Reviews by twilightgrrl
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Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
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Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh, man. Edward is going to make a lot of people pissed off & I hope Bella kicks him in the balls.

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Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

She should have slapped the crap out of him like she did Alice bc he deserves that & more. Oh, man. I don't like the sound of disappointment & up coming chapters, now I'm worried.

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Edward & Bella may have had some difficulties in the beginning of their relationship but as they move forward, they will find that it will take even more work to stay together. In order to make her future work with Edward, Bella has to search out her past. It just may take this journey for Edward and Bella to learn the true definition of love. Continuation of Lottery of Life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80982 Read Count: 22997
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
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Date: 08 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Very beautiful. I loved it

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

NOOOOO! I hope the Epi is HEA for these two together, Please!!!!!!!! Great chapter tho.

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Date: 17 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I bet what is on the list will be at Oxford "wink" Can't wait.

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Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh, I can't wait for more. Edward is here. "squeal"

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Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First, I am glad you decided to continue the story of Edward & Bella & secondly, Bella is getting on my nerves w/ her negative & bitchy attitude. love it still.

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Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, I hope they get back together soon & that Edward fights for her.

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Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bella is a spoiled brat & I don't like her. She needs to get her act together & a swift kick in the butt.

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Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Go Edward. Bella is such a b*tch & I can't stand her & her whiny @ss bratty attitude. & her Bio father's list is kind of Lame. Anyway, I really hope this story is HEA for Bella & Edward together. But maybe he should give that b*tch time. Ugh! She grades on my nerve.

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Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Bella is a psycho dumb @ss, I regally don't like her but at least she's not a weak Bella in this story.

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Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well, that was what Bella wanted after all, it serves her right.

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Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well, Bella only has her self to blame. She needs to pick herself up & stop being pathetic.

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Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Maybe Bella will Redeem herself yet.

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Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That's horrible that Edward wasn't alone, but I guess Bella needs a wake up call.

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Date: 16 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Can't wait for Bella & Edward to get back together.

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Mafia man Edward, has closed his heart off to everyone outside his family. He gets injured, and is helped by a young woman who seems to not like him. He then meets a young girl that tugs at his heart and he soon finds himself wanting to be something else so he can be worthy of them both.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74517 Read Count: 91290
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 27 Apr 2015
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Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I really hope Mike will be OK., The reassurance he wanted Edward to give him got me worried. Love the chapter & glad everything is out in the open.

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Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter.

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Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Love this chapter, hope Edward doesn't pull a new moon & leave. This chapter just was sad. "sobs" Can't wait until the next chapter.

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

loved it, I love this Edward & Bella. Hope Mike will be OK & hope Edward changes & wins Bella's heart.

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Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love it, but Sasha did a whammy on Bella, now Edward has to eventually know it wasn't Mike at all.

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved it, can't wait til next chappie.

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Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am really dying to know what Bella's secrets are. & I really hope Mike comes back safely. Great Chapter.

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Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So heart breaking, I hope Edward & Mike come out alive & safe.

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Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am glad that Edward knows there wasn't anything between her & Mike & hope he knows never was & that Sasha is not her biological daughter. But hope Edward stays in Sasha's life as much as Bella's. Glad he & Mike are out & safe & hoipe to stay that way. great Chapter.

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Date: 12 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love this chapter. So, beautiful

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Date: 15 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

"sobs" That is so sad that I want to shed water works. I had a feeling you all would kill off Mike, but I was hoping not.

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Date: 28 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I loved it, it was an awesome story I hate to see end & always look forward to updates. The Epi was awesome & some p[arts teary. I loved Sasha's POV & am so glad she found her HEA, just like everyone else.

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A ballerina figurine and a pair of sad brown eyes change Christmas for Edward in ways he never imagined.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14186 Read Count: 47026
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2014 Updated: 25 Jan 2015
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Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh, that is so sad "sobs" I I loved it, it was so beautiful but very heart broken about Emmett.

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Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Such a sad, heartbreaking story, but I am so happy that Edward Sr. was handled & Jasper came to his senses. & YAY, Edward will be living w/ Bella & Charlie, well I hope anyway. i am loving this story & can't wait for another update.

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Lovin this story so far. Esme is a total bitch & I feel so sad for Edward. Hope Bella starts digging for the Truth & help Edward.

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Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 53

I hope Bella does become Elizabeth's guardian.

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Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I really hate Esme & I hope Edward is just Edward. Bella's Edward...

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Date: 28 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Can't wait until the roof is blown on Esme.

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Love it.

