to alleviate this loneliness.

Come what may, because  even creatures of the night have to live it large, but Karma has always found away around strokes of luck right?

Warnings- The usual: Things you wouldn't want you children to read.  Keep away if you're under the legal age to buy cigarettes. 

 

Short, multi-chapter, Prompt for Durty Nelly's  Gore Corner Vegas Prompt.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Horror, Humor
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3297 Read Count: 470
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 24 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Darkness Falls Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: If i could, make a deal with god...

It's almost like watching a movie. So it really is the husband they buried. I almost got confused by the way you wrote this chapter but I re-read it again and got it. The husband is thinking in the italics, not saying it?

Reviewer: Darkness Falls Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...

I kind of want to stick my foot up his ass and it's only the first chapter. I'm not one for horror but your summary really stuck out so I'd thought I'd peek in. I'm going to stick it out to see what you got coming. 

Reviewer: Darkness Falls Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: I'm so Sick...

What i'm really starting to like about this is that rawness you have but I think I can sense some of your personality. I bet you're really sarcastic. lol I think a little bit of every author comes out in their writing. And I think this guy is  somewhat you.