Love the story, can;t wait 4 more. Great story.

I love ur stories, this one & Quiet Storm. But, Bella really pisses me off, she needs 2 grow a back bone. Ok, she does stand up 2 her possessive, control freak of a husband, but then she backs down & let him have his way. She needs 2 not let him, disrespect her and accuse her of things or throw tantrums or whatever. Edward can be sweet when he wants 2 be, and maybe that makes her swoon and 4get everything else. I really love ur stories, but I don't like Bella.lol!

Great Chapter, Edward is so sweet sometimes & I am glad he & Bella are back on track.

Gah, Bella is such a bad ass & Edward got totally turned on abt that. Totally hawt! Lol!

Great Chapter. I read the warning & it didn't find anything 2 emotional or bad, so I was a little confused. But, I guess u mean the Alex/pregnancy situation. Still didn't anything of it. Hope she doesn't lose the baby tho & I am glad her & Carlisle is still going thru the wedding.

I loved it, I hope the next chapter will have Dame have a sit in in w/ Edward. Lol!

Man, Dame is a manwhore & a cocky prick. I can't believe he's trying 2 take his uncle's woman.lol!

Oh, I feel so sorry 4 Wisp & I can't wait 4 the next chappie. I really love this story, I'm glad I decided 2 break down & read it. & I really hope Wisp can function 2 be a normal 20 y/o woman.

I feel so bad 4 Bella. I hope things look up 4 these guys soon.

Poor Edward & Bella. But, Bella needs 2 grow a backbone & not let Edward get away with that shiz it. She kind of stood up 2 him, but not enough. ~Babs~

Oh, I hope they make it.

I loved this chapter;

Awesome lemon & I think she was trying 2 say she loves him.

This is 2 good, I need another chappie, can't wait.

Man, Edward is out of control all bc of one name- Riley. Lol! & Bella needs 2 grow up & act like an adult & her & Edward need 2 communicate & clear up any misunderstandings.

Edward finally knows how Bella feels about him now & I really hope Bella don't make the ultimate mistake.

Loved it, now hope they act like a married couple since they are home & hope Edward don't get all weird now.

I would say Edward's a fuckwit & everything else u said.lol!

Please don't let E give up, he needs 2 fight 4 B & take charge. I like how B won't give in so easily, but I do want E 2 fight.

wonderful chapter.

I just love the father/sons talk & I hope Sonny learns from Edward's mistakes & I wonder what's w/ Dame.

Great chapter, loved it.

This is a beautiful epi part one, loved it.

Awesome chapter, I loved it & the prank Dame pulled on Sonny. The whole family is a riot. Lol!

What a roller coaster ride. I feel so bad 4 Katie & admire her that she's a strong woman. & I love Sonny sometimes & feel bad 4 him at times, but he's a total ass that needs a kicking & his daddy should have done it too. Lol! Now, I feel bad 4 Raul 2 & I don't even know the dude.lol! But, that Santino is way out of control & needs 2 do what is best 4 Katie & his daughter, but on a side note, I am happy that Santino is the father.

I feel so sorry 4 Maggie. I hope Sonny gets his head out of his ass & start making Maggie happy again. I also feel sorry 4 dame, I hoopoe he & Jordon make an amends, as 4 kylie I freakin love her, lol!

Edward is such an awesome dad & I really hope Kylie's not pg.

Sonny will start liking Maggie, right? She's legal now. I just see it coming. Lol! I loved this chapter w/ Kylie's POV, Edward's temper really sucks tho & B need 2 kick his ass or something, lol!

It was awesome, I hope Sonny & Maggie become then a f^ck & 4 him 2 leave Layla alone & kick Katie 2 the curb, in a nice way of course. I want Sonny 2 be a one woman man w/ Maggie, she is so sweet & innocent until she jumped all over Santino. As 4 those oyjer ppl being all up Sonny's @ss, I feel sorry 4 him. As 4 the virgin scene, it was awesome & hot & Sonny is hot & thoughtful. He & Maggie belong 2gether & Dame does need 2 back off & worry about his own girl. I really loved & enjoyed this chapter so much!