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Date: 02 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

I hope Aro & Marcus are good guys, I want them to be, I think they will be.

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Date: 20 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

Bella should have never hit Edward for any reason, other than that, hope they take bitchme down soon.

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Summary: Edward adopts jennifer and decides to move back home for a new start and family support. He soon after meets his sister's friend Bella who lives by the beat of her own drum. Even though the whole town seems to dislike her, Alice swears she is a great friend. So many questions to be answered so read and found out.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63750 Read Count: 54495
[Report This] Published: 14 Nov 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2016
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Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love this story, can't wait for more. :)

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Date: 01 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh, I can't wait until the next update, I need to see what happens & that Edward finds out Bella isn't that bad at all & Alice is trouble.

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Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love it. I was so excited to get four chapters today, lol! Can't wait for more.

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Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aww, that's sad, probably a misunderstanding.

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Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am loving it so far, can't wait for more chapters.

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Date: 06 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love it, can't wait for more. I feel so bad for Bella.

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Date: 17 May 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Nooooo, you can't leave it there. Please update soon & oh I hate Esme.

Comfortably Numb by mathisson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary:

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Bella Swan enjoys helping people. It doesn't matter if it's the customers she pours a cup of coffee for, or the man who just drop money on a New York sidewalk. But when the kindness she shows is turned against her, how far will she continue to go to protect her family? Will she sacrifice her happiness? Or let her only relative lose everything? Angst! CC rated M for adult content.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48864 Read Count: 35366
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2016 Updated: 27 Nov 2017
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Date: 19 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I hope the monster stays away & Carlisle is getting on my nerves. Anyway, I love this story so far & I hope Bella & EDward has their HEA w/ romance & love like Anthony & Marie in the books.

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Bella has her life planned out. Her business is sucssesful and she is surrounded by people she cares about, so why is she so lonely. Fate changes her life but will she follow the righ path.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76583 Read Count: 544708
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2016 Updated: 17 Oct 2016
Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Great story & I really enjoyed getting updates & reading your story, I just felt the end was rushed, a lot of loose ends & unanswered questions or whatever. I just had to say what everyone else wasn;t saying. Ending was too rushed & just seems incomplete, other than that, great story.

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Date: 11 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Ugh! I hate cliffies.

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
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Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 333164
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
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Date: 06 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh, I really, really, really, hate Alice & Jasper need to grow a backbone & not be a spineless Jellyfish, oh & Edward needs to fight for Bella & quit being a coward..

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Date: 30 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow! Siobhan is Bella's sister. & I know it is Siobhan the 5 yr old w/ Edward, Bella, Ethan & their new baby that Pops had a picture of that his Elizabeth drew. Loved this chapter, can't wait for more. Just mind blowing revelations in this chapter. Oh & hope this is well with you & Nicky & gets better & for your families. Good Vibes!

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Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

To answer all of your questions: Tanya is great & will be an awesome friend to Bella, clearly Bella's drinks were drugged,. Jessica & Lauren will help her as friends do, the picture that Bella saw I believed was photo shopped & Angela did not give Edward Bella's card & if she did, she tampered w. it first. Now, I really hate Uley, Angela & especially Alice & Jasper should have had a backbone & gave Bella Edward's message. Can't wait until the next update.

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Date: 09 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I think Bella was raped & I am pretty sure Edward will be angry, making accusations, assumptions & of course won't believe the baby is his. I really hope the baby is his & not her Rapist.

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Date: 12 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it & make Edward gravel for a while. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Charlie is an ass & I feel so sorry for Bella,

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Date: 31 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really hate Alice, she is a bitch. Really love the story so far tho.

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Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I hope you get better, anyway, I hate bitch Alice & Jasper's a pussy not standing up to Alice, Edward is getting on my nerves too, ugh! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 20 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am really hating Edward right now & Alice is a total bitch.

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Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I hate Edward already. She needs to leave him be with his miserable life & let him crawl back to her & make amends. She tried, now he needs to try. Oh & he needs to dump Angela & please no kids with her.

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Date: 06 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love it so far.

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Date: 10 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I hate the fact he'll be dating Angela from the first chapter. Can't wait for more chapters.

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Date: 24 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Sorry to hear about your friend. My condolences. Anyway, hope things get better for you & things are OK for Nikki too, Anyway Blessings.

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Date: 07 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I hope Jasper gets Siobhan in the long run, I feel bad for him.

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Date: 28 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I loved it. This was a beautiful, well-written chapter. & great names for the babies & I am very happy w/ the wedding.