Reviews by Elleg
Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467272
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

I just re-read this series and I still love it! Any chance you might write more outtakes? A girl can dream!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth

I hate cliffhangers!! Poor Emmett. Rosalie/Victoria got what was coming to her, but Emmett's going to feel horrible for a while. To think she just used him, is just awful. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Revelations

I knew Rose was involved!! I kept thinking she was fishy, so glad my gut was right about her.

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession

I assumed he was talking about Brady. I was surprised it took her so long to figure that out. I guess she was just in shock. Can't wait for Wednesday!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 Life and Death

Royal = James Hunter...interesting. I didn't see that twist coming! I loved the press POVs that was a nice touch. Update soon so we can see how Bella is doing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

If history was different for one of the team, how would it effect the present? (Season 1 spoilers)

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Categories: Stargate SG1, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites E
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79478 Read Count: 5531
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2012 Updated: 12 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Uh oh, who opened the gate???

Author's Response:

Sorry for not responding before, I didn't get any notification email. Thanks for taking the time to review, I will be posting in little over a day from now so I won't spoil it and tell you who it is:)

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Very smart Alice!! She knew Charlie would be the only person to calm her down. Hopefully she'll relax and let Edward back in.

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Not odd at all! She's trapped inside her own mind, why wouldn't she be the one to get herself out. Looking forward to her finally waking up!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

FINALLY we have lift off!!! She's awake!!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

I'm so sorry to hear about your sons ordeal! Hopefully he will get better and you will get a much needed, well deserved rest.

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923125
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

YES EDWARD!!!! Take that James and Victiria!!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Whoa! Were those clicks pictures being taken? What about Edward?? When will they get reunited??? Why are Aro and James so crazy???? So many questions!!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

James and Dimitri got their just deserts!!! They deserved having to go through the humiliation that all of the women on that island feel. I have never liked Aro more until that scene. I fear whatever his revenge on Edward and Bella will be. Don't make us wait to long!!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

THANK GOD FOR ALICE AND JASPER!!!!!! Phew! That was going to be so bad. So glad Jasper came in the nick of time! I'm still worried about James, he's crazy and I know he will try again. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

What the hell!?!?! Was Vladimir giving her a tattoo? He's fucked up!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

FINALLY!!!! I'm so ready for them to get off that damn island and I'm ready for Aro, James and the rest of those creeps get what they deserve!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Yay!! They're finally off that horrid Island! The question is how do adjust to the real world after that craziness?!?!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 67: The Second Elizabeth Part 5

I think these might be out of order. The last 3 segments about Elizabeth need to be switched around I think.

Author's Response:

yes im sorry

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I just started reading this story a couple of day ago and I love it! It's so heartbreakingly beautiful. I'm glad your not making this a romance. Wisp is so traumatized about sexuality, that I can't imagine this Edward ever crossing that line with her. He would almost as bad as James if he did. I'm a big fan and I look forward to seeing what you have in store for our little Wisp and Edward!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Beautiful moment between Wisp and Rosalie! It's nice to see that Wisp is continuing to grow and get comfortable with our group of friends! Keep it up, I'm loving this story. Don't get discouraged, you're on the right track!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Breakthrough...who's Dr. Gerandy? Looking forward to Thursday!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

What a fine kettle of fish we have here! Poor Edward and poor Bella. Both stuck in confused feelings and uncharted territory. I love that Bella is able to communicate better and is blunt and demanding. She's grown so much and it's a credit to Edward and everyone else's involvement. I think we all knew this was coming it's just so incredibly awkward. I'm not sure when you'll give us another update, but I'll be waiting! I appreciate your commitment to finishing this story. So many people are quick to abandon their work, so take your time we'll be here awaiting the next installment!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh no!! I will never understand why people would plagiarize someone else's work. I'm so sorry that happened to you. Please don't be gone to long, we just got you back!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Welcome back! This was a great chapter!

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Ohhhhh what a sweet ending! Thank you so much for completing this story and not abandoning it. You creating such a wonderful story that was at times horrifying but ultimately beautiful and triumphant. I look forward to seeing what the future holds for Bella and Edward.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Finally fed up Bella snaps from her Zombie State, she goes to the Volturi in seek of help to kill Victoria and to protect all those she loves... But she finds love in an unlikely person, a grandfather she has never met, littered with scars and a life with Immortality. Caius/Bella, Ra: M

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Unyielding Series, Cruel King and Clumsy Human
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 24003
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Is it Jasper?

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmmmmmm...who's helping Bella?

Author's Response:

:D All will be revealed later on

Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, that's some harsh treatment for the Cullen's! Did this story's Edward not leave her to protect her, or is she just still in the dark? Edward will be tortured enough knowing she a vampire and mated to Caius. I will feel really bad if the Cullen's are seperated, but maybe that's just me.

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717286
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Elleg Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Ahhhhhhh, how cute are these two!!