Reviews by xneverthinkx
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311118
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother

OOOOH NOW??? Does she finally! see that he be a creepy ass wierdo... btw will u guys update on fanfic to let us noe that the story will be updated here?  Cuz this site is confuzzling-- too much going on..

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

will the other twilight characters be showing up?

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

RAWR.. i wouldve gone all NINJA on em...  yupyup i can kick butt!  lmao i have no idea y i said that..  do u guys update like weekly.. i never noe when to check.. cant wait for next chapter.. oh and please tell me renee was being conniving and smart and is sooo gonna kick their asses later...  okay yea.. BUT IT WOULD AWESOME <3



Author's Response:

HA HA HA HA HA HA A HA HA HA....   SO FUNNY....

 

Ok.. you need to set up your favorites...Once you select this story as a favorite... Go to Account Information...In there hit edit preferences...and then hit email favorite updates..(or something like that..)

That way you will always be on top of the story....YEAH

We do try to update every week.  (On, Tuesday's.)  See you then.

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

..Aww, look.. Bella's such a great actress... The next KStew...   Oh SHIT....   NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

Have I already asked if the other Cullens are gonna show up?  If not, then are the other Cullens gonna show up?... In the kewlass moving pics thingy it says "can her fathers love save her?"  (or something like that)  does that mean literally Charlie is physically gonna kick some ASS or figuratively?  Like the memory of Charlie is gonna save her or something.... 

And that "training" that Ass, uh i mean Aro, talking about reminds me of the traing in The Perfect Wife.. idk y- thats what i think of everytime Aro says training..  but yea... it's not THAT type of training right?...

My grammar sucks when i be anxious... and i am sooo friggin anxious to find out what be happening next... You guys write some messed up shit ya noe?  But shit man!! I love it!!!!  ...



Author's Response:

I think you are a crack up when you are anxious...I will say..all of your answers will be coming soon...(DID that make you anxious...?)

 

\Thanks for the review...and KEEP reading cause your reviews make me laugh.

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

.... i dislike you.... you you torturous g;BG;wrvharvbG.... WHY?? WHY? TORTURE!! US!!!!.... I'm like rawr.. oh em gee... must. read. more.... I'm a big pile of pathetic in front of my laptop like begging for the next chapter...  And felix... oh felix felix felix.... I dont even know what to say.. Ah how touching... he cared!.... NO!!! FAIL!!!!! what a jerk... i'd kick his ass.... please tell me.. bella is acting... i need some butt-kicking action... actually i already thought out the whole story in my head... and it turns out bella is acting... she gets NINJA and kills everyone... and then does her victory dance.. then edward comes out of nowhere... and they fuck like theres no tomorrow....... riiiight... thats why i dont write...lol

but seriously great chapter.. idk how edward fits in.. I'm imagining a school... where Father Aro is the principle.. and Edwards a professor... rawrs my minds in the gutter....

alright so that was my randomass rant.. it just mean that i really really like this and cant wait for the next chapter.... oh and i really do like you... really ... sincerely... me likey....you

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

OOOHH GUESS WHAT?!?!?! ME IS TAKING AP PSYCH!! AND THAT RECORDING BEFORE AND DURING SLEEP REALLY DOESNT WORK... yeaaa... but its still creepy as hell... err and I hope Aro dies before he uses bella bodies to hold his creepy ass offspring.... ewww... i'm just waiting for someone to go all NINJA on 'em...

and the chastity belt ... lol i imagine metal underwear... what she gonna do if she .. gotta go?? cant even wipe her own ass?   Father Aro wins the Psycho-perv of the Century Award...



Author's Response:

Your ninja mad skills would so be needed right now...  yea..and suspend disbelief on the headphones... they are sick and twisted, and Father Aro never went to psych class.  he said it was sinful...(I really don't think he reads to well.. but that's a story for another time.)

Thanks for your support...and remember... David Koresh had them believing he was a rock star Jesus... it could so happen..

 

 

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

ooOooh that WAS creepy... any chance marcus might whip his dick off?  ewww preggers at 16 cuz of a oldie creepyy guyy...  that be ickyy..  and YAY edward.. lol hopefully HE knows that this place is wacky.. and remembers his past.. and omg they kill ppl.. messed up to the maxx..

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

.. ooh... was edward born there.. at the place of weirdass crap?  is he aro's son or carlisle's?.. or was he just brought like bella..  i have no idea wats going to happen anymore... good job

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

loved it!!! yippppeee!!! she rememberd danny fishkins!!!!!! yay for fishkins!!! can edwards real name be edward?  lol cuz i assume "father" changes everyones names or watever...  siiighhhh "plant the first seed" thats gross as helll.......

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Yeah, um ... CAN FRIGGIN ARO PLEEEASSEEE BE INFERTILE.... he is obviously INSANEEEE and some of that shit is genetics ya noe??? Can't have Eddie be a freak!! So are you srsly saying that Edward was BORN and RAISED in this lifestlyee?  RAAWWWRRR not good... AND hopefully, whatever happens next, snaps Elizabeth back to Bella... IDK...

