Reviews by Sleeping_Beauty247
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
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Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533231
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
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Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Fight Club Part One

YAY! 2 updates this week! Woot Woot!! ;)

On that note...this chapter had me all teary eyed and shit! My poor MobWard!

Glad they worked it out and are going to have a family weekend together!

Damion's dream is still freaking me out! Like, is it really just a dream or is it a sign of things to come????

Can't wait for Wednesday!!

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Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Fight Club Part Two

YAY! Early update! YOU are totally spoiling us!!

Happy Valentine's day to you too!

So, was Anton the new character that you were referring to in your tweets? Can't wait for their lil vacation coming up next update! All of "the family" together always equals good times!

Thanks for another great update as always!!

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Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

Great chapter! I am totally on board for another chapter at the beach in Edward POV and it has to include a really good yummy delicious lemon!

Just sayin... LOL ;}

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Awww...they finally made up! Now we need "makeup sex"!! LOL

I don't want this story to ever, ever, EVER END!!!!! Just sayin...

But like all good things...blah, blah, blah

I just love these two and the journey has been awesome!! Thanks for all the hard work and time that you have put into Quiet Storm and this one! I really appreciate it and have enjoyed it immensely!!

So, I am back to reading & reviewing over here because of the bullshit that FF is pulling...in case you didn't notice!

I first started reading & reviewing your stories here, and then because FF had seemed to stop with it's fucking nonsense I had gone back over there to read & review, but alas the bullshit never ends! I am just extremely happy that you post here too!

Great update as always!

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

Awwww...Sonny brought tears to my eyes being all sweet to his dad!

You can tell this is coming to an end! It makes me sad! Bittersweet!

 

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

I fucking love these guys! Every last fucked up one of them! I don't want this to ever, ever, EVER end!!

I love that you are going to jump ahead and give us POV's of everyone to let us know how they are doing and think it is a fantastic way to end it!

This chapter was magnificent! Soo good!

Great job! Thanks for all of your hard work that you have put into this story & Quiet Storm and sharing it all with us! I have enjoyed it immensely!

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

Another gem of a chapter! I absolutely love when the guys get together and act like lil girls! Laughed my ass off at their antics with putting their girls on speaker phone!

Great update as always!!

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

Loved this chapter! I just absolutely adore this crazy family!

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Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

OH MY GOD! I knew it! Sonny got his button! NICE!!!

Kylie better stop being such a spoiled brat and listen to her mom! I love that Edward & Bella are totally conspiring to NOT have this wedding happen!

Loved this time jump!! Sooooo good!

Can't wait for Sonny's POV!!! YAY!! So excited!!

Great update!!!

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

OH MY GOD! DAMION!!! Really! OH MY GOD! LOVE IT!

Please write about the sit down, when Edward & Aro find out it is Dame!! Oh, and Bella was so sure that her baby boy Dame was not involved at all! Hahahahaha

This was brilliant!!

Arms by Virginia May Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents.  Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with  the loss of both her family and her future.  When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.

 

**Nominated for Best Bella & Edward in the Emerging Swan Awards!! 
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**Featured on The Lemonade Stand in TLS Nursery!  Click to visit!


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158957 Read Count: 88750
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Okay....I am confused as to who sent her that message??? I am thinking it is Jasper...

Great chapter, can't wait for more!!

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OOOH!! This is going to be good! I am so entrigued and can't wait for more!!

Blood Swan by katiecav Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
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Las Vegas, Nevada, 1980. In a city run by some of the biggest mobsters in the country, only the strongest survive. Entry for the LikeTotally80sContest. Now expanded. AU.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13744 Read Count: 3571
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 02 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OH YAY! This was really good! I am anxious to here more of Bella's story!

Great update!!



Author's Response:

You aren't the only one anxious about finding out what happened to Bella. It for sure is on the books for the next chapter. Now as promised...here's a preview....it's not been through the editing process so excuse any glaring errors. :-)


Bella, stay in the car.” His voice was stern and offered no room for argument. “Do you hear me?”

I nodded. “Yes daddy.”

He reached under my chin so I would look at him in the eyes. “And Bella. If something happens to me. I want you to run. Run as fast as you can away from here.”


My eyes grew large when I registered what he was saying. “But,”


No buts Bella, swear to me.”


I didn't know what to say. If something happened to him I didn't know if I'd have the will in me to run, but for him I would try. “I swear Daddy.”


He looked into my eyes once more. “I love you princess.”


It was torture waiting after he left the car and shut the door. I didn't hear anything for five long minutes then I heard three gun shots fire off in quick succession. Before I could think it through I opened the door. I had barely put a foot out of the car when I heard my father yell, “Bella run!”


I looked over to where I heard his voice coming from. He was struggling with a young blonde man. He elbowed the man in the nose and sent him reeling. I took one last look at my father and turned to make an escape. My path was immediately blocked by a very large man. A man that I recognized very well.


What do we have here?” He sneered. He reached for me and my instincts kicked in. I pushed the heal of my hand straight up into his nose. He staggered back slightly and I leaped around him. I didn't get far though. He was only a few steps behind me. He grabbed me by my hair and pulled me back to him. I struggled against his tight hold “Ah ah ah princess,” he said as he drew a knife and pressed it into my throat. “Drop the gun Charlie.”

 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The original O/S

Wow! This was really good!! I want more, please!



Author's Response:

Thanks *blushes* I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The lemon was good! Don't feel awkward it was really good!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I can't help but feel awkward though. It's so not usually my thing. I'm glad that you like it.