Too cute, at least he admitted to reading her journal along with giving Bella an apology. I'd crawl under a rock if someone hit like him read my journal!

I'm upset that a whole month has passed and he is just fine living without Bella. Sure he is missing her but he doesn't get the I don't want to live another day without you by my side. Now he wants to play house, "fiance." Grr men lol. Fucking Ben, enough said.

With Edward calling her "love" and these two living together, cause that is what they are doing just without acknowledging it, way too much involvement doing 'couple type' things to pass off as a non-relationship. I bet what Jacob said about if he loved her then... is on auto replay filling her mind with insecurities. He is an all around asshole and I hope he stays away. I imagine Bella asking herself why can't they be official when they obviously work perfectly fine with his career. Asking why can't he love me. His being married to his job cop out line makes me want to give this cop a good slap. What's his deal, was he that hurt by the girl that cheated on him and afraid of commitment, set in his way after all this time, reluctant to change?

That was deliciously hot. Oh why can't he commit, he needs to get over that already lol. I think he will as Bella's pussy power will break him.

That was horrible. The good thing to come from the drama is Bella leaving it behind her. I'm glad Leah knows what scum Jake is. Oh well he is her problem alone and not Bella's anymore. 

Stupid guy for forgetting her birthday. Maybe by the time the wedding happens he'll be introduced as her boyfriend. Well I can hope.

The dogs are super cute, they'll be big brothers and/or sisters. If they conceived over Thanksgiving, then she has quite a while before her due date. I hope this story includes the baby born or perhaps a sequel? Bella deserves a lavish wedding even if it is small. If she quickly plans a ceremony she can wear a form fitting gown.

Mike is annoying and a brave lil shit. Had Edward knocked his ass out it would've ruined the party and he is most definitely not worth foregoing the celebration of getting married. I liked how he explained how he used being married to his job add a protective mechanism and how Bella had him when he snooped through her journal.

This is a really interesting story. 7 chaps in and I am still unsure how Bella is connected to the Platt-Masen Famiglia. Was Charlie killed in the line of fire working on bringing down that mafia ring? Bella won't go topless at this bar/club that I think Edward may own. Does he? Will he see her there and come to find she is working two jobs to make ends meet and offer her Jessica's nanny position once he fires her ass? Pun intended lol, he must be outraged that the kids escaped her even if they were being unruly. There is a reason they don't like her, what is it? Reading on to catch up to find answers within this awesome story I began today.

This story about needing citizenship and a best friend's brother as a way to get it was a great short love story. Friends finding love that always existed. What a twist with Alice, or as Edward called his sister, a spoiled rotten bitch. I liked the OOC, Alice version you created, even though I didn't like her!