Reviews by evertwilight
Summary: Past Featured Story

For new Detective Isabella Swan, protecting the recluse professor of music from a stalker, sounded easy enough. They find themselves mixed in forbidden romance, filled with hidden ink and red lipstick kisses from a deranged stalker. AH/OOC 18&Up ONLY.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82761 Read Count: 35248
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Feb 2012
Reviewer: evertwilight Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Surveillance and a Gunshot

loved it, more so that the gunless emmett got renee class



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing our story.  Both Jess and I are very proud of this story so far.  Things are not over yet, there will be a total of 23 chapters including the epilogue.  We want his story to ring as true as possible and neither Jess nor I believe that anyone could go through what Edward and Bella did and come out unscathed.   We hope that you all keep in mind over the next couple of chapters that Jess and I are both 100% tried and true HEA H00Rs.  We both appreciate and love how much our readers have gotten into this story, and it is really hard having the story wrap, because it feels like a loss.  But, there is also that great sense of accomplishment you get from being able to say that you completed another story, which a lot of people seem to love.
Thanks again for all your support!
Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

love it stalker looks a little crazy which is good



Author's Response:

Crazy is a mild term for our stalker! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A New Design

i love a tattoo edward very sey



Author's Response:

Edward is extreemly sexy...sigh.. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: A Realization

nices



Author's Response:

I know right?  love it!  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Lunch With Alice

go alices



Author's Response:

I like Alice, she is so cute and bubbley. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Bella's Night Out

like this bella



Author's Response:

Me too, love strong empowering women! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: A Meeting with Billy

stalker no happy with our bella :-(



Author's Response:

No the stalker hates Bella. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: This Changes Everything

edward needs to start watching who is around him



Author's Response:

Yes indeed he does! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Stalkers Revenge

:-( poor bella, she get it on with edward to have the stalker muck it up



Author's Response:

Yeah go figure, she smacked that and the stalker snatched that.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess) 

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Suspicions

carzy she just so crazy love it



Author's Response:

Yeah, I belive that you are right, she is crazy!  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: One Step Closer

:-)



Author's Response:

:) Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Meeting The Beginning

list going down



Author's Response:

Yeah slowly dwindles, down to the last man (or in this case) crazy wack=a=doodle standing!  LOL  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Celebrations

tattooo bella nice



Author's Response:

Had to give her some ink too!  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Sex And Drugged

nice draem loved it,



Author's Response:

I love writing sex dreams, they are fun!  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Parking Lot Problems

:-( hope edward ok



Author's Response:

He is a tough Cookie!  thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Kidnap Aftermath

the stalker renne well i knew that because i am smart lol :-)



Author's Response:

You are smart!  thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Now, What Do We Do?

oh on she got bella



Author's Response:

Yeah she has Bella, no worries we are HEA kind of gals.  thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: And The Truth Will Be Known…

she live in cary town  great chapter



Author's Response:

She does live in crazy town, thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: A Little Detective Work

loved it, show down between bella  and renee



Author's Response:

Yeah a lot of people want a show down between Renee and Bella, you're not alone.  Thanks you for reading and reviewing and Jess and I are workign ont he epi right now, so it is all a dwonhill slide from here.  Thanks, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21: The Other Side of the Door

loved it sad that coming to an end

 

hug nd kiss nikky



Author's Response:

Well thank you for reading and reviewing this story, but please keep in mind that their happy every after will be more detailed in the Epilogue that posts next Wednesday.  Thanks again and again for all the wonderful reviews, and see ya next week.  Kasi (&Jess)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263192
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: evertwilight Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes

love it so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks~  Thanks for reading and reviewing, next update this Thursday.  Kasi (&Nikky)

Teaser: 

Teaser for chapter 2:  Subject to change during BETA process.

After taking a shower and having some breakfast with the guys, I head off to the college.  I arrive around nine just before my first class arrives. I get in set up and as the bell rings, I start my class.  Riley stayed behind after class, and said that he would read in class.  I figured that he could read the next whole page, from where we left off.  I give him the page that I will have him read, I went though it once with him.  He recorded it to listen to it when he was at home, so he could practice it.

I am in my office grading papers when the cleaning girl comes into my office, she does not notice me as she continues to clean.  She comes near me still not noticing me, as she goes to move my chair she yelps and realizes that I am sitting in it.  She stares at me, in surprise.  “Professor Masen, I am. . .” she stops placing her hand on her head.  I watch as she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath.  “Professor I am sorry.  I did not know that you were here.  I can just go, I am sorry,” she says picking up her thing and leaving quickly. I shake my head and continue to mark my last page.

I leave my office notice the cleaning girl is now doing the class room she looks up at me goes red.  She mouths the word sorry again before going back to her work.  As I put on my jacket I hear a bang and the cleaning girl yelp again, but this time in pain.  I look over to her to see that she has tried to use the socket that has been broken and needs to be fixed.

I shake my head, is this girl really that unobservant?  “Did you not read the warning sign?  Right here,” I say pointing to the sign.  “It says, ‘caution, do not use this socket’.  Please be more observant, before you get really hurt,” I say in frustration.  She looks at me, and shakes her head telling me she didn’t see the sign.