Reviews by Faerywren
Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Faerywren Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Argh! Wish I hadn't found this story until it was complete. It's so good but I hate waiting to find out what happens next. Great job!

Reviewer: Faerywren Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I hope you plan on finishing this story. It's one of my favs.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

wrapped2.jpg

Wrapped around animated.gif

Dr. Edward Masen is in for a surprise when his best friend and fellow colleague Dr. Carlisle Cullen invites him out to spend an evening with him at an exclusive member's only club. What Edward does not know, is that the club caters to a select few who share in a unique fetish within a certain lifestyle choice. He meets a brave little girl named Bella Swan who is more than happy to pull him into her world and introduce him to the wonderful lifestyle of Bondage, Discipline, Sadism, and Masochism.

 

It is a story about two consenting adults who venture into the relationship of a Dominant Daddy/little girl.  

 

If you do not fully understand the dynamics of this type of lifestyle I can only inform you that this story has nothing to do with incest, nor are the characters role playing / age playing in any way. It is a relationship where they practice total power exchange in and out of the bedroom on a 24/7 basis.  

 

If any of what you have read so far freaks you out in any way, then I must warn you now...this story may not be for you.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35176 Read Count: 172166
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 May 2016
Reviewer: Faerywren Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bella's eyes are green at the beginning of the story then a couple chapters ago they were brown.

You mention in some comments that Bella's dad is Charlie, but the doorman in Edward's building is also named Charlie. That is going to really confuse some folks that are already having trouble following along! :-)

 



Author's Response:

okay I thought I had fixed all the eye color thing but I guess I missed one thank you for pointing that out. This story is not beta'd so a few things do slip by me.

 

As for Charlie...

 

This story is a rewrite...It was out a couple of years ago and most of those that were reading it already knew the details about Charlie being her father. It is coming up in the up coming chapter. There is no mix up. This Charlie is the same Charlie that is her father, she just doesn't realize it yet. Sorry it  is a spoiler to those that haven't read it yet but like i said this is a rewrite and most all my readers know the charlie story line where i left off at.

 

Thanks for the input. I really do appreciate it!