Dame is an ass & I don't blame Maggie at all. As 4 Carlisle he has every right 2 be pissed at Dame, but if he beat up Alex, he needs his ass kicked bc it wasn't her fault Dame stepped out of line. Great chapter, can't wait til next update.

I Loved it, but I really hope things w/ Sonny & Maggie stay the same & not change bc they are married now & I feel so bad 4 Dame & I really hope he finds happiness w/ Amelia & give up his fixation on Maggie. ~Babs~

Amelia is such a stalker psycho & I have a feeling she will cause trouble 4 Dame & Jordon, if their arrangement gets out & I am so thrilled that Jordon won't put her dreams, career etc on hold 4 a guy, no matter how attracted she is 2 him & I am glad Dame is getting better & happy now. As 4 he & Jordon being fuck buddies, that's going 2 be a complication in itself. ~Babs~

I really hope Santino & Maggie get back on track w/ things going good 4 them, they are so good 2gether. Plus, Maggie is one bad ass that take no shit f/ Santino, I really love that. This is an awesome chapter. ~Babs~

I loved it, it was a great chapter & I like Edward's soft husbandly, fatherly soft side sometimes.

Nooooo, Ang can't be dead!

I need tissue "sniffles" I can't believe Aro's dead,

fanfuckingtastic chapter,. I love it & 2 see Edward's past, so tragic. Can't wait until next chapter.

Oh, I hope Bella don't fall back with Alec. Edward should be the only man 4 her. Alec is playing at something, 4 what IDK. Lol! I really hope Bella don't put her guard down & it becomes a rift between her & Edward.

That was freakin hot, I loved every part of this chapter, especially the hot lemon.

Great outtake, I love it. ~Babs~

Awesome chapter, can't wait 4 another.

Awesome chapter, I loved it & Edward Leoni. ~Babs~

Hope Bella stays strong & snarky & don't let Edward get away w/ anything. I guess she's OK w/ a couple of babies & if she's PG, but does she want 2 marry Edward & get PG seriously? She's only 19.

I sure hope so & he better have a good reason not 2 renew her contract. It should be her choice, but I do love a possessive Edward, sexy as hell. lol

I am so glad I started reading this story, I love it & can't wait 4 the next chapters.

I was just wondering, why is Edward so gun ho on marrying Bella & starting a family with her? I have been curious 4 quite a few chapters now, lol!

I liked this story a lot at times until Bella became a whiny, pathetic doormat & Edward became a control freak, it just seems Bella went from an physical, sexual, verbally abusive controlling relationship to a mentally abusive, controlling relationship. People can justify it all they want but Edward was mentally abusive & controlling & that's nor sexy or a turn on, if he loved her at all he wouldn't be like that, especially knowing what kind of relationship she came out of, I felt that he used that to his advantage.. I also find the story not very believable when Bella was very clutzy, it was kind of annoying. & also, Edward wants Bella to pursue her dreams & go to Dartmouth, but what is the point of having that kind of education where she could put it to use if he won't let her to get a job & want her as a weak, kept woman & dependent on him? & Bella shouldn't give him that power, also husband doesn't mean to be controlling, punishing, threatening or whatever, they are suppose to respect their other half. I just find their whole relationship a disaster, train wreck, no respect & very abusive etc. Sorry but this is how I feel after reading this story.

I loved this nice short story, it was very sweet.

I don't know about a sequel. All of the sequels I have read played out too long & boring & some were just forgotten. Sequels just never do the originals justice, just like in movies, never did originals justice. Just my opinion tho.

OK, for some constructive criticism first, you really need to proof read this story, a lot of spelling errors & grammatical errors. W/ that being said, I really love this story, it is very great & interesting & I couldn't stop reading it & hope you update very soon, I want these two couples stories to come out. Even tho I think I know, they both like each other very much more than friends obviously & Edward's a Reporter. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know even w/ the errors, I freakin love this story & glad I decided to read it & can't wait for more. Still a 10 to me also.