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

Isnt he the sweetest pedophile evarrrr... Right.. so still no idea how you're going to fix.. this.... cult? lol

 That fucking nastyass old man gonna try to get funky with bella in the tub that be sooo friggen nastyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alright.. now that thats over... wasssssup?? =D 

And  is renee ever coming back to the picture.... where are emmett and the others? does anyone is this cult place KNOW WTF IS GOING ON!? lol

 

 

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

OOhh.. So did tanya remember her past life? and fuckn hell as "nice" as emse is.. she has learned helplessness and for that i want to kick her ass!!

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

RAWRRAWRRAWRAWRRAWR ... this is not "I love you" in dinosaur.. this is "I WANNA KICK SOME ASS" in dinosaur... I wonder who's gonna save the day.. there seem to be too many messed up people to help...

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

Yay for updates.... boo for wackos.... Dam.. that shit is sooo messed up..

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

FUCKKKK YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS!!!!! IS WHAT I WAS WAITING FOR!!!!!!!!!!! *DOES HAPPY DANCE*  :D  

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Tanyaaaaaaaaaaaaa :D  *she says with confidence*

 

If i'm wrong.. I didnt mean it :O

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Congrats on the anniversary! And great chapter as always!

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Oh my fucking GOD what a camera whore.. WHY?!?!?!?!?!  *PUKES* lol hmm don't let her get raped... that wont be kewl :/

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

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D:

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

heelllllsss yeaaaaaahhhhh we gonna get to the kick butt action arent we?!? hehehe ^.^ im so friggen excited.. lmao

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

ahhhh nooo not. enough. must. read. more... YOU TEASE! lol

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

OM FREAKING GGGGGGGGGGGGG

 

seriously you guys are geniuses :D

 

MERRY CHRISTMAS ty for this lovely present :)

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

BEST NEW YEARS PRESENT EVERRRRRR :D happy new year guys :)

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Volturi Order

YES! I LOVE UPDATES :D

TRUST ME, this is the ONE story that I'll read no matter how long it takes to update

I don't even cared that updating VO raped my mailbox xD

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515147
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

RAWR!!  IS THERE GONNA BE LOTSA BUTT-KICKING VIOLENCE?  Cause that would be AWESOME!!  <3

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

yea a 69 wouldve been cool in chapter 69.... I am letting the authors know that I appreciate their moving their amazing stories to a new location.  :D 

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625325
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

used to be

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

RAWR!!  i hate cliffies... nooo sffgbabfi

i feel like i know whats going to happen (i'm probably wrong) but its not good.. i seriously cant wait for the next one.. seriously

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

If eddie was smart he'd tell bella bout his plan... ohhoho but we KNOW he's not that smart....

or! he could kill carlisle and make it look like marcus did it...

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

*puts the pitchfork down cautiously..*  *puts kick boxing gear on*  time to kick Carlisle's ASS!!! 

 

in almost every other fanfic.. carlisle is the good guy... so here it feels so rong that carlisle is evil... i feel like any second he'll idk turn good.. just because Carlisle Cullen IS relatively 'good'... but you.. you made him psycho.. Father Aro psycho ;)

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

oh shit

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

i was nervous.. at first i thought it wasn't edward

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

a beautiful ending

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awww, that was sooo cute... I almost want jakey and belly to be together <3  but when edward comes back to the story and acts like a dick... hell there aught to be a WWF smackdown fuh reallll... lol wth is up with me and violence?  oh lord....

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

he can burn them with a flame thrower?  yeaaaa thatll be soo badass.... sexy edward with a flame thrower....shirtless... pantless!! yay *droolsss*

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww...are you not going to update all the chapters that you already completed at once?

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

what chapter were u up to on fanfic?



Author's Response:

Chapter 15 was the last chapter I posted on fanfiction before I pulled it.  It was up for about a week before I pulled it.  Chapter 16 will take longer to post because I've been so busy at work (income tax).  Things should even off soon and I should have more time to write.  Thanks for reading.  I will continue to post the chapters from fanfiction to this site.

I apologize that I didn't respond sooner.  For some reason the email notifications I was getting for my story was put in spam.  I finally checked my spam box and saw them.

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

NEVER EVER GO INTO HIBERNATION EVER AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: xneverthinkx Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

..... You.... you... what...... you... @_@ I... omg... Honestly it just sounds like you wanted it done and over with.. I mean you don't update for so long and then when you do.. BOOM it's over.. I feel like you're messing with us? Like.. rofl you just cut off the whole story and that's that.. I hope my opinion doesn't like idk upset you or anything.. I was trying to be.. cool -_- lol This chapter seriously just f***ed with your entire audience haha I bet some people are all "WTF D:" and others are probably all chill like "Oh haha, you got us" .. This chapter just sounds like you giving up.. I don't think you planned this from the start, I think you found yourself in a situation where you couldn't go on with the story for whatever reason and you just gave up with it... 



Author's Response:

I actually had the ending planned for awhile.  I wasn't giving up, I just thought it was the right time to end.  I appreciate your comments though, and I'm not upset.  I'm always happy to hear what my readers think ... good or bad.