Reviews by Maplestyle
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366623
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Perfect

Thank you guys so much for sharing this!



Author's Response:

You're all very welcome!  We thank you for going on this journey with us and letting us know your thoughts on the characters and their interactions.  The reviews really do help us make the stories we write better. :)

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Crash & Burn

I think Emmett is a huge asshole and when Edward finds out what he did and said then nothing is going to repair their relationship!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Cry

Okay I'm a little confused, did she dream the Emmett "smackdown" or did he completely forget how he flipped out on her? She's right about being poison though, only she's not poison to anyone but herself. She makes me kind of sick in a way sometimes.

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 52: One is the Loneliest Number

I'm sorry but I'm kind of agreeing with Emmett right now. This Bella is poison...to herself though, not everyone else. She needs some serious therapy. So Edward told a lie...big deal, either get over it or just let him go, seriously. The man is a saint trying so hard to "win" back the love of someone that is so ungrateful. Here she is pregnant and he's told her that he's going to be there for her but she just spews out her vitriol ad nauseum and threatens that he not tell anyone. What the freak is she going to do when she finds out, which I have no doubt that she will, that he told Emmett his suspicions??

I'm not a guy but I swear to god if I were and a girl (ex or not) told me she was planning on giving away my kids my first thought wouldn't be "let me make you dinner" it'd be "I'd better call my lawyer".

I do love this story, but I'm not loving this Bella at all...and haven't for a while.

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Ghosts of Broken Hearts

In my review last week I wasn't trying to say that Bella didn't deserve to not trust Edward, just that if she feels so strongly that she can't ever trust a word that comes out of his mouth or came out of his mouth because he told one lie then she should just tell him to not even bother trying to fix things because no matter what he does it will never work.

That said I still think she needs therapy, she is poison to herself if she can talk herself out of being happy about a miracle pregnancy. Two people made those babies and for her to think that she would have the ultimate say about what happened to them after they were born ie) giving them to loving parents who are together is such crap. Edward loves those babies already and like I said last week if he were me and I heard shit like that I wouldn't be all "oh Bella this is my fault you feel that way I want to make it better" my reaction would be "you need to get over yourself if you think I'm going to sit idly by and watch you give away my kids I WILL fight you on that".

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long

Loved the chapter! Loved the fact that she was crying over the bag and not the article. Can't wait for the next chapter and I wear my Rose-made blinkie with pride!!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell

I truly do love this story. I laughed when he thought she was talking about sleeping with another man and not the dog she was actually talking about. How very Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: I Want You

I thought Charlie was a huge jerk. Loved the chapter though!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart

That bastard so deserved the ass whipping he received! I really hope that Edward doesn't get into too much trouble :(

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing

Loved it! Worth the wait. I hope they catch Gianna before the crazy bitch does anything to Bella!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Woman

I'm so sorry to hear about your house. I'm glad that everyone was okay. Thanks so much for posting a new chapter. I really can't wait for the next one...Gianna needs to get what's coming to her!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for your continued support! Ugh Gianna sucks...

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience

Oh that Gianna is a dumb bitch. A dumb deluded bitch apparently because I've never seen even a mention that Edward slept with her! I really really hope she gets whats coming to her!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda

You know you could always have the guy that Gianna actually screwed come forward to demand the paternity test. He could even lie and say that Gianna never told him that there was a possibility that someone else was the father. He'd be able to get the test done right away wouldn't he??????? If the real guy says that she's been after him for money but now she's saying it's someone elses after he's given her money. Please say yes :D

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot

I just really hope that none of them are his. That would  break my heart. Do I think that Bella should have been that hard on him...maybe not, but I think of how I would feel if I were in her shoes and I don't think I'd have been any better. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167504
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: 2 Change My World

Great chapter!!! I loved their first meeting...though I'm sure that Edward is going to regret it lol.



Author's Response:

:)  We'll see!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Intro

I was so excited to see a new story by you guys hit my inbox (both from here and FF). First chance I've had to read the chapter as I was at work when it posted earlier and then parent/teacher interviews for my daughter right after. I can't wait for more of this story!!



Author's Response:

So glad to have you aboard!!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: 3 Let Me Introduce Myself

Great chapter! I kind of wanted to smack Masen though! He didn't have to treat her so harshly. Can't wait for next chapter!



