Reviews by susan_litten
And so the Lion Fell in Love with the Fluffer by danieller123 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Edward is a pornstar. Bella is a fluffer. One shot. Slightly crack, slightly hot, mostly fun. M for immature words and dirty body parts. Handcuff me for being a dirty bird.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5317 Read Count: 1988
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: susan_litten Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

You know, I don't normally save one-shots, but this one was too cute to pass up.  Having worked in the Adult Entertainment industry for the past ten years, let me tell you, you nailed a porn set on the head.  That is exactly what happens.  Too often the actors are talking about what they are going to have for dinner, or something trivial, while the action is going on.  All you needed was the odd 'cut' due to bathroom breaks or cramped groin muscles.  All in all, very well done.
Brava!!

Susan



Author's Response:

LMAO. I have seen some really 'low budget' porn in my day....and maybe I'm just odd, but I always see them talking during the sex and cant help but laugh. I figured it must happen on the "big budget" sets too. lol. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.