Author's Response:

EA and I agree on your take on Masen, but he doesn't see it that way. He believes he was well within his rights. Gonna make for an interesting summer ;)

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: 4 Confuse Me Mister

I can't even begin to guess lol, I suck at these things.

Loved the chapter and the fight over the nickname. I wonder how long Masen is going to fight his feelings. Can't wait for next chapter!



Author's Response:

Masen's a stubborn one so you better be prepared for it to go on a while, though he's going to have lots of "slips" where he forgets he's supposed to be ignoring it.

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: 5 Another Side

Great chapter guys! I loved their playfulness (though it didn't last long before Edward's moods changed again).

I wonder what's up with his eyes!!! Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL Yes, Mr Masen was giving whiplash in this chapter!  All will be revealed with his eyes in due time ;)

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: 6 Hot & Cold

Great chapter. I teared up more then a few times! Can't wait to see Bella's decision, though I have a feeling she'll stay. Oh Masen..she's YOUR dream girl, you just don't know it yet :D



Author's Response:

Yeah, Masen is brilliant in so many areas of his life. And then there's this one big area where he's completely obtuse! :)

Summary:

Bella and Edward dated in high school When a tragedy occurs she is forced to move away from Forks. Six years later another tragedy occurs, but this time it brings her back to Forks. What happens when she spends Christmas Eve with the Cullens and she comes face to face with Edward for the first time since she broke his heart six years earlier.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74931 Read Count: 8286
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love the ring!

God I HATE Renee with a passion in this story! I seriously want to kick her butt! I hope that she comes to regret the way she's treated not only Edward but her own daughter. I can't understand how some parents can be so callous towards their kids.

Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

HI,

As much as I hate Renee in this story, I have to sway it was a lot of fun to write her. I hadn't written a character like her before so I challenged myself to do something different this time. So while everyone hates her so much, I hope that means I did a good job with writing her.

Thanka so much for all your support and great reviews and reviewing on both sites for me. It is greatly appriciated. Chapter 5 will post on Friday, until them here is a teaser to get ya by. Thanks so much!!  EA

 

It had completely baffled and amazed me how fast Alice, Esme, Rose and I had been able to pull together all the details for my and Edward’s wedding. It had only taken us three weeks to pull it all together. 

Our first task had been to reserve the View Point Inn and the second had been to find my dress. Alice had said that once those two things were accomplished the rest would fall into place. Of course she had been right and after scouring several online sites, looking through every page of every Bride’s magazine Alice could get her hands on and spending a weekend in Seattle combing every bridal shop there was, we had done it. I had my dress and had known it was the one the instant I’d seen it.

There had been a few bittersweet moments along the way though. We had all gone to Seattle on the excursion to find my gown and the bridesmaid dresses. While Alice, Rose, Esme and me had gone shopping for the gowns, the men had gotten fitted for their tuxes and had gone to the college football game at U-Dub.  But when Alice and Esme talked about some of the experiences they’d had while shopping for Alice’s wedding gown, I couldn’t help wishing things were different between my mother and me. I couldn’t help thinking that she should be there with me, helping me choose my dress and taking part in all of the planning of my wedding.  And I couldn’t help but wish that I could at least know that she was happy for Edward and me.

For the most part I had not let what she’d done interfere at all in my life. I was so very, very happy with Edward and I loved him so much.

However there were just times like now, when I was contemplating on whether or not I should send her an invitation that I couldn’t deny how much it hurt. She was my mother and was supposed to be happy for me.

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've been meaning to read this since chapter one came out and just found the chance. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

HI, So glad you are enjoying the story so far. I am looking forward to seeing what you think as you continue to read.

 

Thanks for reading, the next chapter will post later today.

EA

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, who knew that Renee would own up to her seflishness. I still can't believe she'd do that to Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

HI, I guess in Renee's defense she let her grief cloud her decison making. Hoswever even though I understand her need to keep her daughter close to her, I don't agree with how she did it.

Thanks for reading. Chapter 3 will post later today.

 

EA

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Reviewed over at FF but thought I'd review here too. I really want to smack Renee again. This goes beyond overstepping. Is she that bitter about Charlie that she is trying to ruin things for Bella now? And to sell the house out from under her was harsh!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The things some people will do for love....

 

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Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror 

Genre: Extreme Horror

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 10422
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Twenty Three

I forgot to review last chapter to let you know how much I've missed this story!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Twenty Four

I just gets better and better! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Twenty Five

Love it!

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Twenty Six

I love how twisted this is! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Twenty Seven

Love how you did this!